I like the ending, not that it's crazy original, but it's original for thee skyrim stories! I'm looking forward to see where you're going with this.

I personally also like the fact that you're moving more towards a NSFW direction. There's nothing wrong with having a couple of these screenshots in your story. Also Eira is becoming my favorite character of your blog!

Ayyyyy. That was a very hot chapter! I love a woman who takes what she wants like that ?

YAY!!! Wonderful chapter. I like the way lady Eira seduced Vigilant. It was too easy. I had to giggle because he reminded me on my Prince. He is soooooo easy to seduce. ?

Anyway, both parts of the story is excellent. Vulcun impresses me with his wisdom while Kiki is so simple and open to everyone. Have feeling that sometimes she is not aware of the danger behind her approach. I still like her. She has very nice character.

Compliments for the story.

I also thanking @SpyVsPie for helping you and my Ivy creating preset of Jessi for her. He is awesome guy.

1 hour ago, Alter Native said:

I like the ending, not that it's crazy original, but it's original for thee skyrim stories! I'm looking forward to see where you're going with this.

I personally also like the fact that you're moving more towards a NSFW direction. There's nothing wrong with having a couple of these screenshots in your story. Also Eira is becoming my favorite character of your blog!

Little bloody ghost girls have been done everywhere, but they are just so fun and creepy that I decided to 'spice up' Dawnguard a bit. ?

I know that Kiki's adventures were slow to pick up on the NSFW content. It was done mostly for story-telling purposes, as the emphasis of my comics is still on the story and dialogues. But I never said that all of the comic strips would be without adult material. After all - Kiki is on an epic quest to get laid. ?

Yes, I think Lady Eira and Baroness Karlov would find a lot of common ground. ? Glad you enjoyed this episode. ?

1 hour ago, SpyVsPie said:

Ayyyyy. That was a very hot chapter! I love a woman who takes what she wants like that ?

Honestly most of the thanks for the hotness of this chapter should go to you. I mean, you might get a sternly-worded letter from Cyrus after all the heretical torment he had to endure, but that's a small price to pay for having fully-functioning body parts. ? All the hugs and cookies from Aunth Nimhe are yours! ?

1 hour ago, EvalovesEP said:

YAY!!! Wonderful chapter. I like the way lady Eira seduced Vigilant. It was too easy. I had to giggle because he reminded me on my Prince. He is soooooo easy to seduce. ?

Anyway, both parts of the story is excellent. Vulcun impresses me with his wisdom while Kiki is so simple and open to everyone. Have feeling that sometimes she is not aware of the danger behind her approach. I still like her. She has very nice character.

Compliments for the story.

 

I also thanking @SpyVsPie for helping you and my Ivy creating preset of Jessi for her. He is awesome guy.

Thank you, Eva! Yes, I agree - @SpyVsPie is awesome!  Lady Eira pretty much gave Cyrus an ultimatum and our Vigilant was being pragmatic. He really didn't want to waste an extra day.

Kiki's spontaneous idea, backed by Vulcun's wisdom certainly helped their situation.  And you are correct,  Kiki is good-natured, but can be a bit oblivious to the threats around her. ?

6 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

I also thanking @SpyVsPie for helping you and my Ivy creating preset of Jessi for her. He is awesome guy.

5 hours ago, Devianna said:

 

Thank you, Eva! Yes, I agree - @SpyVsPie is awesome!  

Aww shucks 

Wow, and  those two really turns out into a good and interesting duo. ^_^ And I was somewhat really surprised by Cyrus' hairstyle   CuteTieAss

Ghosts! Ghost baby! uh... I catch a goosebumps ?

Yes, yes, lady Eira is my girl. Good story. Love it.

3 hours ago, Crw said:

And I was somewhat really surprised by Cyrus' hairstyle

Same here ?

5 hours ago, Crw said:

Wow, and  those two really turns out into a good and interesting duo. ^_^

Ghosts! Ghost baby! uh... I catch a goosebumps ?

I wouldn't say they are anywhere near "good", but they are certainly interesting. ?

Arrogant, manipulative dremora + arrogant, manipulative fanatic = fun for the whole family. ?

Yes, the ghost girl gives even me the creeps.  Glad you liked the episode. ?

5 hours ago, Crw said:

And I was somewhat really surprised by Cyrus' hairstyle   CuteTieAss

2 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Same here ?

Little-known info about Cyrus - in his youth in order to pay off his student loans he worked part-time as a model. In fact, his centerfold from "Hottest Vigilants Monthly" is still quite popular in all the college dorms. ?

2 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Yes, yes, lady Eira is my girl. Good story. Love it.

Lady Eira is certainly accustomed to getting what she wants when she wants it. ?

Thank you! We'll be seeing more of her soon. ☺️

1 hour ago, Devianna said:

Little-known info about Cyrus - in his youth in order to pay off his student loans he worked part-time as a model. In fact, his centerfold from "Hottest Vigilants Monthly" is still quite popular in all the college dorms. ?

Oh, you talking about this one?  
 

@Crw ???

1 hour ago, Crw said:

Oh, you talking about this one?  
 

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AHAHAHAHA...by the Divines...HAHAHA....I have tears in my eyes from laughter...Thank you! I love this! ??

Cyrus: How do people keep getting copies of these magazines?! I thought I burned them all. ?

3 hours ago, Devianna said:

AHAHAHAHA...by the Divines...HAHAHA....I have tears in my eyes from laughter...Thank you! I love this! ??

 

 ^_^ Glad that worked ^_^
 

3 hours ago, Devianna said:

Cyrus: How do people keep getting copies of these magazines?! I thought I burned them all. ?

Rose: « No, I'm absolutely not collecting them. ^_^ » 

Hah "Ms. Slayer"

This chapter had me going  "ohhhh" a lot

Like at the beginning, I was all, "Those 2 just need to fuck."

Then I was like, "ohhhh"

Then I was like, "Wait, I thought he was gay?"

Then I was like "ohhhh."

Then I was like, "WOW, shes naked, sweaty, and fucking."

then I was like, "oooooohhhhhh"

2 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Hah "Ms. Slayer"

 

This chapter had me going  "ohhhh" a lot

Like at the beginning, I was all, "Those 2 just need to fuck."

Then I was like, "ohhhh"

Then I was like, "Wait, I thought he was gay?"

Then I was like "ohhhh."

Then I was like, "WOW, shes naked, sweaty, and fucking."

then I was like, "oooooohhhhhh"

As long as those were nice "ooohs" then I'm glad. ?

The beauty of having dremora/vampire characters is that they live for such a long time that they end up experimenting with any gender (and sometimes species).

The beauty of having a Stendarr fanatical follower is that Cyrus is also pragmatic enough to do whatever he needs for his own mission. ?

Though I do not specifically mention it anywhere, my characters are rather open-minded in regards to their amorous escapades, but differ greatly in their sexual drives. (Vulcun doesn't care about sex as such, though he's very good at it; Kiki likes it but can't get it for now; Lady Eira is more about domination and self-gratification and Cyrus is...well...Cyrus ?)

And yes - Kiki the Slayer! Has a nice ring to it, doesn't it? ?

Why am I not surprised our friendly Dawnguard recruiter goes by the name of Durak .... I actually laughed out loud ?

I just read Kiki's story from part 1 to 22 (and ran out of upvotes, thanks so much Loverslab ....), and I'm hooked. I thoroughly enjoy your writing style and sense of humour. Your screenshots are also of the highest quality - it's the writing that got me, though, to be honest. And I never thought Eira would turn out to become one of my favourite chars in the story when you introduced her.

I, too, was surprised by Cyrus's hairstyle.

Harkon creeps me out.

I absolutely love Molag Bal's "BWAHAHAHAHAHAH"ing. I firmly believe every evil character should have a love for amusing themselves at the expense of others - and cookies. I know mine do.

1 hour ago, Ingun Black-Briar said:

Why am I not surprised our friendly Dawnguard recruiter goes by the name of Durak .... I actually laughed out loud ?

I just read Kiki's story from part 1 to 22 (and ran out of upvotes, thanks so much Loverslab ....), and I'm hooked. I thoroughly enjoy your writing style and sense of humour. Your screenshots are also of the highest quality - it's the writing that got me, though, to be honest. And I never thought Eira would turn out to become one of my favourite chars in the story when you introduced her.

I, too, was surprised by Cyrus's hairstyle.

Harkon creeps me out.

I absolutely love Molag Bal's "BWAHAHAHAHAHAH"ing. I firmly believe every evil character should have a love for amusing themselves at the expense of others - and cookies. I know mine do.

Oh my. First of all, thank you so much for such a high praise and your kind words. ☺️ It makes me happy to know that readers find enjoyment and laughter from Kiki's story.  ?

I know that the new ENB improved my screenshots somewhat, but it was always more about the writing for me and I'm glad people pick up on that. (ok, so maybe I got the enb mostly for Kiki to look cute in her dresses, it still counts! ?)

Lady Eira's addition to the story surprised even myself, if I'm being honest. She's undoubtedly evil and manipulative, but she's just so much fun to write for. ?

Cyrus prefers not to dwell on his hairstyle and hides it under the hood.

Harkon is...complicated. He might be a bit more 'human' in my stories, but I agree - he can definitely come off as a bit creepy. Being an ancient vampire might have that effect. ?

Yes! Thank you! I like that "BWAHAHA" for Molag as well. You picked up on it perfectly - Kiki's very existence amuses him, yet he is still terrifying even while laughing (or is it 'especially when laughing'?)

P.S. I didn't even need to come up with a name for the Dawnguard recruiter. It's right there in Skyrim's official lore. (and yup, I know that it can be translated to 'fool' - very fitting too. ?)

wow would not cum i get excited just looking at her super body made my day good story, ghosts ?

2 hours ago, wilson99 said:

wow would not cum i get excited just looking at her super body made my day good story, ghosts ?

Cyrus might've agreed to Lady Eira's demand, but he certainly wouldn't give her the satisfaction of seeing him weak or susceptible to her charms. That's exactly why she finds him curious now - he doesn't react to her the same way other humans do. ?

And yes, little girl ghosts - creepy. ?

Glad you liked it! ?

11 hours ago, Devianna said:

Cyrus might've agreed to Lady Eira's demand, but he certainly wouldn't give her the satisfaction of seeing him weak or susceptible to her charms. That's exactly why she finds him curious now - he doesn't react to her the same way other humans do. ?

And yes, little girl ghosts - creepy. ?

Glad you liked it! ?

I wonder how many times he can give in like that before he can't help it ?

16 hours ago, Devianna said:

Oh my. First of all, thank you so much for such a high praise and your kind words. ☺️ It makes me happy to know that readers find enjoyment and laughter from Kiki's story.  ?

I know that the new ENB improved my screenshots somewhat, but it was always more about the writing for me and I'm glad people pick up on that. (ok, so maybe I got the enb mostly for Kiki to look cute in her dresses, it still counts! ?)

Lady Eira's addition to the story surprised even myself, if I'm being honest. She's undoubtedly evil and manipulative, but she's just so much fun to write for. ?

Cyrus prefers not to dwell on his hairstyle and hides it under the hood.

Harkon is...complicated. He might be a bit more 'human' in my stories, but I agree - he can definitely come off as a bit creepy. Being an ancient vampire might have that effect. ?

Yes! Thank you! I like that "BWAHAHA" for Molag as well. You picked up on it perfectly - Kiki's very existence amuses him, yet he is still terrifying even while laughing (or is it 'especially when laughing'?)

 

P.S. I didn't even need to come up with a name for the Dawnguard recruiter. It's right there in Skyrim's official lore. (and yup, I know that it can be translated to 'fool' - very fitting too. ?)

? I think I've grown to like Eira because she tries so hard to appear like that super evil tough as nails über warrior of darkness, when in reality she's little more than a brat who's barely of age but wants All The Things. She's so full of herself it's endearing, because most of us felt similarly invincible when we were younger, I think ;D At the same time she clearly can't deal with "real adults" (Vulcun) without dissolving emotionally like the immature braggart she is. Plus, I find it very enjoyable to watch her struggle with sex when it actually involves some kind of intimacy and a person (first Vulcun, then Cyrus) rather than mindless carnal fucking. I think she's on a road to self-discovery

Or maybe I'm just a wannabe armchair psychologist and need to get out more.

3 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

I wonder how many times he can give in like that before he can't help it ?

Cyrus is very, very stubborn... but then again - so is Lady Eira. We'll have to wait and see. ?

2 hours ago, Ingun Black-Briar said:

 

? I think I've grown to like Eira because she tries so hard to appear like that super evil tough as nails über warrior of darkness, when in reality she's little more than a brat who's barely of age but wants All The Things. She's so full of herself it's endearing, because most of us felt similarly invincible when we were younger, I think ;D At the same time she clearly can't deal with "real adults" (Vulcun) without dissolving emotionally like the immature braggart she is. Plus, I find it very enjoyable to watch her struggle with sex when it actually involves some kind of intimacy and a person (first Vulcun, then Cyrus) rather than mindless carnal fucking. I think she's on a road to self-discovery

 

Or maybe I'm just a wannabe armchair psychologist and need to get out more.

Wow, I did not expect for anyone to pick up on this part so quickly. You've probably noticed that Lady Eira constantly calls Kiki a brat (due to the fact that the little redhead is 274 years old, which is rather young as far as noble vampires are concerned). But by dremora's standards, Eira herself is, as you accurately pointed out, ' barely of age'. In fact, if she wasn't so stuck up on playing the 'Big Bad', her and Kiki could've easily become friends.

You are also absolutely correct about Lady Eira's inability to deal with actual adults. She takes great pride in being a warrior and immediately assumes everyone who does not serve more aggressive Daedric Princes ( such as Molag Bal or Mehrunes Dagon) to be weaker than her. Which leads to her confusion when being faced with someone who doesn't fit into her image of a true fighter, but still exhibits such traits as strong will and self-control. In her mind, Vulcun and Cyrus should've been pushovers.  And while she sort of gained some control over Cyrus (at least that's what she thinks ?), Vulcun is a completely different case altogether.  She's definitely on the road to discovering more about herself. ?

I love your assessment of her character and it also gives me more insight into how readers perceive Lady Eira, which is incredibly helpful. So thank you! ?

14 minutes ago, Devianna said:

Cyrus is very, very stubborn... but then again - so is Lady Eira. We'll have to wait and see. ?

 

Wow, I did not expect for anyone to pick up on this part so quickly. You've probably noticed that Lady Eira constantly calls Kiki a brat (due to the fact that the little redhead is 274 years old, which is rather young as far as noble vampires are concerned). But by dremora's standards, Eira herself is, as you accurately pointed out, ' barely of age'. In fact, if she wasn't so stuck up on playing the 'Big Bad', her and Kiki could've easily become friends.

 

You are also absolutely correct about Lady Eira's inability to deal with actual adults. She takes great pride in being a warrior and immediately assumes everyone who does not serve more aggressive Daedric Princes ( such as Molag Bal or Mehrunes Dagon) to be weaker than her. Which leads to her confusion when being faced with someone who doesn't fit into her image of a true fighter, but still exhibits such traits as strong will and self-control. In her mind, Vulcun and Cyrus should've been pushovers.  And while she sort of gained some control over Cyrus (at least that's what she thinks ?), Vulcun is a completely different case altogether.  She's definitely on the road to discovering more about herself. ?

 

I love your assessment of her character and it also gives me more insight into how readers perceive Lady Eira, which is incredibly helpful. So thank you! ?

 

Oh, come on. Don't pretend Kiki and Eira aren't gonna end up being BFFs at some point (probably after she really really ruins her "mission" and ends up losing Big Daedric Daddy's allowance or something) *snickers*
No, honestly, that's why I enjoy your story so tremendously - the characters are a perfect blend of relatable, credible and immersive within the world of Skyrim. I admit I still have trouble placing Kiki (I'm not even sure if she's a Bosmer or what, but I probably skipped that part if it was ever explained). Oh, and entertaining. Very, very entertaining.

Except Harkon who is just creepy

They also remind me a lot of a group of characters I wrote about some years ago, which adds to my enjoyment. Granted, my stories were for a general/teen audience but the similarities are there.

I can't wait to see where you're going with this!

2 hours ago, Devianna said:

Cyrus is very, very stubborn... but then again - so is Lady Eira. We'll have to wait and see. ?

 

Well she better be careful, if she does end up breaking him the whole thing could really blow up and she might end up with a big mess on her hands. I mean it could really turn into a sticky situation. 

6 hours ago, Ingun Black-Briar said:

Oh, come on. Don't pretend Kiki and Eira aren't gonna end up being BFFs at some point (probably after she really really ruins her "mission" and ends up losing Big Daedric Daddy's allowance or something) *snickers*
No, honestly, that's why I enjoy your story so tremendously - the characters are a perfect blend of relatable, credible and immersive within the world of Skyrim. I admit I still have trouble placing Kiki (I'm not even sure if she's a Bosmer or what, but I probably skipped that part if it was ever explained). Oh, and entertaining. Very, very entertaining.

 

Except Harkon who is just creepy

 

They also remind me a lot of a group of characters I wrote about some years ago, which adds to my enjoyment. Granted, my stories were for a general/teen audience but the similarities are there.

 

I can't wait to see where you're going with this!

Kiki and Lady Eira as best friends? ? You know, my story is just crazy enough to pull something like that off ?. But we'll have to wait and see. Right now Kiki is on an important quest!

If you're asking what the actual race for Kiki's preset it  - it's dunmer. But story-wise her origin hasn't been discussed yet. ?

P.S. Your story sounds like a lot of fun! ?

4 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

 

Well she better be careful, if she does end up breaking him the whole thing could really blow up and she might end up with a big mess on her hands. I mean it could really turn into a sticky situation. 

Oh no. We have all seen what happened when your Cass ate cream-filled pastries. Murder! Confusion! Mayhem! Come to think of it - those are all the things that Lady Eira likes and she's certainly not afraid to get her hands dirty. ?