A good start of her story! : o like the build up and the "inner talk" to herself on her ideas ! Gona be good reading her story! 

Cute start! I like the protagonist already. This looks like it will be a lighthearted, fun story! I'm excited!

2 hours ago, Xonsamdi said:

A good start of her story! : o like the build up and the "inner talk" to herself on her ideas ! Gona be good reading her story! 

Thank you ?

Im glad to hear.

1 hour ago, Collygon said:

Cute start! I like the protagonist already. This looks like it will be a lighthearted, fun story! I'm excited!

Thank you ?

Im glad you like her, I was very worried how she turns out.

Knowing me we see how lighthearted it turns.

46 minutes ago, Jayomms said:

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Great set up and start, looking forward to how the story develops. 

This setup has the potential to turn into a really lighthearted and hilarious series! ?

Lady Ver is super cute! And she has a very noble goal in mind - to win the heart of Skyrim's (or in this case Bruma's) most desirable bachelor, the Crown Prince.   And the only thing she knows about him is that he's a good-looking womanizer.  I see no way anything can possibly go wrong there. ?

With your new ENB and textures your screenshots look even more gorgeous than before. And they seem to fit Lady Ver's personality rather well.

I can't wait to see where this story goes!

Wonderful work, Res! ?

Every adventurer starts with dagger.

Bruma !

8 hours ago, Devianna said:

This setup has the potential to turn into a really lighthearted and hilarious series! ?

 

Lady Ver is super cute! And she has a very noble goal in mind - to win the heart of Skyrim's (or in this case Bruma's) most desirable bachelor, the Crown Prince.   And the only thing she knows about him is that he's a good-looking womanizer.  I see no way anything can possibly go wrong there. ?

 

With your new ENB and textures your screenshots look even more gorgeous than before. And they seem to fit Lady Ver's personality rather well.

I can't wait to see where this story goes!

 

Wonderful work, Res! ?

Thank you ?

Im glad you like her, I was worried on her reception ?, but it seems everyone like her ^^.

I wonder how her heart winning attemps go ?

This new enb look quite good, my game visually hella pretty now, Im glad my screenshots carries the similar quality as before.

10 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great set up and start, looking forward to how the story develops. 

Thank you ?

3 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

Every adventurer starts with dagger.

Yep ?

thank you , good start looking forward to see how it goes  ?

4 hours ago, worik said:

Bruma !

 

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... and somehow, I am under the expectation that something horrible is already creeping in the shadows behind that inn. ? 

 

And I have no idea, why I have that thought.

 

I wonder why after the blood drinking leech tongue vampire, shadows with corpses, Defiler and now the nightmare demon <.<, ohhh yes and that thingy from Windhelm.

I feel you are suspicious of me. ?

16 minutes ago, wilson99 said:

thank you , good start looking forward to see how it goes  ?

Thank you ?

Your writing style and structure has a very playful, bounce when I was reading. Love the start of your story and the subtle 4th wall narration

Well, honestly I thought that her fu.. romance list would be a bit bigger ^_^
And she just ran away from the place where the most exciting romantic adventures awaited her!!!
 Believe me, I know what Im talking ?
Great start! I will wait for the continuation! ^_^

3 hours ago, Crw said:

Well, honestly I thought that her fu.. romance list would be a bit bigger ^_^
And she just ran away from the place where the most exciting romantic adventures awaited her!!!
 Believe me, I know what Im talking ?
Great start! I will wait for the continuation! ^_^

It is bigger, but she usually goes one hot guy per location as target ^^, I made more guys for a reason, was not easy to make them all relative attractive xd.

Knowing me, we all know its aint horse cock succubi there, more like some horrors from the abyss.

Fucklist, poor Lady Ver thinks if she kisses, she get pregnant ^^

Hmm, wait, where's the hostile, cold, depressing context, full of hatred, revenge and decadency ? Didn't expect that so I'ma head-out, but it was refreshing on the contrary ! Liking the lighthearted, naive tone, as well as the intertwining with lore (though Resdayn tuned ) and cameos from your own characters. Seeing Eliza that young makes you wonder if a date couldn't have been provided though, as the events of that amorous adventures must be unfolding one or two decades before current time. Anyway, technically, the shots are bright, vivid, with inviting expressions ; and the writing is alright (aside of minor details). So, so far so good !

On 1/1/2021 at 12:21 PM, Resdayn said:

Im glad you like her, I was worried on her reception ?, but it seems everyone like her ^^.

Malicia : « It's 'cause she looks very pretty, and very intelligent, yes.

                 She doesn't look very strong though, but everyone can't be perfect.  »

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Hmm, wait, where's the hostile, cold, depressing context, full of hatred, revenge and decadency ? Didn't expect that so I'ma head-out, but it was refreshing on the contrary ! Liking the lighthearted, naive tone, as well as the intertwining with lore (though Resdayn tuned ) and cameos from your own characters. Seeing Eliza that young makes you wonder if a date couldn't have been provided though, as the events of that amorous adventures must be unfolding one or two decades before current time. Anyway, technically, the shots are bright, vivid, with inviting expressions ; and the writing is alright (aside of minor details). So, so far so good !

 

Malicia : « It's 'cause she looks very pretty, and very intelligent, yes.

 

                 She doesn't look very strong though, but everyone can't be perfect.  »

 

I wondered what you gonna think of it haha, its not the dark fantasy horror you got used to ? And everyone in general, wait romantic comedy?

It wasnt easy to figure out writing a lot more light-hearted story with an unusual protagonist, well unusual from me ?

The mood and tone need suit the protagonist who is well our eccentric naive noble lady.

Unlike the Vengeful and Zealous Gwynolda or the Survialist immigrant Arilith, we got very different protagonist.

Technicly Eliza always looked young(lets be honest, narcistic person like her never want show age ?), even in my previous setting, if anything without her evil tongue and vampirism, you see how she is actually looking ^^.

Infact, I can say she even looks cute unironically.

During the screenshots and seeing her preset made me realise, she not really look threatening at all default, Gwynolda looks more menacing naturally then the mother.

but you know, having a creepy horror like tongue, being a vampire and eye bags helps her look more menacing and evil. ?

Timeline wise, Eliza has scars, so that means Gwynolda already born ?

I use different enb for the special edition <.<, this was remotely the closest, but lot of bleakness came from vanilla skyrim weathers, which sadly this version lacks.

On 1/2/2021 at 8:52 AM, devious-Drunna said:

Your writing style and structure has a very playful, bounce when I was reading. Love the start of your story and the subtle 4th wall narration

Thank you ?

8 hours ago, Resdayn said:

I wondered what you gonna think of it haha, its not the dark fantasy horror you got used to ? And everyone in general, wait romantic comedy?

 

It wasnt easy to figure out writing a lot more light-hearted story with an unusual protagonist, well unusual from me ?

 

The mood and tone need suit the protagonist who is well our eccentric naive noble lady.

I'm not only a seinen/shounen/adventure lover ; as long as the show is there I can be entertained by a variety of genres. Yet, as in everything, its not that easy to make good entertainment. So, the proof of the pudding will be in the eating.

Not literally, of course. =P

8 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Technicly Eliza always looked young(lets be honest, narcistic person like her never want show age ?), even in my previous setting, if anything without her evil tongue and vampirism, you see how she is actually looking ^^.

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Infact, I can say she even looks cute unironically.

 

During the screenshots and seeing her preset made me realise, she not really look threatening at all default, Gwynolda looks more menacing naturally then the mother.

 

but you know, having a creepy horror like tongue, being a vampire and eye bags helps her look more menacing and evil. ?

 

Timeline wise, Eliza has scars, so that means Gwynolda already born ?

Well indeed. She still has a somehow pretentious stance, but not threatening anymore. We will see if we get to see how she behaves in this more ordinary setting.

8 hours ago, Resdayn said:

I use different enb for the special edition <.<, this was remotely the closest, but lot of bleakness came from vanilla skyrim weathers, which sadly this version lacks.

Incidentally, that boost in colors and vibrance coincides with the lighthearted features of Vera. So, at the moment, it's a good thing.

19 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

I'm not only a seinen/shounen/adventure lover ; as long as the show is there I can be entertained by a variety of genres. Yet, as in everything, its not that easy to make good entertainment. So, the proof of the pudding will be in the eating.

 

Well this is first time, I make something not grimdark xd.

19 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

 

Well indeed. She still has a somehow pretentious stance, but not threatening anymore. We will see if we get to see how she behaves in this more ordinary setting.

 

Just because our protag sees the world in a naive manner, everything is very same as it was Gwynolda's. ?

Dont expect Eliza turn into like a nice lady ?

20 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

 

Incidentally, that boost in colors and vibrance coincides with the lighthearted features of Vera. So, at the moment, it's a good thing.

Makes the vibe more oblivion.

Looks like a nice start. You can tell you were maybe a bit rusty after a long Skyrim break in a few spots (no facelight in a few shots that would have benefitted from it and some without expressions) but for the most part things look great in the new setup. I really liked these shots, they have tons of personality:

Hope we get to see more ?

19 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Looks like a nice start. You can tell you were maybe a bit rusty after a long Skyrim break in a few spots (no facelight in a few shots that would have benefitted from it and some without expressions) but for the most part things look great in the new setup. I really liked these shots, they have tons of personality:

 

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Hope we get to see more ?

I never use facelight, dunno it always feels bit unnatural in terms of lightning.

and I always have shots, without expressions from time to time, like dunno I never saw people do constant facial expressions, like my face is usually blank 90% of time.

Ver still my most expressive character, with constant smile and expressions, unlike Gwynolda who is usually do blank face.

Yeah second chapter in progress.

On 12/31/2020 at 11:30 PM, Deso561PL said:

Every adventurer starts with dagger.

And a Bar Fight!!!

4 minutes ago, RamasesII said:

And a Bar Fight!!!

Hah!

good old DnD days.

Party meets at the bar/inn...

Fight breaks out, may include party, or not....

Guards come, Party bails,  Adventure ensues...

XP and Treasure for all.....

And months after, I have time to dive into this story, too.

I like her naivity.

And so far, it's quite a nice and romantic story... for you

6 hours ago, worik said:

And months after, I have time to dive into this story, too.

I like her naivity.

And so far, it's quite a nice and romantic story... for you

Hahahaha, Im glad you discovered this!.

Vera and her naivety >.<. haha

shush, its not horror <.<