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Side(?) story. Shadow legacy. Part 2


Crw

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Greetings, dear traveler?

Honestly It was very difficult. I could not imagine that the sexualization of star wars, so that it would look adequate is such a difficult task. But I hope I have dealt with this right.

Still...
I am pleased to introduce the second part of this adventure!
What awaits our heroes? Fights? Of death? Betrayal? A bit of everything? Or all at once? See below and find out.

 

And once again... 
...may the force serve you well ?

 

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Thank you for your time ^_


 

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1 minute ago, Deso561PL said:

Dis lookin good!

 

Saph: So i ended as sith whore? Well i hope they pay better.

Glad if you like it ^_^
to Saph: They use the word Acolyte for this. :D I think...

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Great job!

I love the combat aesthetics and the posing. Having laser/glowing swords is actually a really good way to make combat in dark area's visible, which, I think, is another reason why I like them so much!

I'm a bit surprised you went for a lot of the Skyrim like locations instead of using something like aehter suite which lends itselves more towards the Star Wars aesthetics.

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26 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

Great job!

I love the combat aesthetics and the posing. Having laser/glowing swords is actually a really good way to make combat in dark area's visible, which, I think, is another reason why I like them so much!

Oh, thanks Alter, glad if you like it ^_^
And definitely they stylish as fk ^_^

27 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

I'm a bit surprised you went for a lot of the Skyrim like locations instead of using something like aehter suite which lends itselves more towards the Star Wars aesthetics.

Yeah, I checked aether suite before, and I must admit, he would delightfully be suitable for presenting modern locations, like Coruscant with its lower levels or Nar Shaddaa.
But what I like about this universe is that it is huge, and in addition to modern locations there can be found ancient temples on the edge of the galaxy, which, it seems to me, fit perfectly into the scenery of Skyrim. Imo ofc ^_^ 
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It is always nice to see, that your Ideas never ends.

I like all of  your Stories, but i am missing your Succubi Nuns a bit^^

 

One of the reasons, why sometimes the Sith are the more interesting Side. - They know to have fun^^ Jedi Codex sux^^

 

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6 hours ago, zilvradrow said:

It is always nice to see, that your Ideas never ends.

I like all of  your Stories, but i am missing your Succubi Nuns a bit^^

 

Many thanks Zilvradrow ^_^ Well-p nuns a bit busy right now with stuff, mostly lewd. Hope they ll back asap. ^_^

6 hours ago, zilvradrow said:

One of the reasons, why sometimes the Sith are the more interesting Side. - They know to have fun^^ Jedi Codex sux^^

true! ^_^
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2 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Great Work Padawan Son! Simply Fantastic! May The 4th Be With You. :mrgreen::heart:;):thumbsup:  

Yay, thanks Jay ^_^ Glad you like it ^_^
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Is that...are they...are they members of the Order of Revan? 😱 Getting rid of both the Sith and the Jedi certainly sounds like something the Revanites might do. 😮

I love your Rose and Co stories, but now I am seriously intrigued with this one! 😳 We need to see how their plan will unfold!

 

Your battle scenes are just amazing. I could practically hear the whooshing sounds of light-sabers. And your subtle humor is always great! "And I thought Sith relationships are complicated" - so much sass in that one line. 🤣

Of course special praise also goes to new and innovative ways of using the Force in the bedroom. 😅

 

And Abigail! She's just as cute as a jedi as she was as an inquisitor. This is just a separate world in which she exists, right? It's not some complicated and twisted timeline-magic-change thingy from the Rose and Co Skyrim universe?  (Personally I'm ok with either of those, I'm just trying not to get confused ☺️ )

 

Wonderful work, Crw! Cannot wait for more! 🤗

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Nice use of the Mage Sex Poses for the force!

I admit, I was also planning to do a Jedi type story later based on a story outline I wrote a while back. Was gonna start on it once I  got to a certain point with my Dark Ascension Story. I dont know how is it you and I have the same mindset/ideas for these stories.

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This is really well done, and extremely impressive that you can make something that feels so "Star Wars" using this game. Is there no end to what Skyrim can do? 

 

(The answer is no. No there isn't) 

 

Your imagery is beautiful and well shot. The dialogue is good and the story here has definitely piqued my interest. I'm a bit new to the story telling scene here so I'll admit that this is the first piece of yours I've read, but now I'm gonna have to go back and catch up! 

 

Great job! 

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Saph: I I think master Deso got plan for me...

 

Deso: Yep! You become actually no longer WoW OC.

 

Saph: Oh?

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9 hours ago, Devianna said:

Is that...are they...are they members of the Order of Revan? 😱 Getting rid of both the Sith and the Jedi certainly sounds like something the Revanites might do. 😮

I love your Rose and Co stories, but now I am seriously intrigued with this one! 😳 We need to see how their plan will unfold!

 

Your battle scenes are just amazing. I could practically hear the whooshing sounds of light-sabers. And your subtle humor is always great! "And I thought Sith relationships are complicated" - so much sass in that one line. 🤣

Of course special praise also goes to new and innovative ways of using the Force in the bedroom. 😅

 

And Abigail! She's just as cute as a jedi as she was as an inquisitor. This is just a separate world in which she exists, right? It's not some complicated and twisted timeline-magic-change thingy from the Rose and Co Skyrim universe?  (Personally I'm ok with either of those, I'm just trying not to get confused ☺️ )

 

Wonderful work, Crw! Cannot wait for more! 🤗

Oh, many thanks Devianna, I'm glad you like it ^_^ I myself like the Revanites theme, and the whole idea in particular ^_^ It seems to me that if there are two answers to the same question(Dark and Light side), then both of them are not true, truth though somewhere in the middle. 

Setting up fights with laser swords is qualitatively different from conventional edged weapons. And in fact, it caused problems, here in most cases everything is solved with one sweep. :D 
If I had the Force, it would also be used in the bedroom, but rather to clear the mess. :D 
I will send Abi a praise, thanks ^_^ well, I prefer to think of it as a cameo. ^_^

Thanks once again, Devianna ^_^

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6 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Nice use of the Mage Sex Poses for the force!

I admit, I was also planning to do a Jedi type story later based on a story outline I wrote a while back. Was gonna start on it once I  got to a certain point with my Dark Ascension Story. I dont know how is it you and I have the same mindset/ideas for these stories.

Yay, thanks ^_^ In fact, it happened by chance. I was just sorting through the available scenes when I suddenly saw it. I think that Force were on my side that day. ^_^
Well, this has already been created, in general. First B0LT, a few years ago, then Tex recently created short stories on star wars. In general, each of them contributed to motivating me in creating this story. Maybe it's your turn now, huh? :D 

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2 hours ago, LexiAJ82 said:

This is really well done, and extremely impressive that you can make something that feels so "Star Wars" using this game. Is there no end to what Skyrim can do? 

 

(The answer is no. No there isn't) 

 

Your imagery is beautiful and well shot. The dialogue is good and the story here has definitely piqued my interest. I'm a bit new to the story telling scene here so I'll admit that this is the first piece of yours I've read, but now I'm gonna have to go back and catch up! 

 

Great job! 

Hay, many thanks, Lexi ^_^ Glad if you like it ^_^
Well, if you gonna try and catch up, that might take a while. :D There are a lot of them, and in retrospect some of them are now somewhat ashamed. It was a long time ago..
But anyway I'm happy if that's so ^_^  

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33 minutes ago, Deso561PL said:

Saph: I I think master Deso got plan for me...

 

Deso: Yep! You become actually no longer WoW OC.

 

Saph: Oh?

She seems is going to have fun and rough times, right? :D 

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22 minutes ago, Crw said:

She seems is going to have fun and rough times, right? :D 

That depends.

 

Saph: On what?

 

Deso: On artists.

 

Saph: Oh.

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Good job with the lightsaber fights, it must've been a drag finding suitable poses, and most of the time the effect was comparable to full fledged SW stories. Though the clarity of the fights sometimes wasn't perfect, your movement arcs also combined pretty well with the sabers' halos, making the whole thing quite pleasing visually. Also compliments on the plot, managing to create the unexpected and integrate it consistently with the whole scenario (though aren't mind tricks are supposed to work only on weak minds, mmh ? :classic_tongue:). Some difficulties also on the language (we've got job to do => we've got work to do), but that's minor. And a rather coherent integration of the sexual elements in your SW universe, which made sense in many ways. Great chapter ! :smiley:👌

 

Malicia : « That gal got tricked 'cause she had a very weak blonde mind, uh ; but Ms Abigail won't fall for it, no. :classic_sleepy:

 

                She should be careful not to do too much weights lifting though, otherwise people are gonna notice the veins on her arms, you see ? 😗 »

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On 3/26/2020 at 4:59 PM, Tirloque said:

Good job with the lightsaber fights, it must've been a drag finding suitable poses, and most of the time the effect was comparable to full fledged SW stories. Though the clarity of the fights sometimes wasn't perfect, your movement arcs also combined pretty well with the sabers' halos, making the whole thing quite pleasing visually. Also compliments on the plot, managing to create the unexpected and integrate it consistently with the whole scenario (though aren't mind tricks are supposed to work only on weak minds, mmh ? :classic_tongue:). Some difficulties also on the language (we've got job to do => we've got work to do), but that's minor. And a rather coherent integration of the sexual elements in your SW universe, which made sense in many ways. Great chapter ! :smiley:👌

 

Malicia : « That gal got tricked 'cause she had a very weak blonde mind, uh ; but Ms Abigail won't fall for it, no. :classic_sleepy:

 

                She should be careful not to do too much weights lifting though, otherwise people are gonna notice the veins on her arms, you see ? 😗 »

Yay, ^_^ many thanks Triloque ^_^ yeah, I must admit that was pretty complicated. 

 

Well, considering a mind-trics... trust is a key to many gates. But I just didn't know how to show it. Its pretty complicate to show the trick itself without spoiling a part of a twist) 

 

But thanks, your notes are the one that always helps me to understand what I can do better ^_^

 

 

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18 hours ago, Crw said:

Yay, ^_^ many thanks Triloque ^_^ yeah, I must admit that was pretty complicated. 

 

Well, considering a mind-trics... trust is a key to many gates. But I just didn't know how to show it. Its pretty complicate to show the trick itself without spoiling a part of a twist)

Then show it early, in the first chapter maybe. The moment where you prepare your twists are up to you, but I've read somewhere that it's good for a story to prepares its twists, so that they appear logical when pulled later. :classic_smile:

18 hours ago, Crw said:

But thanks, your notes are the one that always helps me to understand what I can do better ^_^

Malicia : « You're very welcome Mr Crw. :classic_sleepy:

 

               You can also tell Abigail she can still do this -> gym-girl.gif?w=1084&ssl=1 and this -> original.gif. Just not that -> dribble-motion_1.gif , no. :classic_lightbulb: »

 

 

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On 3/28/2020 at 2:27 AM, Tirloque said:

Then show it early, in the first chapter maybe. The moment where you prepare your twists are up to you, but I've read somewhere that it's good for a story to prepares its twists, so that they appear logical when pulled later. :classic_smile:

Damn, you're right. I'm so used to improvising that it seems like I forgot how to plan further than for a single chapter.

 

On 3/28/2020 at 2:27 AM, Tirloque said:

  You can also tell Abigail she can still do this -> gym-girl.gif?w=1084&ssl=1 and this -> original.gif. Just not that -> dribble-motion_1.gif , no. :classic_lightbulb: »

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