Troubles of Heroine

[blackoperations]

Where are the twins in Kynesgrove?  I've checked the inn.  No dialogues available.

[DSHV]

20 hours ago, peterkenway said:

Understood, need some help with the ''tribe of orc - amazons'' quest?

 

17 hours ago, Svettlana said:

It is better to do not amazon

I would like to make them classic "death by snu-snu" women, but I don't have any specific idea, so I'm open to suggestions.

20 hours ago, peterkenway said:

I would later have the possibility of adding a trap door or a room?

Yes, as a separate location.It is possible to rebuild a place if it consists of separate blocks, but if it just one-piece model, then it is impossible. Of course you can add other NPCs. Double Snorre loves to collect slaves, can he be included in "Women Torment"? I planned that PC could collect slaves for him, but forgot.
To sex.

18 hours ago, killer905 said:

Maybe something simple? eg Mjoll "repairing" cocks in Riften Prison?

I think it's possible, but when to activate sex? Always at entrance? Use her clone? What if she's the current follower? 
I can add undress, travel package and Cicero dance animations.

11 hours ago, MikeWander said:

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These are dialog scripts that start sexlab animations and change the mod's global value. It looks like just a coincidence of names.

9 hours ago, blackoperations said:

Where are the twins in Kynesgrove?  I've checked the inn.  No dialogues available.

Tispe should say "Talk to my brother, I'm too lazy to waste time with you." and Fett: "Hey just look at this vain wench, hurrying on her "important" business." and lead to the next stage of the quest. Maybe quicksave/quickload will help?

[lPalpatinel]

13 minutes ago, DSHV said:

 

I would like to make them classic "death by snu-snu" women, but I don't have any specific idea, so I'm open to suggestions.

Yes, as a separate location.It is possible to rebuild a place if it consists of separate blocks, but if it just one-piece model, then it is impossible. Of course you can add other NPCs. Double Snorre loves to collect slaves, can he be included in "Women Torment"? I planned that PC could collect slaves for him, but forgot.
To sex.

I think it's possible, but when to activate sex? Always at entrance? Use her clone? What if she's the current follower? 
I can add undress, travel package and Cicero dance animations.

These are dialog scripts that start sexlab animations and change the mod's global value. It looks like just a coincidence of names.

Tispe should say "Talk to my brother, I'm too lazy to waste time with you." and Fett: "Hey just look at this vain wench, hurrying on her "important" business." and lead to the next stage of the quest. Maybe quicksave/quickload will help?

okay, let's go by topics:

 

-About snu-snu women: 

Well, I wasn't particularly aware of these characters because I never watch Futurama, but I've read about it and I understand what you want, well I can try to make content dominant for female characters and submissive for male characters from what I understand. ETA 2-4 Days for the quest.

 

-About edit/rebuild the place:

Well since you said you can add a trapdoor or a door as long as it serves to lead to another block, so I'm calmer because I'll probably need it and thankfully you said you can add npcs (humans or animals).

 

-About Double Snorre:

Well, it will depend, because first the vanilla girls (Olfina, Carlotta, Elisif, Elenwen...) will be part of the protagonist's harem + she/he new gang (there will be new characters), if it's to add a girl to him, I'm going to write some new non-game girls for him and also, he must understand that the protagonist is on a path towards dominance so he's going to have to show a certain ''respect'' to the female protagonist's new position (of course she will facing many adversities along the way that will test if she really is dominant or a hidden whore like Olfina ) and for the male characters, I can do the same, but then it would be more a friendship than a partnership, now the question remains, you plan to add it now or next update along with my other quests? if it's now,I'll start writing along with snu-snu and deliver the two quests at once.

 

-About Bruiser situation ( again xD ) :

As I said above, female protagonist is heading to a new path and in this way her choices will matter if she will manage to become a dominant or submissive woman, I think this quest should keep all the alternatives you wrote above but add the option to kill bruiser through a dialogue, as this would have an impact on Elenwen's quest, as there would be an orc that depending on this choice with Bruiser would have a different dialogue and he would have a different view for the female protagonist, honestly will help a lot if you can put that option.

 

I'm going to start writing the snu-snu quest today (for both genders) and tell me what you think about bruiser and Double Snorre.

 

[Electric Aether]

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I'm starving, please feed this whore!
Hungry bitch. [Throws disgusting soup in your face] Now don't waste anything whore.
Starving? Maybe this will keep your mind off it. [Inserts skooma into your Anus] Moaning already slut? We haven't started yet you horny whore. Skooma equipped anal.
I have this cocktail, perfect for a whore like you.
Get on your knees you hungry cumslut.
[Get on knees]
I'll now feed you hungry whore, straight from the source. Human cum equipped.

 

The Backstabber
"Knife betrayed my Master in some way, Now I must kill him and bring back his flesh for some reason." (Quest description)
That bandit your disgusting ass cheated on outstays his welcome in life.
Why?
[He snapped his fingers in the air and they flinched from the strike by air] Don’t ask stupid questions, only humans ask questions.
[Moan in pain] Ouch! I’m sorry Master, forgive this whore
Theres no forgiving you, a waste of space doesn't deserve forgiveness from a Man.
What can this foul cunt do, Master?
I want you to kill that pathetic slug. But since you such a dumb bimbo from all the poundings, I'll teleport you to his bedroom. Once your in his room, you will kill him and bring back his flesh as proof you treacherous cunt. His Cock in your mouth fits perfectly in our situation, slut of sluts.
Why bring his flesh? I thought you were always watching?
Because fuck you trash. [He spits on your face] I'm tired of moving my mouth for you.
Understood Master
I highly doubt a cattle’s toilet like you can understand a simple plan such as this.But since you said you do, you better not fail me now or I'll make you regret failing me for the rest of your life.
 

Knife: How the fuck did you get here?! What do you want you cheating whore!
I want you to fuck me hard as an apology
Disgusting to insert myself into your, bitch. But okay, I have never refused a woman, I do not want you to be the first exception. 
Hey, where did you get the knife? Whore..
I’m here to kill you
Ha-ha-ha-ha! Kill me?! Try it bitch!
[Kill him]
You Whore..

Legspreader: You killed my Husband! How dare you! [Sobbing] Who will lead us now?!
Human Cock - I don't understand anything. First chew food, then speak.

(Quest Objective) "Report to serpent with knifes flesh"
"I killed Knife and got his flesh, now I must Report to my Master.Im afraid to find out whats next. 
Mmmm!
Now, eat it, maneater.
Mmmmm!!!
No? Don't you dare say that to me you stupid bitch! [Casts a painful spell on you] Besides, Its not cannibalism as you aren't human.Don't think of yourself so highly you cumdump.
Mmm. [Eat the cock]
How does it taste?
Terrible... [Sniffle]
Now you, failure of life, escort Bruiser to the Night Mammoths den.
>Quest Objective complete
(Quest Objective) "Talk to Bruiser and escort him to the Night Mammoth den"
Master sai...
[Bruiser slap you] I know why your here cunt! I’m the one that’s supposed to explain things! [Slaps you again] The Boss made me the new leader of the Night Mammoths and your supposed to take me to their hideout.
Congrats owner!
 [Punches your belly] I don't need your praise cunt! Now stop wasting time and take me!
>Talk to Bruiser at Night Mammoth den to continue the quest
Follow me owner
 [Kicks your butt] Don't give me orders you bitch!
No no no! I didn't mean it that way!
 [Punches you in the face] Shut the fuck up whore! Now take me!
>Talk to Bruiser at Night Mammoth den to continue the quest
 
Here we are Master
No shit we're here stupid cunt! Now proclaim my leadership to everyone.
"You proclaim The Orcs leadership to the gang to all of the members, during your speech, Bruiser begins to dominate your pussy infront of all of the members, showcasing his strength to everyone, they cheer and praise on their new leader.”
 
Now that I’m the Boss! I will lead this gang to glory!
We will have more cumdumps and gold under my leadership!
Anything else owner?
 [Spits on you] No bitch. Get out of my sight before I beat you bitch!I got a gang to run!
 
Your thoughts?
Legspreader: I feel better now that we have a new boss! But an Orc?!
I’m still sad over my husbands death.
But the new boss is much manlier than Knife ever was. His brutality makes me wet!
The boss is massive! Knife couldn't compete!
I've never came so much before that my legs are still trembling! 
I think I could get addicted to this.
The new Boss smells terrible! But his smell turns me on so much!

Can you tell me your backstory?
Baron: Sure, as I got nothing better to do but talk to a whore as low as yourself.
Thank you sir
Well I was born into this gang, My mother was a sex slave for Knife’s father. So that makes us brothers.
Did you ever meet your mother?
No, pa told me that she died from a skooma overdose while being gangbanged by our fellow Mammoths shortly after I was born.
Wow...Sorry to hear that
I dont need your pity, dog fucker.
I’m sorry sir, can you continue though?
[Sigh] Sure. Knife and I grew up together, raising havoc everywhere. Ha-ha, good times. Anyways at one point we were ordered by pa to make Gold. Which is why I got involved with skyrim’s skooma business.
So you deal skooma or do you make it?
Both baby, Anyway I’m done chatting with you, I've got better things to do.
 
Umm could you...spare some skooma?
Ha-ha! You seriously think that you can get one for free? [Fondles your butt] Mmm maybe I will if you give me a piece of this.
Sure...Fuck this cunt good.
No way!
Whatever you say bitch!
 
Talk to any member of the night mammoths
Can I ask a question about the gang sir?
Oh! so this bitch has something else on her mind besides cocks, sure go ahead whore.
Why is the gang so small?
It used to be bigger, until this civil war started, then adventurers like you show up trying to get rid of us.
So it’s been tough these days, but as long as we stay together, sell drugs and fuck whores, we'll be okay.
How old is the Night Mammoths?
This Gang has been around for many decades. Knife’s father as well as his grandfather have been apart of this gang.
Can I join your gang?
Ha-ha-ha! Good joke dumb whore! Only real men can join our gang.Which you are clearly not. Your just a weak and pathetic meathole! [He begins to finger your pussy]
[Moan]
This proves my point. Your slutty moans turned me on, now its time to use your cunt!
Thank you for answering sir
What a waste of time! I could already be wallowing in the mud after taking this Skooma.

 

Do you need anything, owner?
Yes, I have work for your dumb cunt. As you see and have bitched about in the past, this gang is small. So I'm sending your dumbass out to recruit some new members.
[Sigh] Okay owner...
[Slaps you] You don't sound so grateful you useless bitch. You are lucky that I'm giving you this job, A used meathole like you isn't worthy of this job or cock.
I’m so sorry owner! This ungrateful whore is thankful that you didn't forget her!
Shut up! I heard your dumb cunt can read, So if being fucked by me didn't make you forget, you better remember how to read for your own sake.
Yes I know how to read owner! Your bitch won’t fail you!
Now get out of my sight and do your job! [Kicks you away] I have some cunts in here to fuck! >Notes on Potential Night Mammoth Recruits added

>Quest Description: "My Owner gave me a note to read that will explain the job he's given me, Ughh I Hope I can still Read!"
Potential Night Mammoth Recruits 
-Grommok The Buster
Fucking piece of shit. But it's better to squeeze out at least a drop of benefit from it than it will just wallow, poisoning the air. The Nightgate Inn.
-John 
Everyone in this gang loves John. Fuck knows why. But he won't hurt, except you. In Dawnstar prison.
-Tar-Julan of Savagery
From what he told me, he had a large Slave Operation in Cyrodiil but was shut down by the Imperial Army and barely escaped with his life. Now he is residing in the Windhelm Docks.
-Thesan the Skooma Lord
His Skooma Operation was exposed and destroyed in Falkreath. He's currently holding in Four Shield Tavern at Dragon Bridge.
>Quest Description:' I read the note, Thank the gods. I was ordered to find 4 new members for the Night Mammoths.I only know one person on this List,One is my Owners Brot-Half Brother but I don't know the other people on the list, but I hope I can find them! The note said I can find Tar-julan at the windhelm docks and Thesan at the Tavern in Dragon Bridge, As well as John in Dawnstars Prison"
 
Hi again, Buster
You again? Are you back for my Big Orc Cock? Could my half brother not satisfy your ruined cunt anymore?! Ha-ha-ha!
No... My Owner sent me to recruit you into the Night Mammoths
No? Fine then bitch, Anyways, finally I get to join! But before I go, I want to fuck your slutty cunt. Now bend over bitch.I want to show that pathetic excuse of an Orc what a real man can do!
[Bend over and spread your pussy] Please be quick...
[Slaps your pussy] I'll take as long as I want! Your nothing but meat with tight holes!
[Moans]
Now I'll show you and my half brother who your real Owner is!
Ha-ha! You look amazing with my cum leaking from your ruined cunt!
Is...Is it over?
No bitch! I could go for another round!
[Sigh] Please be more gentle..
Ha! NO! I'll be as rough as I want! Meat is tastier when it's tender.

What a great Pussy, even if its been used countless times.
Ar-Arrre you done..?
[Steps on your crotch] Yes, lucky bitch, your needy hole swallowed all of my cum. Now I'll join my half brothers little gang, where do I go slut?!
Theres a cave near Dawnstar near one of the main roads
Alright then, I'll be heading over there.

Thesan The Skooma Lord: Umm hello sir.
Mmm what does a cute little girl like you want with a big man like myself?
I have orders to recruit you into the Night Mammoths
Ah so this little cutie is a Night Mammoth slut. [Sigh] What a shame.
A shame?
Yeah...I was hoping you were a virgin! I wouldn't have expected you to be a depraved slut for a bunch of savage bandits! You look so cute and innocent!
Um thanks? I guess? But why did you hope I was a virgin?
Because I love corrupting young innocent virgins into skooma cumdumps!
Oh... I see...
But before I go, give me a blowjob, your performance will determine if I join or not. I want to know how trained you are. Nobody wants to be in a bandit gang if they can't train sex slaves.
[Get on knees] Yes sir, My owner trained me to suck cock good
We'll see!

[Swallow Cum]
[Groan] Incredible, best blowjob I've ever received! Even my balls hurt. All right little slut, I can tell you've been trained well.
Thank you sir
Well I’m joining! No need to tell me where the Den is at. I used to go there years ago.
Okay, I'll see you there then
Oh you will tiny creature. [Gropes your butt]
 
Tar-Julan of Savagery: Hi, are you Tar-Julan? My owner ordered me to invite you to join the Night 
Yes my name is Tar-Julan, wow it feels good to say it outloud. And that Bandit gang? Perfect! I'll be sure to repay Serpent the next time I see him.Where can I find there hideout?
It’s near Dawnstar, in a cave
Alright I'll go there soon. [Grabs your crotch and begins to rub your pussy]
[Moan]
Getting wet already? Noisy whore, I’m sure we'll have plenty of fun soon, so look forward to it.
[Moan] I'll look forward to it master Tar-Julan
[Chuckle] You better.I'll see you there at the Night Mammoths Nest.

I want to free John prisoner 
His fine is 438.
Please free him (438 gold)
Hey, it’s you – megawhore from Forgotten Regret! Why didn't you pay with your body, but with money?
Please free him (your body)
Just don't tell the captain, otherwise I won't be able to transfer your payment to the public purse.

John: Will you join the Night Mammoths, sir?
Yes.
Do you know where it is?
Yes.
Are you not talkative?
Yes.
Do you want fuck me, sir?
Yes.
Do you want lick my pussy?
No.

Owner, they’re all here
No shit! They got here before you! You slow lazy cunt!!! [Slaps you]
Forgive this slow lazy sow, owner!
I’m not the one you should be asking forgiveness from dumb cunt. My new members here have been waiting forever!
What should I do owner?!
Go up to each of them and ask them for forgiveness lazy cunt!
>Seek forgiveness from all of the recruits (New Quest Objective)
>Quest Description:" I brought them to my owner but since I'm a slow bitch I must ask them all for forgiveness, I dont think my body can take it anymore!"

B:[Bow] Please forgive this slow and lazy slave for taking too long
[Picks you up by your hair and slaps you with his big green cock] Choke on this lazy cunt. Maybe this will teach you to not be so lazy this time.

[Cough up cum] Ugh so thick...
[Pees on you] I will NEVER FORGIVE YOU!
You’re so right to do this, Buster..This piece of meat doesn't deserve Forgiveness..
[Kicks you] Now shut up and leave my sight!
 
TJ: [Bow] Master Tar-Julan please forgive this lowly meat hole
Your laziness makes me ashamed of my past decisions. I can't believe I escaped certain death in Cyrodiil for some whore to show up late at my initiation ceremony! [Spits on you]
I'm so sorry that you feel that way!
A pathetic slut like you doesn't deserve forgiveness. Now fuck off slut!

[Bow] Master John, please forgive this lazy fat cow 
J: [Punches you] No!
I'm sorry Master, I'll do better next time!
Unlikely. Im Disappointed.

T: Please forgive me for being late and lazy, Sir
[Kicks you in the crotch] Why would I forgive a loose slut like you? Maybe I would forgive you, if you were an innocent virgin being corrupted by me. But as we both know, that’s not the case.
Thank you sir.. Your right for not forgiving me
No matter your beauty, you'll always be a hole of meat for fucking.
[Nod in agreement]
Now leave me alone, go bug someone else about your girly problems, slut.

Nobody forgave me, owner..
As rightly so cunt. [He punched you right in the face]
[Get the punch in the face]
Now heal yourself cunt before whats coming next! [Steps on you] Your going to be fucked by all of the new recruits. Every hole will be left loose and sore.

"As you lay on the ground, Big Bolly offers you a Potion of Extreme Healing, which heals you fully, as if nothing happened. While this is happening, Bruiser is ordering the new Night Mammoth recruits on what to do to you for their initiation. You then hear them cheer their new Boss when the Orc is done delivering the order. Bruiser walks up to you to tell you something."
Alright Bitch.[Picks you up on your feet by your hair] Your new order is to please all of the recruits. Once you do so, come report back to me, there better be cum leaking out of all your holes. But before you do, Drink this cunt! [Forces you to drink Sensation Enhancement potion]
>Please all the new recruits (New quest Objective)
>Quest Description:'Nobody forgave me... Now I must please all of them while on this drug! Ahh My body is so sensitive!"

Let me please you
Please my cock with your mouth whore.
Bend over and please my cock with your cunt slut!
Spread your legs, you will please me with your slutty cunt.
Please me with your asshole slave.
I pleased them owner...
Took you long enough! Now! We will have an Orgy.Prepare your holes cunt!
I’m ready owner!
>Sexlab animation begins, Tags (MMMMF), Excludes Bruiser.
Go again whore!
>Sexlab animation begins, Tags (MMMMF), Excludes Bruiser.
Now go fuck two of them at the same time!
>Sexlab animation begins, Tags (MMF,Threesome), Excludes Bruiser. and chooses the 4 recruits randomly.
Go again slut! There's more cock for you!
>Sexlab animation begins, Tags (MMF,Threesome), Excludes Bruiser. and chooses the 4 recruits randomly.
All ready covered in cum! But your cunt is still hungry for more! Go again!
>Sexlab animation begins, Tags (MMF,Threesome), Excludes Bruiser. and chooses the 4 recruits randomly.
Now fuck three of them! [Laugh}
>Sexlab animation begins, Tags (MMMF) Excludes Bruiser. and chooses the 4 recruits randomly.
Again you filthy cunt! [Spits on you]
>Sexlab animation begins, Tags (MMMF) Excludes Bruiser. and chooses the 4 recruits randomly.
Orgy! Again!
>Sexlab animation begins, Tags (MMMMF), Excludes Bruiser.
Is...Is it over?
Ha-ha-ha! You look so funny on the ground with Semen leaking out of all your holes!
It’s not over till I say so, cunt!
[Catch as much breath as possible]
Now that their initiation is over, we must celebrate! You better put on a smile for our celebration filthy cunt.
[Fake Smile] Of course owner, Look how happy I am
Don't be happy, meat holes aren't allowed to be happy.
>Message Box "The Night Mammoths celebrate and welcome the new members all night, they all take a turn fucking you without a rest while drinking and singing.
>Quest Complete
 
TJ: Please fuck me, master
Horny Slut, of course you would beg a big scaly Argonian to fuck you!
Master, Can I ask you something?
What is it, sweet tits?!
I was wondering about your title, how did you earn it?
As you know slavegirl, I was a rich and powerful Slaver in Cyrodiil.I earned my Title by brutally enslaving young girls like you, I was quite "Savage" With them. He-he-he.
I heard you had a huge Slave trade there, is that true Master?
Yes slavegirl, I had my own harem of all kinds of women. Even my top buyers were the Thalmor!And as I'm sure you've heard, I had to leave it all behind and flee Cyrodiil. But since your a slave, I don't mind telling you what happened.
Why? Aren't you worried that I can tell the Jarl?
No because you are a lowly slave, besides, you wouldn't dare as you love my scaly body and cock too much.
[Blush] Yes... Your right Master
Yes... Your right Master
Anyways, one of my top clients was exposed and ratted me out, which nearly got me killed. I ran and I eventually crossed the border into Skyrim, and hid out at the Windhelm Docks for a while. Now I'm Here starting over in Skyrim. After a slavegirl recruited me into the Night Mammoths. He-heh. Who would have ever have thought that I would become a bandit!
I see, can I ask you about Master Serpent?
No more questions slavegirl, you got work to do! Now show me your pussy!

B: Please use that orc Cock to on this loose cunt
Now I'll show my half brother, who really owns this cunt!

T: Please fuck this slave
[Fondles your butt] I'll make you scream cute little slave.
Can I ask you about your Backstory?
[Slaps your ass] Of course my little cute slut. My father was the bandit chief of a large gang near Winterhold, which got along with the Night Mammoths.
What happened to this gang?
My fathers gang slowly diminished, members being captured or being killed off by adventurers and guards.The gang diminished to the point where there was only 5 people left, then our hideout was raided by some Stormclocks.My Father and I were the only ones that escaped that place.
I’m sorry to hear that, what happened to your father?
Thank you cute slave [Pats your Head], anyways my father and I traveled to Falkreath.Where we started massive skooma trade with the local bandit gangs and Khajiit caravans until our trade was discovered by the Jarl of Falkreath.
What did the Jarl do?
It's obvious right? He ordered a bunch of his guards to raid our hideout, where my father was killed.
I'm sorry to hear that about your father... Would you mind telling me more though?
Thank you cute slave, you so sweet, you know that? Shame that a beauty like you fell so far...I'd make you my wife if things were different.

John: Fuck?
Fuck. 
Can you share your backstory?
Yes.
Then please share your backstory It's just a placeholder!
It is not very interesting. I was born during the siege of the Imperial City. Red Ring battle. I was a wandering artist, pirate, survivor on an island, shipbuilder, gold miner, slave and slaver. Then I became a bandit. As I said - not very interesting story.
And I think it's interesting
What's interesting? I come to a new place - do stuff and go to another. Boredom. Well, except for the case when I met the old gentleman in a vest and with a cane. It was fun then – he showed me many things. He had nowhere to live, so I lent him my head. Heh-he-he. Maybe you will find him. 

 

Double Snorre: What do you think about the new members?
Less work for me but more mouths to feed!
I thought that the gang was on its way to disbanding but these new recruits gives me hope for the future.
Ha-ha-ha! It's good to hear that people are talking about us again. The recruits are already doing a good job.
 
Rumors: Young women near Dawnstar have gone missing again! The Locals near that Town have been discussing it's been a bandit gang called the Night Mammoths.Who are responsible behind them.
There a rumor that a notorious slaver from Cyrodiil is running around with a bandit gang called the Night Mammoths.

 

@DSHV Fixed

Will Write Part 3 and some side quests soon

Edited September 7, 2021 by Electric Aether

[Golgo13]

Don't try talking to Brenuin in Heroine's Semen Snacks-- it'll freeze up your computer.  At least, it did mine, 4/4 times.

[Arcane Wanderer]

5 hours ago, DSHV said:

 

17 hours ago, MikeWander said:

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These are dialog scripts that start sexlab animations and change the mod's global value. It looks like just a coincidence of names.

 

Yeah, both mods ended up using the same relative record numbers.  Here's what a scan via an xEdit script shows:

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I'm comfortable with SSEEdit, but dislike the CK.   I'm wondering if I could make the two mods compatible by editing the script names in SSEEdit and then renaming/recompiling the scripts?

[killer905]

6 hours ago, DSHV said:

I think it's possible, but when to activate sex? Always at entrance? Use her clone? What if she's the current follower? 

I can add undress, travel package and Cicero dance animations.

Rather always when entering a location or let it be there after 6pm. Rather a clone I guess, but how is she currently being our follower and her clone in the same place going to be quite weird? You can "FORCE" transferring her to the stage, even if she is our companion, but I don't know if she will spoil it. tests test and tests only way.

 

 

So you are not able to do custom dance? There is a Sexy Dance that would be more suited to the potential quests I have in my head.

 

 

Sensual Dancing:
 

Spoiler

Direct link to pack:

This mod also have nice dance but idk what with permissions to use in other mods:

 

[Electric Aether]

Spoiler

Carlotta looks like her mind is broken and says she doesn't care about her daughter anymore, I better check on her daughter.
Go to Whiterun and talk to Mia Valentina.
Hello Mia, how are you?
I'm fine for now, but I'm scared because it's been two weeks since my mother has sent me any more money and I'm already running out of food and water, and I miss her.
Poor girl, here take it for you, it should be enough for this week (100 gold)
Thank you miss, but if you see my mother, please bring her home.
What a shame
If you see my mother, please bring her home.

Objective : Go talk to Carlotta.
 
Carlotta, we need to talk
About what? Say it right away cause I'm cleaning Bruiser and was fucked for three hours straight and then he started hitting me and spitting on me and he said I'm a better bitch than you, I don't know how to thank you for that job.
1I wanted to say forget about your daughter, because every week I will help her
Thank you so much for that, for giving me a new life and getting me out of that boring life.
I convinced Carlotta to definitely become Bruiser's slave, from today she will be beaten and raped until the day she dies.
Rumor: Carlotta was seen on Dawnstar getting fucked by an orc, they say she abandoned her only child to become a slave, gee, I feel sorry for little Mia.
 
2Carlotta, stop this nonsense talk, you are a mother and you have responsibilities
By the divines, you’re right, I don't know where I was headed, and I’ll go home right now and forget about this place.
Owner, I'm sorry to inform you more Carlotta has left and will no longer come to work because of her daughter
Bruiser: You disgusting bitch! Whore‘s cunt! Scum! Why didn't you convince her to stay? Get ready to take the biggest beating of your life.

Carlotta, how are you?
I'm fine, but quite ashamed of my actions and apparently you paid for me to save. Thanks again for everything.
I saved Carlotta from a fate she didn't deserve and now she can dedicate her life to her daughter.
 
3Carlotta, you go to a house called ''Women Torment'' near the ''Battleborn'' farm
But Bruiser..
You will do what I say for your own good
Alright, I'll go there.
 
From now on you will serve me. Olfina will teach you everything you need to know
I don't understand, but you weren't Bruiser's whore?
Let me worry about that, from now on know that you must obey all our orders
Yes, my mistress
 
Another bitch for us, this mommy will be a great addition to our harem
J: Nice. If I can suggest, then the next slut I would like is a Redguard with big ass.
S: Nice. I will use a strapon on her is very good as a welcome.

Bruiser: Where is that bitch? You know who. Which is not here.
She must have escaped
Bad news, I Loved spinning her on my cock. At least I have this bitch in front of me.
I freed her
For fuck sake, why did you do this, cunt?
I want to pay for her freedom (1000 gold)
Ah, she's cheap whore anyway.
But why do you need her? I'm better
So you did it out of jealousy? What a horny sly cunt. So get ready to work out your woman duties for two. Start right now.
That was the right thing to do
No. and now I will demonstrate the falsity of your life position, cunt.

 

Male: Carlotta, I have a proposal for you, do you want to earn more money and have a life with more ''pleasure'' than selling vegetables?
Are you trying to ask me if I want to prostitute myself? If so, I'll be forced to call the guards.
It's nothing like that, but if you're interested go to a house called ''Women Torment'' near the ''Battleborn'' farm
This name no longer makes me want to go but I'll give it a chance, I'll be there waiting for you.
So you really came
Well I'm naked and already waiting for my uniform for work and why is Olfina here?
Because she is my sex slave and soon you will be too
Ha! I knew it, I'm getting out.
Will you abandon the proposal of 100 gold per week without even listening?
Well... the money really is a lot, alright what should I do?
Just obey and clean the house 
Understood.

Another bitch to satisfy us
Well well,if it's not Carlotta Valentina, leave it to me that a few weeks this bitch will give all the money to her daughter and will only want to live here serving us.
Make it happen, or I'll punish you too
No need to say that, big guy. I know my functions here.
 
Bitch, time to serve me/ Bitch, time to serve Sasha / Bitch, serve me and Sasha at the same time
Yes, my master.
How are you doing, Carlotta?
The men in the city keep trying to buy me, but I always say I belong only to the master and the mistress.
 I love getting fucked aggressively and when mistress hits me I love it.
I and Olfina sometimes go to the city and spread to the people who we really are, just by talking we get wet.

@DSHV fixed

[Golgo13]

I just want to mention one last time before an update is implemented that the number of grammatical errors-- some of which change the meaning to the opposite of that intended, others of which render sentences virtually unintelligible-- are rife within the mod's current iteration.  The task of repairing the language in the mod is not minor. 

 

I don't know who is charged with addressing this issue, but, considering its scope, I am, again, offering to help with the repairs.  I'm not limited to writing in the style of a legal brief, if that is a concern.  I tend to use formal grammar when I write out of habit, but, it is not the only way in which I can speak.  I can keep the language virtually the same while simply making the grammar more intelligible.

 

I'd like to help improve the mod, but I hesitate getting in the way.  If you could use my help, I'm just reminding you that I'm willing to assist.  If you're certain that everything will be fixed easily without further help, that's fine, too.  Seeing all of the text would, no doubt, ruin the surprise of encountering events as they unfold in the mod; so, if anything, I'd prefer not to do this.  OTOH, I'd really like to see this mod succeed, and I would be gratified to have helped it do so. 

 

 

[Lianeline]

Hi.

Just a small question.

After having Grym do some piercings on me, i am told to show them to Lars. By readind on this topic i have seen that he is supposed to be a pretty central character in the story, but so far, my character has never had anything to do with him and i don't have the slightest idea as to what to do to find him. Is it dependent on some other quests? Or is there a place i have to go to find him and bring him to serpent?

Anyway thx for the help.

If it is something that has been said somewhere else sorry, but i have "ctrl f"ed the pages of this topic that google sent me to when i searched specifically for Lars and trouble of heroine and have found nothing relevant.

[DSHV]

On 9/7/2021 at 5:48 PM, peterkenway said:

okay, let's go by topics:

I also think Garona would be a great fit for an Amazon group. Also a rival group of only men.
Double Snorre can give tasks of finding exotic women, like catching Pokemon: noble woman, wild Argonian, Dragonborn,.. I am planning to add everything from #3451 post. Except for the purple question marks. They are in question.
I can add Bruiser's kill dialogue.

On 9/7/2021 at 7:47 PM, Electric Aether said:

Fixed

 

On 9/8/2021 at 6:04 AM, Electric Aether said:

fixed

Thank you.

On 9/7/2021 at 8:21 PM, Golgo13 said:

Don't try talking to Brenuin in Heroine's Semen Snacks

Weird - he has a regular dialogue.

On 9/7/2021 at 10:44 PM, MikeWander said:

I'm wondering if I could make the two mods compatible by editing the script names in SSEEdit and then renaming/recompiling the scripts?

Should work if it's all about the same names.

On 9/8/2021 at 12:02 AM, killer905 said:

You can "FORCE" transferring her to the stage

This will definitely break anything, either her or the entire follower system. Maybe make it activatable on a phrase? I would not like to add a dependency that will be used for a small number of scenes and which can be easily skipped. Although dances can be used and added to existing scenes. Another question is how difficult it will be for me to add these dance animations. I'll see.

22 hours ago, Golgo13 said:

I just want to mention one last time before an update is implemented that the number of grammatical errors

I am happy to accept any corrections to the text and implement them. I am posting texts for this purpose. Although I find some mistakes, I cannot completely fix them, since I myself did them.

33 minutes ago, moushna said:

Is it dependent on some other quests?

He will appear automatically when you complete all the quests that Serpent gave at the first meeting and talk to him about them. It's 30 stage of AAATroublesofHeroineQuest.

[Svettlana]

On 9/7/2021 at 4:55 PM, DSHV said:

 

I would like to make them classic "death by snu-snu" women, but I don't have any specific idea, so I'm open to suggestions.

 

If you need strong female orcs, then the best women of women's shamans. Sorcerer. Which in their territory is also trained by military art. And for what purposes? For Garona? But I need satirical classic orc taverns, or even a big orc village in the mountains(.

[Svettlana]

I love Falsk Venn at the initial stage of the game with a mod wartime! Could the author add him new desires to perform in a small game with a stone, scissors, paper? Without quests. Including "Creature" content? "Fuck with three orcs", with "three lizards", fuck with a bear "," fuck with a horse "," with a dog "," with a tamed wolf "," Buy a dog for jeads "," call ice atrona and suck His "," asking money from passersby and agree for conditions 5 times. "Well, that's all in such a spirit! It would be very fun. Not enough content with him.

[Golgo13]

3 hours ago, DSHV said:

I am happy to accept any corrections to the text and implement them. I am posting texts for this purpose. Although I find some mistakes, I cannot completely fix them, since I myself did them.

The volume of corrections is intimidating.  I could try to write down the lines as I encounter them in the game and hope that you know where they are located, but, if I had them in a more orderly, efficient format, I could do it more quickly and easily.

 

Up to now, I was under the impression that you already had someone working on this, so I wasn't writing things down as I saw them.  If that is not the case, I'll start taking notes starting now (a little late-- when I replay it, again, I'll be able to do a better job of it).

 

I'm enjoying the mod, of course.  You've worked so hard to make the game more fun for me, I'd be very happy to be able to help you out with it. 

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Many things go by too quickly for me to write them out before they disappear from my screen.  But, I did manage to catch a few, so far....

 

In a quest to retrieve the flute at the Bard's College, the player is imposed upon by the instructor for sex.  There is a line, "Of course, one more harassment, one less."  That doesn't actually make sense, and I must guess at what was meant.  I believe you meant, "Of course, what is one further harassment, more or less?"

 

Later, when traveling with Jordis, there is this line: "Jordis, what are you so upset?"  That should either be "Jordis, why are you so upset?" or "Jordis, what are you so upset about?"

 

A proximate line should be, "It's o.k.  Just...."

 

Another proximate line (a reply choice) should be changed to, "I can't be angry with you.  After all, you acted out of the best of impulses."

 

A line in a letter delivered by courier reads, "Thank you very much to your friend for help me."  It should be changed to, "Thank your friend very much for helping me," or "My deepest thanks to you and your friend for helping me," depending upon who is supposed to be thanked.

 

"We heard of the werewolf problem solving at Dragonbridge," should be changed to, "We heard of the werewolf problem solved at Dragonbridge."

 

"The prize will wait," should be changed to, "A reward will await you upon completion."

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I'm going to play a little more, now.

Edited September 9, 2021 by Golgo13

[The Lord]

1 hour ago, Golgo13 said:

The volume of corrections is intimidating.  I could try to write down the lines as I encounter them in the game and hope that you know where they are located, but, if I had them in a more orderly, efficient format, I could do it more quickly and easily.

You can make use of translation utilities such as xTranslator or ESP-ESM Translator (links are for SE, there are LE versions too). While built for translation, editing text in the same language works just as well. It can show you all lines in the respective mod (some don't need any work, as they aren't shown in game at any point, e.g. scripts), which you can then just copy from there, putting them into your preferred text editing software etc., or you can simply edit them directly with either aforementioned tool.

Edited September 9, 2021 by The Lord

[killer905]

17 hours ago, DSHV said:

This will definitely break anything, either her or the entire follower system. Maybe make it activatable on a phrase? I would not like to add a dependency that will be used for a small number of scenes and which can be easily skipped. Although dances can be used and added to existing scenes. Another question is how difficult it will be for me to add these dance animations. I'll see.

Alternatively, you can do that after entering the prison, Mjoll (original) hide (disable) and in the prison itself is her clone. When you exit, she will apperd (enable) something like Elisif as slave for Ulfric. Of course she can't be there all the time so the scene itself would have to be between some hours. You can count on it to be useful in more scenes than this one or a few in the entire mod.

Edited September 10, 2021 by killer905

[Golgo13]

14 hours ago, The Lord said:

15 hours ago, Golgo13 said:

The volume of corrections is intimidating.  I could try to write down the lines as I encounter them in the game and hope that you know where they are located, but, if I had them in a more orderly, efficient format, I could do it more quickly and easily.

You can make use of translation utilities such as xTranslator or ESP-ESM Translator (links are for SE, there are LE versions too). While built for translation, editing text in the same language works just as well. It can show you all lines in the respective mod (some don't need any work, as they aren't shown in game at any point, e.g. scripts), which you can then just copy from there, putting them into your preferred text editing software etc., or you can simply edit them directly with either aforementioned tool.

Edited 14 hours ago by The Lord

Thx.  The first one has grammatical errors on its description page, which may not matter in practice, but does lower my confidence in it.  The second has tutorials to use and everything, so, I intend to give that one a shot.  My head's hurting a lot atm, so, Idk when I'll be up to acquiring a new skill set.  It's next on my "to-do list," though, as soon as I'm back near optimum.

 

I really appreciate the suggestion-- again, thx a lot.

[lPalpatinel]

23 hours ago, DSHV said:

I also think Garona would be a great fit for an Amazon group. Also a rival group of only men.
Double Snorre can give tasks of finding exotic women, like catching Pokemon: noble woman, wild Argonian, Dragonborn,.. I am planning to add everything from #3451 post. Except for the purple question marks. They are in question.
I can add Bruiser's kill dialogue.

 

Thank you.

Weird - he has a regular dialogue.

Should work if it's all about the same names.

This will definitely break anything, either her or the entire follower system. Maybe make it activatable on a phrase? I would not like to add a dependency that will be used for a small number of scenes and which can be easily skipped. Although dances can be used and added to existing scenes. Another question is how difficult it will be for me to add these dance animations. I'll see.

I am happy to accept any corrections to the text and implement them. I am posting texts for this purpose. Although I find some mistakes, I cannot completely fix them, since I myself did them.

He will appear automatically when you complete all the quests that Serpent gave at the first meeting and talk to him about them. It's 30 stage of AAATroublesofHeroineQuest.

Excellent, puts this dialogue to kill bruiser that will help in the future, it's a good idea for Double Snorre and it's a good idea for Garona, but I'll have to start over then because I was already halfway through the quest without her xD.

[Rylalei]

Not sure if this was asked before, but how to change Doppelganger's voice?

 

Just feels odd when playing a female PC and the Doppelganger has a male voice.

[DSHV]

On 9/9/2021 at 3:55 PM, Svettlana said:

But I need satirical classic orc taverns, or even a big orc village in the mountains(.

I don't know what a classic orc tavern means. Are there any examples? I'm not a builder. I think locations I add are very blank.

On 9/9/2021 at 4:08 PM, Svettlana said:

Could the author add him new desires to perform in a small game with a stone, scissors, paper?

I can, but how can I keep track of tasks? Add special NPCs for tasks?

17 hours ago, peterkenway said:

I was already halfway through the quest without her

Well, I thought to add her after the quest as an additional easter egg. Like: "-Hey, Garona, I met a tribe similar to you. -Cool, I can hang out with them in the uncertain future."

10 hours ago, Rylalei said:

Not sure if this was asked before, but how to change Doppelganger's voice?

Reloading a save may help, until I rework Doppelganger as follower. Although there is still a million quests to do before it.

23 hours ago, Golgo13 said:

The first one has grammatical errors on its description page

Speaking of which, TOH's page probably contains a bunch of errors. It would be easier to fix, but there are also content spoilers, so I don't ask to do it.

[Svettlana]

6 hours ago, DSHV said:

I don't know what a classic orc tavern means. Are there any examples? I'm not a builder. I think locations I add are very blank.

I can, but how can I keep track of tasks? Add special NPCs for tasks?

1. In many fantasy, the books are filled with "aggression, fights, drunkenness and cruciation." I think it should be done as a dilapidated mansion, abandoned by the owners with its own things to protect the walls of the city. Such a slightly burnt large half-empty house, which swept the dragon. Given that the main things are taken away by the owners, it will not be necessary to break your head over the interior. Chairs destroyed by orc furniture, empty bottles everywhere, but among all this statue of Malacata, and around it litters for "servants", which they are going to find. Perhaps from those very warriors of the orcs. You can even in the interior and outside the house to shove the Dragon's bones. The orcs were the first to kill the dragon at the time of coming them in Skyrim, and not Dovakin.

2. Falsk Venn..In my opinion, this character is the most useful among everyone for playing at the start of the game. Very daring and bold on appearance. True, I put it a hairstyle from Apache in my game)) Cute. Desires after the scene of violence, it is desirable to add a separate string. As with the desires of the orc from the tavern Riverwood. That would be super. Some disputes, betting money for coercion through desires (you can refuse later from execution, but to pay three times), and he let it throw a coin to pay or not (50 coins) in percentage of 30 to 70. For too long to implement quests, but if they are a bit , It will be great. Let's say, let the opportunity be able to appear in a few days when he becomes boring. But I will satisfy and without quests - I really want a variety for such a character, which is suitable for two sexy fashion for satellites and their "transactions". True, for "Lola" a character is somewhat poor)). The manner is not. But from there, as an idea, you can at least take a quest for the entourage or there prepared (find) a girlfriend to me delicious food! Or the quest "Food of the Yarl", which the Ta must be mined for the sake of the sake of the sake of the Timber. Or to rescue it a fucking friend from prison (his friends have a lot, just come to prison and offer redemption or body to the caretaker). I think it is necessary to add it to him to get rich with the help of the heroine, her body and the qualities of the fighter, but so without fanaticism. Guild of thieves, let's say, and so on.

[Golgo13]

Oh, BTW-- I've been ignoring it for so long that I almost overlooked it; but, in the Forgotten Regret, there's a dialog choice with Serpent asking, "Master, do this slave needed in the Regret Room?"  The verb "do" should be changed to "is."

For "Buying Love," the instructions say, "Fattig wants to boast to his former love Elizabeth, who in Solitude docks."  It should read, "Fattig wants to boast to his former love, Elizabeth, who is at the Solitude docks."

When you go and meet Elizabeth, she asks, "Who?  Do I supposed to know him?"  That should be "Who?  Am I supposed to know him?"

She replies to your answer, "No ringing bells."  That should be, "That doesn't ring a bell."

"He's a living illustration of the word 'disgusting,'" isn't completely wrong, but it isn't the expected phrase.  It would be preferable to say, "He's the living embodiment of the word 'disgusting,'" or, "He's the personification of the word 'disgusting.'"

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Is this supposed to be happening?  An unarmed beggar in nothing but rags (Fattig) has been gifted 111,000 septims and Proudspire Manor, replete with the love of his life dwelling therein; yet, he chooses to tag along behind two heavily armed and armored warriors into falmer- and draugr-infested ruins.  It seems to strain credulity.

Furthermore, Proudspire Manor keeps generating more copies of Fattig.  In addition to the original, I now have three surplus Fattigs in the house.

Hmm... since I have three spares, would it be safe to just "disable" the Fattig that follows me around like a creep?  He even complains that I won't leave him alone-- it doesn't seem as though he belongs in train behind Jordis, Meeko and my 'toon.

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This is finally really pissing me off-- I'm the head of the Thieves' Guild and I've put every possible city under its control.  Moreover, my speech skill is over 80.  On top of that, I'm thane in every capitol city but Dawnstar.  Yet, every time a city guard comes up to me for any reason in Riften or Solitude (at least), my only options are fight to the death or go to prison and lose all of my skill-leveling progress.  I KNOW that, as thane, I'm supposed to be untouchable, and that, as a member of the Thieves' Guild in a controlled city, I'm supposed to be able to bribe my way out of trouble.  What the F**K is going on here???
 

Alright, maybe I need to go to prison to meet certain NPC's; but, I already met them, once, and already escaped from two prisons once.  When do I get to stop risking the consequences of escaping, or losing my progress every time I'm interacting with an NPC in his house for too long without any warning that I'm supposed to leave, or God-only-knows why I was arrested the other times?  Shouldn't I have the usual options of using my pull with the jarl, paying a bribe, or just going to prison?

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I am absolutely baffled as to what I am supposed to do in the Cidhna Mine during the quest to do Farkas' quest for him.  I spoke to the female orc (the only one there who isn't a generic guard) and exhausted the dialog tree in no time without getting any options for anything to do.  I cannot access any part of the mine apart from the entrance area, and there is nothing to mine there.  I couldn't even see any mining picks or other prisoners.  WTF am I supposed to do in there to get the ropes off of my 'toon/"serve my time?"  All I can do is go up to guards who have nothing to say to me, and bounce off the walls and locked doors-- or walk right out of the wide open entrance with no one even trying to stop me, which doesn't exactly feel much like a prison, but leaves me still stuck in the goddamned ropes.  If this were real, I'd just walk out and cut off the ropes; the only reason I can't is that it's a video game and it just doesn't let you do it because it isn't programmed to let you.  There appears to be literally NOTHING to do to clear this stage!  How can you "earn" your way out by mining when there are ZERO mining nodes in the only area accessible to the player???  For that matter, you're told to say nothing but "I'm sorry," and "forgive me," anyway... and that is only a dialog option ONCE.  You can't say anything, you can't do anything!  GOD DAMN!  This is the most aggravating, frustrating thing I've seen anywhere in a long time.  I don't want to get out with the console (I'm not even sure if it's possible), but how the Hell else can anyone clear the quest from their log, or simply put their armor back on?

* I thought I'd try coming back to this after several hours of cooling off, but that afforded me nothing.  That female orc is still the only thing even close to resembling "Cidhna Mine wardens," even though the plural suggests that, if I'm talking to the right person, there should be at least two, so, who knows if the "Cidhna Mine wardens" are even in the Cidhna Mine in the first place..?

Since it appears impossible for me to accomplish anything in this quest after showing up for "punishment," I thought I'd just try to clear it with the console; but, this is one that doesn't use setstage in the ordinary way, so I can't just escape out of it.  I can either backtrack and never take this quest in the first place, start a new game, or play the rest of the game without armor... but also not nude, since the ropes count as "clothing" for some f**ked-up reason, so my Dibella's Charm will electrocute me if I try to use it instead of armor.  If Cursed Loot puts one of those cursed collars on me, now, I'm just dead with no reprieve.  Only the first choice is remotely acceptable, and that acceptability is REMOTE, since I have to abandon a lot of progress to go back that far.  I'm sure that this was play tested... how can there be no paths that lead anywhere???  So, I'll have to re-run three or four dungeons, re-craft a bunch of stuff I made, and hope that, someday, I learn WTF I'm supposedly doing wrong in this quest.

I sincerely apologize for sounding so pissed, but I passed "pissed" several exits ago.  Failure when I cannot detect from the game's instructions any mistake I can be making frustrates the Hell out of me.  Since I'm powerless to do anything else, all I can do is come on here and plead for help.

 

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Perhaps this would be too complicated to be implemented, but, would it be possible for the mod to check the player's size stat before calling them "fat as a whale," "fat as a cow," etc.?  Obviously, I couldn't care less how much my 'toon is verbally abused; but, when you are almost anorexically skinny with micro-breasts, the comments about being fat and having "giant udders" are so incongruous as to jolt me out of any suspension of disbelief I manage to maintain. 

 

I created a body model with a very wide variance between the borderline anorexic minimum size and the borderline obese, sexy-to-a-caveman maximum size in order to have the greatest variety of body types in my game.  I may make my next character more voluptuous in order to better fit the dialog; but, I just prefer skinny (albeit not anorexic) girls.  It would be really cool if the mod were "smart" enough to insult my 'toons for their small breasts or lack of major curves; failing that, just dropping the completely inappropriate, nonsensical insults would be great.  It wouldn't be the end of my world if it couldn't be done; I just think it would be worth doing, if possible.

 

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Since you're concerned about corrections revealing spoilers, I'll start hiding them.  I'd been assuming that no one would pay close enough attention to my posts for it to matter; but, you may be right.

Spoiler

The replies to the question, "What are people gossiping about?" almost all have errors, although they are often very minor (but very noticeable).  I'm going to post only the problematic parts of the quotations since they go by so quickly that I can't copy them all out before they disappear.  I intend to learn how to use that program which reveals the text and allows one to edit it, but, I have a serious problem with migraines (it's why I had to retire from law), and the one I'm currently experiencing has lasted five days, so far.  I probably need another procedure from my pain specialist, since this is unusually bad this time.

 

I'm also not including spelling errors, since you don't really need help from a native speaker to fix those-- you spell those same words correctly in other places.  I believe that you only need a little help with grammar.

 

"Everyone will gladly punish this shame of her kind," should be, "Everyone will gladly punish this shame to her kind."  This is not the only time I've seen the phrase "shame of her kind" appear.  Every time you have written "shame of her kind," what you really mean is, "shame to her kind."

 

"...Companions are not so dumb to give weapons...." should be, "...Companions are not so dumb as to give weapons...."

 

"...teaching women to humility," should be simply, "...teaching women humility."

 

"Heroine is kinky pervert...." should be, "Heroine is a kinky pervert."  Many times, the only error in the sentence is forgetting to include an article like "a," "an," or "the."

 

This is the case with "Heroine is dog fucker."  That should be "Heroine is a dog fucker."  Likewise, "...cheated on her bandit-husband with dog!" should be, "...cheated on her bandit-husband with a dog!"  The hyphen between "bandit" and "husband" doesn't exactly make the sentence wrong, but, it is really unnecessary.

 

Similarly, "...suck cock of disgusting beggar right in the street," should read, "sucked the cock of a disgusting beggar right in the street."

 

And "Elisif the Fair is actual whore.  Everyone in Blue Palace fuck her," should read, "Elisif the Fair is an actual whore.  Everyone in the Blue Palace fucks her."

 

 

One question, just because I'm curious: my understanding is that a whore has sex to get something in return; a slut is promiscuous just because she loves to have sex.  Is Elisif having sex to obtain anything, or, does she just do it because it feels so good, or simply can't say, "no?"

 

 

 

 

 

Edited September 12, 2021 by Golgo13

[warden239]

DSHV, I have an idea for a new story if your interested 

[DSHV]

On 9/11/2021 at 4:31 PM, Svettlana said:

1.

Yes, maybe I'll add that. Adding new content with an old character is good too.

On 9/11/2021 at 10:51 PM, Golgo13 said:

Is this supposed to be happening?

No. He must stay in the house or follow the player through one quest (where you need to talk to the inhabitants of Solitude about him).

On 9/11/2021 at 10:51 PM, Golgo13 said:

Yet, every time a city guard comes up to me for any reason in Riften or Solitude (at least), my only options are fight to the death or go to prison and lose all of my skill-leveling progress. 

It looks like you have no money to pay the fine.

On 9/11/2021 at 10:51 PM, Golgo13 said:

I am absolutely baffled as to what I am supposed to do in the Cidhna Mine during the quest to do Farkas' quest for him. 

You need to talk to a generic guard, then find another generic guard with new dialogue and so on.

On 9/11/2021 at 10:51 PM, Golgo13 said:

fat as a whale,

I think it is just a general insult to a woman (inspired by Glados here). In the case of a skinny woman, it sounds more sarcastic (in quotation marks). There are also several dialogs where the size of the body is asked and the player can choose it.

On 9/11/2021 at 10:51 PM, Golgo13 said:

Is Elisif having sex to obtain anything, or, does she just do it because it feels so good, or simply can't say, "no?"

Just loves sex. But an innkeeper may not know this and simplify assume.

On 9/13/2021 at 6:32 AM, warden239 said:

DSHV, I have an idea for a new story if your interested 

Yes, I am interested.

Edited September 14, 2021 by DSHV
Grammar

[AthenaTheLover]

On 9/6/2021 at 5:59 PM, DSHV said:

Plans for 2.3.0:

  Reveal hidden contents

• Global value AAANoSexistFaction to disable automatic sexism of Companoins and Civil War factions.....100%
• A note to Temple of Kynareth.....100%
• New Home for Homeless - Small quest for recruiting dirty pathetic follower behind the Bannered Mare (If you play, for example, with Sexlab Survival).....100%
• The Pursuit of a Shadow: Shor's Stone: Talk to Filnjar to start.....100%
• Sexist Companions: For males: Merit, Happy Punishment, Werewhore Tamer.....50% For war whore: Festive Whore.....50%
• Grym: Studying of the Dwemer.....100%
• Once you become Bruiser's slave, they will humiliate you uniquely to your race. If they mention a random cave, then this is the specific Random Cave near Whiterun......100%
• Lydia: Fighting Lust.....50%
• Dibellan priestess follower, who gives Holy Fuck!, Pilgrimage, Pilgrimage: Dibella, Pilgrimage: Kynareth, Pilgrimage: Mara, Pilgrimage: Talos.....100%
• New phrases for Garona.....45%
• Night Mistress 2.....50%
• Iona: Obedient Housecarl.....100%
• Jordis: Animal Attraction.....50%
• Serpent: The Backstabber (Your bandit husband outstays his welcome in life).....100%
• The Strong Nord Woman.....50%
• A Mother or Whore or Both?.....50%
• Serpent: Scape She-Goat, International Cuntbeating Day.....50%
• Tribe of orc-amazons.....X

 

I already love new content, but I'm still waiting for the content for Rayya.

Edited September 14, 2021 by TinyAthena