> Most excellent! I enjoyed very much. Alanda is very beautiful and hot. I had to giggle seeing her apprentice dropping her stuff seeing her ass and legs. It reminded me on a guy in the Hotel bar when I was sitting on the bar chair and my leg was very exposed. The guys couldn't remove his eyes from my leg and his hand shook when bringing the glass to his mouth. 

Hahaha... That was indeed entertaining to read. Seems like "mistress" Alanda is abit of a tsundere. Or just enjoys messing with poor Henrick. Either way, that means we "need" more entries for this story. For science! Even if it takes until christmas... 2025.

Overall, Good Job!?

Excellent as always.

I hope we'll get to see more of this 'couple'. Btw. that dress is really nice.

Great Work and Alanda is amazingly hot  I also noticed the textures used looked like they seem to be Skyrim 2020 Parallax by Pfuscher which I started using. The 2K version though. I can't run it any higher than that not to mention the the Parallax part of the mod which you have the option to not use.  I also tried using the mod that combines Immersive College of Winterhold and Obscure College of Winterhold but to no avail. It worked in most spots but Obscure College of Winterhold's library is quite the FPS killer so I just stuck with Immersive College instead. 

Although you claim that apart from "copious amounts of lewdness" in your story this time there is nothing, I have to disagree. You failed to "just went with it".   
You managed to create interesting and deep (in a sense) characters with an interesting story and relationships, and this is a worthy story in itself! 

And I agree with all the above, "mistress Alanda" is sure pretty hot!
Amazing work, Devianna! ^_^

Well Well what have we here ?

Thats very lewd story from such an pure author, ohhh by the divines! ?

Even for a short story, we still got some background and dynamics of the characters.

Lately we got a lot submissive boys ?, hehe.

At least the red wizard vibes still have their old dnd dominance, in arcane and in lewds ?

thank you i thought it was very amusing , to say the least , i would like to see more of them , i am sure i am not the only one  ?

20 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> Most excellent! I enjoyed very much. Alanda is very beautiful and hot. I had to giggle seeing her apprentice dropping her stuff seeing her ass and legs. It reminded me on a guy in the Hotel bar when I was sitting on the bar chair and my leg was very exposed. The guys couldn't remove his eyes from my leg and his hand shook when bringing the glass to his mouth. 

Thank you, Eva! I'm glad you found the story entertaining! ?

I agree - Mistress Alanda ended up looking a bit distracting and her rather short dress really isn't helping poor Henrick's concentration ?

19 hours ago, HM1919 said:

Hahaha... That was indeed entertaining to read. Seems like "mistress" Alanda is abit of a tsundere. Or just enjoys messing with poor Henrick. Ether way, that means we "need" more entries for this story. For science! Even if it takes until christmas... 2025.

 

Overall, Good Job!?

Thank you for the kind words! ?

I haven't thought of it this way, but now that you pointed it out - Alanda really is just a tiny bit tsundere ?

Well,  if it is for science I suppose I cannot argue with that - I guess we might see this duo again.  However I can't promise any plot there. Unless you consider lewd scenarios a plot - in which case, definitely lots of plot is incoming.

19 hours ago, Aylis said:

Excellent as always.

 

I hope we'll get to see more of this 'couple'. Btw. that dress is really nice.

Aww, thank you, Aylis. I'm glad you liked this little entry.

I do have a few more general ideas for this duo and seeing that quite a few readers seem to like them Henrick and his Mistress might drop in from time to time. ?

17 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

Great Work and Alanda is amazingly hot  I also noticed the textures used looked like they seem to be Skyrim 2020 Parallax by Pfuscher which I started using. The 2K version though. I can't run it any higher than that not to mention the the Parallax part of the mod which you have the option to not use.  I also tried using the mod that combines Immersive College of Winterhold and Obscure College of Winterhold but to no avail. It worked in most spots but Obscure College of Winterhold's library is quite the FPS killer so I just stuck with Immersive College instead. 

Thank you, Jay! ?

You have a good eye - it is indeed Skyrim parallax textures.  I also use 2k as I don't see any particular reason to go higher than that (unless you really want to zoom in on random chairs or stonework).  I don't think you can really combine Immersive College and Obscure's College seeing as they both change the interior and exterior and would most likely overlap.  I prefer the Immersive version as well. ?

16 hours ago, Crw said:

Although you claim that apart from "copious amounts of lewdness" in your story this time there is nothing, I have to disagree. You failed to "just went with it".   
You managed to create interesting and deep (in a sense) characters with an interesting story and relationships, and this is a worthy story in itself! 

And I agree with all the above, "mistress Alanda" is sure pretty hot!
Amazing work, Devianna! ^_^

Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Crw! ?

I guess I kind of failed NOT to write a story, eh? ?

I have to admit, writing Henrick's thoughts and narration was rather entertaining and I'm glad people enjoyed it ?. So, maybe one more terribly lewd scenario for those two is in order.

17 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Well Well what have we here ?

 

Thats very lewd story from such an pure author, ohhh by the divines! ?

 

 

Lately we got a lot submissive boys ?, hehe.

 

At least the red wizard vibes still have their old dnd dominance, in arcane and in lewds ?

cc: @Devianna

> Indeed, I was pleasantly surprised seeing Devianna posting more concrete sex scenes and it trilled me. I was even more thrilled seeing beautiful Alanda submitting young guy and that sex started with pussy eating. I am truly tired of tones of pics about women always sucking cocks and they were never or rarely licked, like we only love to suck and not being licked. Damn, we aren't @Tirloque's Malicija. Second thing that Deviana did and you noticed that I like: submission of man. Again, everyone likes to see women submitted. I like to see men submitted in sex. That's why I am veeery thrilled with this episode. All praises again Dev

I like this type of magic power transfer.

As old as this trope is, it never fails to please readers like me. I'd like more stories of those two

1 hour ago, worik said:

I like this type of magic power transfer.

As old as this trope is, it never fails to please readers like me. I'd like more stories of those two

 

+1

4 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

cc: @Devianna

 

> Indeed, I was pleasantly surprised seeing Devianna posting more concrete sex scenes and it trilled me. I was even more thrilled seeing beautiful Alanda submitting young guy and that sex started with pussy eating. I am truly tired of tones of pics about women always sucking cocks and they were never or rarely licked, like we only love to suck and not being licked. Damn, we aren't @Tirloque's Malicija. Second thing that Deviana did and you noticed that I like: submission of man. Again, everyone likes to see women submitted. I like to see men submitted in sex. That's why I am veeery thrilled with this episode. All praises again Dev

Agree with Eva, eating pussy is a very important art form.

I missed that quest at the iCOW. Thank you for posting a walk- lewd-through ?

16 hours ago, Devianna said:

Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Crw! ?

I guess I kind of failed NOT to write a story, eh? ?

I have to admit, writing Henrick's thoughts and narration was rather entertaining and I'm glad people enjoyed it ?. So, maybe one more terribly lewd scenario for those two is in order.

Hah, yeah   Seems I failed to express my thoughts ?

Well, to me it was immersive enough to be some scene of a story. You provided context, characters, dialogues and even some stakes. Compliments on the fluids edits on the technical parts, and on the overall progression in the erotism.

« The...wizards.... of the red.... circle.

               I very noted it. I gonna enlist there so I can command some guys, yes. »

20 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Second thing that Deviana did and you noticed that I like: submission of man. Again, everyone likes to see women submitted. I like to see men submitted in sex. That's why I am veeery thrilled with this episode. All praises again Dev

We've had others stories about dominating women (Otylia's Antans for example), but it is indeed uncommon.

20 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 I am truly tired of tones of pics about women always sucking cocks and they were never or rarely licked, like we only love to suck and not being licked. Damn, we aren't @Tirloque's Malicija.  

« Not everyone can be an expert like me, no.

               »

21 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

cc: @Devianna

 

> Indeed, I was pleasantly surprised seeing Devianna posting more concrete sex scenes and it trilled me. I was even more thrilled seeing beautiful Alanda submitting young guy and that sex started with pussy eating. I am truly tired of tones of pics about women always sucking cocks and they were never or rarely licked, like we only love to suck and not being licked. Damn, we aren't @Tirloque's Malicija. Second thing that Deviana did and you noticed that I like: submission of man. Again, everyone likes to see women submitted. I like to see men submitted in sex. That's why I am veeery thrilled with this episode. All praises again Dev

Thank you for such a high praise, Eva.  Usually I write sex scenes only when they fit the story but in this case, the whole story ended up being a lewd scene ?

As for Henrick being submissive - I did want to try something new in that regard, since as you correctly pointed out, most of the time we see female heroes being overpowered by their counterparts or standing with them on equal grounds.  However it is important to note, Henrick isn't a slave and he entered his apprenticeship of his own free will.  If I will make another episode with these two I will try to shed a bit more light on the lore.

On 11/4/2021 at 11:18 AM, Resdayn said:

Well Well what have we here ?

 

Thats very lewd story from such an pure author, ohhh by the divines! ?

 

Even for a short story, we still got some background and dynamics of the characters.

 

Lately we got a lot submissive boys ?, hehe.

 

At least the red wizard vibes still have their old dnd dominance, in arcane and in lewds ?

Thank you for your comment, Res! ?

I can write about lewd stuff, it's just that I usually chose to write about cookies instead ?

I did try to give some background and explanation to what was going on, even if it was a short and mostly lewd entry.  I'm glad that it seems to have worked out.

Very accurate observation there - red wizards definitely hold all of their usual dominance in this tale ?

On 11/4/2021 at 11:54 AM, wilson99 said:

thank you i thought it was very amusing , to say the least , i would like to see more of them , i am sure i am not the only one  ?

Thank you for the kind words, Wilson!

I'm happy you found the story amusing and I'll see if I can have these two return at some point for another little tale. ?

18 hours ago, worik said:

I like this type of magic power transfer.

As old as this trope is, it never fails to please readers like me. I'd like more stories of those two

 

Thank you,  Worik! ?

It is very powerful, very ancient magic...also it's a lot more fun than the regular magical power transfer ?

Love a good Mistress. It's amazing finding a story were the man is submitted. Hot and exellent Work! 

17 hours ago, S3thus said:

Agree with Eva, eating pussy is a very important art form.

Interesting

Great work as usual.

On 11/5/2021 at 4:28 AM, S3thus said:

Agree with Eva, eating pussy is a very important art form.

It is definitely a skill that can come in handy in quite a few situations. ?

On 11/5/2021 at 9:22 AM, donttouchmethere said:

I missed that quest at the iCOW. Thank you for posting a walk- lewd-through ?

You're welcome! ? I'm glad you found the lewd walk-through helpful. ?

On 11/5/2021 at 2:45 PM, Crw said:

Hah, yeah   Seems I failed to express my thoughts ?

Hehe, no problem. I think things got a bit lost in translation. I only meant to say that you were correct - even when I set out not to make a story I still ended up making a sort of story as a result. ?

On 11/5/2021 at 8:13 PM, Tirloque said:

Well, to me it was immersive enough to be some scene of a story. You provided context, characters, dialogues and even some stakes. Compliments on the fluids edits on the technical parts, and on the overall progression in the erotism.

 

Thank you for your kind words, Tirloque! ?

I'm glad you found this short episode enjoyable and immersive enough to be considered a kind of story, even though the subject matter is different from my usual tales.

The technical aspects of fluids are still done manually, but I'm slowly getting better at it (since this is LL and we all know that fluids are an important part of any story ) ?

On 11/5/2021 at 9:53 PM, Wendylicious said:

Love a good Mistress. It's amazing finding a story were the man is submitted. Hot and exellent Work! 

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this little story. ?

1 hour ago, ther1pper said:

Great work as usual.

Thank you for the kind words! ?

Even when the story is mostly a sex scene, you still make the characters unique and fun! Great job, Devianna!

On 11/7/2021 at 10:50 AM, Collygon said:

Even when the story is mostly a sex scene, you still make the characters unique and fun! Great job, Devianna!

Thank you, Colly. ?

I did start making it as a sex scene but then the little story and dialogues kind of happened on their own ?

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ?

I feel sorry for the guy, he needs a better boss. She's a little bit of Tsundere, and for a teacher she should be paying more attention to the students and teaching them.

On 2/21/2022 at 7:49 AM, Hiderius said:

I feel sorry for the guy, he needs a better boss. She's a little bit of Tsundere, and for a teacher she should be paying more attention to the students and teaching them.

Henrick could definitely use  a trip to HR department to complain about his supervisor.  But in his world nothing like that exists, so I'm afraid he's stuck with catering to Alanda's needs at least for some time. ?

Mistress Alanda is a professor in the academy, however first and foremost she is a wizard of the Red Circle and its members aren't known for their selfless dedication to the education of aspiring mages. Not unless it suits them in some way. ?

Thank you for your comment and I'm glad if you enjoyed this entry ?