Great work!  

Tabi has more dirt than I expected  

I expected Uranach pops up and join the action  

I liked the inventory scene  

you make stories appealing

i would like this if i could

NICE

Awesome work as always! I really like the character development in this part. Benor and Tabrielle have their differences, yet they fit together perfectly. Great job!

Awesome chapter as always! They really fit together. 

Hmm ... Benor received sex tips from his sisters ... wonder was it practical ones ... damn, Triloque, you should let him finish the senescence.  An that girl needs a bath.

Good work.

Foreshadowing 

12 hours ago, bodabira 01 said:

Awesome chapter as always! They really fit together. 

13 hours ago, Collygon said:

Awesome work as always! I really like the character development in this part. Benor and Tabrielle have their differences, yet they fit together perfectly. Great job!

Thanks you two ! Always with the insight I see. Indeed, the theme of "the couple" is one of those developed in Mourning White : different, yet complementary when together. And as the pace slowed down, the second half was a good moment to share a bit more in what they differ, and what they share.

6 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Hmm ... Benor received sex tips from his sisters ... wonder was it practical ones ... damn, Triloque, you should let him finish the senescence.  An that girl needs a bath.

Good work.

Tabrielle did. And do not worry the sister involved isn't afraid to draw tiny images to make her points clear.

As for the bath it is scheduled at 8:00 the next morning. But I decided to show the start of the sex sequence rather than the bath, it gave more information on the characters.

13 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Great work!  

 

Tabi has more dirt than I expected  

 

I expected Uranach pops up and join the action  

 

I liked the inventory scene  

 

Thanks Resdayn. Well, she isn't afraid to to dirty herself when needed.

As for Urunach, I guess that would have disturbed Benor even more. Nonetheless the amount of objects Skyrim adventurers can store in their bare pockets is simply irrational, couldn't resist making a joke about it.

13 hours ago, daedal said:

you make stories appealing

i would like this if i could

 

NICE

Well, you've demonstrated you know how to take screens and how to present them, don't you ? Going from there to a story is simply a matter of imagination and.. patience I guess. But once their out, it's often a rewarding feeling. I would be interested in reading stories from you, if you chose to do so one day.

4 hours ago, djregs said:

Foreshadowing 

Hmmm, well good stories always give some distant clues before setting-up twists I think, so that those feel more logical. However in this case, what our two heroes do say is very much related to their immediate and distant past. Tabrielle's character sheet is planned to be revealed only once this chronicle is ended, but she had a very hard life until she met Benor. She fears some things greatly, and that scar on her face is a constant reminder of it.

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As for the bath it is scheduled at 8:00 the next morning. But I decided to show the start of the sex sequence rather than the bath, it gave more information on the characters.

I didn't know they have bathing schedules in Skyrim. Why are they doing it? Nobody is charging them for water. You should see our water bill. It's the most expensive bill we are paying monthly for we are taking shower every day few times a day. Anyway. I admire him if he can have a sex with her being dirty. We couldn't. We will wash her first.

I always like the special effects. You do a great job on them. 

 Nice! And she's rocking my favorite hairstyle.  

10 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, you've demonstrated you know how to take screens and how to present them, don't you ? Going from there to a story is simply a matter of imagination and.. patience I guess. But once their out, it's often a rewarding feeling. I would be interested in reading stories from you, if you chose to do so one day.

not really, my screenshots arent too great and i've never been great at writing, on top of that I don't even know what i would want to make into a story lol.

thanks tho, maybe someday

1 hour ago, Jayomms said:

 Nice! And she's rocking my favorite hairstyle.  

Great minds think style their hair alike. Or so was I told. 

4 hours ago, The Gauntman said:

I always like the special effects. You do a great job on them. 

I have a few I'm getting used to, and I'm still learning how to get the best of my quite limited version of Photoshop. Glad they're appreciated, Gauntman !

5 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

I didn't know they have bathing schedules in Skyrim. Why are they doing it? Nobody is charging them for water. You should see our water bill. It's the most expensive bill we are paying monthly for we are taking shower every day few times a day. Anyway. I admire him if he can have a sex with her being dirty. We couldn't. We will wash her first.

It would be 8:00 'cause that's the moment they'll wake up and Tabrielle won't stand a minut longer to be dirty. Benor does bathes way less often than Tabrielle, but due to some nordic mysteries, gets less soiled than her. Besides, they're very classic in their ways, so it doesn't matter if the rear entry is a bit dirty 'cause it won't get used.

According to what I read, your trio at the contrary frequently practices licking and anal. So top notch hygiene required !

22 minutes ago, daedal said:

not really, my screenshots arent too great and i've never been great at writing, on top of that I don't even know what i would want to make into a story lol.

thanks tho, maybe someday

In my opinion your try too much to get your screenshots "special" compared to others ; and in the end colors end up being burned by the lighning. ENB choice and tuning alone is already a clear choice toward your screenshots style, If I could give you an advice it would be not to overdo it. You have the experience, and the technique down ; now what could be worked upon is the scene, the pose, and the photographic aspect. Just like Sunsasuka does for example, :

Just like photography is an art, screenarchery benefits from knowledge and experience. She works exclusively on that part.

Getting from there to a story is simply achieved by the will to tell something, and working to put down what you have in mind.

Great work Tirloque, not as eventful as some of your other episodes. Not sure if an open cave is the best place to hide during rain though ;).

Btw. you should try mfg console in case you are not using it. In the first half you have a lot of dialogues where both actors have their mouth closed. Some of the images in the second half appear so much more alive because of that.  

Great episode Triloque. I had a good laugh when he opened the bag. She has very nice panties and cute ass. Burt, as Eva said: I will defiantly wash her before having sex with her.

8 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great work Tirloque, not as eventful as some of your other episodes. Not sure if an open cave is the best place to hide during rain though ;).

 

Btw. you should try mfg console in case you are not using it. In the first half you have a lot of dialogues where both actors have their mouth closed. Some of the images in the second half appear so much more alive because of that.  

Nothing escapes you, Alter Native !  In fact the story is inspired from some events that did really happen in the game. I develop and add parts that were skipped, but some screens are still from Tabrielle's game run and for that reason don't feature mfg ; while more worked upon scenes do.

As for the open cave, only the center is, in front of the little lake. Still better than hiding under a tree.

5 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Great episode Triloque. I had a good laugh when he opened the bag. She has very nice panties and cute ass. Burt, as Eva said: I will defiantly wash her before having sex with her.

Thanks, Elf Prince ! I liked doing the bag scene too. Regarding her ass, she share her waist shape with her sister Malicia, which often uses it to catch the eye.

Speaking about dirt, I thought some of you liked seeing women dirty themselves from time to time. It seems half of you don't. Unfortunately traveling and fighting in the mud aren't the cleanest of activities. You'll have to wait for the lady to take care of herself before socializing.