Great work. You gotta feel sorry for the guy though.

Now that was entertaining!? Even without vast quantities of intrigue and plotting. And I see, poor Henrick's life remains torturous. In every sense of the word. Now let's just hope, that his mistress never get's it into her head, that she needs mind-reading-powers. Or she might just "stumble" over H.'s  thoughts. Which would end... really well.

Like "Powerful mage ... temper tantrum ... worse than a toddler." -shudders- 

Henrick is what happens when you let your dick make your decisions for you.

Well Well what have we here..

This is very lewd work from someone I know of cute talking birds racoons ?

Our femdom college continues!

Also he getting called puppy ?, thats my nickname too...

?She has some tattooes Gwynolda would love to examine for any sign of heresy..

Well if our boy get kicked out or decides this job dont worth it, I know a certain powerful magican who looking for talents ?

I'll agree with Resdayn, the theme of the Wizard Apprentice series seem to be femdom. But also, of a male protagonist, since we see everything from the prism of Henrik's point of view. As for this being smut rather than a full fledged story, well in terms of structure that's possible, but you still find ways to develop a plot regarding the characters' whereabouts, and most of all their peculiar relationship. And so in this way, your series remind me of a mix of Jexsam's Tutelages of Neloth, and of Aristoslowpoke's Otylia's College life ; with your own take on this sort of relationship of course. 

Anyway, this was well brought in terms of direction, and well executed technically (the poses, expressions, lighting and fluids effects in particular). Good entry !

« Being a teacher is way handier than I thought uh. She says it's to feed her tattoos, but I'm very not sure, no.  »

9 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Also he getting called puppy ?, thats my nickname too...

« Puppy, puppy...

                FETCH ! yes !

     »

Great job! I like her style, very Nora like! 

Love it 

17 hours ago, Tirloque said:

... to develop a plot regarding the characters' whereabouts, and most of all their peculiar relationship.

 

> What more c. plot is there to find? She is hot and sexy, Henry is there to fullfill his needs and so on and so on ..... It's all about sex. You see?  

Great Work and poor puppy guy caught between pleasure and torment on a tightrope. Nicely worded during the hot steamy scenes. You sure got a lot of votes on this entry.  

5 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

 

> What more c. plot is there to find? She is hot and sexy, Henry is there to fullfill his needs and so on and so on ..... It's all about sex. You see?  

Well, technically it's Pr. Alanda who demanded sex from him, so it's rather her who tried to fulfill her needs. And that while our innocent boy was merely trying to comply to his apprentice duties.

In a way, Devianna's story is a complete roles reversal of the XXIth century's sex scandals. ?

5 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

 Henry is there to fullfill his her needs and so on and so on .....  , yes

                                    

« I very corrected your post.

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On 1/31/2022 at 12:40 AM, ther1pper said:

Great work. You gotta feel sorry for the guy though.

Thank you! Yeah, Henrick is in a bit over his head ?

On 1/31/2022 at 1:06 AM, HM1919 said:

Now that was entertaining!? Even without vast quantities of intrigue and plotting. And I see, poor Henrick's life remains torturous. In every sense of the word. Now let's just hope, that his mistress never get's it into her head, that she needs mind-reading-powers. Or she might just "stumble" over H.'s  thoughts. Which would end... really well.

Like "Powerful mage ... temper tantrum ... worse than a toddler." -shudders- 

 

 

Funny you should mention Alanda's interest in mind-reading powers, especially considering that Henrick has dormant essence of a seer within him. But I doubt she would be too concerned with anything her poor apprentice might be thinking. She's far too busy scheming, spying, amassing power and influence and of course getting annoyed by the existence of her students. ?

I'm glad you liked this chapter ?

On 1/31/2022 at 6:23 AM, mercplatypus said:

Henrick is what happens when you let your dick make your decisions for you.

You're actually pretty much spot on.  Henrick is what happens when you forget that an evil wizard, while being hot, is still pretty evil ?

On 1/31/2022 at 8:29 AM, Resdayn said:

Well Well what have we here..

This is very lewd work from someone I know of cute talking birds racoons ?

Our femdom college continues!

Also he getting called puppy ?, thats my nickname too...

 

?She has some tattooes Gwynolda would love to examine for any sign of heresy..

Well if our boy get kicked out or decides this job dont worth it, I know a certain powerful magican who looking for talents ?

I have to agree - Henrick's episodes are extremely lewd.  After all, Alanda isn't exactly shy or modest in any sense of the word. ?

I do not know if I would consider this femdom in the strictest of terms. Alanda would behave in exactly the same manner if Henrick was a girl. For her it is not a matter of genders as much as a matter of power and status. As Henrick says - he's nowhere near her level in any of those things, therefore she treats him as a useful instrument and nothing more.  Her calling Henrick a puppy isn't a term of endearment. It is a reminder of how weak and inconsequential he is. That, and she does get some enjoyment out of teasing him. ?

Gwynolda probably shouldn't examine those tattoos too closely.  I think there might be just a bit of heresy in them

On 1/31/2022 at 5:56 PM, Tirloque said:

I'll agree with Resdayn, the theme of the Wizard Apprentice series seem to be femdom. But also, of a male protagonist, since we see everything from the prism of Henrik's point of view. As for this being smut rather than a full fledged story, well in terms of structure that's possible, but you still find ways to develop a plot regarding the characters' whereabouts, and most of all their peculiar relationship. And so in this way, your series remind me of a mix of Jexsam's Tutelages of Neloth, and of Aristoslowpoke's Otylia's College life ; with your own take on this sort of relationship of course. 

Anyway, this was well brought in terms of direction, and well executed technically (the poses, expressions, lighting and fluids effects in particular). Good entry !

 

 

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« Being a teacher is way handier than I thought uh. She says it's to feed her tattoos, but I'm very not sure, no.  »

 

 

« Puppy, puppy...

 

                FETCH ! yes !

 

 

 

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Very astute observations, Tirloque!

As you pointed out in your other reply to Eva - these episodes really are a role reversal of modern day sex scandals. They are also a reversal of a more standard trope of "Master" and "obedient follower" (as we usually see male characters in the Master role).  While they do not depict any overreaching plot-line (not yet but I do have some ideas now ?) I still wanted to explore such a situation from a male protagonist's perspective.  That's why I went a bit narrative-heavy (well, that and the fact that I simply wanted to write some erotica and this seemed like a good excuse ?). Henrick has very conflicting feelings about his situation. Part of him definitely resents Alanda for the way she treats him, but another part is infatuated with her and everything she represents : power, prestige, beauty,  status and so on.  I am planning at least one more episode for those two and we will find out a bit of a backstory and learn how Henrick came to his apprenticeship. ?

As always thank you for your insightful comment and I'm glad you enjoyed this episode. ?

Wow, once again amazing work, Devianna! Despite what you call it just a slice of life sex (lol, S-o-s, guess that what Henrick might think sometimes) it still fits wonderfully into your universe. ^_^
And what else I noticed, I don't think you used camera tilt before, did you? Congratulations on mastering your new trick! ^_^
And another thing I wanted to point out to Henrik, he is probably as inexperienced a farmer as a magician, because he does not know that the chance that the cabbage will fight back is low...

On 2/2/2022 at 2:17 AM, Devianna said:

 

 

I have to agree - Henrick's episodes are extremely lewd.  After all, Alanda isn't exactly shy or modest in any sense of the word. ?

 

I do not know if I would consider this femdom in the strictest of terms. Alanda would behave in exactly the same manner if Henrick was a girl. For her it is not a matter of genders as much as a matter of power and status. As Henrick says - he's nowhere near her level in any of those things, therefore she treats him as a useful instrument and nothing more.  Her calling Henrick a puppy isn't a term of endearment. It is a reminder of how weak and inconsequential he is. That, and she does get some enjoyment out of teasing him. ?

 

Gwynolda probably shouldn't examine those tattoos too closely.  I think there might be just a bit of heresy in them

 

 

Femdom isnt about women dominating guys, its about dominant women ?, it wouldnt change a lot if Henrick would be a girl in the scenario.

Then Gwynolda should examine those tattoes!

On 2/1/2022 at 9:46 PM, Tirloque said:

Well, technically it's Pr. Alanda who demanded sex from him, so it's rather her who tried to fulfill her needs. And that while our innocent boy was merely trying to comply to his apprentice duties.

 

In a way, Devianna's story is a complete roles reversal of the XXIth century's sex scandals. ?

 

« I very corrected your post.

                 »

 

 

> You misunderstood my point, but it is not your fault, rather mine. I said that Alanda is using Henry regardless of his unwillingness to have sex with her whenever she wants. That wad my point and again: it's all ab out sex o one way or another ?

8 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> You misunderstood my point, but it is not your fault, rather mine. I said that Alanda is using Henry regardless of his unwillingness to have sex with her whenever she wants. That wad my point and again: it's all ab out sex o one way or another ?

« I very understand. It's true it's always about honey-honey, yes.

               Tirloque won't get it though, 'cause he thinks that guys are always the most important ones. He's very silly.  »

On 1/31/2022 at 9:56 AM, Evaloves4 said:

Thank you, Eva! Glad you liked this entry. You're correct in your assessment of Mistress Alanda's personality - whether it's related to sex or not, she will definitely get what she wants from Henrick. ?

On 2/3/2022 at 2:44 AM, Crw said:

Wow, once again amazing work, Devianna! Despite what you call it just a slice of life sex (lol, S-o-s, guess that what Henrick might think sometimes) it still fits wonderfully into your universe. ^_^
And what else I noticed, I don't think you used camera tilt before, did you? Congratulations on mastering your new trick! ^_^
And another thing I wanted to point out to Henrik, he is probably as inexperienced a farmer as a magician, because he does not know that the chance that the cabbage will fight back is low...

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...but never zero.

 

Thank you so much for your comment, Crw! ?

I've been laughing way too much at that cabbage image ? And you're right!  It's never zero! ?

I've wanted to try the camera tilt plugin for a while now and finally got around to tinkering with it.  It adds just a bit more flow to the images and makes them feel less statics, so I'm glad if people like it. ?

On 2/1/2022 at 9:11 AM, Alter Native said:

Great job! I like her style, very Nora like! 

Love it 

Thank you for the kind words, Alter!

Mistress Alanda would definitely be a interesting vampire ?

On 2/1/2022 at 1:56 PM, Jay-Omms said:

Great Work and poor puppy guy caught between pleasure and torment on a tightrope. Nicely worded during the hot steamy scenes. You sure got a lot of votes on this entry.  

Thank you, Jay!

I really like your description - "Between pleasure and torment" is very accurate.  ?

I'm glad you enjoyed the narration - it was definitely very fun to write. ?

On 2/3/2022 at 6:35 AM, Resdayn said:

 

Femdom isnt about women dominating guys, its about dominant women ?, it wouldnt change a lot if Henrick would be a girl in the scenario.

 

Then Gwynolda should examine those tattoes!

In that case you're correct, Res - Mistress Alanda is certainly very dominant.

And Gwynolda really, really, really shouldn't examine them! ?

Cute and exciting, as always! You have no reason to make excuses at the start, I know when you post it will be something special every time.

But man, oh man, she is ruthless! I almost feel bad for Henrick. Almost

On 2/9/2022 at 6:35 PM, Collygon said:

Cute and exciting, as always! You have no reason to make excuses at the start, I know when you post it will be something special every time.

But man, oh man, she is ruthless! I almost feel bad for Henrick. Almost

Thank you for such warm and kind words, Colly ?

I do feel like I should be working on my main stories, but for some reason Henrick's episodes just keep popping into my mind. So....umm....one more episode about him and Mistress Alanda and then I'm definitely going back to regular stories.  Probably.  Most likely. 

And you're right,  on one hand it's lots of lewd time for Henrick, but on the other - Alanda isn't exactly the easiest person to deal with ?

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. ?

I really enjoyed the story.  ?

You have this fun dynamic that pops up in your work, pitting people together who'd... well, rather not be pitted together, and there's alot of fun to be had there, especially when the individuals in your pairings have such strong and unique personalities. It's always fun to watch. ?

I can't help but feel sorry for the poor guy though. ?

You're screens are beautiful, and I love the posing. ? kudos on the erotic narration as well. Very well done. For being billed as a lewd story (and no mistake, it definitely is ?) There's definite characterization coming across and your erotica often comes across more as... If say plot with porn, rather than porn with plot... if that makes sense? (It was a definite complement).

Thanks for sharing your work with us!

On 2/12/2022 at 7:24 AM, LexiAJ82 said:

I really enjoyed the story.  ?

 

You have this fun dynamic that pops up in your work, pitting people together who'd... well, rather not be pitted together, and there's alot of fun to be had there, especially when the individuals in your pairings have such strong and unique personalities. It's always fun to watch. ?

 

I can't help but feel sorry for the poor guy though. ?

 

You're screens are beautiful, and I love the posing. ? kudos on the erotic narration as well. Very well done. For being billed as a lewd story (and no mistake, it definitely is ?) There's definite characterization coming across and your erotica often comes across more as... If say plot with porn, rather than porn with plot... if that makes sense? (It was a definite complement).

 

Thanks for sharing your work with us!

Thank you, Lexi! I'm glad you liked the story ?

I do enjoy placing characters with conflicting personalities together because they are just so much fun to write. ?

I am really happy you mentioned that both Alanda and Henrick have strong, albeit very different, personalities. Even though Henrick is in a more submissive role, he is definitely not a mindless slave or a pushover. He does have his own goals and ambitions and he is trying to make the most out of his unique situation.

I did go somewhat heavier than usual on the narration side and I'm glad to see that the readers didn't seem to mind. There might be just a bit more plot (not too much though, can't have it interrupt all the lewdness ?) coming up in the following chapters, so stay tuned ?

thank you nice story as always and pics , life can be hard if one has to keep up ? ?

10 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you nice story as always and pics , life can be hard if one has to keep up ? ?

You're right, Wilson! Henrick really does have some trouble keeping up with Alanda ?

Thank you for your kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this entry ?

Nice work, though I do feel sorry for the guy. Plus he's right, she is a teacher and it is her job responsibility to teach the kids. What she wants is not that imporant.

On 2/21/2022 at 7:44 AM, Hiderius said:

Nice work, though I do feel sorry for the guy. Plus he's right, she is a teacher and it is her job responsibility to teach the kids. What she wants is not that imporant.

Thank you!

Yeah, Henrick's life isn't exactly easy (even if he does get to be an apprentice to such a powerful and beautiful wizard).  But he did chose it willingly and we might find out soon(-ish) exactly how those two met. ?

On 3/10/2022 at 2:44 AM, Devianna said:

Thank you!

Yeah, Henrick's life isn't exactly easy (even if he does get to be an apprentice to such a powerful and beautiful wizard).  But he did chose it willingly and we might find out soon(-ish) exactly how those two met. ?

"soon(-ish)"... So that was a lie (;
Sad to see this died, I did enjoy reading this (and kiki's story, but the promised season 2 apparently died way back in 2019), but I guess sometimes interests change or other things in life "get in the way"