love it

Oh shit, I fucking love this! A "bad end" variant opens up a lot of room for storytelling. As already mentioned - the story from the villain's side in this case is a rather original approach! 

Great idea, and great job on that!

I agree with Spy, the integration of the onomatopoeia and the final effect were great. Now, I'm a bit perplexed about the bad end concept, as it's sort of an immediate retcon of the canon version. It allows you to have one version much lewder than the other, so it'll please readers seeking for that, but at the same time prevents you from expanding on those bad events (some characters get changed by their past mistakes), while somehow denying what readers just acquired with the canon one. So this might be a good idea, or not, depending on the audience. Time will tell. ?

I agree with what everyone has mentioned that writing a story from the perspective of the "imperiler" is unique and not common in the loverslab story blogs.

Like your previous entry - your enb, colors, lighting angles, poses, action, and expression were all very clear in your screens!

I love the pose and angle screenshot you took of picture #5 and her expression of fear and pleading in picture #6

Whats the name of the cloth that Elfy wears? I have been looking for skimpy cloth that was somewhat somehow immersive and that looks great.

On 4/9/2021 at 11:45 AM, poporaltemporal said:

Whats the name of the cloth that Elfy wears? I have been looking for skimpy cloth that was somewhat somehow immersive and that looks great.

It's H2135's Fantasy Series 7. 

I use a lot of his clothing throughout this story, his work is fantastic!

I also agree with what everyone has mentioned. Nice way to tell a story. Though not a fan of the rape stuff it's sad to see but still good art direction with the letters and effects added with a photo editing program. Great work over all 

Classic AS-LAL start on my Setup ? The first warm place after swimming from the shipwreck. ?

Well caught Skyrim debauchery! ?