Nice one! Allthough personally i could bang both.

52 minutes ago, Deso561PL said:

Nice one! Allthough personally i could bang both.

Lol, he will as well. 

Great work  

Nicely done - looks, setting, visual effects (stunning!), but still.. 15 year old... I don't know. Isn't that pushing it?

7 hours ago, Swiftstep said:

Nicely done - looks, setting, visual effects (stunning!), but still.. 15 year old... I don't know. Isn't that pushing it?

The lady is not, she's just using a spell to look younger. About the kid, well actually in some cultures 15-16 years old is old enough.

I didn't want to use 18 years old version of him because i'll be using it the future. I just wanted him to be a kid who just hit puberty and introduced to this side where he sees a naked girl and gets pervy.

I am sorry if it upset you in some way.  

2 hours ago, Milesaz said:

The lady is not, she's just using a spell to look younger. About the kid, well actually in some cultures 15-16 years old is old enough.

I didn't want to use 18 years old version of him because i'll be using it the future. I just wanted him to be a kid who just hit puberty and introduced to this side where he sees a naked girl and gets pervy.

I am sorry if it upset you in some way.  

Thanks for the feedback. And sorry that you get me wrong. I'm not sure if it's okay to use young bodies on old soulds (so to say), but before you run into trouble, I'd suggest asking an admin - just to make sure. Or maybe I'm just being over-cautious :)

47 minutes ago, Swiftstep said:

 

Thanks for the feedback. And sorry that you get me wrong. I'm not sure if it's okay to use young bodies on old soulds (so to say), but before you run into trouble, I'd suggest asking an admin - just to make sure. Or maybe I'm just being over-cautious

Oh ok, No problem. I will look into it.

Thanks for the info.

Well, technically the visuals are well crafted, and it feels like rendering it yourself gives you got some possibilities (for the effects in particular, the diving shots are quite aesthetic visually). Now I guess there's more work than while using a game to do so, and you've got a bit more limitations (Gaya's younger body and Frelena's look very alike) on other aspects. As for the comic story aspect, it was a pleasant discovery and I hope you go on that way ; but if I had to give you an advice it would be to drop numbers on the bubbles (rather immersion breaking, and won't change were the eye will go first) and to take in account reading order instead : readers will read from top to bottom, and in Europe/USA from left to right. So first bubbles should always be the ones on top, and if on the same height, the ones on the left. Anyway, your story feature bodies more generous than the usual, and had a quite humorous vibe in this one, so with the visuals you've got so original strengths to take profit of. Nice start !

9 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, technically the visuals are well crafted, and it feels like rendering it yourself gives you got some possibilities (for the effects in particular, the diving shots are quite aesthetic visually). Now I guess there's more work than while using a game to do so, and you've got a bit more limitations (Gaya's younger body and Frelena's look very alike) on other aspects. As for the comic story aspect, it was a pleasant discovery and I hope you go on that way ; but if I had to give you an advice it would be to drop numbers on the bubbles (rather immersion breaking, and won't change were the eye will go first) and to take in account reading order instead : readers will read from top to bottom, and in Europe/USA from left to right. So first bubbles should always be the ones on top, and if on the same height, the ones on the left. Anyway, your story feature bodies more generous than the usual, and had a quite humorous vibe in this one, so with the visuals you've got so original strengths to take profit of. Nice start !

lol I know about the reading order, but i made it that way because of the space i had on the images which is why i added number so a reader can see which line is the first. This was my first attempt at making comic strips, my main focus always has been about the scene and how characters are looking in it and how they are using the space. I will try to be careful next time.

Yeah i was also skeptical about the bubbles, believe me there were a lot more lol and I don't know why the water iray wasn't working properly, I even had to remove the after image effect from the bubbles because they were looking like sharp blues/red etc instead of how bubbles look. But yeah I think less bubbles are better and i will keep that in mind, Thanks for the advice.  

Which aspects of younger gaya and frelena's are you talking about which looker similar? Can you please elaborate.

Because I made Gaya's younger self just by adding youth modifier and decreased the Voluptuous modifier than I added weight to cheeks and Jaw line then lower the scaling of the body as well.

Where as Frelena's face looks different (yeah i admit on the nose part because i like that kind of nose so i am using similar nose almost on all of my characters but still not exactly the same), her body is more Voluptuousy and heavy with more muscular tone as well.

Here side by side comparison for all three (face only)

(Frelena, Gaya then Younger Gaya) as you can see even the nose is different between frelena and Gaya (young and adult both have same).

1 hour ago, Milesaz said:

lol I know about the reading order, but i made it that way because of the space i had on the images which is why i added number so a reader can see which line is the first. This was my first attempt at making comic strips, my main focus always has been about the scene and how characters are looking in it and how they are using the space. I will try to be careful next time. 

I'd advice to use longer tails on the comic bubbles if you find out the first one to be read isn't the one that comes first when reading. 'cause no matter what you do with numbers, the eye will still go first to the first thing it sees.

1 hour ago, Milesaz said:

Yeah i was also skeptical about the bubbles, believe me there were a lot more lol and I don't know why the water iray wasn't working properly, I even had to remove the after image effect from the bubbles because they were looking like sharp blues/red etc instead of how bubbles look. But yeah I think less bubbles are better and i will keep that in mind, Thanks for the advice. 

On some screens they looked good, in others a bit less. This is one example where they looked good, and it's indeed one of the screens where they are the smallest :

1 hour ago, Milesaz said:

Which aspects of younger gaya and frelena's are you talking about which looker similar? Can you please elaborate.

Because I made Gaya's younger self just by adding youth modifier and decreased the Voluptuous modifier than I added weight to cheeks and Jaw line then lower the scaling of the body as well.

Where as Frelena's face looks different (yeah i admit on the nose part because i like that kind of nose so i am using similar nose almost on all of my characters but still not exactly the same), her body is more Voluptuousy and heavy with more muscular tone as well.

The proportions of the body itself (legs, posterior, waist to hips ratio, breasts and so on) rather than the face in fact. Which becomes more obvious from side views for example :

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

The proportions of the body itself (legs, posterior, waist to hips ratio, breasts and so on) rather than the face in fact. Which becomes more obvious from side views for example :

 

Oh you are talking about body type, well yes they are similar in that way, just size are different like Gaya has smaller breasts/Butt/waist where Younger gaya is more slimmed down and frelena is really thick. Because I am using my signature body type called ZGGB(my skyrim body mods) "a kind of Brazilian female body shape".

I don't know why in the above image Younger Gaya looks like she as a big ass like frelena but actually she doesn't. Yes the type of the body is similar "Proportions like you said", all of my main female characters have with little bit changes here are there but the general shape is similar and on that part you are totally right.

If you'll see my other entries then you'll know lol

Here an example of Gaya with all three shapes/sizes of her body type

One more example

Recently I have a made a new character with the likeness of a model Thylane Blondeau and in reality she has skinny body but i've made her body in my ZGGB style.