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Tales from the multiverse: Dragonborn(s)


Crw

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Greetings, ladies and gentlemen.
This is the first chapter of the new branch about the dragonborn and his circle, in my somewhat vulgar and inappropriate interpretation.

Separating thanks to all those who participated in the creation of this part by allowing me to use their images, namely:
@blazingsai @Elf Prince @Tirloque @BoLtStEr2002 @Jexsam @Resdayn 
^_^ Thank you guys, and everyone who responded (yes @Alter Native, I'm talking about you^_^)
Enjoy your reading and the miraculous coming week.


 

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Quite the unique entry indeed.  The speech "of the heroes" in particular was an interesting moment, I hadn't seen Blazingsai's + Jexsam's dragonborns in a while, and didn't know about Bolster's one. It was nice seeing all of the heroes, with their different styles, different growths and potentials lined up. And I loved the way you pictured Stranger, taking hits yet boldly defying his opponents.

 

Only thing was the "encounter" of your heroine with the dragon, the order of the vignettes was unclear and ended abruptly into a death scene, so a reader might have trouble guessing if the dragon tried to eat her and if there was an ellipse of the fight (we don't see an arrow hit), or if it was nearly dying and just crumbled onto the floor.

 

Regardless, we now have now quite the potential for a good villain, and the "we're being watched" trick surprised me. ^^

 

Good job ! ?

 

Malicia : « 'course it's silly to get naked in front of meany people. That Farnesa girl, she tricked Nevi to kiss her on the mouth ! :classic_angry: »

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I'm totally impressed with this episode. The poses you used, effects, dialogues and closing the first episode with seduction and kiss is awesome. I also didn't doubt that Stranger will be beaten. Hahaha. it is his Skyrim destiny. I had to smile see Farnesa seducing her companion and she reminded me on Ivy in my game.  This episode is 11 of 10. :)

This picture thrills me a lot:

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4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 

Malicia : « 'course it's silly to get naked in front of meany people. That Farnesa girl, she tricked Nevi to kiss her on the mouth ! :classic_angry: »

That is the best. You should try it to sometimes. :)

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Man that was awesome!

The shout effects were really cool!

And the dragon scene was badass ?

A real visual treat, well done!

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Multiple Dragonborns from other Skyrims. Why didn't I think of that? The transitions in the story were flawless or rather flawless as you can get in this reality but I'm not going to open that can of wyrms.

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20 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Interesting Entry :)

Thank you! ^_^
 

18 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Quite the unique entry indeed.  The speech "of the heroes" in particular was an interesting moment, I hadn't seen Blazingsai's + Jexsam's dragonborns in a while, and didn't know about Bolster's one. It was nice seeing all of the heroes, with their different styles, different growths and potentials lined up. And I loved the way you pictured Stranger, taking hits yet boldly defying his opponents.

 

Only thing was the "encounter" of your heroine with the dragon, the order of the vignettes was unclear and ended abruptly into a death scene, so a reader might have trouble guessing if the dragon tried to eat her and if there was an ellipse of the fight (we don't see an arrow hit), or if it was nearly dying and just crumbled onto the floor.

 

Regardless, we now have now quite the potential for a good villain, and the "we're being watched" trick surprised me. ^^

 

Good job ! ?

 

Malicia : « 'course it's silly to get naked in front of meany people. That Farnesa girl, she tricked Nevi to kiss her on the mouth ! :classic_angry: »

Thanks a lot, I'm glad you like it.
As for the heroine - I did not want to stretch the length of the scene with her, which apparently influenced the clarity. Thank you, I will consider this in the future.
 

17 hours ago, donttouchmethere said:

A philosophical prelude with a romantic cliff hanger!

well done, well done indeed ?

 

Farnesa is a tricky one ?

I am so far from the style in which I began to do all this, that I am even not quite sure.
But thank you :D 
Well, yes, she is ^_^
 

14 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

I'm totally impressed with this episode. The poses you used, effects, dialogues and closing the first episode with seduction and kiss is awesome. I also didn't doubt that Stranger will be beaten. Hahaha. it is his Skyrim destiny. I had to smile see Farnesa seducing her companion and she reminded me on Ivy in my game.  This episode is 11 of 10. :)

This picture thrills me a lot:

 

Thank you so much for such a positive review. As Tirloque already noted I wanted to point out that he does not hang his head and continues his wanderings

 

14 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Very nicely done. Love the story but seducing and kissing is the best scene ;)

Thank you Eva ^_^ Glad you like it ^_^ 
On the topic of seduction: in the process of creating it seemed to me "well, how can someone buy into such nonsense, especially considering that she is intelligent and educated" but in the end it came out very organically.
 

7 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Man that was awesome!

The shout effects were really cool!

And the dragon scene was badass ?

A real visual treat, well done!

Thank you Wanobi ^_^ I am glad that you like. For a long time I experimented with how a shout should look like. The most distinct look as you see was just a dragonic text.
 

4 hours ago, Darkpig said:

Multiple Dragonborns from other Skyrims. Why didn't I think of that? The transitions in the story were flawless or rather flawless as you can get in this reality but I'm not going to open that can of wyrms.

Well, I think that each of us has several Dragonborns. And besides the most beloved there are those who are less fortunate. This and got me thinking about the multitude of Dragonborns

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19 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

That is the best. You should try it to sometimes. :)

Malicia : « Well, I got naked sometimes in front of meany people. And they did me in the pee-pee and the poo-poo while I wasn't wanting, you see ? :classic_mellow: »

 

19 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

I'm totally impressed with this episode. The poses you used, effects, dialogues and closing the first episode with seduction and kiss is awesome. I also didn't doubt that Stranger will be beaten. Hahaha. it is his Skyrim destiny. I had to smile see Farnesa seducing her companion and she reminded me on Ivy in my game.  This episode is 11 of 10. :)

Stranger was depicted as a bold and courageous protagonist though. It was quite a flattering side of him, IMO. :classic_smile:

5 hours ago, Crw said:

Thanks a lot, I'm glad you like it.
As for the heroine - I did not want to stretch the length of the scene with her, which apparently influenced the clarity. Thank you, I will consider this in the future.


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Well, I think that each of us has several Dragonborns. And besides the most beloved there are those who are less fortunate. This and got me thinking about the multitude of Dragonborns

There could perfectly be a multitude of dragonborn, as implied by the greybeards when you meet them. Miraak is a proof of it. All the Dragonborns can absorb dragon souls/learn Thu'um instinctively, but only one (per dimension) is supposed to save the world. 

 

Malicia : « By the way, your pictures are very nice, but you forgot very important examples, you see ?

 

              Like this one -> tumblr_opwtnvUiFC1vjeamqo3_1280.jpg

             

            It's very thrilling too, and the heroine looks way more intelligent than the others, yes. :classic_sleepy: »

 

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22 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Well, I got naked sometimes in front of meany people. And they did me in the pee-pee and the poo-poo while I wasn't wanting, you see ? :classic_mellow: »

 

 

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23 hours ago, Crw said:

Thank you Eva ^_^ Glad you like it ^_^ 
On the topic of seduction: in the process of creating it seemed to me "well, how can someone buy into such nonsense, especially considering that she is intelligent and educated" but in the end it came out very organically.
 

 

> Yea. elf girl was little bit naive but I think she wanted to be seduced by her because she is beautiful.

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5 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> Yea. elf girl was little bit naive but I think she wanted to be seduced by her because she is beautiful.

Even so, she was not against it. ^_^ I think anyone would be glad :D

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Guess I missed all the fun in this one :( better late than never here's my contribution. ;) 

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On 1/29/2019 at 7:05 AM, Jayomms said:
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Guess I missed all the fun in this one :( better late than never here's my contribution. ;) 

This is a little sad. But really, this idea deserves an attention! ^_^
And the characters look interesting, I already wonder what happens next!

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3 hours ago, Crw said:

This is a little sad. But really, this idea deserves an attention! ^_^
And the characters look interesting, I already wonder what happens next!

:);)

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