Poor Arilith, not very familiar with the cock. 

Is that netch always there or is that from a mod?

3 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Poor Arilith, not very familiar with the cock. 

 

Is that netch always there or is that from a mod?

Well general idea of that scene is to shown Arilith's unfamiliarty of Skyrim and its creatures, like she had in her old version.

I thought make sense, Arilith lived in her life in morrowind,c reatures of Skyrim gonna be "alien" to her

Its from the Dawn series, yeah mod.

lol, Feathered-Cliffracer....
Good job, but feels a little bit emh... like nothing significant happend^_^
^_^

20 minutes ago, Crw said:

lol, Feathered-Cliffracer....
Good job, but feels a little bit emh... like nothing significant happend^_^
^_^

I know she should get raped to death by Rolff moment she stepped in the city ?

Anyway, either way this kind of entry was necessary to get started the stuff I wanted

I agree with Crw here, it feels a bit short and uneventful. That being said the entry is still a pleasant read, with a very palpable "refugee" feel imbued into it... But too short.

Liked the unexpected sides of the hen and the netch, that being said. Also the clothes of your characters seem so superior to the ones of mines, I downloaded Bethesda's HD texture pack but I don't think they considered fixing Malicia's dress with it.

Malicia : « That's a chicken, Arilth. It's very important, 'cause they lay eggs so you can bake cookies and breton crepes, you see ?  »

5 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Poor Arilith, not very familiar with the cock.

Malicia :

17 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

I agree with Crw here, it feels a bit short and uneventful. That being said the entry is still a pleasant read, with a very palpable "refugee" feel imbued into it... But too short. Liked the unexpected sides of the hen and the netch, that being said. 

 

I mean, I can't help it, this part of the story is ended up this, next time it will move on the points I want, but what could be done here, it was her exploring a bit the quarter and see a bit happy mood after the horrible mess she experienced, like this part could be just called "Arilith finally feels good".

I couldn't put any exicitng event or something there, due how i planned the future chapters and events of her story

Should she just really assulted by the guard due just existing, would be more eventful

I wanted showcase with the chicken and the netch the duality of "Morrowind alien world" feel of us, while us Morrowind is very unusual, for Arilith it is Skyrim, wich suggest she gonna have deal with "alien" creatures of this land and the nordic culture.

Despite being shitty in the Gray quarter, she feels familiar feel of her home, thus making her feel comfortable.

17 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

Malicia : « That's a chicken, Arilth. It's very important, 'cause they lay eggs so you can bake cookies and french crepes, you see ?  »

 

She lived in Morrowind, creatures she think normal would be weird for you Malicia.

42 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

I mean, I can't help it, this part of the story is ended up this, next time it will move on the points I want, but what could be done here, it was her exploring a bit the quarter and see a bit happy mood after the horrible mess she experienced, like this part could be just called "Arilith finally feels good".

 

I couldn't put any exicitng event or something there, due how i planned the future chapters and events of her story

 

Should she just really assulted by the guard due just existing, would be more eventful

 

I wanted showcase with the chicken and the netch the duality of "Morrowind alien world" feel of us, while us Morrowind is very unusual, for Arilith it is Skyrim, wich suggest she gonna have deal with "alien" creatures of this land and the nordic culture.

You did quite well, and I think sex with a guard would've been unnecessary. My point wasn't to add lewd content, but just to add more content, would it be solely character development or Arilith meeting a cow socializing with her fellow dunmers. Yet the read was good, and you transcribed what you wanted quite accurately.

42 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

She lived in Morrowind, creatures she think normal would be weird for you Malicia.

Malicia : « I know, that's why I told her how to use eggs !

                 Besides, I've already been to Morrowind, though I saw no cliff bakers, no.  »

5 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

You did quite well, and I think sex with a guard would've been unnecessary. My point wasn't to add lewd content, but just to add more content, would it be solely character development or Arilith meeting a cow socializing with her fellow dunmers. Yet the read was good, and you transcribed what you wanted quite accurately.

 

Thanks ?

That wasn't really serious, just more of bit of mocking, I did not planned to have lewd content in this chapter.

No matter how I structured and planned, either this chapter needed to be done.

In the coming ones I can move on the plot points I want.

Not sure how eventful maybe the next time, but plot will move.

5 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « I know, that's why I told her how to use eggs !

 

                 Beside, I've already been to Morrowind, though I saw no cliffbakers, no.  »

Did you saw flying chickens without feather? ?

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

Did you saw flying chickens without feather? ?

Malicia : « Nope. But I saw flying medusas and flying dinosaurs. Plus the flying things who've got a mouth on their tummy and who burp very loud.  »

Poses and expressions are perfect, light and scenes are well chosen.

Story is ok, but the solitude she lives through there should have been a stronger influence. Hm.. lacks drama, so to say. I'd chose a dog - or a cat. Dog, yeah. More aggressive, more of a threat... well, you'll get the idea.

3 minutes ago, Swiftstep said:

Poses and expressions are perfect, light and scenes are well chosen.

Story is ok, but the solitude she lives through there should have been a stronger influence. Hm.. lacks drama, so to say. I'd chose a dog - or a cat. Dog, yeah. More aggressive, more of a threat... well, you'll get the idea.

Thanks ?

Well she wasn't really that much in Solitude, she is now due being a foreign place.

In the coming parts I can actually get start working on the events truly, now she is truly in Windhelm. ?

Not sure on the dog part.

The desolate feel of "immigrant" quarter mixed with an innocent unfamiliarity regarding the domestic species of Skyrim sets up a perfect parallel to the state of Arilith's mind. Everything around her is cold, sad, unwelcoming and at the same time new, strange and maybe a little bit curious. You did a marvelous work in showing it.  And the scene with the netch is just so cute. ☺️

Judging by that last screenshot, things are about to go really bad for poor Arilith again, aren't they? ? (usually the phrase " there are a few things we should talk about regarding your life here" does not lead to "We'll give you food, lodging, set you up with a nice job and you'll be completely fine." ?)

......? things seem ok for now

26 minutes ago, Devianna said:

The desolate feel of "immigrant" quarter mixed with an innocent unfamiliarity regarding the domestic species of Skyrim sets up a perfect parallel to the state of Arilith's mind. Everything around her is cold, sad, unwelcoming and at the same time new, strange and maybe a little bit curious. You did a marvelous work in showing it.  And the scene with the netch is just so cute. ☺️

 

Judging by that last screenshot, things are about to go really bad for poor Arilith again, aren't they? ? (usually the phrase " there are a few things we should talk about regarding your life here" does not lead to "We'll give you food, lodging, set you up with a nice job and you'll be completely fine." ?)

Thank you ☺️

Finally someone got my intention and my plans for this entry, that what I was going for in this entry, it may uneventful compared the other ones, but it needed to be done for the future entries.

Well your sucpicion has its bases, Arilith time not gonna get any easier, and it may get worser, real problems start just now, after all she just arrived to Windhelm.

7 minutes ago, Jayomms said:

......? things seem ok for now

For now yes ?

I was glad reading Arilith isn't said any more and I hope she won't have a wet dreams with Argonians any more. There are much cuter dark elves

7 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

I was glad reading Arilith isn't said any more and I hope she won't have a wet dreams with Argonians any more. There are much cuter dark elves

Well argonians not gonna be focus for the coming chapter, her dreams gonna be abut different stuff. ?

Very good screenshots. I hope life in Windhelm would go on better for her.

50 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

Very good screenshots. I hope life in Windhelm would go on better for her.

Thank you ?

No life in Windhelm is good, even for the cloaks, let alone of dunmer girl, but Arilith not give up. ?

Hey hey! Looks like things actually are turning around, at least a little. Great job, Res!

On 5/14/2019 at 7:31 AM, Resdayn said:

Thank you ?

 

No life in Windhelm is good, even for the cloaks

Windhelm was one of the bigger missed opportunities in the game IMO, the background material makes it out to be so much darker than it seems in game. Then there's my usual issue with the pitiful size of Skyrim cities that just does not do it justice. 

8 hours ago, Collygon said:

Hey hey! Looks like things actually are turning around, at least a little. Great job, Res!

Thank you ?

Yeah finally, she can be a bit more joyful in that city.

5 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Windhelm was one of the bigger missed opportunities in the game IMO, the background material makes it out to be so much darker than it seems in game. Then there's my usual issue with the pitiful size of Skyrim cities that just does not do it justice. 

Missed opportunities is common word for everything in Skyrim let alone just Windhelm.

Just city got a massive content cut down with many things wich could made it darker.

I think from the 3D TES games, skyrim has smallest cities.

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

Thank you ?

 

Yeah finally, she can be a bit more joyful in that city.

Missed opportunities is common word for everything in Skyrim let alone just Windhelm.

 

Just city got a massive content cut down with many things wich could made it darker.

 

I think from the 3D TES games, skyrim has smallest cities.

True enough, but I'm sure you've heard me complain about the scale of SKyrim cities enough times now ?

2 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

 

True enough, but I'm sure you've heard me complain about the scale of SKyrim cities enough times now ?

Opposed the previous games, we can only do size increase of the minor holds and other towns, big cities stuck in that size, few mode can it make somewhat better.

But yes, we talked about the subject a lot ?

9 hours ago, Resdayn said:

 

Opposed the previous games, we can only do size increase of the minor holds and other towns, big cities stuck in that size, few mode can it make somewhat better.

 

But yes, we talked about the subject a lot ?

Well we need to gate off the cities so console players can handle them... it's for the greater good ?