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Dark Ascension - Book 1: Chapter 13. Divine Pestilence


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Dark Ascension - Chapter 13: Divine Pestilence
The Order of Sisters learn that Neverine is in search of a relic, but a different relic hidden in the Port City of Laride. No one, even the Sisters themselves, know of the hidden Relic also known as the Artifact. After seeing what was done to their fellow Sister Brooke, will General Aidan and the Sisters with her stop the old woman and Neverine?

 

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Chapter 1: Fortune's Bedfellows

 

Chapter 2: Reaper's Covenant

 

Chapter 3: Journey's Shadowed Path

 

Chapter 4: Essence Awakenings

 

Chapter 5:Secrets Under the Stairs


Chapter 6: Vestal's Order

 

Chapter 7: Veracity’s Twilight

 

Chapter 8: Pawns in Portension’s Shadow

 

Chapter 9: Hath Thee in Thrall

 

Chapter 10: No Tomorrow

 

Chapter 11: In the Mouth of Chaos and Lust

 

Chapter 12: The Laconic Pathway

 

Chapter 13: Divine Pestilence

Edited by devious-Drunna

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Unless the artifact has some emergency start button that is. :classic_tongue:

 

Anyway it was indeed dark, and in some ways horror went into grotesque sometimes (the old lady's design for example, the petting of Brooke into a cow). I enjoyed a bit less the first part as we didn't see the protagonists getting a chance to fight, either in combat, and later mentally ; but you played quite well on the psychological aspects of that torture sequence. The action and twists were then done with the same quality than usual, and now we're left wondering how our team will get out of this. A quality chapter overall, even though a bit disturbing as similar horror themed works can be. :classic_smile:

 

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Wow, this is a damn great episode. Although I hoped that everything would end in a huge orgy, it was still great!
Great job.

I'm still wondering what happened to these sweet things. ^_^

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Wow again that was some happening i just hope for the sisters to end this nightmare well i wish it for them ? ?

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Holy WOW! I was not expecting this many views and responses so quick after posting! Thank you everyone so much for the feedback. 

 

12 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Wow, pretty dark, but also pretty good and well made. :thumbsup:

Some really nice effects btw. :) 

 

11 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Well shit for them I guess ?

 

4 hours ago, wilson99 said:

Wow again that was some happening i just hope for the sisters to end this nightmare well i wish it for them ? ?

 

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On 5/12/2019 at 5:41 AM, Tirloque said:

Unless the artifact has some emergency start button that is. :classic_tongue:

 

Anyway it was indeed dark, and in some ways horror went into grotesque sometimes (the old lady's design for example, the petting of Brooke into a cow). I enjoyed a bit less the first part as we didn't see the protagonists getting a chance to fight, either in combat, and later mentally ; but you played quite well on the psychological aspects of that torture sequence. The action and twists were then done with the same quality than usual, and now we're left wondering how our team will get out of this. A quality chapter overall, even though a bit disturbing as similar horror themed works can be. :classic_smile:

 

Malicia : tenor.gif?itemid=3364709

 

That was one of the conundrums I was debating of splitting this section into Chapter 12 and 13. Content wise, there was enough meat within each chapter, but I do loose the pacing of the action which was originally going to bookend the beginning and end of this section. 

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4 hours ago, Crw said:

Wow, this is a damn great episode. Although I hoped that everything would end in a huge orgy, it was still great!
Great job.

I'm still wondering what happened to these sweet things. ^_^

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So funny thing I have found as I’m writing this comic...

 

I had written an outline for this story arc back in the early fall including major characters and plot points. I would create additional characters for the  main, core characters to work off from as I work within each chapter.  

 

But then there were characters that were created that were just throwaway characters; those added in for a quick joke or setting tone/moment. Sera was one of those where I added her at the end of Chapter 8, just as a funny, throwaway pervy moment to close the chapter in the final  panel. The  Chapter 9 Library scene was not part of the outline and Sera ended up with having a whole chapter focused on her and then played a very major role in Chapter 10. The same for the Chapter 10 Initiates you mentioned @Crw

 

Chapter 14 may take longer to release because of trying to work in Sera’s character and the Chapter 10 goblin Initiates. I’ve mentioned before, my outline originally had at most 10 chapters in the story arc.

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Things are going from bad to worse to apocalyptically-horrible at a quickening pace.  Props to the Order sisters for being able to stand up and function after everything they've been through. Considering the horde charging into the church, it seems at this point only divine intervention (or daedric...or dwemer) can save them. ?

 

Outstanding work, as always. ?

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Some pretty epic scenes and effects here!

I wonder where Karin hid that dildo shaped artifact so quickly? ?

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