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Chapter 21


Crw0

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Greetings, dear traveler?
The 21th chapter is out now ^_^ 
Questions disturbing me now I voiced in the previous entry.
So, that just would like to wish you a pleasant viewing and a wonderful weekend.
And may the force serve you well ?

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Thank you for your time ^_^

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Yes! The "hmm" guy is back! ? I love the way everyone seems to understand him without any trouble ?. I have to admit - I really like your Inquisition (which is weird, because normally nobody likes Inquisition...even other inquisitors). They provide a very nice contrast to the nuns/succubi, both in terms of visual comparison as well as organizational (nuns/otherworldly beings are more chaotic while inquisition is shown as organized and disciplined...more or less ?).

The new prisoner that spoke with Rose is puzzling. Is she good? Evil? Has her own agenda? ? Very nice setup as you're leaving the reader guess and want more.

Good job and thank you for sharing your work ^_^.

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Love the exaggerated red tones of the leaves in the dream and how they mirror their skin.

 

Also always like the look of your inquisition characters. That monk hood and heavy dawnguard helm combo always gets me and the classic witch hunter vibe from mister mmmm ? top notch. 

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Great entry here!!

The dream was visual funnel cake, and the GIF was exceptional!

And oh man I love the "Hmmm Hrrmm Guy" and his hat!!

Something like that can be tricky, and confuse the dialogue if not done right, but It worked beautifully!!

Like Charlie Brown adults, or Chewbacca, or Kenny!!

 

Also the perv in me thanks you for more 'string bikini Rose' ?

 

I'm really gonna miss that when she escapes....

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Did I say I want to see less redheads? I repent. :) The one in second spoiler is beautiful.

Compliments for transformation effect gif and for all other effects you involved. :)

Was happy to see Synetica, my love, again. Thank you. :)

All in all very good story. Love it a lot.

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14 hours ago, Devianna said:

Yes! The "hmm" guy is back! ? I love the way everyone seems to understand him without any trouble ?

This feeling is when you are too lazy to prescribe the character's speech and you just call
 

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14 hours ago, Devianna said:

I have to admit - I really like your Inquisition (which is weird, because normally nobody likes Inquisition...even other inquisitors). They provide a very nice contrast to the nuns/succubi, both in terms of visual comparison as well as organizational (nuns/otherworldly beings are more chaotic while inquisition is shown as organized and disciplined...more or less ?).

Well, yea, more or less) We ll see where it goes ^_^ 
Thank you, I'm glad if you liek it ^_^
 

11 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Love the exaggerated red tones of the leaves in the dream and how they mirror their skin.

Yes, it bribed me too. But in fact, here is a bit of Imaginator' ^_^

11 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Also always like the look of your inquisition characters. That monk hood and heavy dawnguard helm combo always gets me and the classic witch hunter vibe from mister mmmm ? top notch. 

Can't argue with that. Recently an updated version has been released, but it still for Oldrim. Looks badass as fk
 


 

5 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Great entry here!!

The dream was visual funnel cake, and the GIF was exceptional!

And oh man I love the "Hmmm Hrrmm Guy" and his hat!!

Something like that can be tricky, and confuse the dialogue if not done right, but It worked beautifully!!

Like Charlie Brown adults, or Chewbacca, or Kenny!!

Thank you, Wanobi ^_^ Glad you like it ^_^
:D

5 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Also the perv in me thanks you for more 'string bikini Rose' ?

Well, she's going to run around like that for a while :D
 

5 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Did I say I want to see less redheads? I repent. :) The one in second spoiler is beautiful.

Compliments for transformation effect gif and for all other effects you involved. :)

Was happy to see Synetica, my love, again. Thank you. :)

All in all very good story. Love it a lot.

Huh! I knew it! You just need to find the right one red-one:D
Thank you very much ElfPrine ^_^ Glad if you like it ^_^
And yea, I'm also glad to show some more of Sinetica ^_^ 

 

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Great entry, I really like the last scene, that's a really nice job with the handholding poses, stuff like this is really hard to make look convincing :thumbsup:.

 

The looks of the inquisition reminded me a lot of bloodborne hunters which is actually really fitting. :) 

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3 hours ago, Crw said:


 

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Can't argue with that. Recently an updated version has been released, but it still for Oldrim. 
 

 

You say that like that doesn't make it automatically for SSE too ?.

 

That helm I like is 100% a recolored mash up of one of the mage hoods and the heavy Dawnguard helmet though, I made it myself from basically those assets (monk hood instead, because it's cooler) when I was messing with Gabriel's look lately but never posted it because I realized how much it ended up looking like your dudes I didn't want to be a copycat ?

 

 

PS: How TF do you remove spoilers from a quote?

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This entry was like watching a movie.

The character faces got more stage time in this entry =D

The mhm-mm-hmhmm guy is a suprise^^

Yaay for even more introduced characters background storys

You still can keep the overview?

 

If I had to guess about the (well done) mysterious prisoner:

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oh, I forgot to mention: the lights are great with this one!

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20 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Ohhh interesting stuff :D .

 

It seems plot thickens and we get some plot twist soon :) 

Thank you ^_^ Well, we'll seee ^_^


 

19 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great entry, I really like the last scene, that's a really nice job with the handholding poses, stuff like this is really hard to make look convincing :thumbsup:.

 

The looks of the inquisition reminded me a lot of bloodborne hunters which is actually really fitting. :) 

Thank you, yea, that was actually time consuming, but I really like how it looks ^_^ Glad if you like it ?
Yes, they are definitely suitable. thank you once again ^_^



 

18 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

You say that like that doesn't make it automatically for SSE too ?.

I do not know how it works for SSE?. But I think that model and texture import should not create any problems. Don't know. =(

18 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

That helm I like is 100% a recolored mash up of one of the mage hoods and the heavy Dawnguard helmet though, I made it myself from basically those assets (monk hood instead, because it's cooler) when I was messing with Gabriel's look lately but never posted it because I realized how much it ended up looking like your dudes I didn't want to be a copycat ?

Well, you do it yourself, so that this somehow deserves attention. The most I can do is to play with textures a bit here'n'there, and you create really somwething new ^_^  So, that is not copycat :D 

18 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

PS: How TF do you remove spoilers from a quote?

Emh, just select the spoiler itself(not the text in it) and Delete it ?


 

17 hours ago, donttouchmethere said:

This entry was like watching a movie.

The character faces got more stage time in this entry =D

The mhm-mm-hmhmm guy is a suprise^^

Yaay for even more introduced characters background storys

Thank you, glad if you like it ^_^ 

17 hours ago, donttouchmethere said:

You still can keep the overview?

Emh, sorry I did not understand what exactly it refers to. =(

17 hours ago, donttouchmethere said:

If I had to guess about the (well done) mysterious prisoner:

Well, they were talking about Rose, actually ^_^

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4 hours ago, Crw said:

Emh, sorry I did not understand what exactly it refers to. =(

just the amount of different characters, you must have yellow post it's all over the place to keep track ?️

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2 hours ago, Jayomms said:

:mrgreen::thumbsup: Hulk Smash Like Button!!! ;)

Yay ^_^ Glad you like it ^_^

 

 

1 hour ago, donttouchmethere said:

just the amount of different characters, you must have yellow post it's all over the place to keep track ?️

Naaah, I just have a lot of evil minions working for me on that one :D 

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5 hours ago, Crw said:

 

I do not know how it works for SSE?. But I think that model and texture import should not create any problems. Don't know. =(

Well, you do it yourself, so that this somehow deserves attention. The most I can do is to play with textures a bit here'n'there, and you create really somwething new ^_^  So, that is not copycat :D 

 

 

Nah there's no importing or anything [TODD]It just works![/TODD]

 

Making that helm is just setting the two pieces to the same bodyslot and deleting the extra helmet vertices that poke through the hood. 20 second adventure, in and out. 

 

5 hours ago, Crw said:

 

 

 

Emh, just select the spoiler itself(not the text in it) and Delete it ?

 

Could have sworn you used to be able to just backspace them and that doesn't work anymore. Oh well.

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12 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

20 second adventure, in and out. 

Yeaaaa.... /know your meme/ I know how it works :D
 

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A nice "gathering" entry, with the characters either joining or being grouped in different locations. Liked the dreamy aspect or the first passage, the inquisition's ambiance, and the overall contrast that your colored character design produces. Also, that movement effect when Synetica pushes her partner away from Gwen's blade was interestingly refined, I liked it.

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Awaiting for what's next ! :D

 

Malicia : « Hi-i♪ Rose ! I see you're making friends everywhere, that's very good, yes. But you should tell your new one to wash her hands, otherwise, she'd gonna catch conjunctivitis, and her eye's gonna turn red like everyone's, you see ? :classic_angel: »

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1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

A nice "gathering" entry, with the characters either joining or being grouped in different locations. Liked the dreamy aspect or the first passage, the inquisition's ambiance, and the overall contrast that your colored character design produces. Also, that movement effect when Synetica pushes her partner away from Gwen's blade was interestingly refined, I liked it.

Awaiting for what's next ! :D

Thank you, glad you like it ^_^ 

 

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Hi-i♪ Rose ! I see you're making friends everywhere, that's very good, yes. But you should tell your new one to wash her hands, otherwise, she'd gonna catch conjunctivitis, and her eye's gonna turn red like everyone's, you see ? :classic_angel: »

Rose: « Hi-hi there Malicia! Thank you, I will definitely give her your words, but you know, it's a little difficult to maintain hygiene, sitting in a prison cell, you see? :classic_angel: »

 

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