That nightmare cant be easy to wake up from a dream like that and still focus on the tast ahead. Arilith is strong! \o/ and those guards fuuuuuuuuck them with a burning metal poke in their ass!!!!  Hope she can help Frea tho : o she seem badass! and as always you leave on a cliffhanger so i want more! xD awesome written as your other storys! keep it up! ! and dont leave me hanging here on the cliffhang xD 

Oh, I see you back for Arilith storyline, that's great ^_^ 

And I see some changes in Freay's look... ir its just the lights? 

Great shots ^_^

Sooo, it seems you have some time after all ! And it's pleasing to see it employed for Arilith's remake, which was on hold since quite a while despite having almost as much potential than your main storyline. Graphically, (and while the DoF is a bit strong on some outdoors shots) the colors, outfits, expressions and ambiance are as immersive as ever.

And it's also a pleasure to reconnect with the ethnic minority theme, which seems like a leimotiv in some of your stories (the dunmers in Windhelm, the Reachmen in Markarth). Now this entry wasn't that eventful (specially compared to your last ?), but having Arilith starting to take the reins of her life shows as much promise than having Gwynolda finally doing so. And we've got Frea as a bonus. The next entries will have potential !

Malicia : « Looks like Arilith is having forced honey-honey nightmares. She should very find a friend to talk to her about it, yes.  »

5 hours ago, Xonsamdi said:

That nightmare cant be easy to wake up from a dream like that and still focus on the tast ahead. Arilith is strong! \o/ and those guards fuuuuuuuuck them with a burning metal poke in their ass!!!!  Hope she can help Frea tho : o she seem badass! and as always you leave on a cliffhanger so i want more! xD awesome written as your other storys! keep it up! ! and dont leave me hanging here on the cliffhang xD 

Thank you ?

Yeah, that nightmare was brutal, Arilith handled it well and yeah guards and the regime is not nice to her at all.

30 minutes ago, Crw said:

Oh, I see you back for Arilith storyline, that's great ^_^ 

And I see some changes in Freay's look... ir its just the lights? 

Great shots ^_^

Thank you ?

It just the enb and she wearing official army uniform.

Frea never had a chance to show herself in the current visuals.

And yeah back to Arilith.

23 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Sooo, it seems you have some time after all ! And it's pleasing to see it employed for Arilith's remake, which was on hold since quite a while despite having almost as much potential than your main storyline. Graphically, (and while the DoF is a bit strong on some outdoors shots) the colors, outfits, expressions and ambiance are as immersive as ever.

And it's also a pleasure to reconnect with the ethnic minority theme, which seems like a leimotiv in some of your stories (the dunmers in Windhelm, the Reachmen in Markarth). Now this entry wasn't that eventful (specially compared to your last ?), but having Arilith starting to take the reins of her life shows as much promise than having Gwynolda finally doing so. And we've got Frea as a bonus. The next entries will have potential !

 

I thought she deserves some chapters before the year ?

Arilith story always had potential to reach the same quality as Gwynolda's one both tale of my prime example of story telling. ?

Im pretty satisfied the chapter visually, everything worked as intended, some shots just very eye pleasing, and I honestly missed Arilith ?

Well the dunmer aka Arilith's time in Windhelm always planned thing, so this rework is an old concept, its effectively how I wanted her story from the start, but as an storyteller I lacked the skills to tell, now I can.

Yeah, for my two main project, the ethnic minority, discrimination, and hatred is core themes, while different yet similar style, these themes hold a lot of potential storyline telling and interesting tales and perspectives.

In Arilith's case, she remain dunmer, so her treatment varies, while Gwynolda outside of the reach are no longer face similar treatment.

Arilith already took controll her life despite barely arrived in Windhelm and take steps for it, while Gwynolda needed to left Markarth to start make her own decisions, in this chapter she actually got around for a dangerous job.

It was eventful, just not as much like Gwynolda's act 5, its more comparable toward her previous chapters.

Frea joins as some sort of support character for this monster hunting, and we gonna get a detective horror mix with the already existing themes.

44 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Looks like Arilith is having forced honey-honey nightmares. She should very find a friend to talk to her about it, yes.  »

She don't really have friends.

thank you for get this Story going again i was Looking Forward to it  , i like your Girl  ?

Just now, wilson99 said:

thank you for get this Story going again i was Looking Forward to it  , i like your Girl  ?

Thank you ?

Yeah, its been time to get this some chapters too, cause truly been a quite a while since Arilith.

Woohoo! Arilith is back!? And she's as beautiful and bad*ss as ever!

It was nice to see at least one half-decent guard. The older man wasn't particularly friendly but it seems he was just doing his job (unlike his partner who was just leering at the poor girl).

Frea looks great and it's also a bit amusing to learn that while she was placed into a position of investigator, she doesn't know how to read. Either her superiors are incompetent or they are simply trying to keep her away from danger and just randomly gave her something to do.

The screenshots are as amazing as always. Can't wait for the next chapter! Wonderful job! ?

5 hours ago, Devianna said:

Woohoo! Arilith is back!? And she's as beautiful and bad*ss as ever!

It was nice to see at least one half-decent guard. The older man wasn't particularly friendly but it seems he was just doing his job (unlike his partner who was just leering at the poor girl).

Frea looks great and it's also a bit amusing to learn that while she was placed into a position of investigator, she doesn't know how to read. Either her superiors are incompetent or they are simply trying to keep her away from danger and just randomly gave her something to do.

 

The screenshots are as amazing as always. Can't wait for the next chapter! Wonderful job! ?

Thank you ?

I agree, Arilith is damn pretty and cute, honestly I wanted make a chapter with her, cause I missed her ?

Yeah, tried show, not every guard and soldier horrible as the ones she meet, however she still treated as the other dark elves. Arilith would been pretty bad situation if she not bluffed in the right time, jail or the others play with her. She was lucky with the gear and Raynil's things, as well Frea looked someone to help in the monster.

Been quite a while since Frea got a role, and we can enjoy her now as supporting char for Arilith's story, we never saw her actually with my current visuals ?.

That was the intention, Frea is muscle and not brain, yet she was put into the investigation, also the entire team can't read actually outside of Arilith.

Actually that is mix of a few things, like wartime and lack of soldiers to handle the investigation, the general leadership is ain't the most competent, since the better ones on the civil war front, while the less good ones handle the defense and security.

Im happy with the screenshots and we see what happens the next time. ?

Really beautiful screenshots in this entry! Your game looks incredible. It's been such a long time since this storyline got an update I had nearly forgotten it, but am now reminded of how much I enjoy it. Looking forward to more!

4 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Really beautiful screenshots in this entry! Your game looks incredible. It's been such a long time since this storyline got an update I had nearly forgotten it, but am now reminded of how much I enjoy it. Looking forward to more!

Thank you ?

Well enb and dof just a tools, using it with my screenshooting experience makes the pics truly and the images in my mind for it.

Indeed, been quite a while for poor Arilith, but I thought she deserves an update.

Yay finally some more Arilith! Not sure if it's just the lighting of WIndhelm or what but I think these were your best looking screenshots to date.

44 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Yay finally some more Arilith! Not sure if it's just the lighting of WIndhelm or what but I think these were your best looking screenshots to date.

Yeah, been a while since she got something.

And thanks ?

Probably Windhelm, in my visual setup it looks hella epic and sets the mood.