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Greetings, dear traveler?
I'm glad to present a new chapter for your attention!
Will there be a lot of indiscriminate sexual intercourse in it? - Sure!

Will the plot become clearer? - Perhaps!

Will you like it? - I hope!

 

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Your feedback, comments and ideas are always welcome ^_
And have a nice day
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Good job!

That sex scene felt a bit random though :O, but it'll all make sense in the end, I'm sure. ?

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30 minutes ago, toto68 said:

FROHES NEUES

Well, happy new year, pal ^_^

24 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Good job!

That sex scene felt a bit random though :O, but it'll all make sense in the end, I'm sure. ?

Thanks Alter! ^_^
But apparently something was not completely clear.
I'm not sure what exactly seemed random, if this is about behavior of the girls, then yes, it will make sense a bit later, and if it's about location where the scene taking place and falmers that appeared there...
 

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It's the same corner of the same place where girls find the hidden door in the first part, and a hole leading to a falmers tunnels.

 

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Well done ?

Little bit mournful that the Anna missed the warm bed =O but hopefully she can catch up with Misa on everything some other time ^-^

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Falmer stoles all the nun, Did Gauis spared the budget of defense? xd.

 

Story and reboot so far seems interesting, while world reseted Gwen remembers everything.

 

Curious

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Awesome Great chap! Was it me or this chapter was shorter than usual? Either way great performance... I mean great yob. :smiley::heart:;):thumbsup:

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Nice! I see a slight hint of beautiful girls pulled/trapped into the dark shadows by horny, and lust hungry creatures! Dipping a little into the horror thrill aspects I see. Hopefully I won’t be on the only one with a horror themed entry, although I’m now thinking about having my stories moved to the fantasy section instead of Horror.


Nice use of the beautiful warrior to stir things up around the convent, esp the scene with all of the nuns admiring her body.  I was worried that I did get two of your nuns confused as they had the same hair color and skin tone. But you fixed that for me later on in true horror fashion by getting  rid of one to the falmers  :)

 

11 hours ago, Crw said:

Well, happy new year, pal ^_^

Thanks Alter! ^_^
But apparently something was not completely clear.
I'm not sure what exactly seemed random, if this is about behavior of the girls, then yes, it will make sense a bit later, and if it's about location where the scene taking place and falmers that appeared there...
 

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It's the same corner of the same place where girls find the hidden door in the first part, and a hole leading to a falmers tunnels.

 

 

You also did an excellent job showing the poor girl pulled into the shadows by an (invisible?) force and we all probably assumed it’s her turn for sexy time!

If I’m thinking the same as Alter, the scene (Spoiler #3) did feel it was missing a transition to her depravity with the Falmers. I wouldn’t say it was abrupt, but I did scroll up thinking I missed a panel or something kind like this below ?

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This hits the spot perfectly for me. Look these nuns are having to supress all their natural lustful desires... the falmer have just heard of their suffering and are here to uhmmm... help. Yeah they're definitely just here to help. I'm certain there's no breeding cave back their in those tunnels or anything like that :D

 

Can't wait to see the hot lesbian energy over the inquisitor and scantily clad anti falmer expeditions.

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On 1/4/2021 at 9:29 PM, Deso561PL said:

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Thanks Deso ^_^
 

22 hours ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Well done ?

Little bit mournful that the Anna missed the warm bed =O but hopefully she can catch up with Misa on everything some other time ^-^

Many thanks Kin Tsuchi ^_^ Glad if you like it ^_^ 
Well... it's more like Misa is going to catch up with her, if you get my meaning ^_^
 

20 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Falmer stoles all the nun, Did Gauis spared the budget of defense? xd.

 

Story and reboot so far seems interesting, while world reseted Gwen remembers everything.

 

Curious

Stendarr's Church and all its structures are not subordinate to neither the empire nor its rulers, so I think Gauis just don't really care :D
Thanks Res ^_^ 

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20 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Awesome Great chap! Was it me or this chapter was shorter than usual? Either way great performance... I mean great yob. :smiley::heart:;):thumbsup:

Many thanks Jay, I'm glad if you like it ^_^ Well, yes, it turned out to be shorter than usual, but I was afraid to continue because further on it would become too long ? 

 

17 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Nice! I see a slight hint of beautiful girls pulled/trapped into the dark shadows by horny, and lust hungry creatures! Dipping a little into the horror thrill aspects I see. Hopefully I won’t be on the only one with a horror themed entry, although I’m now thinking about having my stories moved to the fantasy section instead of Horror.

Thanks Drunna! ^_^
In the beginning, I tried to lean closer to Horror, but I was not very good with it. So I just stopped.
You succeed in conveying the shades of horror and the very feeling of fear many times better and brighter, even though now you are closer to fantasy. I'm not sure what I'm missing.

17 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Nice use of the beautiful warrior to stir things up around the convent, esp the scene with all of the nuns admiring her body.  I was worried that I did get two of your nuns confused as they had the same hair color and skin tone. But you fixed that for me later on in true horror fashion by getting  rid of one to the falmers  :)

Although initially my blog was Rose-oriented, now I somehow imperceptibly realized for myself that Gwen as a character is closer and more pleasant to me.
And yes, this is my "favorite" method - you don't know how to develop a character - kill (deduce / delete) her\him :D 

17 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

If I’m thinking the same as Alter, the scene (Spoiler #3) did feel it was missing a transition to her depravity with the Falmers. I wouldn’t say it was abrupt, but I did scroll up thinking I missed a panel or something kind like this below ?

Hm, yes, now I understand that it wasn't just unclear, but totally unclear! Thank you for a demonstration, now I got it.

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5 hours ago, Skyrimdude said:

This hits the spot perfectly for me. Look these nuns are having to supress all their natural lustful desires... the falmer have just heard of their suffering and are here to uhmmm... help. Yeah they're definitely just here to help. I'm certain there's no breeding cave back their in those tunnels or anything like that :D

Yay, many thanks Skyrimdude! Of course, this is the kind of friendly falmers who help damsels in distress, yes :D 
Well, with that prediction you almost hit it! ^_^

5 hours ago, Skyrimdude said:

Can't wait to see the hot lesbian energy over the inquisitor and scantily clad anti falmer expeditions.

You know, where I'm from people say:
"Yuri > Dicks"

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-What did you use for those white action lines, where the force was pushing her down and then dragging her?

Photoshop with the dodge tool?

 

-Also I like your choice of “Mgh” for the sounds of someone having something stuffed in her mouth that’s not a gag. Finding the right onomatopoeia  to convey the right sex sounds is hard. Gonna be using that one in the future! 

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15 hours ago, Crw said:

 

Stendarr's Church and all its structures are not subordinate to neither the empire nor its rulers, so I think Gauis just don't really care :D
Thanks Res ^_^ 

No wonder, their budget seems so low <.<

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12 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

-What did you use for those white action lines, where the force was pushing her down and then dragging her?

Photoshop with the dodge tool?

I prefer and using paint.net for editing, it is faster and easier in some aspects. But in general, yes, it is something like this. Drawned white lines with zooming blur and transparency. It's hard to explain if we use different tools =( 

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interesting will the other girls find out what that girl was doing after they left her alone. Will we see more of the girl and the falmers.

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2 hours ago, Hiderius said:

interesting will the other girls find out what that girl was doing after they left her alone. Will we see more of the girl and the falmers.

Oh sure they will! Some of em even will have to repeat her experience ^_^

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Great chapter! The plot is starting to take shape. I love how you're approaching with a similar set up to the original, while tying in the original in as well. Lots of intrigue, mystery, and excitement. Well done!

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Quite the entertaining entry. I personally don't think the two sisters rape by the falmer was out of place, since we knew they were in such predicament from the previous entry. Loved the one being pulled by her legs, the air effect was subtle but noticeable enough, which is a compromise I do appreciate. The dialogues, though not proofchecked enough, were fluid and funny, with no weird sounding expressions. And the gifs quite fluid, with a nice progression in the lusty sisters enticement. So this remake, falmer version is quite the treat so far ! I would've hoped you'd push the horror further in the future though, but the choice is up to you. Great chapter ! :D?

 

Malicia : « Those sisters are very having weird ideas.

 

              It's what I was saying about those gals with the wolves, they should go to the tavern sometimes, or they gonna turn completely crazy in the head. :classic_confused: »

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19 hours ago, Collygon said:

Great chapter! The plot is starting to take shape. I love how you're approaching with a similar set up to the original, while tying in the original in as well. Lots of intrigue, mystery, and excitement. Well done!

Thank you so much Collygon! Glad you liked it! Actually, this is the whole idea, the combine everything that was learned before and to do better ^_^

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19 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Quite the entertaining entry. I personally don't think the two sisters rape by the falmer was out of place, since we knew they were in such predicament from the previous entry. Loved the one being pulled by her legs, the air effect was subtle but noticeable enough, which is a compromise I do appreciate. The dialogues, though not proofchecked enough, were fluid and funny, with no weird sounding expressions. And the gifs quite fluid, with a nice progression in the lusty sisters enticement. So this remake, falmer version is quite the treat so far ! I would've hoped you'd push the horror further in the future though, but the choice is up to you. Great chapter ! :D?

Thank you very much Torque, glad you like it! ^_^ Yes, I've been planning to do a little more in the direction of "horror", if you remember the very first parts were built with just such an idea ^_^

 

19 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Those sisters are very having weird ideas.

 

              It's what I was saying about those gals with the wolves, they should go to the tavern sometimes, or they gonna turn completely crazy in the head. :classic_confused: »

471655644_Emmaspeeks.png.823ac66783aab42ed223507539b24dfd.png« You are of course very right, Malicia!But you see, the problem is that the closest tavern of really-really far away... And besides, in modern conditions, visiting such places can be dangerous! We should always remember about social distancing and responsibility, yes. »

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hey so i was wondering if you have a link to the nun outfits you are using? because i was hoping to use them for a priestess of talos build i had planned.

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4 hours ago, johnathon648 said:

hey so i was wondering if you have a link to the nun outfits you are using? because i was hoping to use them for a priestess of talos build i had planned.

Sup! 
I guess u interested in this one - [NINI] Sister outfit.

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AH?MAY?ZING!???

 

Love the effects and story is very well put together. 

Holy sh*t I just realised that I missed a while load of these entries. Gonna have to catch up!

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