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The Adventures of Alma The Amorous Alchemist: Prologue


LexiAJ82

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Welcome back to the land of Skyrim! 😄

 

Today, we're meeting a brand new character named Alma, and joining her on her journey. I'll be honest, I created Alma with the intent to tell some stories that were a bit more lewd than my typical fair and, while this short, introductory tale is definitely lewd... well, as is often the case with me, plot and characterization, and side characters kind of wormed their way in. Regardless, I hope you enjoy.

 

As always, my other work can be found here: Table of Contents

 

And, here we go:

 

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As always I hope you enjoyed. 😍 

Edited by LexiAJ82
Edited to enlarge, and generally improve the captions for dialogues and monologues.

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Great job! As always, great writing and amazing script.
And a definite improvement in the visual part in comparison with your previous works!
Although personally it seems to me that the text itself is somewhat small, but these is minor. 

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2 minutes ago, Crw said:

Great job! As always, great writing and amazing script.
And a definite improvement in the visual part in comparison with your previous works!
Although personally it seems to me that the text itself is somewhat small, but these is minor. 

I recently bought a new PC and monitor. Now, working with 4K images, it's definitely affected how large the text is. It's already a considerably larger font than I was using, but I agree and I'll probably be sizing it up a bit more still going forward. 

 

I'm glad you enjoyed it! The new rig can handle a much more modded Skyrim visually, which has been fun to work with. 😀 

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I got a Christina Aguilera level herpes vibe from seeing that sweaty sex.   Great story and pictures though!  As another poster said...small text size.

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8 minutes ago, Celedhring said:

I got a Christina Aguilera level herpes vibe from seeing that sweaty sex.   Great story and pictures though!  As another poster said...small text size.

Thank you! 😊 Glad you enjoyed our tale. 

 

I'm in complete agreement with you guys on the text size. I may re-caption this chapter of time allows, but I'll definitely be going a lithe bigger on the next chapter. 

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8 minutes ago, ther1pper said:

Interesting start.

Thanks! 

 

Hopefully things will just get more interesting from here! 😃

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8 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

Indeed... I like the potion gone wrong idea. Well Done. :):heart:;):thumbsup:

Thanks! The potion gone wrong idea seemed like a perfect fit for lewd tales of alchemy. ☺️

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There are so, SO many things I love about the setup of this story!

The narration is excellent and it really feels that Alma would really rather travel the land searching for rare ingredients than spend her time trying to calm down her carnal cravings. Which, of course, makes the whole thing even more entertaining. 😅

Your Lydia is hot.  So is your Ysolda.  So is Hulda. And of course so is Alma.  Ok, so far everyone in this story is hot and I highly approve of that! 😊

 

Just like with your other stories, it is very clear how much care you put into every single shot - from the expressions, to poses, to item details (Alma's clothing is on the bed next to her, the mug of ale has actual ale in it, Lydia blushes when she's talking about attractive alchemist).  Things like these might seem small, but they add a whole new layer of realism and fluidity to screenshots. 😍

 

It's a great start and I am impatiently awaiting to see what happens next!

Thank you for sharing your work with us! 🤗

 

P.S. Your Bannered Mare has some pretty sexy foliage  🥰

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20 hours ago, Devianna said:

There are so, SO many things I love about the setup of this story!

The narration is excellent and it really feels that Alma would really rather travel the land searching for rare ingredients than spend her time trying to calm down her carnal cravings. Which, of course, makes the whole thing even more entertaining. 😅

 

 

Glad you're enjoying the start of Alma's adventure! 🥰

 

I'll be 100 percent honest here, the original vision of Alma was just a really horny alchemist traveling the province of Skyrim. Just an opportunity to tell some more risqué stories because my Thora stories, about a LITERAL WHORE I'll remind you, don't really feature that much... adult content. 🤣

 

The potion gone wrong angle didn't really appear until I started taking screenshots. With that, came the idea that, while she has a lot of sex, she'd really rather be doing other things with her time. And it added the element of Alma having double crossed Maven, something I'll no doubt be able to exploit later. 🤔 In short, that idea gave Alma motivation beyond sex and added some depth to both her and her story.

 

20 hours ago, Devianna said:

Your Lydia is hot.  So is your Ysolda.  So is Hulda. And of course so is Alma.  Ok, so far everyone in this story is hot and I highly approve of that! 😊

 

 

Ysolda and Hulda are both Bijin so I can't really take credit for them. But I did put a lot of work into Alma and my version of Lydia, so thank you! 😊  (Just realizing how many actual Skyrim characters - remodeled or otherwise - I have intertwined with my OC protags).

 

20 hours ago, Devianna said:

 Just like with your other stories, it is very clear how much care you put into every single shot - from the expressions, to poses, to item details (Alma's clothing is on the bed next to her, the mug of ale has actual ale in it, Lydia blushes when she's talking about attractive alchemist).  Things like these might seem small, but they add a whole new layer of realism and fluidity to screenshots. 😍

 

 

I tend to look at each scene as I'm staging out and think, Okay, if I were just writing this story, without the imagery attached, how would I describe it? 🤔 Then I get super anal retentive. I seriously spend way to much time per shot. What you didn't see in that scene were Mikael's clothes discarded beside the bed, Alma's boots tossed in a chair in the room, his lute leaning against a dresser... ect... This details are there as well, they just never fit in frame. 😟

 

I also, particularly over the last couple chapters I've posted, have started taking more cues from reading just a ton of comics as far as screen flow and such.

 

As always, Thanks for reading! ❤️

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Really strong setup with the potion and Maven stuff, lots of opportunities for hijinks! 

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