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Paperback°2 - Endeavors of the Prince (V)

 

 

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The ultimate royal alliance, having finally triumphed from Serdayn's greatest asset, are being questioned by the defeated dragon. Where does our Prince's renewed strength comes from ? Are the princess' vocal gifts a family heirloom ? And will the vigorous Stranger finally get the chance to prove his talents to at least one female being ? Find out, in this episode of Dragon Ball Z Endeavors of the Prince !

 

Previous chapter is a highly recommended read if you wanna understand something of what's going on.
Paperbacks are smaller stories happening beside the chronicles. If your need to refresh your mind about the chronicles' events or characters, you'll find a small summary here.
More stories, from other authors can be found in Malicia's library.

 

This chapter being significantly longer than usual, I've added numbers for the spoilers in case you need to read it in several times. Feel free to tell me if that's an improvement or not. 🤔

 

Likes and comments are welcome and keep me motivated, so if you want to see more chronicles you know what to do ! :classic_wink:

 

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Malicia : « Happy birthday to youuuu ♪♪

 

             .... even though it's way too early, yes. :classic_sleep: »

 

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The book covers were a great touch!

 

Finally a (mostly) happy ending for Stranger. 

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Ohhh my my what have we here, Malicia actually had sex? 😨 and even most suprising fact, this one got released very fast,

 

Also nice touch on the books, it was cute and seemed lore friendly for skyrim :3.

 

And Serana has thing for Malicia's sister? 🤔

 

Overall great work ❤️, was fun to read.

 

Gwynolda: No no Malicia, you need try it with girls first then go with guys, thats how the temple of Dibella teach it, kiss some girl pee-pee.

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YAY!  It finally happened!  And the timing was perfect.  Also, that song choice :kiss_wink: perfect for what was going on.  All in all 10/10 birthday tribute!  

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Every single picture made me laugh hard. Not only me but my two crazy witches. This one was most hilarious:

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Malicija looked veeeeery hot in that dress. Thank you, thank you thank you for most beautiful gift for my birthday. Besides my dad's gifts (singing, words of wisdom and hugs) this is my favorite one and it's not because Stranger had sex with malicija, but because everyhing you mentioned in this epsiode is realted tro three of us and the Stranger, my favorite Skyrim character. :D

Trilog, you rock and you amazed me. 🏆

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Aww how cute you got them their own books ;) Phoenix could use someone to make book covers for her story books Aria would love it. :sweat_smile: 

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 How adorable the way Malicia talks all innocent and stuff. She tends to say pee pee a lot. Reminds me of my cousin who says pee pee a lot and he's gay. :sweat_smile:

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17 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

The book covers were a great touch!

 

Finally a (mostly) happy ending for Stranger. 

The happiest ending he had in a long time if you ask me (though his previous encounter with Felicia didn't go that bad either). After all his struggles with false/mistaken Malicias, with the location finding, the travel, dealing with unexpected opponents, managing to get through his strange name, and to seduce Malicia... he finally managed to get her the way he wanted. Not to mention he earned some rest close to her, with the couple of Tryade & Belrand, who are rather friendly towards him (the former being the one who treated him). So, all well considered, it's a happy ending ! 🥰

17 hours ago, worik said:

🤣 I like the right book

I laughed quite a lot doing them, but I didn't think they would retain that much attention.

 

The one on the right is a custom made Harley Quinn anime-like face (in a Malicia approved version), with the title referring to both Ivy's and Harley Quinn rather violent approach (at least according to my associate). Thus her choice of a pacifism teaching book, despite the obvious contradiction within. ^^ 

 

Malicia : « I'm very glad you like my book choice, Mr Little Worik. I'm good at book choosing 'cause I'm very educated and intelligent, yes:classic_sleepy: »

17 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Ohhh my my what have we here, Malicia actually had sex? 😨 and even most suprising fact, this one got released very fast,

Told ya you'd feel the wind upon opening your computer. I wasn't lying ! :cool:

 

Jokes aside, I've been working for more than three months on what was supposed to be the final chapter. But then I realized it was going to be 150+ images long, so I decided to split it, and to release the first part when I felt confident I was close to finishing the second one. Still rushed it quite a lot those last two weeks, it's going to be good to settle down for a bit. Though I've still got some things in store for the blog.

 

Malicia : « 'course I'm going honey-honey ! Plus it was with Stranger, who's very expert at it ; so he got released right at the best moment, you see ? :classic_sleep: »

17 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Also nice touch on the books, it was cute and seemed lore friendly for skyrim :3.

 

And Serana has thing for Malicia's sister? 🤔

 

Overall great work ❤️, was fun to read.

Thanks for the good words. As for Serana, well in the Chronicles' universe, she became defiant towards men ever since her ritual with Molag Bal. But... that defiance did not extend towards women. And so, after living so many adventures, overcoming so many hardships with Tryade (who understands perfectly what Serana went through psychologically)... and having her wash herself (her body being the most muscular of the Marsoric sisters' atm) in front of her everyday... Well after a rather long moment, it ignited desire, and with desire caresses and more.

 

And that's also part of why Stranger had 0% (or even a negative ratio) to seduce her, as to begin with she's a lesbian, and with a rather repressed sexuality what's more (thus Malicia not even being aware of it).  So my playing over the ambiguity of an hypothetic Stranger x Serana outcome was mere teasing all along. 🤣 ^^

17 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Gwynolda: No no Malicia, you need try it with girls first then go with guys, thats how the temple of Dibella teach it, kiss some girl pee-pee.

Malicia : «  Waddaya mean "first" ? Smiley-heink-HFR.gif I'm not gonna kiss a gal's pee-pee, they've got the same than mine ! Plus pee-pee kissing is good for puking, yes ! 1733949690_GIFpukingrainbowtumblr.gif.b1a619cde7a5d1653c6dd1191265413f.gif

 

                 Anyway, hi-i♪ Gwynolda ! I hope you're doing very good at the imperial administration ! And that you get a lot of money and a lot of friends too ! 🙂 »

15 hours ago, djregs said:

YAY!  It finally happened!  And the timing was perfect.  Also, that song choice :kiss_wink: perfect for what was going on.  All in all 10/10 birthday tribute!  

I'm quite fond of Annella's work, and so is the little breton as there is no denying most of it is perfectly in line with Malicia's temper and occupations. I'm glad it synced well with the sex scene, as it was supposed to be a rather special moment for the two partners. Thanks for your appreciation, DJregs !

11 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Aww how cute you got them their own books ;) Phoenix could use someone to make book covers for her story books Aria would love it. :sweat_smile: 

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 How adorable the way Malicia talks all innocent and stuff. She tends to say pee pee a lot. Reminds me of my cousin who says pee pee a lot and he's gay. :sweat_smile:

Well she has a rather uneven mind, as she is able to catch very fast some complex intellectual concepts, but is still very childish towards some others. Thus the "innocence" aspect, which apparently isn't contradictory with an active sexual life ! 

 

As for Phoenix and Aria, Malicia likes them, but Phoenix seems to be a writer rather than a reader, and rarely follows the redhead's adventures. So does Tex, I don't recall seeing him press the like button here, so don't think my works are his cup of tea. But that's not offensive in any way, we are all made different, and so it's only logical our tastes do differ as well. :classic_wink:

14 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Malicija looked veeeeery hot in that dress.

Malicia : « Told you I was very pretty, very strong, and very intelligent. I'm very glad you see it by now, yes. :classic_sleepy: »

14 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

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Every single picture made me laugh hard. Not only me but my two crazy witches. This one was most hilarious:

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Malicija looked veeeeery hot in that dress. Thank you, thank you thank you for most beautiful gift for my birthday. Besides my dad's gifts (singing, words of wisdom and hugs) this is my favorite one and it's not because Stranger had sex with malicija, but because everyhing you mentioned in this epsiode is realted tro three of us and the Stranger, my favorite Skyrim character. :D

Trilog, you rock and you amazed me. 🏆

Even comparing my work to your dad's gifts is the greatest compliment you could give me, Prince !

 

Though I thought you'd like that final chapter more than the others (which looked like a seemingly endless list of struggles ^^), I took some risks with this one, and was a bit concerned of playing too much with the boundaries. But as you can see, for once Stranger finally managed to accomplish his goals. And if you had fun while he did, then I am glad to conclude with your appreciation this little  Stranger-Malicia saga.

 

I'm also stocked Eva and Ivy laughed as well, as so far I was surprised seeing so few reactions from Ivy, considering since Skyrim Lesson's, Stranger is a bit her character as well. Malicia being a reader of Eva's writings, that's why she was able to go for a custom gift for each of you. ^^

 

As for the dress, you know Stranger wouldn't have chosen it if it wasn't sexy in some way. In the end, though his being not too bright and having such an atypical name earned him some great disservices, I chose to interpret it as being way more resilient/tough than expected (he stood up in mere instants from attacks that would've knocked out most people, including heroes) and with unmatched prowess in sexual matters as well. So he deserved his success, and also some peaceful rest after his final expulsion from Gro-Shub's arcanaeum. ^^

 

I am now happy to return Stranger to the care of your triangle, Prince, Eva and Ivy. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

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Thank you, very much, Trilog. We had a lot of fun and laughter reading this entry. :D  It is perfect in every way. O focurse it would be ideal if Stranger and Malicija woulodn't be interrupted in sex, but, hey, that's his destiny. :)

 

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8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

As for the dress, you know Stranger wouldn't have chosen it if it wasn't sexy in some way. In the end, though his being not too bright and having such an atypical name earned him some great disservices, I chose to interpret it as being way more resilient/tough than expected (he stood up in mere instants from attacks that would've knocked out most people, including heroes) and with unmatched prowess in sexual matters as well. So he deserved his success, and also some peaceful rest after his final expulsion from Gro-Shub's arcanaeum. ^^

 

I am now happy to return Stranger to the care of your triangle, Prince, Eva and Ivy. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

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I'm also stocked Eva and Ivy laughed as well, as so far I was surprised seeing so few reactions from Ivy, considering since Skyrim Lesson's, Stranger is a bit her character as well. Malicia being a reader of Eva's writings, that's why she was able to go for a custom gift for each of you. ^^

> We read your entry together with my Prince but I couldn't comment since Mikey needed me. Anyway, my Ivy didn't comment because she noticed she was little "aggressive" using my Prince's avatar and she decided she won't comment anyone's post outside her blog. But I can tell you she loved it equally as all of us. I was very thrilled seeing Stranger and Malicija in sex act and had a good laughter seeing you advertising safe sex at the end. If anyone practice safe sex, it is us :P

 

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I am now happy to return Stranger to the care of your triangle, Prince, Eva and Ivy. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

> I have nothing to do with Ivy's stories anymore. I only help her with English when my Prince is not available. Sine he is at home now, on maternity leave, he helps her. BTW, she will post a poll after I log off.

 

At the end, many 💋 and hugs for this entry.

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32 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

Thank you, very much, Trilog. We had a lot of fun and laughter reading this entry. :D  It is perfect in every way. O focurse it would be ideal if Stranger and Malicija woulodn't be interrupted in sex, but, hey, that's his destiny. :)

Well, one could've considered he was finished, regardless. Better after than before the orgasm the way I see things. :classic_tongue:

24 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

> We read your entry together with my Prince but I couldn't comment since Mikey needed me. Anyway, my Ivy didn't comment because she noticed she was little "aggressive" using my Prince's avatar and she decided she won't comment anyone's post outside her blog. But I can tell you she loved it equally as all of us. I was very thrilled seeing Stranger and Malicija in sex act and had a good laughter seeing you advertising safe sex at the end. If anyone practice safe sex, it is us :P

 

> I have nothing to do with Ivy's stories anymore. I only help her with English when my Prince is not available. Sine he is at home now, on maternity leave, he helps her. BTW, she will post a poll after I log off.

 

At the end, many 💋 and hugs for this entry.

I understand why we don't see Ivy anymore outside of her blog. I'm glad at least the three of you liked it, as there were a lot of my and Malicia's thoughts regarding your triangle into it. I think what I did wasn't far from the very best I could. And though I'm a bit disheartened seeing how confidentially its being received (9 likes in 24H, it seems readers outside of the usual circle don't enjoy it as much as I thought) at the moment, I am proud of having paid such a tribute to Malicia and Stranger's meeting.

 

Thanks for the good words, Eva. :classic_smile:

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A Loverslab story that teaches the importance of practicing safe sex? - that is brilliant! 😂

 

Oh wow, Tirloque, honestly this was an amazing episode. I can see how much love and care you've put into it, adding all the small details like the character's inner voices, the special effect, good/bad angels, the custom made books, even the flying bird (which was quite comical).  And you even managed to make Malicia seem very real (the 'not being ready' part and the muffled coughing were a very nice touch).

 

In terms of writing it was as charming as ever. Due to Malicia's way of talking her character is actually very unique. There's a very clear distinction between her dialogue lines and the narrator's speech and that is something that's not always easy to achieve. The twist with Serana's sexual preferences was also very well-made. And I'm sure many of us would agree with Stranger - that's the part of Skyrim that we all like. 😅

 

The true love's kiss scene (read: sexy time!) was tantalizing and exciting. The pink text and the amulet movement effects worked excellently together. And of course the roar of the mighty Cerberus paired with Malicia's disappearing act was extremely entertaining.

 

57 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 I think what I did wasn't far from the very best I could. And though I'm a bit disheartened seeing how confidentially its being received (9 likes in 24H, it seems readers outside of the usual circle don't enjoy it as much as I thought) at the moment, I am proud of having paid such a tribute to Malicia and Stranger's meeting.

 

Your story feels like a personal tribute to friends (Elf Prince, Ivy and Eva) so I can see how some people outside of the usual story-teller's circle while still liking it might feel a bit uncomfortable about commenting or giving it a thumbs up. It's sort of similar to seeing a random photo on somebody's facebook page. You might find it lovely, but you realize that if you 'like' or 'comment' on it people might think it's weird as you are not on any of their friend's lists. So please don't be disheartened. Your story and your writing are wonderful and greatly appreciated. 🤗

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4 minutes ago, Devianna said:

A Loverslab story that teaches the importance of practicing safe sex? - that is brilliant! 😂

 

Oh wow, Tirloque, honestly this was an amazing episode. I can see how much love and care you've put into it, adding all the small details like the character's inner voices, the special effect, good/bad angels, the custom made books, even the flying bird (which was quite comical).  And you even managed to make Malicia seem very real (the 'not being ready' part and the muffled coughing were a very nice touch).

 

In terms of writing it was as charming as ever. Due to Malicia's way of talking her character is actually very unique. There's a very clear distinction between her dialogue lines and the narrator's speech and that is something that's not always easy to achieve. The twist with Serana's sexual preferences was also very well-made. And I'm sure many of us would agree with Stranger - that's the part of Skyrim that we all like.

Well, it's Malicia's flaws that do make her unique, as they combine in a peculiar way with the rest of her character. And her way of talking is an example of that. I'm glad someone noticed and appreciated all the small details Devianna, your reading eye is a sharp one.

4 minutes ago, Devianna said:

The true love's kiss scene (read: sexy time!) was tantalizing and exciting. The pink text and the amulet movement effects worked excellently together. And of course the roar of the mighty Cerberus paired with Malicia's disappearing act was extremely entertaining.

Well I saw that use for sex voices in Crw's and Totempole's works, and I thought it was a rather efficient way of embedding information to it. The amulet move was in fact another way to add info, without onomatopoeia this time. And Malicia's invisibility spell was another humorous twist. I'm happy if that sorted out well.

4 minutes ago, Devianna said:

Your story feels like a personal tribute to friends (Elf Prince, Ivy and Eva) so I can see how some people outside of the usual story-teller's circle while still liking it might feel a bit uncomfortable about commenting or giving it a thumbs up. It's sort of similar to seeing a random photo on somebody's facebook page. You might find it lovely, but you realize that if you 'like' or 'comment' on it people might think it's weird as you are not on any of their friend's lists. So please don't be disheartened. Your story and your writing are wonderful and greatly appreciated. 🤗

I think you might be true about it. Cross-overs might be double edge swords.. and though I thought the story would be entertaining for anyone, in fact it may still have required to know about Stranger, about Eva. Prince and Ivy... And so I might've lost some readers in the try.

 

Thanks a lot for your words, Devianna, they help. Smiley-andromaque-HFR.gif

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11 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well she has a rather uneven mind, as she is able to catch very fast some complex intellectual concepts, but is still very childish towards some others. Thus the "innocence" aspect, which apparently isn't contradictory with an active sexual life ! 

 

As for Phoenix and Aria, Malicia likes them, but Phoenix seems to be a writer rather than a reader, and rarely follows the redhead's adventures. So does Tex, I don't recall seeing him press the like button here, so don't think my works are his cup of tea. But that's not offensive in any way, we are all made different, and so it's only logical our tastes do differ as well. :classic_wink:

:O oh wow I didn't know that. 🤔

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@Tirloque - I'm sorry you didn't get expected number of likes. Devainna said wonderfully about this entry. You see, I have been a long time on this forum and I never reached my expected number of likes and followers, unlike you. I don't say it out of jealousy but as a fact. I accepted I'm not popular like you and many others. It's is true: i expected I would be accepted but I wasn't, at least not in the number I thought I should be. I personally believe that this entry wasn't popular among the readers because of me (and us). So you see, being our LL friends, has a price. ;) My friend, don't be disappointed. You are excellent story teller and I'm sure your popularity on LL will increase by the time. I'm sorry we caused you disappoitment indirectly, but we thank you for being nice to us and made us happy. You are good man Trilog. That's the fact that (low nobe rof likes would never change. :) 

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> My Prince is right, Trilog. No matter what he does or say, his popularity doesn't increase . On contrary, it slowly drops down. Is it because of my diaries in which I'm writing about us and our true nature or realizing who my Prince is in real life, I wouldn't know. But I saw we aren't popular on LL. It doesn't matter my friend.  We don't want to be someone else to please the masses. We are who we are and that is what matters. If you think you should contact us less so the others wouldn't judge you "through us", we wouldn't be offended. It will hurt at the beginning but we will go on. We would never forget your encouragements, lessons and advises. Those things are everlasting. :)

 

> We want you to be happy because you deserve it and you do whatever it takes to make it true. Many hugs. :)

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Magnificent! ^_^ every pic made with love and such attention to details ^_^

For some moment I even forget that it starts as a fairytale for a group of children :D

Great job Tirloque ^_^ 

Rose:   « Told you if you don't kiss you girlfriends pee-pee, then you sister gona kiss her pee-pee, for me it's always like this... Especially if you girlfriend is very pretty, very strong, and very intelligent as Serana, yes :classic_sleepy: »

 

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9 hours ago, Jayomms said:

:O oh wow I didn't know that. 🤔

It takes all sorts to make a world, that's the saying. You can't expect to please anyone.

6 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

@Tirloque - I'm sorry you didn't get expected number of likes. Devainna said wonderfully about this entry. You see, I have been a long time on this forum and I never reached my expected number of likes and followers, unlike you. I don't say it out of jealousy but as a fact. I accepted I'm not popular like you and many others. It's is true: i expected I would be accepted but I wasn't, at least not in the number I thought I should be. I personally believe that this entry wasn't popular among the readers because of me (and us). So you see, being our LL friends, has a price. ;) My friend, don't be disappointed. You are excellent story teller and I'm sure your popularity on LL will increase by the time. I'm sorry we caused you disappoitment indirectly, but we thank you for being nice to us and made us happy. You are good man Trilog. That's the fact that (low nobe rof likes would never change. :) 

Well, I made the story thinking it could entertain readers as well, but maybe I pushed it too far. Regardless, I have no regrets, because there is as much of Malicia, Tryade, Serana, Belrand and their world (with Gro-Shub ^^) than of you, Eva, Ivy and Stranger in that story. Viewers may also not be hyped when there isn't obvious, regular adult content as well. So I don't regret it, even though I don't understand that readers who seemed to appreciate Malicia's first chronicle didn't like that one.

 

Anyway, I'm glad it made you three happy, and I thank you for your words.

5 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> My Prince is right, Trilog. No matter what he does or say, his popularity doesn't increase . On contrary, it slowly drops down. Is it because of my diaries in which I'm writing about us and our true nature or realizing who my Prince is in real life, I wouldn't know. But I saw we aren't popular on LL. It doesn't matter my friend.  We don't want to be someone else to please the masses. We are who we are and that is what matters. If you think you should contact us less so the others wouldn't judge you "through us", we wouldn't be offended. It will hurt at the beginning but we will go on. We would never forget your encouragements, lessons and advises. Those things are everlasting. :)

 

> We want you to be happy because you deserve it and you do whatever it takes to make it true. Many hugs. :)

Well, we are LL friends I guess. So I don't see why I should change anything about the way I exchange with you, regardless of the others to like it or not.

That being said, there is no storyteller if no one is there to be story-told. If LL's audience lost interest in my work, then I suppose I 'll have to make place for steadier authors. Authors who are already here, and already earning their popularity towards readers. Yet even that wouldn't prevent Malicia from wandering as she does usually, don't worry. :classic_wink:

 

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2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

That being said, there is no storyteller if no one is there to be story-told. If LL's audience lost interest in my work, then I suppose I 'll have to make place for steadier authors. Authors who are already here, and already earning their popularity towards readers.

:((((

Can't agree with that. You see, IMO LL audience is like a sea. Today it's calm and steady, and no matter how big will be the stone you throw in it - it will stay calm.

And the next day it may overflow you with its reaction and respond.

So I hope you reconsider that)

Or at least will sometimes please us with shorter but still brilliant stories of yours ^_^

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37 minutes ago, Crw said:

:((((

Can't agree with that. You see, IMO LL audience is like a sea. Today it's calm and steady, and no matter how big will be the stone you throw in it - it will stay calm.

And the next day it may overflow you with its reaction and respond.

So I hope you reconsider that)

Or at least will sometimes please us with shorter but still brilliant stories of yours ^_^

@Tirloque - I support Crw's argument million times. 👍

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4 hours ago, Crw said:

:((((

Can't agree with that. You see, IMO LL audience is like a sea. Today it's calm and steady, and no matter how big will be the stone you throw in it - it will stay calm.

And the next day it may overflow you with its reaction and respond.

So I hope you reconsider that)

Or at least will sometimes please us with shorter but still brilliant stories of yours ^_^

Your analogy is valid ; yet if others do better simultaneously it means the sea isn't calm for everyone. Spy made 30 likes in 3 days, Devianna 20 in 3 days, Resdayn 16 in 12H, DJregs 12 in 12H vs me 9 in 24H). So that the river isn't flowing towards all directions. Anyway, too personal cross-over, irregular and non ovious sexual content, and slow publishing rate may have influenced the flow. million_dollar_baby.gif

 

But hey Crw, I'm not that impulsive. I said IF audience lost interest, so I'm giving me time to judge. I've got two chapters pending for Mourning White, which do deal with themes very different from those of Endeavors of the Prince. So from there, once they're published, I'll have enough data to step back and judge if I should continue or not. And even if the answer is not, I may decide to still publish the last chapters of that chronicles, to conclude with a finished work.

 

Plus even if I were to finish abruptly, I do still like to read your works and those of the storytellers around. And so there'll still be a small library to maintain ; and possibly smaller sized stories as you said. :classic_wink:

 

Malicia : « You need to be very intelligent, and very clever, Tirloque .You need to show your books when Mr Spy and Ms Devianna aren't booking already, yes. :classic_lightbulb: »

3 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

@Tirloque - I support Crw's argument million times. 👍

Thanks Prince. Don't worry. :classic_wink:

7 hours ago, Crw said:

Magnificent! ^_^ every pic made with love and such attention to details ^_^

For some moment I even forget that it starts as a fairytale for a group of children :D

Great job Tirloque ^_^ 

Rose:   « Told you if you don't kiss you girlfriends pee-pee, then you sister gona kiss her pee-pee, for me it's always like this... Especially if you girlfriend is very pretty, very strong, and very intelligent as Serana, yes :classic_sleepy: »

Well, the fact such a story is being told to children certainly is one of the comical aspects of it. The questioning stare of Braith at the end makes me smile everytime. ^^

Glad you noticed the care about the details, and I can tell you there were more than one could guess at first glance. :classic_wink:

 

Malicia : « Well nobody was kissing her pee-pee before, no. And if she turns into a draugr, nobody will do it after uh... :classic_sleep:

 

                Plus my sisters aren't like yours, and Tryade already is very married with Belrand, you see ? So it doesn't makes sense at all, no. Maybe they became crazy inside ? :classic_wacko: »

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🤣Haha, oh man this was a good one! First of all, nicely done with the LoTR reference. 10/10. I burst out laughing when Malicia just poofed away when Urag was coming! Poor Prince 😧 And that song! I was like "oh, kinda romantic and subtle. This is nice. Wow-Oh!" I'll just say the beat of the song felt very immersive with the story ;) Amazing job!

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9 hours ago, Collygon said:

🤣Haha, oh man this was a good one! First of all, nicely done with the LoTR reference. 10/10. I burst out laughing when Malicia just poofed away when Urag was coming! Poor Prince 😧 And that song! I was like "oh, kinda romantic and subtle. This is nice. Wow-Oh!" I'll just say the beat of the song felt very immersive with the story ;) Amazing job!

Thanks Collygon ! Well, yeah, I'm weak to LOTR and DBZ references, so I couldn't resist with this one. And after all, Stranger also used his sword, isn't it ? And Malicia is capable of quite quick reactions when under major threat. ^^ About the "Trouble" song, though its a very demonstrative song, it featured simultaneously energy, sensuality, feminity, and some anime like goofiness that summed-up  so well Malicia that I knew I had to use it for her special moment.

 

Malicia : « I'm very glad you liked, Mr Collygon, 'cause Tirloque was very afraid people wouldn't love it 'cause I wasn't wearing white stockings, no. He was very concerned. :classic_angel: »

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3 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Thanks Collygon ! Wits a very demonstrative song, it featured simultaneously energy, sensuality, feminity, and some anime like goofiness that summed-up  so well Malicia that I knew I had to use it for her special moment.

 

Malicia : « I'm very glad you liked, Mr Collygon, 'cause Tirloque was very afraid people wouldn't love it 'cause I wasn't wearing white stockings, no. He was very concerned. :classic_angel: »

You know Trilog. In our country we have saying: "Every merchandise has a buyer."  You offered your merchandise and we like it a lot. :) 

 

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Tirloque was very afraid people wouldn't love it 'cause I wasn't wearing white stockings, no. He was very concerned. :classic_angel: »

Hahahahahahahahahaha.

Instead of hanging condoms on the trees Trilog should give you pair of stockings I gave to him :P

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1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

You know Trilog. In our country we have saying: "Every merchandise has a buyer."  You offered your merchandise and we like it a lot. :) 

Thanks Prince. And even if there were less buyers this time, there were also some who liked the merchandise and forgot to leave a like. And some who didn't even see it. So, as Devianna, Crw and Resdayn said there is a bit of randomness in the way entries are received, and time is necessary to confirm a tendency.

1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

Hahahahahahahahahaha.

Instead of hanging condoms on the trees Trilog should give you pair of stockings I gave to him :P

Malicia : « I wouldn't mind getting both at the same time, uh. :classic_excl: »

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