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Lady Ver is quite naive. Seems she may end up biting more than she can chew! Nice job!

Oh no she better be careful😄

16 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

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11 hours ago, Collygon said:

Lady Ver is quite naive. Seems she may end up biting more than she can chew! Nice job!

She certainly naive and yes, this is bit way too much for a bite 🤭

6 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Oh no she better be careful😄

Certainly, she need to be 😁

Well, it looks like events are taking an unexpected turn for a Lady Ver.  

But let's believe that true pure lesbian love will save the day! ^_^ 

6 hours ago, Crw said:

Well, it looks like events are taking an unexpected turn for a Lady Ver.  

But let's believe that true pure lesbian love will save the day! ^_^ 

Certainly took a new turn, lets hope its not the worst 🤭

Lesbian love? 😁 ohh we talking Eliza.

Vivid and crispy shots as usual. You've got your personal style in storytelling as well, with a lot of first person point of view, which often provides a peculiar perspective. And though short, we've had an interesting sample of Ver's personality. Can't wait to see how this goes !

Malicia : « That Vera gal has nice ideas, but she's not doing them right, no. You need to talk to guys when they're there,

                 and princes are never there since they're rescuing people, you see ? Also you need to avoid the parents at first, yes.

                  Anyway, she should stay far from that Eliza lady, or she'll get kissed on the neck, with her blood sucked like a soup ->»

45 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Vivid and crispy shots as usual. You've got your personal style in storytelling as well, with a lot of first person point of view, which often provides a peculiar perspective. And though short, we've had an interesting sample of Ver's personality. Can't wait to see how this goes !

 

 

I think its a good to show character's thoughts and personalities and more perspectives.

Hoped these 2 chapter give some insights of Vera's personality, since she is the protagonist.

Yeah with Eliza and coming parts, it just getting ready for the true love story. 👼

45 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

Malicia : « That Vera gal has nice ideas, but she's not doing them right, no. You need to talk to guys when they're there,

 

                 and princes are never there since they're rescuing people, you see ? Also you need to avoid the parents at first, yes.

 

                  Anyway, she should stay far from that Eliza lady, or she'll get kissed on the neck, with her blood sucked like a soup ->»

She certainly thought, by being there he comes with white horse.

Eliza aint vampire here atm xd.

3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

I think its a good to show character's thoughts and personalities and more perspectives.

 

Hoped these 2 chapter give some insights of Vera's personality, since she is the protagonist.

 

Yeah with Eliza and coming parts, it just getting ready for the true love story. 👼

Upcoming parts. And it's indeed an efficient way to introduce us to personalities and points of views. 

3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

She certainly thought, by being there he comes with white horse.

 

Eliza aint vampire here atm xd.

Malicia : « Then that means this happened a long time ago, when Gwynolda was very a baby, yes.  »

3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Yeah with Eliza and coming parts, it just getting ready for the true love story. 👼

Malicia : « That's very suspicious. I very hope it's not all about pee-pee kissing again, uh.  »

Ah, Lady Ver reminds me of good old high school days:  see a cute guy ->imagine a whole romantic story with the said guy -> get upset that nothing works out the way you imagined.  In the meantime the guy in question doesn't even know you exist 😅 

Lady Ver's design and demeanor are perfect for that role : naive, romantically-inclined, completely oblivious of the actual realities of the world. I loved how confused the guards were by her seemingly random presence in the castle.

Though the whole chapter is highly entertaining, the best part for me was Eliza's reaction. 🤣 She looks so baffled by the whole situation (also she's gorgeous). I am really looking forward to seeing how their meeting will go.  It promises to be epic 😅.

Wonderful job, Res.  Thank you for sharing your story with us 🤗

Me before reading this:

Its a love story.

Me after reading this:

Its a love story.

I'm all for a good love story. Will our protagonist find her prince or will she just end up getting bitten by the mother(Totally not in a sexual way😉). Either way I'm looking forward to see how the plot develops.

13 hours ago, Devianna said:

Ah, Lady Ver reminds me of good old high school days:  see a cute guy ->imagine a whole romantic story with the said guy -> get upset that nothing works out the way you imagined.  In the meantime the guy in question doesn't even know you exist 😅 

 

Lady Ver's design and demeanor are perfect for that role : naive, romantically-inclined, completely oblivious of the actual realities of the world. I loved how confused the guards were by her seemingly random presence in the castle.

 

Though the whole chapter is highly entertaining, the best part for me was Eliza's reaction. 🤣 She looks so baffled by the whole situation (also she's gorgeous). I am really looking forward to seeing how their meeting will go.  It promises to be epic 😅.

 

Wonderful job, Res.  Thank you for sharing your story with us 🤗

Thank you 🤗

Ohh dear now you mention, I certainly feel some familiar situations in my elementary and high school life 🤣.

Im very happy Lady Ver works as intended and fully brings out her character. Yes Guard scene and her future interactions indeed want show, how out of reality she is.

Im glad you liked it, I thought it is the funniest scene in the chapter, Eliza we know goes "wat" haha. Yes the future interactions and chapters gonna be more exciting.

6 hours ago, Darkpig said:

Me before reading this:

 

Its a love story.

 

Me after reading this:

 

Its a love story.

 

I'm all for a good love story. Will our protagonist find her prince or will she just end up getting bitten by the mother(Totally not in a sexual way😉). Either way I'm looking forward to see how the plot develops.

Thank you 🤗

It is intended to stay a love story, so not horror like my latest works 👼, I did dwellve on the genre before even starting it, so I hope it gonna be an entertaining little fun thing.

I feel our heroine is unaware the fact, there are more things then hot guys, she not gonna forget easily the encounter with the mother.

🤣I always love a good mix up! Can't wait to see how this plays out.

3 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

🤣I always love a good mix up! Can't wait to see how this plays out.

This just gonna ger crazier 🤣

😁 That's going to be funny.

Eliza doesn't seem to be in the mood for jokes 

PS: your choice of clothing is absolutely perfect. 👍

5 hours ago, worik said:

😁 That's going to be funny.

Eliza doesn't seem to be in the mood for jokes 

 

PS: your choice of clothing is absolutely perfect. 👍

Only the best fashion in my stories hahahaha.

Gotta keep up with the latest trend.

She never do 🙁