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The owl is the highlight for me, great job

You're killing it again.

Both, Bunny and 'Mr. Grumpy', are very likable and the story is simply great. ?

ohhh wow, we got quite a long chapter ?

I didnt expected a Devianna cameo the ?hahahaha.

well it seems we got quite a nice progress on Trez and Bunny's relationship, as well we got know more on their thingies ^^.

Bunny's dream was cute.

Ohhh dear the road scene, classic vigilants, especially at the end of the chapter, I liked the small spider hahah.

Still no Lady Menalia ?

I hope my ship sails haha.

Another great chapter, keep up the good work.

Forgot to endorse. As usual, very cool !

Yay! 

Loving this more and more with each update! It's awesome to really dive into these characters and see who they really are. So much potential;; a lot of it fulfilling as it comes up. Terrific work!

19 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

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Thanks! ?

19 hours ago, dankmemesxd said:

The owl is the highlight for me, great job

Mr. Hoot keeps stealing the show.  He's too sexy, fluffy and sarcastic for this whole story ?

18 hours ago, Aylis said:

You're killing it again.

 

Both, Bunny and 'Mr. Grumpy', are very likable and the story is simply great. ?

Thank you, Aylis! Glad you are enjoying the story.

I actually need to ask you - by "Mr. Grumpy" do you mean Mr. Hoot or Trez? They both fit really nicely into that description ?

16 hours ago, Resdayn said:

ohhh wow, we got quite a long chapter ?

 

I didnt expected a Devianna cameo the ?hahahaha.

 

well it seems we got quite a nice progress on Trez and Bunny's relationship, as well we got know more on their thingies ^^.

 

Bunny's dream was cute.

 

Ohhh dear the road scene, classic vigilants, especially at the end of the chapter, I liked the small spider hahah.

 

Still no Lady Menalia ?

 

I hope my ship sails haha.

Thank you, Res! ?

Yeah, the chapter ended up being rather long and eventful but there were multiple things I wanted to establish about characters and since I don't post as often as I used to I decided to just go all out with this entry ?

While Mr. Hoot shares similarities with my avatar, he's most certainly his own person...former necromancer...owl...being.  I do like writing for him since he's so wonderfully grouchy and judgmental.  And he doesn't even attempt to hide it. 

Bunny's and Trez relationship is progressing...somewhere.  We'll find out more in the following chapters.  And we might even see Lady Menalia soon ?.

Happy you liked this chapter ?

Yay Bunny!  

I like that Trez is taking to his new role has a guardian with such gusto.  It seems Dremora have a soft spot for cute mages.     

Can't wait for the next one!  

On 1/28/2021 at 9:54 AM, ther1pper said:

Another great chapter, keep up the good work.

Thank you for the kind words. Glad you liked it! ?

On 1/28/2021 at 5:19 PM, Cema said:

Forgot to endorse. As usual, very cool !

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying Bunny's story. ?

On 1/28/2021 at 5:22 PM, Jayomms said:

Yay! 

Yay indeed! ??

On 1/28/2021 at 5:37 PM, Collygon said:

Loving this more and more with each update! It's awesome to really dive into these characters and see who they really are. So much potential;; a lot of it fulfilling as it comes up. Terrific work!

Thank you, Colly!  I honestly should've added in the intro " This episode is brought to you by Collygon's Awesome Poser.  Collygon's Poser - the best poser for all of your non-naughty needs! (and even a few naughty ones ?)"    You can probably recognize that at least 1/3 of the whole chapter was created with the help of your poses.  I don't know what I would've done without them ?

I know that my updates are kinda slow (ok ok, really slow) and it's very touching to see that readers still find enjoyment in them despite the long wait.  We will definitely learn even more about our characters in the upcoming chapters and maybe even discover a sexy secret or two ?

Sometimes some bloggers create tutorials on how to do this or that, I think you could already create a complete tutorial "how to make a cute character" because you mastered that skill. 

Every time I think it couldn't be cuter Bunny does something, and then Im like:

Delightful work Devianna! Thank you very much for the great story!

p.s.: I still think sleeping without panties(considering that there is a spider's nest nearby) is a pretty bad idea. ^_^

7 hours ago, Crw said:

Sometimes some bloggers create tutorials on how to do this or that, I think you could already create a complete tutorial "how to make a cute character" because you mastered that skill. 

Every time I think it couldn't be cuter Bunny does something, and then Im like:

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Delightful work Devianna! Thank you very much for the great story!

p.s.: I still think sleeping without panties(considering that there is a spider's nest nearby) is a pretty bad idea. ^_^

Aww, thank you for such kind words, Crw.  Bunny is a strange mix of an adorable and sexy nerd. ? And in comparison to her companions she really is a kid (who is getting into stuff that's way over her head )

As for her panties, she's a good girl! She was sleeping with them on.  Bunny only removed her shorts.  Here's a diagram to clear up some things: ?

And I'm really glad you've enjoyed this chapter! ?

On 1/29/2021 at 12:09 AM, djregs said:

Yay Bunny!  

I like that Trez is taking to his new role has a guardian with such gusto.  It seems Dremora have a soft spot for cute mages.     

Can't wait for the next one!  

Trez does take his job rather seriously. Mostly because normally it allows him to kill a whole bunch of mortals.  But military prowess isn't the only skill he possesses and since Bunny has a strict 'no killing' policy he gladly resorts to intimidation, manipulation, physical and psychological torture and all the other fun stuff.  ?

Our lieutenant isn't 'good' in any meaning of the word, however Bunny's spell did ask for very specific qualities in her summon ?  And there's also that whole thing with his brother still living with Bunny's grandma ?.  In other words - it's complicated ?

Glad you liked it!

thank you great story again as always , please keep them coming , great reading and lovely pictures  ?

4 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you great story again as always , please keep them coming , great reading and lovely pictures  ?

Thank you for the kind comment, Wilson.  Even though I don't post as often as I used to I am still working on Bunny's story and Chapter 4 is already in progress so we'll have more of her adventures in the future.  ?

Well, well, let me give that 40th like ! Quite the developed chapter that you offered us here. It's nice to see characters relationships evolving, particularly when they start on opposed bases, such as Trez and Bunny. Also like the posing and effects during the confrontation with the Vigilants, and the ensuing badassery. Technically, the images are vibrant, and the use of Jaxonz gets better and better. The blood effect was nicely done as well. And the ambiguous situation between the main protagonist, and the dreamy commands quiproquo while Trez was restraining the Vigilant was quite amusing as well. And kudos for the dialogues, particularly the owls and Trez's ones ! Amazing work ! ?

Malicia : « Mr Hoot is very funny !

               Plus Bunny and the black daedra, they're gonna honey-honey one day, yes.  »          

5 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, well, let me give that 40th like ! Quite the developed chapter that you offered us here. It's nice to see characters relationships evolving, particularly when they start on opposed bases, such as Trez and Bunny. Also like the posing and effects during the confrontation with the Vigilants, and the ensuing badassery. Technically, the images are vibrant, and the use of Jaxonz gets better and better. The blood effect was nicely done as well. And the ambiguous situation between the main protagonist, and the dreamy commands quiproquo while Trez was restraining the Vigilant was quite amusing as well. And kudos for the dialogues, particularly the owls and Trez's ones ! Amazing work ! ?

 

 

Malicia : « Mr Hoot is very funny !

 

               Plus Bunny and the black daedra, they're gonna honey-honey one day, yes.  »          

Badassery is Trez's middle name! (It's not...not really...nobody other than him and myself even remember his full name at this point. Poor guy ? ).  I really like the screenshot that you picked out as well.  It highlights nicely how much larger and stronger he is than most of those around him. Though it does require Bunny to constantly look up when she's talking to him.

While this tale is technically a Bunny's story (as can be guessed from the title) Trez doesn't take a back seat to her and in some situations the line of who is running the show becomes rather blurred. You probably noticed that he doesn't even address Bunny by her name, choosing instead to call her kid most of the time. Which makes their relationship rather...interesting. ?

Thank you for noticing Jaxonz and positioning. With every chapter I learn something new and I'm happy if it shows through my work. ?

And of course, as always thank you for your comment!  I'm glad you continue enjoying this little tale. ?

Author:  Dear Malicia, you are very perceptive and clever! Bunny does find Trez attractive and plus he keeps saving her which is really nice! We'll see how things develop further down the road. ?

On 2/1/2021 at 7:50 PM, Devianna said:

 

Badassery is Trez's middle name! (It's not...not really...nobody other than him and myself even remember his full name at this point. Poor guy ? ). 

Don't worry, I was surprised as well when most readers started calling the protagonist "Tabi" instead of Tabrielle. I guess were retain the name that the characters do use with each other. It's the beginning of glory for Trez Trezaath ! ^^

On 2/1/2021 at 7:50 PM, Devianna said:

While this tale is technically a Bunny's story (as can be guessed from the title) Trez doesn't take a back seat to her and in some situations the line of who is running the show becomes rather blurred. You probably noticed that he doesn't even address Bunny by her name, choosing instead to call her kid most of the time. Which makes their relationship rather...interesting. ?

 

Thank you for noticing Jaxonz and positioning. With every chapter I learn something new and I'm happy if it shows through my work. ?

And of course, as always thank you for your comment!  I'm glad you continue enjoying this little tale. ?

Well, having different characters making the show only improves the entertainment. Which as I said is excellent.

On 2/1/2021 at 7:50 PM, Devianna said:

 I really like the screenshot that you picked out as well.  It highlights nicely how much larger and stronger he is than most of those around him. Though it does require Bunny to constantly look up when she's talking to him.

Malicia : « I don't like to look up either. But if she's climbing a slope, she can very climb first so Trez stays below, you see ?  »

On 2/1/2021 at 7:50 PM, Devianna said:

 

Author:  Dear Malicia, you are very perceptive and clever! Bunny does find Trez attractive and plus he keeps saving her which is really nice! We'll see how things develop further down the road. ?

Malicia :

This is really cool.

On 2/5/2021 at 10:48 PM, SirDoge said:

This is really cool.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. ?

? So funny! I can't tell what I liked most.

Perhaps the "commanding" element of her wet dream

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13 hours ago, worik said:

? So funny! I can't tell what I liked most.

Perhaps the "commanding" element of her wet dream

 

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Glad you enjoyed this chapter! ?

Trez did take some liberties with interpreting Bunny's commands there. ?