Welcome back! @Dovahblood12 And lovely chapter.

Woah it got dark. I didn't expect that but I think I'm more interested now. Good stuff.

Well done! ? the graphics are much better in this chapter than in the last, I also liked how you improved your storytelling in this one. I sense some werewolf action in the future, but I'll let myself be surprised if I'm wrong. 

Nice !

Chapter 1 was hot as fuck and this one looks promising

Really in love with Brea!

She looks fantastic and the storyline is already shaping up to be great!

Amazing. I'm already hooked and hoping for more

On 12/30/2020 at 1:42 PM, Alter Native said:

Really in love with Brea!

She looks fantastic and the storyline is already shaping up to be great!

1 hour ago, Skyrimdude said:

Amazing. I'm already hooked and hoping for more

On 12/28/2020 at 9:20 AM, Kin Tsuchi said:

Well done! ? the graphics are much better in this chapter than in the last, I also liked how you improved your storytelling in this one. I sense some werewolf action in the future, but I'll let myself be surprised if I'm wrong. 

On 12/27/2020 at 12:08 PM, malvic said:

Woah it got dark. I didn't expect that but I think I'm more interested now. Good stuff.

On 12/27/2020 at 11:32 AM, Deso561PL said:

Welcome back! @Dovahblood12 And lovely chapter.

Thank you all for the comments. Very much appreciated given the amount of time it takes to make. ?

I really love how this is edited, its very well done, great work.

On 1/5/2021 at 6:48 PM, ther1pper said:

I really love how this is edited, its very well done, great work.

Thank you   

Ohh, well what started as an extremely light story actually developped into something more complex ! Great job with the dilemmas and dialogues here, not to mention the colors, viewpoints and expressions are quite good ! There's something that might've to be watched for though : the reading order. You often start with the first bubble being the first on the right, then the second being the one on the top left, and that's the exact contrary of what it should be.

It's left to right, then top to bottom : the first one to be read on an European/American comic will be the bubble the most on the left, then right ; and the ones on the top will be likely be read before those on the bottom as well .

Anyyway, that put aside, I like the styling of your bubbles ; and pleasantly surprised to see this developing towards a full fledged story. I should catch up soon.

Malicia : « Bera looks very intelligent and very brave, yes.

               Though Cecilde told me about that Sinmir guy and the little girl, so she should be more careful, uh. »