Finally finished  .

I guess you hold the ending secret from me, I did not expect her to be that. ?

You could just keep that he is father of one of my chars, not straight telling it ?, nevermind I giess that part from act III need be adressed cause I left out  

I still can't believe that the darkr hair man is Resydan. Whenever I see that Khajit I thought it was him.

Great story, my friend. Like it.

2 minutes ago, Elf Prince said:

I still can't believe that the darkr hair man is Resydan. Whenever I see that Khajit I thought it was him.

Great story, my friend. Like it.

Why? XDDD

22 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Why? XDDD

I just joking with you. I envy you for having such good looking character.

9 minutes ago, Elf Prince said:

I just joking with you. I envy you for having such good looking character.

Resdayn even can make guys too  

Great story and beautiful elf!

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

Finally finished  .

 

I guess you hold the ending secret from me, I did not expect her to be that. ?

 

You could just keep that he is father of one of my chars, not straight telling it ?, nevermind I giess that part from act III need be adressed cause I left out  

I thought it's necessary that it shold be interesting to read for you too, so yea, secrets and all that  
 

1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

I still can't believe that the darkr hair man is Resydan. Whenever I see that Khajit I thought it was him.

Great story, my friend. Like it.

Thank ypu Prince, I've glad that you like it ^_^

 

47 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Great story and beautiful elf!

Thank you ^_^ 
Well, technically she is Breton, but as far as they have elven ancestors, I think it suits her too.  

Well that explains why she looks so good. Everybody knows all the best LL girls are Breton ?

25 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Well that explains why she looks so good. Everybody knows all the best LL girls are Breton ?

?

2 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Well that explains why she looks so good. Everybody knows all the best LL girls are Breton ?

Can't argue with that  

5 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Well that explains why she looks so good. Everybody knows all the best LL girls are Breton ?

Hahahahahaha . That's the best Skyrim joke I ever heard because we all know that best lookig girls are Redguards

2 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Hahahahahaha . That's the best Skyrim joke I ever heard because we all know that best lookig girls are Redguards

 

:thonk:

I think it needs to be said louder...

8 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Well that explains why she looks so good. Everybody knows all the best LL girls are Breton ?

❤️

Damn Crw, just damn.. Dat was bloody grande.

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10 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Hahahahahaha . That's the best Skyrim joke I ever heard because we all know that best lookig girls are Redguards

 

Now I just imagine Redguar-Bosmer lesbian show. Yeap, that would be hot.

7 hours ago, The First Lady of Hats said:

:thonk:

I think it needs to be said louder...

 

❤️

 

Damn Crw, just damn.. Dat was bloody grande.

Yay, thank you, Firs Hat Lady ^_^ if I understand the word "grandle" right

5 hours ago, Jayomms said:

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There were suspiciously few demons in your entry ?.

Glad the last few images made up for it  . Nice work, also with the non demon part  .

37 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

There were suspiciously few demons in your entry ?.

 

Glad the last few images made up for it  . Nice work, also with the non demon part  .

Influence of Resdayn =(  And also they are concentrated in other chapters. ? 

Thank you ^_^ Glad that you like it  

15 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Hahahahahaha . That's the best Skyrim joke I ever heard because we all know that best lookig girls are Redguards

 

You make Gwynolda sad :( 

Just when I thought she couldn't get hotter, you made her all dark and demonic! Now I can't decide which look I like best ?

55 minutes ago, WANOBI12 said:

Just when I thought she couldn't get hotter, you made her all dark and demonic! Now I can't decide which look I like best ?

Hah, thank you :) I would take both myself  

Great cross-over/side story. There was something of Resdayn in the khajit and Ifan, more easily highlighted with you start announcement. The plot itself was less deep than I expected, but thoroughly enjoyable, with crisp character interaction, nice interrogation scenes, and a good ending twist to crown it all. All of it being technically excellent. Good job !

On 10/30/2018 at 5:28 PM, Resdayn said:

You could just keep that he is father of one of my chars, not straight telling it ?, nevermind I giess that part from act III need be adressed cause I left out  

Green eyes + peculiar grammar + Reachmen warpaint... May have gone unnoticed without Crw explanations.

On 10/30/2018 at 7:20 PM, SpyVsPie said:

Well that explains why she looks so good. Everybody knows all the best LL girls are Breton ?

Malicia : « You're very right Mr. Spy, everyone knows it.  »

15 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Just when I thought she couldn't get hotter, you made her all dark and demonic! Now I can't decide which look I like best ?

You could suggest the same procedure than with Cassidey.

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Green eyes + peculiar grammar + Reachmen warpaint... May have gone unnoticed without Crw explanations.

Everything yells about him, related to her XD.

Actually he has brown eye color and only should be green when he use magic :P

Now we have to wait some gut punching by Gwynolda to him ;)

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Great cross-over/side story. There was something of Resdayn in the khajit and Ifan, more easily highlighted with you start announcement. The plot itself was less deep than I expected, but thoroughly enjoyable, with crisp character interaction, nice interrogation scenes, and a good ending twist to crown it all. All of it being technically excellent. Good job !

I have no ties to the Khajiit Xd, only to Ifan.

4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Great cross-over/side story. There was something of Resdayn in the khajit and Ifan, more easily highlighted with you start announcement. The plot itself was less deep than I expected, but thoroughly enjoyable, with crisp character interaction, nice interrogation scenes, and a good ending twist to crown it all. All of it being technically excellent. Good job ! 

Many thanks for the positive feedback. ^_^
Well, technically, the character-Kajiit was created directly to interact with Ifan. It may therefore create that feeling, but it is rather good than bad.
In the process of creation, a lot of scenes have changed, to the detriment of the plot depth. I admit, technically I set myself a task that I did not know how to implement. But I promise to try again.  

 

3 hours ago, Crw said:

 

Many thanks for the positive feedback. ^_^
Well, technically, the character-Kajiit was created directly to interact with Ifan. It may therefore create that feeling, but it is rather good than bad.
In the process of creation, a lot of scenes have changed, to the detriment of the plot depth. I admit, technically I set myself a task that I did not know how to implement. But I promise to try again.  

 

I did try help   as much I could.

Well done, I loved the idea of using the forge for information. 

14 hours ago, Tirloque said:

You could suggest the same procedure than with Cassidey.

Better yet, maybe these guys could get all four of em together!!

Wow what a thought, excuse me, I need to go have a "moment..."