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Mr. Otaku

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This is so great!

malvic

Posted

Hey, great coincidence, you'd just posted this as I checked the site. Nice to see more.

Pretty great overall. Good smut, though the overwhelmed and asphyxiated to the point of believing death being near isn't particularly titillating, I can respect the fact that getting railed by a mythical great stag's lance is probably not good for your health though.

 

Fair to say the story has catapulted in scale by the end of this chapter, though I will say that such a big force making himself known should probably herald pretty gigantic consequences, like a grand curse or quest or something that points the heroine along a path that makes her past few days of experiences an official journey. That's just my opinion though, looking forward to seeing whatever happens next regardless of what it is.

 

Skyrimdude

Posted

I'd been waiting for this for a while. Really looking forward to seeing where it goes and hey... I'm sure if she helps Sinding he'll be more than thankful to her xD

ther1pper

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I love, great work.

=IceScream=

Posted

And died of a heart attack. ?Ironically

Deso561PL

Posted

Last screen looks like an moment from horror or something. monkaW

Rattlesnark

Posted

Lol! The editing really is fun and gels in perfectly with the screen shots. Biggest compliments for the job well done. Hircine's got a big ol' head

Crw0

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Oh damn! Thats really hot! And we got a Daedric prince involved, great! Brea as always sweet and sexy!
I really love your comix effects, and wondering what soft you using? Ps?

TheOakenRoot

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This chapter was absolutely smashing, pun very much intended.

 

The action in this one upped the previous chapters (at least for me), and Hircine appearing is a cherry on the top.

 

Though if I may suggest: you may wanna throw the Ghost effect on him.

Tirloque

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I'll renew my observation about the appropriateness of the comics effects, putting the emphasis right where needed, even helping creating some twists (the "fit" question, the pace, etc.). Liked the touch of humor of the stag dying due to too much exercise though. XD ON the other hand, Hircine's voice effect and design was quite badass. Nice entry ! :smiley:

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I knew going honey-honey with animals wasn't good, but I didn't know it was bad for the deers too ! :classic_blink:

                   I guess aside Bera no-one really knew, uh. million_dollar_baby.gif »

 

Dovahblood12

Posted

On 3/13/2021 at 6:26 PM, Mr. Otaku said:

This is so great!

I'm glad you like ?

Dovahblood12

Posted

On 3/13/2021 at 6:41 PM, malvic said:

Hey, great coincidence, you'd just posted this as I checked the site. Nice to see more.

Pretty great overall. Good smut, though the overwhelmed and asphyxiated to the point of believing death being near isn't particularly titillating, I can respect the fact that getting railed by a mythical great stag's lance is probably not good for your health though.

 

Fair to say the story has catapulted in scale by the end of this chapter, though I will say that such a big force making himself known should probably herald pretty gigantic consequences, like a grand curse or quest or something that points the heroine along a path that makes her past few days of experiences an official journey. That's just my opinion though, looking forward to seeing whatever happens next regardless of what it is.

 

Hi, thanks for the comment. 

 

Yeh, being squired like a kebab stick isn't good for anyone lol. but sorry if it put you off your mood. I can understand why it did. 

Glad you liked it overall though 

Dovahblood12

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On 3/14/2021 at 12:13 AM, Skyrimdude said:

I'd been waiting for this for a while. Really looking forward to seeing where it goes and hey... I'm sure if she helps Sinding he'll be more than thankful to her xD

thanks for the comment. Glad you like the entry. 

 

Dovahblood12

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On 3/14/2021 at 1:57 AM, ther1pper said:

I love, great work.

Thank you ?

Dovahblood12

Posted

On 3/14/2021 at 8:39 AM, Alter Native said:

Well done!

Thank you ?

 

It means a lot to see your comments and I really appreciate them 

Dovahblood12

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On 3/14/2021 at 11:52 AM, Rattlesnark said:

Lol! The editing really is fun and gels in perfectly with the screen shots. Biggest compliments for the job well done. Hircine's got a big ol' head

Thank you very much! I love reading the comments and knowing you liked it. 

 

haha Hircine is a god! Of course he's gonna have a big ol' head about it ?

Dovahblood12

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On 3/15/2021 at 6:15 AM, Crw said:

Oh damn! Thats really hot! And we got a Daedric prince involved, great! Brea as always sweet and sexy!
I really love your comix effects, and wondering what soft you using? Ps?

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

 

I first used gimp to make the edits, but then i bought ps. Now gimp just seems too clunky for me now, so yes, ps. ps all the way! ☺️

Dovahblood12

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On 3/16/2021 at 10:18 AM, Hel the Lightbringer said:

This chapter was absolutely smashing, pun very much intended.

 

The action in this one upped the previous chapters (at least for me), and Hircine appearing is a cherry on the top.

 

Though if I may suggest: you may wanna throw the Ghost effect on him.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Makes all the effort worth while when i know it's done a good job. :)

Puns are very VERY welcome here, so keep'm cummin' ?

 

How exactly would i apply a ghost effect? 

I'm asking for a friend ;) 

Dovahblood12

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On 3/23/2021 at 2:45 PM, Tirloque said:

I'll renew my observation about the appropriateness of the comics effects, putting the emphasis right where needed, even helping creating some twists (the "fit" question, the pace, etc.). Liked the touch of humor of the stag dying due to too much exercise though. XD ON the other hand, Hircine's voice effect and design was quite badass. Nice entry ! :smiley:

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I knew going honey-honey with animals wasn't good, but I didn't know it was bad for the deers too ! :classic_blink:

                   I guess aside Bera no-one really knew, uh. million_dollar_baby.gif »

 

Thank you. 

I'm glad you enjoyed it ;) 

Dovahblood12

Posted

On 3/14/2021 at 6:35 AM, =IceScream= said:

And died of a heart attack. ?Ironically

It could happen to anyone! ?

 

Thanks for the comment 

Dovahblood12

Posted

On 3/14/2021 at 7:25 AM, Deso561PL said:

Last screen looks like an moment from horror or something. monkaW

 

Hahaha it sure does lol 

 

He needed an entrance lol 

=IceScream=

Posted

4 hours ago, Dovahblood12 said:

It could happen to anyone! ?

 

Thanks for the comment 

They say that with a heart attack, burning pains in the chest appear. It remains to be seen whether he died from a heart attack or the heroine was so hot.

TheOakenRoot

Posted

On 3/29/2021 at 1:28 PM, Dovahblood12 said:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Makes all the effort worth while when i know it's done a good job. :)

Puns are very VERY welcome here, so keep'm cummin' ?

 

How exactly would i apply a ghost effect? 

I'm asking for a friend ;) 

Well, the obvious solution would be to use Philter of the Phantom from base game. Works well enough and doesn't occupy any slots. Only downside is that it lasts only 30 seconds apiece.

 

For something more permanent, this mod should work (if you're LE). There isn't a SE version as far as I know, but this one is a decent substitute.

 

Can't wait to see the next chapter!


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