Might be a good idea to learn a spell to teleport objects away or off you, could teleport right out of the dick ring.

Well, there are a few things that we can learn from here:
1st "Hot maid polish an big magic sword". How could anyone see a sexual implication in here? No way.
2nd Never make a bargain with a demon, that you not intend to keep.
3d Dogs are cute.
4d Devianna made a cool and cute story once again!

^_^ 
Great job! I really enjoy her adventures and the 4th wall breaking. She's really adorable that way.

Okay this was pretty strongly unexpected hahaha ?

That whole maid thing and sword instantly raised up, ohhh dear, thats some real insanity.

The bargain farmers, stupid vigilants and dremoras hahaha.

Cock ring and the flashback of Sophie's lewd adventures while her nanny destroys everything xD.

Fluffy dog and the ring ?

Great work.

And lets lot forget.

This confirms the innuendo that was hinted in the previous chapter about the sword polishing. And I also had guessed it was some kind of gigolo ring. ^^ Jokes aside, there were two parts in this chapter, a first one were we see a Djinn-like cold bargaining personality (inherited from Clavicus Vile), where Sophie "to the letter" interpretations and indifference to the fate of the interlocutors aren't without reminding Gwynolda. In fact she could seems even colder than lady Trinn, in that regard, and the bloody events that happened afterwards tend to confirm that (even if a Devianna-approved "we're not dead" twist softened it ). 

And second, a more humorous and sexy part where we learn more about the protagonist and her target whereabouts regarding sex. I must say the dog's intervention was particularly funny, but your played a delicious humorous game with Sophie and the intended retrieval methods. And all of that with immersive comic layout, and very colored and contrasted screens. We are entertained ! ?

Malicia : « Looks like Sophie has honey-honey problems too. She should search an expert with Kiki, yes.  »

6 hours ago, ther1pper said:

Might be a good idea to learn a spell to teleport objects away or off you, could teleport right out of the dick ring.

Hehehe, that's true but as we already saw, Lord Rekcus isn't exactly the best spellcaster. Even if he did learn such a spell and somehow found a loophole in Clavicus's enchantment he would probably only manage to teleport his private parts away along with the ring. ?

3 hours ago, Crw said:

Well, there are a few things that we can learn from here:
1st "Hot maid polish an big magic sword". How could anyone see a sexual implication in here? No way.
2nd Never make a bargain with a demon, that you not intend to keep.
3d Dogs are cute.
4d Devianna made a cool and cute story once again!

^_^ 
Great job! I really enjoy her adventures and the 4th wall breaking. She's really adorable that way.

1. You are absolutely correct! There is nothing sexual in a beautiful maid handling a large, throbbing, pulsating sword ?. Why would anyone even think otherwise?! ?

2. "Don't make bargains with Daedric Princes, especially if you don't intend to keep them." - I agree, this should be a poster which would hang in every daedric worshipper's club/school/place of gathering. ?

3. Dogs are adorable! Ker'ag is technically a daedric wolf-doggie, but that makes him even extra adorable! ☺️

4. Aww, thank you, Crw! ? I'm glad you like Sophie's little story.

2 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Okay this was pretty strongly unexpected hahaha ?

 

That whole maid thing and sword instantly raised up, ohhh dear, thats some real insanity.

 

The bargain farmers, stupid vigilants and dremoras hahaha.

 

Cock ring and the flashback of Sophie's lewd adventures while her nanny destroys everything xD.

 

Fluffy dog and the ring ?

 

Great work.

 

And lets lot forget.

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Heresy everywhere!

 

Yay, thank you for the comments, Resdayn! ? Sophie certainly knew what she was doing when she wore that outfit.  After all, Victor can be quite moody. ?

The daedra worshipers meant well! Err...'well' by the dark arts standards, I suppose. ? Point is, they tried! And also they probably really shouldn't be practicing something like that. ? As for the vigilants - they kind of had it coming.

It's not that Nanny Hilda is against Sophie having sex. It's just that she has very, VERY high standards for her Lord's Champion (and technically her adoptive daughter). ?

Ker'ag is so cute that nobody can resist him! ? Also you are right - Heresy! There's heresy everywhere!!! ?

Happy you liked the story ?

49 minutes ago, Forshare said:

Great work! ?

 

Although, I think the sword is probably not looking forward to its role in retrieving this ring.

I was wondering if someone would mention it. ? Yeah, Victor isn't particularly thrilled with the prospect of this assignment.  Then again, he's not thrilled about being a sword to begin with. ?

Glad you liked this chapter! ☺️

12 minutes ago, Devianna said:

 

 

 

Yay, thank you for the comments, Resdayn! ? Sophie certainly knew what she was doing when she wore that outfit.  After all, Victor can be quite moody. ?

 

The daedra worshipers meant well! Err...'well' by the dark arts standards, I suppose. ? Point is, they tried! And also they probably really shouldn't be practicing something like that. ? As for the vigilants - they kind of had it coming.

 

It's not that Nanny Hilda is against Sophie having sex. It's just that she has very, VERY high standards for her Lord's Champion (and technically her adoptive daughter). ?

 

Ker'ag is so cute that nobody can resist him! ? Also you are right - Heresy! There's heresy everywhere!!! ?

Happy you liked the story ?

 

 

Well Vigilants kinda the red shirts of skyrim, expect more stupid and insane hahahah.

I might know someone who would be on the standards of Nanny Hilda hahaha. ?

Gwynolda would purge a lot of things, would be an unlucky meeting with Sophie or lucky?

24 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

This confirms the innuendo that was hinted in the previous chapter about the sword polishing. And I also had guessed it was some kind of gigolo ring. ^^ Jokes aside, there were two parts in this chapter, a first one were we see a Djinn-like cold bargaining personality (inherited from Clavicus Vile), where Sophie "to the letter" interpretations and indifference to the fate of the interlocutors aren't without reminding Gwynolda. In fact she could seems even colder than lady Trinn, in that regard, and the bloody events that happened afterwards tend to confirm that (even if a Devianna-approved "we're not dead" twist softened it ). 

And second, a more humorous and sexy part where we learn more about the protagonist and her target whereabouts regarding sex. I must say the dog's intervention was particularly funny, but your played a delicious humorous game with Sophie and the intended retrieval methods. And all of that with immersive comic layout, and very colored and contrasted screens. We are entertained ! ?

 

Malicia : « Looks like Sophie has honey-honey problems too. She should search an expert with Kiki, yes.  »

 

You are quite a perceptive reader, Tirloque. ? The hints for polishing and the nature of the ring really were hinted at in Chapter 1. After all, we're dealing with Clavicus Vile here and his bargains are never that easy or straightforward.  I am also glad you picked up on the Pale Collector's personality. While she's beautiful and clever and her adventures are definitely humorous, Sophie is first and foremost a Blackguard. As such, she is of the Lawful Evil alignment.  She was raised by a Daedric Prince, her power comes directly from her dark patron, she follows his orders and generally enjoys her life and her assignments. You are correct to point out that Lady Trinn might have a more 'humane' aspect to her than Sophie. That stems from the fact that Lady Trinn didn't start her life as a Necromancer, while the Pale Collector was brought up from the time she was a baby into the role she has now.

I liked the "apenisring" dialogue as well. It was a lot of fun to write. As for Ker'ag, I know this is LL and a lot of people probably expected a different way to 'entertain the lust-crazed' ladies but one should never underestimate the power of cuteness! ?

As always, thank you for your kind comments! ☺️

Author: Dear Malicia, Sophie doesn't really have problems with honey-honey. It's her partners that usually have problems right after they honey-honey with Sophie. ?

27 minutes ago, Devianna said:

 You are correct to point out that Lady Trinn might have a more 'humane' aspect to her than Sophie.

 

 

 

Meeting the Defiler of Death, certainly helped showcasing Trinn's humanity strongly ?

Objectophelie is a real think I guess, so why no sword . Love your ideas Devianna!

What about the dog, I didn't quite get weather she talks to the talk and actually understands him/her or weather both of them are saying things in their "language" but don't understand each other?

Anyway, I like how nice the two go together and how they play off each other. Thanks for the entry Devianna, looking forward for the last part!
 

30 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Objectophelie is a real think I guess, so why no sword . Love your ideas Devianna!

 

What about the dog, I didn't quite get weather she talks to the talk and actually understands him/her or weather both of them are saying things in their "language" but don't understand each other?

Anyway, I like how nice the two go together and how they play off each other. Thanks for the entry Devianna, looking forward for the last part!
 

Well, Victor is a soul imbued into a sword who can sense his surroundings (and appreciate Sophie's enticing forms). So I guess this would make it a case of reverse objectophilia? ? Whatever it is called, it certainly makes for an entertaining scenario. ?

Ker'ag (the wolf-doggie) is pretty much a less powerful version of in-game Barbas. He can speak normally and anyone would be able to understand his speech. Though him and Sophie usually converse when others can't hear them (the women in the tavern were under the influence of Clavicus's ring and they didn't pay attention to anything else).

Victor is bound to Sophie, so she can understand his thoughts. Aside from that any being from the planes of Oblivion would be able to communicate with him as well.  A similar case could be made for a powerful mage that is well-versed in daedric language and has some connection to daedric power, but that is irrelevant for this particular story.

Glad you're enjoying this tale and thank you for your comments. ?

2 hours ago, Resdayn said:

I might know someone who would be on the standards of Nanny Hilda hahaha. ?

Gwynolda would purge a lot of things, would be an unlucky meeting with Sophie or lucky?

Meeting the Defiler of Death, certainly helped showcasing Trinn's humanity strongly ? 

Whoever that someone is, I certainly hope they aren't too flammable. Nanny Hilda is very picky. ?

As @Tirloque accurately pointed out, Sophie and Gwynolda really do have a few things in common, especially their upbringing for the service of powerful deities. However I doubt such a meeting would end well, seeing that the two of them serve really different Patrons.

Agreed - Lady Trinn is practically a kind and motherly figure compared to Defiler of Death. ?

8 minutes ago, Devianna said:

Well, Victor is a soul imbued into a sword who can sense his surroundings (and appreciate Sophie's enticing forms). So I guess this would make it a case of reverse objectophilia? ? Whatever it is called, it certainly makes for an entertaining scenario. ?

 

Ker'ag (the wolf-doggie) is pretty much a less powerful version of in-game Barbas. He can speak normally and anyone would be able to understand his speech. Though him and Sophie usually converse when others can't hear them (the women in the tavern were under the influence of Clavicus's ring and they didn't pay attention to anything else).

 

Victor is bound to Sophie, so she can understand his thoughts. Aside from that any being from the planes of Oblivion would be able to communicate with him as well.  A similar case could be made for a powerful mage that is well-versed in daedric language and has some connection to daedric power, but that is irrelevant for this particular story.

 

Glad you're enjoying this tale and thank you for your comments. ?

 

Thanks for your comment and the clarification, makes sense

57 minutes ago, Devianna said:

Whoever that someone is, I certainly hope they aren't too flammable. Nanny Hilda is very picky. ?

 

As @Tirloque accurately pointed out, Sophie and Gwynolda really do have a few things in common, especially their upbringing for the service of powerful deities. However I doubt such a meeting would end well, seeing that the two of them serve really different Patrons.

 

Agreed - Lady Trinn is practically a kind and motherly figure compared to Defiler of Death. ?

 

Well certain person is pretty good with flames, so Hilda might need improvise hehe.

They share some traits, yet definetly would end up kill each other, unless Sophie's bargain skills can resolve it hehe.

Technicly, she is a bit toward the cast of her story haha.

Excellent episode. My favorite part is the scene dressed as maid.

That was fun!  Shame that the ring doesn't affect Sophie though .  But at least we got to see her have a go at the bard band!    

The Power of Dog Cuteness was my favorite scene.  Can't wait to see what's next!  

5 hours ago, Devianna said:

You are quite a perceptive reader, Tirloque. ? The hints for polishing and the nature of the ring really were hinted at in Chapter 1. After all, we're dealing with Clavicus Vile here and his bargains are never that easy or straightforward.  I am also glad you picked up on the Pale Collector's personality. While she's beautiful and clever and her adventures are definitely humorous, Sophie is first and foremost a Blackguard. As such, she is of the Lawful Evil alignment.  She was raised by a Daedric Prince, her power comes directly from her dark patron, she follows his orders and generally enjoys her life and her assignments. You are correct to point out that Lady Trinn might have a more 'humane' aspect to her than Sophie. That stems from the fact that Lady Trinn didn't start her life as a Necromancer, while the Pale Collector was brought up from the time she was a baby into the role she has now.

I liked the "apenisring" dialogue as well. It was a lot of fun to write. As for Ker'ag, I know this is LL and a lot of people probably expected a different way to 'entertain the lust-crazed' ladies but one should never underestimate the power of cuteness! ?

 

As always, thank you for your kind comments! ☺️

Lawful evil... No wonder she feels colder than Trinn, and has common points with miss G.

Thank you for your kind answer, Devianna. Plus having my reading skills praised by the sharingan reader is certainly a worth  compliment, maybe I've developed one tomoe over three. ^^

3 hours ago, Devianna said:

As @Tirloque accurately pointed out, Sophie and Gwynolda really do have a few things in common, especially their upbringing for the service of powerful deities. However I doubt such a meeting would end well, seeing that the two of them serve really different Patrons.

Well, if Gwynolda gets dumped by Arkay as well maybe Sophie can get her in Clavicus' enterprises®.

3 hours ago, Devianna said:

Ker'ag (the wolf-doggie) is pretty much a less powerful CUTER version of in-game Barbas.

F.Y.P. ?

4 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Objectophelie is a real think I guess, so why no sword . Love your ideas Devianna!

 

What about the dog, I didn't quite get weather she talks to the talk and actually understands him/her or weather both of them are saying things in their "language" but don't understand each other?

That's why I sorted Devianna into the Fantasy subcategory : we get immersed into a universe where everything can talk an get somewhat cute. Everything ! ^^

1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

Excellent episode. My favorite part is the scene dressed as maid.

Malicia : « You weren't mad with the sword talking ? 'cause swords don't talk more than dogs, you see ? Or maybe you're not allergic to swords, uh.  »

thank you i enjoyed  this Story interested to see the cutting off ? for the ring  ?

48 minutes ago, wilson99 said:

thank you i enjoyed  this Story interested to see the cutting off ? for the ring  ?

Thank you, Wilson! Glad you're enjoying this storyline. Sophie and her companions have quite a task ahead of them as they definitely need to retrieve that ring, but first they must find Lord Rekcus. ?

4 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Excellent episode. My favorite part is the scene dressed as maid.

Thank you for the praise, Elf Prince! I like the maid scene as well. Dressing up Sophie in different outfits is a lot of fun. ☺️

4 hours ago, djregs said:

That was fun!  Shame that the ring doesn't affect Sophie though .  But at least we got to see her have a go at the bard band!    

The Power of Dog Cuteness was my favorite scene.  Can't wait to see what's next!  

Aww, I can imagine that many readers wanted to see Sophie being affected by the ring's aura but she really wouldn't be able to do her job if artifacts of Clavicus Vile would influence her as well.  Then he'd need to send a different champion after her, then somebody else after that other champion and it would turn into a never-ending cycle. ?

The bard band certainly gave a scorching hot performance. ? You could say that kind of show was once in a lifetime. Ok, ok, I'll stop. ?

I agree with you - Ker'ag's cuteness level is over 9000!

Thank you for the kind comment, Djregs. ?

I support every word of praises from above posters. You did a great job.

Wow! So many wonderful scenarios. I  IT!   

10 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

I support every word of praises from above posters. You did a great job.

Thank you, Eva, that's very kind of you! Glad you're liking the story. ☺️

10 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Wow! So many wonderful scenarios. I  IT!   

Hehe, I tend to agree - since Sophie's story is stand-alone there seem to be a lot more things happening here than usual in my longer series.  Happy you're enjoying it! ?

You had me at upskirts...

That cock ring twist was great ?