"Set things in Motion"...

Very great Chapter! I'm always amazed how well you set up fight scenes ? yeah they are short, but you manage to get to the point really quick?

Wish I could do that.

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12 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

"Set things in Motion"...

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Very great Chapter! I'm always amazed how well you set up fight scenes ? yeah they are short, but you manage to get to the point really quick?

Wish I could do that.

Yay, thanks Gukahn! I'm glad if you enjoyed that! 
Well, it's not my best fight scene, but in general I learned a couple of new tricks and I think in the future I will present something more in terms of staging fight scenes. ^_^
And I believe you can! It's just take some patience and time!
 

15 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

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Why did I just KNEW that wasn't dibella..

 

Because otherwise it wouldn't be really interesting, right?

Once again I thank you friend for an epic story with Aria being just enough mean enough for us all to love her for it. I look forward to the next part and hope at the end Aria is rewarded or punished for me mean deeds in this story

Aria: Gotta love getting a blowjob then going into a epic fight in less then 10 seconds! 

9 minutes ago, Crw said:

And I believe you can! It's just take some patience and time!

I will try in the near future. x_X gotta need to put all those blood assets to good use someday.

10 minutes ago, Crw said:

Because otherwise it wouldn't be really interesting, right?

True And she  makes a better Goddess then the real one actually

I very much like the pace of this one, the flow of events feel very natural to me.?

> My, all story is great as always, but my favorite scene was sex of Haelga and lady Dibella. Greatly done.

Lovley tuch change of dibella statue to something more  telling

i really like this fantastic epsiode :)

19 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Once again I thank you friend for an epic story with Aria being just enough mean enough for us all to love her for it. I look forward to the next part and hope at the end Aria is rewarded or punished for me mean deeds in this story

Thanks, Tex! It's a pleasure to work with you and your characters! The more I do scenes with Aria the more I like to work with her, and especially I love how contrast they look with Gwen ^_^

19 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Aria: Gotta love getting a blowjob then going into a epic fight in less then 10 seconds! 

Oh, wait and see what's coming next ^_^

19 hours ago, Gukahn said:

I will try in the near future. x_X gotta need to put all those blood assets to good use someday.

Collygon got some really cool assets, but you still need Jaxons Positioner to unlock their full potential.

16 hours ago, yorpers said:

I very much like the pace of this one, the flow of events feel very natural to me.?

Yay, many thanks, yorpers! I'm glad if you liked it and was smooth enough ^_^ 

15 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> My, all story is great as always, but my favorite scene was sex of Haelga and lady Dibella. Greatly done.

Lesbomancy, one of the best kinds of magic ^_^ 

Thank you Evaloves4 ^_^ glad to see you checking my stories

7 hours ago, Nonseen said:

Lovley tuch change of dibella statue to something more  telling

 

i really like this fantastic epsiode :)

 

Many thanks Nonseen ^_^ I really love editing such a minor details, this imo really sets an ambient. And it's a real pleasure when someone notices thise things ^_^

5 minutes ago, Crw said:

Lesbomancy, one of the best kinds of magic ^_^ 

Thank you Evaloves4 ^_^ glad to see you checking my stories

> I always do. Beside Spy's stories I like yours very much too.

9 minutes ago, Crw said:

Collygon got some really cool assets, but you still need Jaxons Positioner to unlock their full potential.

 

Yes I know, that's where I got the Slavetats for the wound effects I'm planing on using, thanks tho ? 

Dang it, fake dibella, you forgot your gosh darn textures again! ? The hazards of making anything glowy and pink ?.

I liked the way you did the closeup shots faded out over the main group shots during the conversation, that looked really nice. 

I think the all pink textures really drew attention to the old school/ low poly head during the fake dibella segment, ever considered upgrading her to a hi poly head? I think it's always worth it. The fisting segment also had a fair bit of clipping that I found a bit distracting. I never found physics/ in game collision to be ideally suited to story screenshots so I tend to manually adjust that stuff in bodyslide or outfit studio, possibly something to look into. 

Holy Juniper Pussies CRW!!! Well done! You're just getting better and better at this comic art. Makes me wonder if I have the right software to pull it of myself. Though I can hand draw it I would have to scan it or take a pictures. Action sequences can sure be a doozy. 

18 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Dang it, fake dibella, you forgot your gosh darn textures again! ? The hazards of making anything glowy and pink ?.

 

I liked the way you did the closeup shots faded out over the main group shots during the conversation, that looked really nice. 

Hah, thanks Spy! At least some part of that were nice

18 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

I think the all pink textures really drew attention to the old school/ low poly head during the fake dibella segment, ever considered upgrading her to a hi poly head? I think it's always worth it. The fisting segment also had a fair bit of clipping that I found a bit distracting.

To be honest, I didn't even think about it. This scene was born spontaneously, just because I had an idea how to make the character glow, but I did not take into account that all the _s; _sk and _n maps would be hidden behind "glowing" texture and the "features" of "highly detailed" headmeshes of Skyrim would become visible. Need to take it into account in the future. But to be honest I don't think HPH will really change anything, considering _n maps are not working.

18 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

I never found physics/ in game collision to be ideally suited to story screenshots so I tend to manually adjust that stuff in bodyslide or outfit studio, possibly something to look into. 

Yeap, HDT is pretty much garbage. I know that some people like YuiH do ABSOLUTELY everything in the OS and BS, but I have no idea how to make several variants for the "opened" vagina to be equipable, and compatible with a weight slider. But I think that there is a more elegant solution to this situation, but thanks for the idea.

14 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

Holy Juniper Pussies CRW!!! Well done! You're just getting better and better at this comic art. Makes me wonder if I have the right software to pull it of myself. Though I can hand draw it I would have to scan it or take a pictures. Action sequences can sure be a doozy. 

Yay, many thanks for the compliments, Jay!  I'm glad if you enjoyed that! 
Btw, I once streamed how to do this for Seirne, but generally @WANOBI12 have all the lessons you need to do the basic things in his blog ^_^

Nice chapter indeed, specially in terms of pace, since you alternated quickly between entertainment types, with almost no dead time. Also appreciated the Mortal Kombat like X-rays of cranial fractures and shoulder dislocation, which indeed added something to the clarity of the action. Some acrobatic parts felt a bit less clear however, although spectacular. Also appreciated the hidden demon sequence and the dragonborns debriefing, scenario wise. Quite the entertainment as usual ! ?

« Those daedras are so crazy one day they'll walk with a funnel on the head, uh. 

                But that Klaus guy, he looks very nice ! »

On 11/7/2022 at 1:16 PM, Tirloque said:

Nice chapter indeed, specially in terms of pace, since you alternated quickly between entertainment types, with almost no dead time. Also appreciated the Mortal Kombat like X-rays of cranial fractures and shoulder dislocation, which indeed added something to the clarity of the action. Some acrobatic parts felt a bit less clear however, although spectacular. Also appreciated the hidden demon sequence and the dragonborns debriefing, scenario wise. Quite the entertainment as usual ! ?

Thank you very much Tirloque, I am glad that you liked it!
Yes, I still try to make the narrative non-linear, and experiment with combat effects, I'm glad you noticed ^_^ 

On 11/7/2022 at 1:16 PM, Tirloque said:

« Those daedras are so crazy one day they'll walk with a funnel on the head, uh. 

                But that Klaus guy, he looks very nice ! »

 : « You're just jealous that it wasn't your bedroom. ? »

Ok, before I get into a more detailed comment - oh my gosh!! Emma just went all Mortal Combat on that guy! ?

She's a total adorable badass! I love it!!! ?

As always, there are just so many awesome parts to your entry.  Loved the vibration and the gradual change of Dibella's altar turning into one of debauchery the further the sex scene with Helga was progressing.  Really liked the dialogue between the girls ( "Do bees have knees?" - " It's just an idiom" - "Yeah, but that doesn't answer my question" ?). The whole fighting sequence was really well-made, and Gwen + Aria make a rather formidable duo. ? Plus this part was hilarious, especially with their expressions:

Of course, as usual, the most intriguing part for me was the last spoiler. All those dragonborns! It feels like each of them is a master of just a few thu'ums or at least each has their own specialization, so to speak. Which would make Gwen a really dangerous opponent as if she is harboring at least part of Alduin within her, then that would make her master of all of them. ? Also, the temple of Dibella is working alongside them? That's unusual, but I suppose it is a really interesting counterbalance to Sanguine's influence.  Ughhh, it's so curious and I need to know more! ?

Excellent entry once again, CrW.  Thank you for sharing it with us! ?

On 12/18/2022 at 10:50 PM, Devianna said:

Ok, before I get into a more detailed comment - oh my gosh!! Emma just went all Mortal Combat on that guy! ?

She's a total adorable badass! I love it!!! ?

: <<Uncle Tyranus said that a good person shouldn't use weapons to resolve conflicts. And I'm not using one, see? ?‍♀️ >>

On 12/18/2022 at 10:50 PM, Devianna said:

Loved the vibration and the gradual change of Dibella's altar turning into one of debauchery the further the sex scene with Helga was progressing. 

Yeah, I'm slowly getting back to corrupting maidens of Skyrim for a greater good of uncle San(guine). ^_^

On 12/18/2022 at 10:50 PM, Devianna said:

Of course, as usual, the most intriguing part for me was the last spoiler. All those dragonborns! It feels like each of them is a master of just a few thu'ums or at least each has their own specialization, so to speak. Which would make Gwen a really dangerous opponent as if she is harboring at least part of Alduin within her, then that would make her master of all of them. 

You are accurate and insightful as always, but this battle yet to come, and for now they all have other things to take care of. ^_^

On 12/18/2022 at 10:50 PM, Devianna said:

Also, the temple of Dibella is working alongside them? That's unusual, but I suppose it is a really interesting counterbalance to Sanguine's influence.  Ughhh, it's so curious and I need to know more! ?

Aura and her story is yet to be revealed, but yes, she is a dragonborn at the head of the Temple of Dibella. 

On 12/18/2022 at 10:50 PM, Devianna said:

Excellent entry once again, CrW.  Thank you for sharing it with us! ?

Thank you very much Devianna, for appreciating it that much.  ^_^