Being a Guard WIP Alpha 0.94 (Female Version) (2017-01-02)

[Delzaron]

Ok, test done.

 

- Most of the scripts are missing, quests doesn't progress;

- no journal, so player don't know the story, or what he should do

- Packages problems, specially with Gata (she never follow player)

- some useless stages in quests.

- the promote quest repeats...

[SexyRabbit]

İf you are upgrade the mod. make it more sluty e.g in the lazy guard quest give us chance to pleasure the guard.

[pinkpunkt]

Ok, test done.

 

- Most of the scripts are missing, quests doesn't progress;

- no journal, so player don't know the story, or what he should do

- Packages problems, specially with Gata (she never follow player)

- some useless stages in quests.

- the promote quest repeats...

 

Delzaron, you have so much experience doing these kinds of quest mods ( love your AFS btw) I bet you would fix the entire mod in one day xD

[Jenova23]

Ok, test done.

 

- Most of the scripts are missing, quests doesn't progress;

- no journal, so player don't know the story, or what he should do

- Packages problems, specially with Gata (she never follow player)

- some useless stages in quests.

- the promote quest repeats...

 

- Most of the scripts are missing, quests doesn't progress;

I simply clicked Create Archive and exported all the scripts I saw there. If there is a step I'm missing please let me know, because I don't understand how most of them are missing.

 

- no journal, so player don't know the story, or what he should do

Are you saying there aren't any objectives showing up at all because that boggles my mind.

 

- Packages problems, specially with Gata (she never follow player)

That usually happens when you rush through the mod, but it plays perfectly on my side of it.

 

- some useless stages in quests.

For sure, but I'm still a noob quest maker.

 

- the promote quest repeats...

I'm not sure what quest your talking about.

 

Ok, test done.

 

- Most of the scripts are missing, quests doesn't progress;

- no journal, so player don't know the story, or what he should do

- Packages problems, specially with Gata (she never follow player)

- some useless stages in quests.

- the promote quest repeats...

 

Delzaron, you have so much experience doing these kinds of quest mods ( love your AFS btw) I bet you would fix the entire mod in one day xD

 

 

That would be awesome, but I'm uploading a new version right now.

[noobsaleh]

Will you consider using DD items over Zaz items?

[Jenova23]

Will you consider using DD items over Zaz items?

 

Lol, good thing you reminded me, it doesn't even use Zaz anymore. I don't mind adding it though, but right now I'm focusing on making the mod fully playable.

[Delzaron]

 

Ok, test done.

 

- Most of the scripts are missing, quests doesn't progress;

- no journal, so player don't know the story, or what he should do

- Packages problems, specially with Gata (she never follow player)

- some useless stages in quests.

- the promote quest repeats...

 

Delzaron, you have so much experience doing these kinds of quest mods ( love your AFS btw) I bet you would fix the entire mod in one day xD

 

 

In several, I have a job, real life issues, and TID to fix !

 

 

Ok, test done.

 

- Most of the scripts are missing, quests doesn't progress;

- no journal, so player don't know the story, or what he should do

- Packages problems, specially with Gata (she never follow player)

- some useless stages in quests.

- the promote quest repeats...

 

- Most of the scripts are missing, quests doesn't progress;

I simply clicked Create Archive and exported all the scripts I saw there. If there is a step I'm missing please let me know, because I don't understand how most of them are missing.

 

- no journal, so player don't know the story, or what he should do

Are you saying there aren't any objectives showing up at all because that boggles my mind.

 

- Packages problems, specially with Gata (she never follow player)

That usually happens when you rush through the mod, but it plays perfectly on my side of it.

 

- some useless stages in quests.

For sure, but I'm still a noob quest maker.

 

- the promote quest repeats...

I'm not sure what quest your talking about.

 

Ok, test done.

 

- Most of the scripts are missing, quests doesn't progress;

- no journal, so player don't know the story, or what he should do

- Packages problems, specially with Gata (she never follow player)

- some useless stages in quests.

- the promote quest repeats...

 

Delzaron, you have so much experience doing these kinds of quest mods ( love your AFS btw) I bet you would fix the entire mod in one day xD

 

 

That would be awesome, but I'm uploading a new version right now.

 

 

- don't create an archive for now. Pack eveything manually.

- every stage should have a little writing. For exemple, "I'm officialy a whiterun's guard". It also trigger the objectives.

- yes, I rushed the mod... maybe gatta was trapped in a scene.

- the promote is the quest where you face the jarl, and get the guard rank. It's repeat 2 times.

 

There are also another problem : the novice guard armor : I use CBBE, so it was a little strange to see the fat big bottom big boobs meshe armor on a skinny character !

[Guest tau49]

Im stuck at the quest "The Best Cheese" The quest objective says to get some fresh air, when i leave the guard place nothing happens i've tried to enter a building and wait and then leave nothing works. 

[leofong7244]

Im stuck at the quest "The Best Cheese" The quest objective says to get some fresh air, when i leave the guard place nothing happens i've tried to enter a building and wait and then leave nothing works. 

I have the same problem before , but you are supposed to find a guy called 'stranger' (there should be some flowers around him) on the square (market) of whiterun , and then he will give a rose to you , then give the rose to Gata .

 

[Guest tau49]

 

Im stuck at the quest "The Best Cheese" The quest objective says to get some fresh air, when i leave the guard place nothing happens i've tried to enter a building and wait and then leave nothing works. 

I have the same problem before , but you are supposed to find a guy called 'stranger' (there should be some flowers around him) on the square (market) of whiterun , and then he will give a rose to you , then give the rose to Gata .

 

I've seen that person before but I can't talk to him. 

[Jenova23]

 

 

Im stuck at the quest "The Best Cheese" The quest objective says to get some fresh air, when i leave the guard place nothing happens i've tried to enter a building and wait and then leave nothing works. 

I have the same problem before , but you are supposed to find a guy called 'stranger' (there should be some flowers around him) on the square (market) of whiterun , and then he will give a rose to you , then give the rose to Gata .

 

I've seen that person before but I can't talk to him. 

 

 

Wait for him to get into the middle of the market place around noon.

 

[kenny316]

Glad to see you working to fix the bugs. 

[Jenova23]

Glad to see you working to fix the bugs. 

 

For sure, I just hope I get people interested in helping out. I have another mod I need to release after this.

[Guest tau49]

I have tried to wait until noon and he is at the well but i can't talk to him even when i have the guard armor on. 

[Krh]

"Not bad for an alpha" is the first thing that comes to mind as commentary. Obviously there are issues, from annoying to gamebreaking, but the mod description was very clear about this being a work in progress. I'll spoiler up the stuff that seems spoily, just in case.

The language is fluent enough, although the mod would benefit from proofreading. 'Your,' 'ok' and funky punctuation here and there seemed to be the main offenders.

At first the story seems straight out of sillyland. Why does the guard captain want me to bring him a steel sword? Aren't they supposed to outfit the prospective recruits rather than expect them to buy pricey weapons? And then... everyone is naked. Oh, it's really hot in there? I guess I can kinda sorta see that happening.

The XXXXXXXL uniform is really disturbing. Gata wears the same thing, yet she doesn't become a blimp. Still, you've gone through the trouble of providing bodyslide links for extra outfits, so this stuff will probably get sorted out sooner or later.

Explosive collars, unseen stalker, blackmail and lewd acts. Silly turns into chilly and things start to get interesting. Bonus points for embarassing misunderstandings, which were deliberately set up by the victim-turned-villain of the story.

One thing I don't understand is why the PC is so useless with the shirt ripping. Okay, your uniform got torn. Are you really going to walk/jog/sprint to the big city with a boob hanging out when there's a general store, an armorer and a tanning rack right there? Porn logic and all, but still.

I liked the plot with Gata being behind it all. Didn't even see it coming. My game broke after the orc double assfuck scene: Gata refused to say anything afterwards. Or maybe that's as far as it goes at this point, dunno. Up to then it was getting good: this crazy, ruthless bitch is whoring you out to pay some debt to a bunch of orcs. No choice but to obey, or she'll take your head off.

What's next? I look forward to finding out.

[Jenova23]

I have tried to wait until noon and he is at the well but i can't talk to him even when i have the guard armor on. 

You might have to reload from a previous quest. Just make sure to let everything play out and try not to rush anything if you are. I don't know exactly why it's doing that because I extracted all the scripts with Tesvcheckespfiles, and that tells you if you're missing any scripts, which I'm not. It should be the same as my version now technically, so I have no clue why it's doing that.

"Not bad for an alpha" is the first thing that comes to mind as commentary. Obviously there are issues, from annoying to gamebreaking, but the mod description was very clear about this being a work in progress. I'll spoiler up the stuff that seems spoily, just in case.

 

The language is fluent enough, although the mod would benefit from proofreading. 'Your,' 'ok' and funky punctuation here and there seemed to be the main offenders.

 

At first the story seems straight out of sillyland. Why does the guard captain want me to bring him a steel sword? Aren't they supposed to outfit the prospective recruits rather than expect them to buy pricey weapons? And then... everyone is naked. Oh, it's really hot in there? I guess I can kinda sorta see that happening.

 

The XXXXXXXL uniform is really disturbing. Gata wears the same thing, yet she doesn't become a blimp. Still, you've gone through the trouble of providing bodyslide links for extra outfits, so this stuff will probably get sorted out sooner or later.

 

 

Explosive collars, unseen stalker, blackmail and lewd acts. Silly turns into chilly and things start to get interesting. Bonus points for embarassing misunderstandings, which were deliberately set up by the victim-turned-villain of the story.

 

One thing I don't understand is why the PC is so useless with the shirt ripping. Okay, your uniform got torn. Are you really going to walk/jog/sprint to the big city with a boob hanging out when there's a general store, an armorer and a tanning rack right there? Porn logic and all, but still.

 

I liked the plot with Gata being behind it all. Didn't even see it coming. My game broke after the orc double assfuck scene: Gata refused to say anything afterwards. Or maybe that's as far as it goes at this point, dunno. Up to then it was getting good: this crazy, ruthless bitch is whoring you out to pay some debt to a bunch of orcs. No choice but to obey, or she'll take your head off.

 

 

What's next? I look forward to finding out.

The language is fluent enough, although the mod would benefit from proofreading. 'Your,' 'ok' and funky punctuation here and there seemed to be the main offenders.

 

I plan on fixing the grammar last because I'm focused on fixing bugs at the moment

 

 

first the story seems straight out of sillyland. Why does the guard captain want me to bring him a steel sword? Aren't they supposed to outfit the prospective recruits rather than expect them to buy pricey weapons? And then... everyone is naked. Oh, it's really hot in there? I guess I can kinda sorta see that happening.

 

You should to try FFabris's version of Being a Guard, lol. His mod was super silly, so imagine taking a super silly mod and trying to make it serious. Good point about the sword, but I just wanted to make a requirement for joining. It just seemed unrealistic if the captain just took anyone. I'll add that to the list of things I need to fix.

 

 

The XXXXXXXL uniform is really disturbing. Gata wears the same thing, yet she doesn't become a blimp. Still, you've gone through the trouble of providing bodyslide links for extra outfits, so this stuff will probably get sorted out sooner or later.

 

That's probably just an error, can you take a screenshot so I can fix that. I understand that the body shapes might come out a bit weird, but I'm not going to change that because it's tied into my body system. I want the mod to work for me too, not just everyone else. All you need to do is drag and drop the body shapes that you want to use, so it's not hard for the user to fix.

 

 

One thing I don't understand is why the PC is so useless with the shirt ripping. Okay, your uniform got torn. Are you really going to walk/jog/sprint to the big city with a boob hanging out when there's a general store, an armorer and a tanning rack right there? Porn logic and all, but still.

 

I wanted to add branches to it, but I have trouble getting it working. I want to fix all these issues your mentioning.

 

What's next? I look forward to finding out.

 

After I fix this mod, I have a female version of The Isle of Mara that's basically complete except for the grammar.

 

 

Here is a list of somethings I need to fix.

 

• The captain shows up invisible during Part 11.
• The Sleeping Giant scene between Gata and Orgnar will not play.
• Cum outfit will not stay equipped on Gata during A Guard in Distress quest.
• Grammar and story tweaking.l
• The first sex scene won't make sense. If anyone knows of an animation involving the player getting a physical or some sort of an examination, please let me know!

[Nazzzgul666]

 

After I fix this mod, I have a female version of The Isle of Mara that's basically complete except for the grammar.

 

 

Here is a list of somethings I need to fix.

 

• The captain shows up invisible during Part 11.
• The Sleeping Giant scene between Gata and Orgnar will not play.
• Cum outfit will not stay equipped on Gata during A Guard in Distress quest.
• Grammar and story tweaking.l
• The first sex scene won't make sense. If anyone knows of an animation involving the player getting a physical or some sort of an examination, please let me know!

 

Female version of Isle of Mara? Sounds awesome, but actually i'd already be glad if the other slaves would be female. that's enough.

Examination animation: something i could imagine is a (some?) pose in Display model ("sitting" in a chair with legs behind the head, standing & bent over)) + the vanilla sneak-and.move-hands animation... at least for something like sexual examinations. If you just want to be sure your recruits are fit... maybe let them dance? Still sounds kind of "silly", but a little humor here and there improves mods i think.

[KunKa]

I just tried 0.94 and had no trouble's with it.  just had the same thing with the armor and the outer outfit that made her look really big here are some shot's of how it look in my game and one what she looked like in Black Rose armor with unpb body.

 

somescreenshots.zip

 

and with the captain shows up invisible during Part 11. That was all that i had trouble with and you know about

 

Thank for sharing it and wish i know how to help you..

[Jenova23]

I just tried 0.94 and had no trouble's with it.  just had the same thing with the armor and the outer outfit that made her look really big here are some shot's of how it look in my game and one what she looked like in Black Rose armor with unpb body.

 

somescreenshots.zip

 

and with the captain shows up invisible during Part 11. That was all that i had trouble with and you know about

 

Thank for sharing it and wish i know how to help you..

 

Part 11 isn't complete what so ever, I still need to fix most of it, but as for the body that's a simple fix. What race is your character?

[KunKa]

 

I just tried 0.94 and had no trouble's with it.  just had the same thing with the armor and the outer outfit that made her look really big here are some shot's of how it look in my game and one what she looked like in Black Rose armor with unpb body.

 

somescreenshots.zip

 

and with the captain shows up invisible during Part 11. That was all that i had trouble with and you know about

 

Thank for sharing it and wish i know how to help you..

 

Part 11 isn't complete what so ever, I still need to fix most of it, but as for the body that's a simple fix. What race is your character?

 

 

She is a Breton

 

[PaybackTime]

I tried the mod and work well until the quest deja vu.

I get the point were Gata told me that we are going to a camp and then nothing.

she follow me around  but I don't have a new quest marker.

The quest is still lock on "speak to Gata again" (mark as completed) but nothing else

 

Any idea?

[Jenova23]

I tried the mod and work well until the quest deja vu.

I get the point were Gata told me that we are going to a camp and then nothing.

she follow me around  but I don't have a new quest marker.

The quest is still lock on "speak to Gata again" (mark as completed) but nothing else

 

Any idea?

 

I believe that part sometimes takes a bit to load up, especially if it's after a sex scene I had to speak with her several times.

[PaybackTime]

 

I tried the mod and work well until the quest deja vu.

I get the point were Gata told me that we are going to a camp and then nothing.

she follow me around  but I don't have a new quest marker.

The quest is still lock on "speak to Gata again" (mark as completed) but nothing else

 

Any idea?

 

I believe that part sometimes takes a bit to load up, especially if it's after a sex scene I had to speak with her several times.

 

 

Nope I don't think so the Quest "speak to Gata again" is marked as completed. Gata is dressed with the Sadistic Magician Mash-Up Outfit and follow me around but I don't have any more quest options. Everything is marked as completed

 

[Jenova23]

 

 

I tried the mod and work well until the quest deja vu.

I get the point were Gata told me that we are going to a camp and then nothing.

she follow me around  but I don't have a new quest marker.

The quest is still lock on "speak to Gata again" (mark as completed) but nothing else

 

Any idea?

 

I believe that part sometimes takes a bit to load up, especially if it's after a sex scene I had to speak with her several times.

 

 

Nope I don't think so the Quest "speak to Gata again" is marked as completed. Gata is dressed with the Sadistic Magician Mash-Up Outfit and follow me around but I don't have any more quest options. Everything is marked as completed

 

 

 

Hmm... I'll have to test it and see, I'm not quite sure exactly where your at.

 

[PaybackTime]

 

 

 

I tried the mod and work well until the quest deja vu.

I get the point were Gata told me that we are going to a camp and then nothing.

she follow me around  but I don't have a new quest marker.

The quest is still lock on "speak to Gata again" (mark as completed) but nothing else

 

Any idea?

 

I believe that part sometimes takes a bit to load up, especially if it's after a sex scene I had to speak with her several times.

 

 

Nope I don't think so the Quest "speak to Gata again" is marked as completed. Gata is dressed with the Sadistic Magician Mash-Up Outfit and follow me around but I don't have any more quest options. Everything is marked as completed

 

 

 

Hmm... I'll have to test it and see, I'm not quite sure exactly where your at.

 

 

 

It's in the quest Deja vu

 

 

The problem is in the quest Deja vu. In the guard barrack cellar, I reach the third step of the quest but after she told me that we are going to a little adventure and that we are going to a camp to get a satchel, I don't have any quest marker anymore. So on deja vu I manage to complete the following steps

-Meet Gata by the cellar

-Speak to Gata

-Speak to Gata again

and after nothing