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The adventures of Kiki: little vampire that couldn't. (Part 18)


Devianna

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Hello, dear readers. After taking a short break from Skyrim in order to find my inspiration, I’m finally back! Kiki: You were simply playing another game. - I was waiting for my muse to strike. - Kiki: You were just being lazy! - You know, I can easily simply leave you cursed. - Kiki: Eeep! Dear readers, the Author was definitely just looking for inspiration!

There, that's better. Since it’s been a few weeks, let us first look at the short recap of the state of our main characters.


 

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And now, let's pick up right where we left off. Vulcun successfully distracted Lady Eira and her braces were used to break the enchantment on Sanguine's High Priest. While our heroes were discussing their small victory other events have been unfolding elsewhere.


 

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Author's note:

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I realized on the last image that Cyrus became so good at sneaking that he practically blended with the wall. So just in case it's too difficult to see - yep, that is definitely Cyrus the Humble over there by the flower pot, being mortified by the dance scene unfolding right in front of him.

 

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Really great chapter, I think the best yet. I don't think anyone has managed to integrate the beach inner tube poses into a story before ? 

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1 hour ago, Kythana said:

Another great episode! ?

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. ?

 

1 hour ago, SpyVsPie said:

Really great chapter, I think the best yet. I don't think anyone has managed to integrate the beach inner tube poses into a story before ? 

Oh wow, thank you for the high praise. ☺️ The dwemer certainly had many strange and wondrous inventions. For all we know, they had a whole fleet of those flotation devices! ?

 

33 minutes ago, mercplatypus said:

Always good to see a new entry from you.

Aww shucks. Thank you. ☺️

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Oh my! Thats amazing! The peculiarities of your narration do not cease to please me! ^_^
And we found out that Cyrus is pretty good at his job ^_^
P.s. You know, I also met the guys who are warmed by righteous wrath ^_^

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6 hours ago, Crw said:

Oh my! Thats amazing! The peculiarities of your narration do not cease to please me! ^_^
And we found out that Cyrus is pretty good at his job ^_^
P.s. You know, I also met the guys who are warmed by righteous wrath ^_^

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Ah yes, the over-zealousness of Space Marines is definitely something that Cyrus can relate to. ?

I also felt that I should explain how it was possible for him to constantly end up inside castles without having a proper invitation. While most of his order consider him an overly paranoid fanatic (and that's saying something, coming from the Vigilants), Cyrus actually IS rather competent. He managed to pick up quite a few trinkets in his travels and while they may seem laughable he found practical uses for them (although he's still horrible with naming those contraptions). ?

And I'm glad you enjoyed this episode. ☺️

 

4 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Cyrus way of stealth is legit impressive

Hahaha, thank you! Cyrus isn't the greatest fighter, but he makes up for it in stealth and ingenuity. ?

 

3 hours ago, ZenBuddhist said:

amusing narrative + great graphics + excellent plot.

you got yourself a follower, @Devianna; thanks for sharing your creation.

Oh my, thank you for the kind words! ☺️ I'm glad that you found my stories enjoyable. ?

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Nice job! I always enjoy your refreshing ideas and the humors spin you put on everything. 

Sometimes it's good to not take yourself and your story too seriously ;) .

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Oh, my this one was hilarious. :D I died laughing. Excellent work and many compliments. Love the way you combined dram, thriller and humor. You rock.

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4 hours ago, Freid said:

Cyrus stealth 100

Yup, I'm pretty sure he's been dumping all of his points into sneaking and illusion. ?

 

2 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Nice job! I always enjoy your refreshing ideas and the humors spin you put on everything. 

Sometimes it's good to not take yourself and your story too seriously ;) .

In the words of the great Bugs Bunny "Don't take life too seriously, you'll never get out of it alive." (I know that the original is by Elbert Hubbard, I just prefer Bugs' version)

Thank you for your kind comment. ? And my characters do not take their story lightly. Have you met Aunt Nimhe? Baking cookies is a Very serious business. ?

 

1 hour ago, EvalovesEP said:

Oh, my this one was hilarious. :D I died laughing. Excellent work and many compliments. Love the way you combined dram, thriller and humor. You rock.

Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! ☺️ And there's most certainly drama in the story. We have a servant of Molag Bal and a servant of Stendarr both competing for the ownership attention of the servant of Hermaeus Mora. What can possibly go wrong? (spoiler: EVERYTHING) ?

 

 

 

 

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Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha -Dwemer flotation device scene made me almost pee in my pants .Hilarious.

Excellent episode and must emphasize again -  Lady Eira is hooooooooooot! :)

 

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1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

Dwemer flotation device

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

same here, Elf Prince!

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Hahaha! I can't take this smile out of my face. Very good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

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3 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha -Dwemer flotation device scene made me almost pee in my pants .Hilarious.

Excellent episode and must emphasize again -  Lady Eira is hooooooooooot! :)

 

I think I might need to consider adding a warning to my posts : The author is not responsible for any soiled clothing resulting from the reading of this comic. ?

Joking aside, I'm glad this episode made you laugh. ☺️

I agree with you - Lady Eira is young (by dremora standards), arrogant and super hot! It makes for an interesting combination. ?

 

2 hours ago, Cema said:

Ah ah ah ! Very nice ! :D

Thank you. Glad you liked it. ?

 

1 hour ago, ZenBuddhist said:

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

same here, Elf Prince!

It's dwemer-made and it floats. ? Cyrus might not be the most inventive zealot around when it comes to naming things but you have to give the guy some credit - he wasn't even the least bit put off by the pink color clashing with his armor. That man is on a mission and terrible fashion sense shall not hinder his progress! ?

 

1 hour ago, Reinona said:

Hahaha! I can't take this smile out of my face. Very good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Making people smile is one of Kiki's most favorite things to do!? I'm happy you liked this chapter. Hopefully it will take me less than three week to publish the next one. ?

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4 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you i love your stories such fun and many good surprises ?

Oops, I almost missed your comment. ? Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you liked this chapter. ☺️

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Nice chapter ! A bit short for my tastes however, as we only catch-up to the story and then watch a bit of dance, but the  jokes all through Cyrus' progression were excellent, and the short recap had the same vibe. And maybe I already mentioned it, but the Volkihar castle' maintenance also improved by a great deal. ^^ Awaiting for what's next ! :D

 

Malicia : « That Cyrus guy looks very expert at infiltrating castles, yes ! But Vulvul should be careful, dancing with other girls in front of the one he got honey-honey with. That's very dangerous, uh. :kiss: »

 

12 hours ago, Cema said:

Ah ah ah ! Very nice ! :D

Cema commenting in a non-NSFW non-wild non-superduper-screenarchered entry ! Holy-pony ! image.png.ecbf17da0a4c1a73ff98f725411c0afb.png

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3 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 

Malicia : « ... But Vulvul should be careful, dancing with other girls in front of the one he got honey-honey with. That's very dangerous, uh. :kiss: »

 

 

> ? True. Especially because they expressed affinities to each other in the front of her, plus, we, ladies reads "signs" between genders very well.  :) As a comfort to Vulcon, he is not the only man who does that mistake. Many men does.  ;)

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7 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Nice chapter ! A bit short for my tastes however, as we only catch-up to the story and then watch a bit of dance, but the  jokes all through Cyrus' progression were excellent, and the short recap had the same vibe. And maybe I already mentioned it, but the Volkihar castle' maintenance also improved by a great deal. ^^ Awaiting for what's next ! :D

 

Malicia : « That Cyrus guy looks very expert at infiltrating castles, yes ! But Vulvul should be careful, dancing with other girls in front of the one he got honey-honey with. That's very dangerous, uh. :kiss: »

 

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Hehehe, this whole series started out with 6-picture comic strips, so my latest entries are definitely longer than originally planned. ? But I understand what you're saying. I toyed with an idea of having this and the next episode as one, but first it would make it too cumbersome and second - it would take the spotlight away from Cyrus' and Lady Eira's story progression. I wanted to illustrate that while being overly zealous, Cyrus isn't a complete fool and that he is skillful and adaptable at his job. As for Lady Eira it was important to show her reaction to earlier evening events and her thought process regarding Vulcun (and how he went from "rip his heart out" to " be my pet" category in her mind ?).

Thank you for noticing the changes in Volkihar's main hall.?  Redoing everything by hand took a long, long time. ?

 

Malicia, I'll let you in on a little secret. Vulcun just wants to help Kiki and to go back home. He really doesn't care about Lady Eira's opinion. They are both adults and they simply participated in a challenge. (at least that's the way he sees it. Things are a bit more complicated with Lady Eira though ?)

 

P.S. I didn't know that Cema only comments on certain subjects. ? In which case I'm honored that my story made him smile. ☺️

 

5 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> ? True. Especially because they expressed affinities to each other in the front of her, plus, we, ladies reads "signs" between genders very well.  :) As a comfort to Vulcon, he is not the only man who does that mistake. Many men does.  ;)

You're getting very good at reading my characters. ? Compliments on that. ? Kiki and Vulcun certainly are good friends, which is about to annoy both Cyrus and Lady Eira to no end. ?

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Love the female skeleton/charm ring!! And the fact that it worked!!

Great entry! A pleasure to read!

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2 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Love the female skeleton/charm ring!! And the fact that it worked!!

Great entry! A pleasure to read!

Thank you! Cyrus is certainly inventive. ?

Considering his overzealous nature in thwarting evil, if his resourcefulness failed him he would be long dead. ?

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