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Chapter 18. If you want something done right...


Crw

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As usual, I ask you to read and vote ^_^ Thank you =)  

17 members have voted

  1. 1. Did Rose took the book?

    • Of course, book lies there alone, probably something interesting.
    • No, it's most likely dangerous, not to mention the fact that belongs someone else.
  2. 2. Should Isabella go and check Rose?

    • Well, she tinkers there for a long time, yes.
    • Nah, she is a big girl, she can handle it.
  3. 3. Are they good girls or bad? :)

    • Good ^_^
    • Baaaaad. Very, very bad >_<

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Greetings, dear traveler?
 

Time to continue the story of Rosa and her long-suffering company, I am extremely pleased with the pictures and dialogues of this part, and I am interested to hear your opinion on this matter ^_^
Initially, this chapter should have been shorter. Way shorter. On something like 20p shorter. :D I dunno how thats happend.

 

Have a wonderful week :) 

 

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great entry AGAIN! ??

 

If SLA gets out of control there is no turning back ?

The Sisters of Dibella look frigid compared to your Nuns ?

 

is that "blush when aroused" on your Nuns face? ?

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22 minutes ago, donttouchmethere said:

great entry AGAIN! ??

 

If SLA gets out of control there is no turning back ?

The Sisters of Dibella look frigid compared to your Nuns ?

Yay, thanks, I'm gald that you like it ^_^

Well, Dibella Sis is all about love and beauty ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ and my Sis mostly about serving the Akatosh lesbian and non-canon sex :D 
 

22 minutes ago, donttouchmethere said:

is that "blush when aroused" on your Nuns face? ?

Well, I was hoping it would look like this, but Gwen is PS-painted, and the rest is the Raqce-menu face color. ^_^

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Well these sisters are filthy heretics :D, even Gwen did fall.

 

Don't make Gwynolda come to purge. ?

28 minutes ago, Crw said:


Well, Dibella Sis is all about love and beauty ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ and my Sis mostly about serving the Akatosh lesbian and non-canon sex :D 
 

Akatosh don't even have sex as his sphere, these sisters truly fallen.

 

41 minutes ago, donttouchmethere said:

 

The Sisters of Dibella look frigid compared to your Nuns ?

 

Well they are not heretical :) , thats why.

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Some beautiful shots here. I like the "choose your own adventure" angle, I have considered doing that too when I was torn between a few ways to take my blog ?

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Excellent work. Enjoyed in lesbian sex scene with my blond love. Why Rosa isn't at Malicija? ;)

Sorry had no more votes. :(

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11 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Well these sisters are filthy heretics :D, even Gwen did fall.

Well, she resisted for a long time ^_^ But this is not the end :) 
 

11 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Don't make Gwynolda come to purge. ?

Rose: " I can't wait =* "
 

11 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Akatosh don't even have sex as his sphere, these sisters truly fallen.

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11 hours ago, Cema said:

Interesting and sexy as usual ?

Thank you, Cema ^_^ Glad you like it :) 

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7 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Some beautiful shots here. I like the "choose your own adventure" angle, I have considered doing that too when I was torn between a few ways to take my blog ?

Oh, thank you ^_^ 
This allows to some extent to take part to everyone. In addition, even for me, the results sometimes become a surprize. ^_^
It's never too late to start, right? ;) 

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7 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Excellent work. Enjoyed in lesbian sex scene with my blond love. Why Rosa isn't at Malicija? ;)

Thank you Prince ^_^ Glad if you like it ^_^ 
How do you think your blonde will end? ;) 

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1 hour ago, The First Lady of Hats said:

Ossums. ❤️❤️

Yay, thank you ^_^ ❤️❤️
 

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ONWARDS GYWNN!!

Gather the purge-party, we ll be waiting ^_^ =*

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7 hours ago, The First Lady of Hats said:

 

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ONWARDS GYWNN!!

Yes :D 

6 hours ago, Crw said:

 

Gather the purge-party, we ll be waiting ^_^ =*

And it will be glorious.

6 hours ago, Crw said:

 

Rose: " I can't wait =* "

 

 

Rose seems way to exitec for a purge :O 

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Great job! You can definitely be proud of this story. 

Your improvements in the writing and English are especially noticeable.

Also I love the last screenshot! Looking forward for more :) .

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4 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great job! You can definitely be proud of this story. 

Your improvements in the writing and English are especially noticeable.

Also I love the last screenshot! Looking forward for more :) .

Thank you Alter ^_^ I'm glad you liked it :) 
Well, there are still difficulties with the language, but I'm trying harder ^_^

 

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4 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Rose seems way to exitec for a purge :O 

Maybe she thinks about something else? 

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Maybe she thinks about something else? 

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With Gwynolda? She might been gravely mistaken. ?

 

 

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8 hours ago, wilson99 said:

lovely as usually can`t wait to see the next episodes thank you very much ?

Thank you Wilson, I'm glad you like it ^_^

 

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

With Gwynolda? She might been gravely mistaken. ?

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9 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Excellent work. I hope they will be veeeeery bad girls ;)

Thank you Eva, I'm gald you like it ^_^ 
They try their best to be such :D ?

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Nice episode indeed, quite some mystery, lots of sexy content, and great looking screens (the last one, some with Rosa's hair underneath her veil, and some of Gwen x Sinetica are specially noticeable). About the english, I see you tried to make the style more fluid and direct, and it worked, but your grammar is still to be perfected (you tend to forget pronouns, for example "so I'm bait" should be "So I'm a bait" or "So I'm the bait ?"). To acquire this, you could try getting used to watch movies or animes in english, that might passively give you the hang of it.

You stories are still more than enjoyable though (loved the LOTR reference ^^), good job ! :D

 

Malicia : « They're all kissing each other on the mouth, even though they're girls. They're very confused. :classic_dry: »

On 11/8/2018 at 3:25 AM, Elf Prince said:

Excellent work. Enjoyed in lesbian sex scene with my blond love. Why Rosa isn't at Malicija? ;)

Malicia : « 'cause friends discuss and eat cookies together. They don't kiss each other on the mouth, no. :classic_sleep: »

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