[Unity-3D , 3D-Adventure]Abandoned : A tale of forgotten lives (version 1.00 Final))

[merder]

wait people actually wanted to win the second fight? *mind blown*

[dr4cos]

^^ I have the quirk since metalgear soild. The fight against Psycho Mantis, or maybe a other name, he could read your "Mind" and you need to switch the controler port to beat him. After some fights the mayor said this as a tipp, sadly this was bugged at my end never got the messege . Had to worked for 2 days to beat him without knowing this xD. Since then I try to beat all fights . But since there are fights, you could never win, therefor my question

[Loveryus]

Kerny, you're my personal hero! Great work! The story is really good!

Here a few things I don't like:

- Fighting mode (i guess your still working on it)

- Hacking (I don't understand it... Even after watching the tutorial.)

- Dialogues in the beginning are very repetetive and long.

- Not sure if this is something I don't like, but it really annoys me how well suited the main character is to me. It's like we're soul mates with all the insecurities and shit.  It's kind of annoying for me to see the real world problems in such a cool setting.)

[alpalia]

Kerny, you're my personal hero! Great work! The story is really good!

Here a few things I don't like:

- Fighting mode (i guess your still working on it)

- Hacking (I don't understand it... Even after watching the tutorial.)

- Dialogues in the beginning are very repetetive and long.

- Not sure if this is something I don't like, but it really annoys me how well suited the main character is to me. It's like we're soul mates with all the insecurities and shit.  It's kind of annoying for me to see the real world problems in such a cool setting.)

 

hacking system is rpetty eaasy in fact.. here how it work (its not real one, just an grotesque exempl)

 

000 = 0

001 = 10

100 = 100

010 = 2

 

you need to wait until the 3 number of the first "block" appear, as exempl, if the first block show you :  110

 

that mean you need to "create" this number with the hack you have.. for that , you need 100 + 010 , and then you calcul the correspondant number and put the result in the block

as for this exemple i took 100 (wich correspond to 100 and 010 wich correspond to 2) the result you need to put is "102"

you do that for all block with appropriate number result and tadaaa !

 

i dont get it first time, but after you got it, its simple to calcul the result

(few exempl)

 

111 =112

110 =102

011 = 12 (or 012)

 

i hope this help you to got it , i cant explaint more better by text message :/

[Kerny]

- Fighting mode (i guess your still working on it)

 

Unfortunately i do not have much time therefore i concentrate more to add elements.

This is why i am really slow currently , i only have the weekends to create more for the game.

As i mentioned many times before.. just a hobby

Please do not expect a good game... pretty please

 

- Hacking (I don't understand it... Even after watching the tutorial.)

Oh my xD

I thought the hacking game would be too easy since you could just win by not hacking any important nodes and just go on to the main databases.

 

 

- Dialogues in the beginning are very repetetive and long.

 

 

The whole storys i create is ahm.. i would just say *not complex + not good* since i create the story spontanously.

But i don't want to plan the story throughly because i don't like it

[Loveryus]

Haha... That's cool! If you do this for fun and manage to get something that awesome done, you're pretty much a genius.

 

Sorry about not getting the hacking part. I'm really not good with mathematics and coding. Reading your explanations doesn't make it better aswell. Just more confusing. Like when I do a tax declaration.

 

How long did this game take you to work on so far?

[Stoppinby]

Read all the posts, can't find an answer.

 

Is there a way to lose, remove, the speech box to see a full screen of an event.

 

e.g with Vivian in the handcuffs etc the speech box is covering some of the action

[Kerny]

Haha... That's cool! If you do this for fun and manage to get something that awesome done, you're pretty much a genius.

 

Sorry about not getting the hacking part. I'm really not good with mathematics and coding. Reading your explanations doesn't make it better aswell. Just more confusing. Like when I do a tax declaration.

 

How long did this game take you to work on so far?

Mh.. when did i start to make this game.. ahmm. i think it was october 2015 when i first started to make a level for this game (the hangar bay was the first on.. apperantly)

(But! Lost my job in that time due to low workload therefore i was faster than i am today , Now i have a job again and therefore i am slower >.<)

 

 

Read all the posts, can't find an answer.

 

Is there a way to lose, remove, the speech box to see a full screen of an event.

 

e.g with Vivian in the handcuffs etc the speech box is covering some of the action

 

I could make a shortcut who hides the textures of the speechbox if you want to.

Maybe *page down* to hide it and *Page up* to bring it up again ?

[Stoppinby]

That would be fantastic.

 

I take it there is no crouch button, not a biggy just wondered

 

This game is excellent, can't praise it enough  

[fsunolez75]

 

Kerny, you're my personal hero! Great work! The story is really good!

Here a few things I don't like:

- Fighting mode (i guess your still working on it)

- Hacking (I don't understand it... Even after watching the tutorial.)

- Dialogues in the beginning are very repetetive and long.

- Not sure if this is something I don't like, but it really annoys me how well suited the main character is to me. It's like we're soul mates with all the insecurities and shit.  It's kind of annoying for me to see the real world problems in such a cool setting.)

 

hacking system is rpetty eaasy in fact.. here how it work (its not real one, just an grotesque exempl)

 

000 = 0

001 = 10

100 = 100

010 = 2

 

you need to wait until the 3 number of the first "block" appear, as exempl, if the first block show you :  110

 

that mean you need to "create" this number with the hack you have.. for that , you need 100 + 010 , and then you calcul the correspondant number and put the result in the block

as for this exemple i took 100 (wich correspond to 100 and 010 wich correspond to 2) the result you need to put is "102"

you do that for all block with appropriate number result and tadaaa !

 

i dont get it first time, but after you got it, its simple to calcul the result

(few exempl)

 

111 =112

110 =102

011 = 12 (or 012)

 

i hope this help you to got it , i cant explaint more better by text message :/

 

 

Your way of explaining this sucks.  It's simple.  For the hacking, all you're doing is translating a binary number (base 2) to the normal base 10 counting system everybody is taught in school.

 

Binary counting only deals in 0s and 1s.  So rather than counting 0, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, in binary it's as follows.  (I'll use 4 digit places for this)

0000, 0001, 0010, 0011, 0100, 0101, 0110, 0111, 1000, 1001.  The biggest number the game uses is 7, so you can forget the last 2.

 

Here's a more visual representation I found on wikipedia.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Binary_number#/media/File:Binary_counter.gif

[alpalia]

sorry, i m not english... so try to explain calcul in english when you barely can make an correct dial without typo and shit in english...

not easy for me..

 

 

[Zalzany]

Got to say I found this browsing a large list of games, and I actually looked today for a patron page I was so impressed, normally I don't do patron I seen to many try to milk it to get out of holding a real job and just spend the same amount of time on the project they would have if it was a hobby doing just enough to keep the money going and milk it for the next year or more so they can relax.

 

Anyways I liked it so much I looked to see if there was a patron for it to do a tiny little support plan. I like that this isn't a sell out, just trying to make cash venture though, and its really your actual passion. I can't wait to see more of this.

[alpalia]

how the devlopment goes ?

 

(just put it up, for let peoples know that this game is NOT "abandonned"  )

[Kerny]

how the devlopment goes ?

 

(just put it up, for let peoples know that this game is NOT "abandonned"  )

 

 

Awww.... and i thought the topic could just vanish into the deep darkness so i have time for the next update.,

But...If you want some detailed info

( Beware.. spoilers! )

 

 

What is already done for the next upgrade :

 

-Some technical changes with a aroused value counter (hidden , will increment if something is attached to the girls)

 

- Aemi/Vivian Chastity bra added

- Aemi/Vivian Chastity Belt added

- Aemi/Vivian Vibrators (the mini ones added)

- Aemi/Vivian inflatable plug added

- Aemi/Vivian dildo added

- Aemi/Vivian aroused events added

- Aemi/Vivian Change clothes dialouge added

- Aemi/Vivian Remove devices added

 

- Added A lightsource you can place yourself in a given area

- Added a *machine* to place yourself in a given area

- Aemi -> event for this machine added

 

 

 

What i still want to do :

 

- Vivian event for the placeable machine

- Vivian/Aemi make the placeable machine a repeatable event.

- maybe include more things to place

- maybe add a script to make spellcorretion in runtime

- maybe add a non H event where you can play something with the girls (a card game.. a board game or something like that)

 

 

 

[alpalia]

sorry.. didnt wanted to disturb you :/

just let peoples know about this cool game ( as most of peoples dont go far after they see "abandonned" on the title ^^

 

here ideas :

 

 

- shower scene (non H)

- Shower scene (H , sexual or peep)

- mini game  hide and seek with the girls (maybe add it on the non H minigame you mentionned)

- if possible... eventually....possibility to change clothes of the player (we not see him alots but still can be cool to choose 2-3 clothes)

 

 

[Darkening Demise]

So Aemi will forever not have the 'proper equipment' during this story?

[MoeffG]

So Aemi will forever not have the 'proper equipment' during this story?

What do you mean with proper equipment?

[merder]

if you mean more humanlike hands imo they are glovelike enough for me to not want her to get fully human hands(glove fetish )

[ticky09]

I actually really like this game. It's very good looking and fun so far. I would like to see more clothing customization, but so far I've only just gotten Aemi to the lab for the first time. And for being just an alpha/beta it's very nice. I lol'd really hard at Victor's arm, though. His left arm is really something special.

I would absolutely love for more games to follow your lead. Maybe some with a female player character, corruption through events, maybe 3rd person and without the special arm. xD

 

Overall I think you are setting an AWESOME tone of style for future adult games. This is fantastic so far. I'm loving it.

 

 

EDIT--

 

In addition to all this, this is DEFINITELY something I would support on patreon. It is SO much better than all of the RPGMaker titles out there. I made a thread in here on how adult indie games are sliding down a slope of complacency and just repetitiveness. They're all built from one shoddy engine that does little for the imagination, though there are a few titles out there that are still great due to their story content and the way hentai is delivered. 

 

That being said, I LOVE your title so far. Again through story progression I would love to slowly corrupt (i have a corruption fetish if you can't tell) Vivian. And to choose more outfits for them would be fantastic. 

 

Your work here is CERTAINLY worthy of being supported on patreon. This is a very fun game. All you need is someone to spellcheck you and maybe offer the player more chances to choose their own options rather than letting Victor control everything. Make the player feel like they're more in control of the game and story. 

 

What I'd like to see is a few more dialogue options where I CAN be more of an ass if I want to, just something to make it feel less like I'm playing through a movie. Other than the clothing (which you already have plans for, I saw in your main post) and the lack of dialogue or path options for the player, this is a wonderful game. 

[Sural Argonus]

I like games like this...and Unity seems to be a nice engine.  Gonna check it out.  Also yes...Hongfire is a nice site.  I dunno about 4Chan...Those people kinda scare me.  hahah

[fc2015]

I would suggest a pokergame with and without H content, like a ask/tell/dare/strip game.

 

For example you could learn more about Vivians past, what brought her into her current state, past choices, regrets, family.

Aemi could ask things about her current observations, past observations and just general questions that for a non-human isnt very clear.

Dare may include just silly goofs and pranks with the characters which may included H content. Could also include earning favors for the future if the character decides not furfil the dares, I mean whatever you would feel is possible and you would like yourself, after all its you doing all the work and its your game

 

BTW, when will the patreon be up?. I mean you put alot of your free time developing the game and sharing it for free.. you could stick to that, or try accept a token of appreciation from me and other I'm sure, don't look at it like a claim from our side, try look at it as a dinner or a beer from a fan that like your work. The game looks very promising and unique what I know and you nailed it with the storyline and I hope to see more funny and nice updates in future because you got me hooked on your art.

 

Peace out 

 

 

[Sural Argonus]

I already back 4 games at $10 each...I can't afford to do anymore, but I guarantee I would if I could.

[fc2015]

 

So Aemi will forever not have the 'proper equipment' during this story?

What do you mean with proper equipment?

 

 

Aemi said in early dialoge that she had intensions of procreation, maybe that what it means? time will tell

[Kerny]

I would suggest a pokergame with and without H content, like a ask/tell/dare/strip game.

 

For example you could learn more about Vivians past, what brought her into her current state, past choices, regrets, family.

Aemi could ask things about her current observations, past observations and just general questions that for a non-human isnt very clear.

Dare may include just silly goofs and pranks with the characters which may included H content. Could also include earning favors for the future if the character decides not furfil the dares, I mean whatever you would feel is possible and you would like yourself, after all its you doing all the work and its your game

 

 

A pokergame is a good idea. Simple to code and simple to understand. I could programm a strip poker game where you can buy several attachments to the body of Aemi/Vivian to distract them from the game. (Maybe some aroused animations included.. mh...)

 

But i need a penalty if the player lose the game. What about that ? What could the girls demand from Victor ?

 

 

BTW, when will the patreon be up?. I mean you put alot of your free time developing the game and sharing it for free.. you could stick to that, or try accept a token of appreciation from me and other I'm sure, don't look at it like a claim from our side, try look at it as a dinner or a beer from a fan that like your work. The game looks very promising and unique what I know and you nailed it with the storyline and I hope to see more funny and nice updates in future because you got me hooked on your art.

 

Peace out

 

I want to be honest with all of you.  Currently the game progression is very slow because my normal job.

And i am currently afraid of starting a patreon campaign because the guys who would help me would (for sure) expect me to be a fast worker and do it all without bugs and stuff.

To put it simple : I am afraid of losing my freedom ..and i am just a little hobby game creator.

Currently i can afford the game assets and new daz 3d clothes from my own so i do not need a patreon campaign right now.

And after i finished this game i would like to continue with one of my old works (Cell shock / mamono wars ) and i think nobody would like to play such games with anime chars.

 

Okay.. but now i have to create Vivians animations for the placeable machine

 

[alpalia]

 

But i need a penalty if the player lose the game. What about that ? What could the girls demand from Victor ?

 

 

 

submit...droid domination...

 

or maybe block the player to do naughty thing to her for some time (would be cool to have an time implent in the game) like, no sex stuff for 10 hours ( ingame hours, based on something like 1h = 10minutes irl )

that... will push me to play more carefully for sure