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Where to start?

- the scene setting is brilliant

- the dialogues funny and creative

- the facial expressions are wonderful

- the characters are interesting 

- the little emotes and memorizations are refreshing

 

Just love your series so far by a lot! Keep on ? 

 

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7 hours ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Where to start?

- the scene setting is brilliant

- the dialogues funny and creative

- the facial expressions are wonderful

- the characters are interesting 

- the little emotes and memorizations are refreshing

 

Just love your series so far by a lot! Keep on ? 

 

 

It's nice to read comments of what you think. 

Thank you. ?

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I agree with those who already commented. It is really nicely done ! I love the characters and funny dialogues :)

I'm gonna read the first chapter now ?

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Really nice job! I love all of your sound/action effects throughout the story. There were one or two times where your action/sound caption was placed in a spot that I had missed (the part where she was patting her head and forgot the other place).

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Wow, it turns out I missed the previous part of your story, but I caught up with it in no time.
Delightful story, brilliant technical execution, adorable and charming main heroine (Redhead-freckled ^_^, yay!) and a cherry on top - bestiality ^_^
More of a dog person's on LL nowadays!
Great job Dovahblood12!

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