Chapter 51: A Demon Appears (1/2) emily heavy-iron satsuki tomoko nudity darkend sex boobs comic Entry posted by ther1pper October 28, 2018 2755 views Followers 0 "The Monsters mostly come out at night. Mostly." Part 2 16
Guest Posted October 29, 2018 very good work. Love your ENB, the dialogues and the pictures opens much faster. I had to laugh on " .. but you have your fat tits exposed...." Compliments.
Cema Posted October 29, 2018 Good ! You've definitely improved in storytelling and screenshoting ! =)
Agent Tex Posted October 30, 2018 Very nice to see you are back at it. You've just gotta give it time and find the perfect style for you Aria: Funny, the bandits of Skyrim wont have a nickname for me, I should have a nickname.
Tirloque Posted October 31, 2018 I was hyped for the comic bubbles making their way to your blog, and I must say it definitely improves the comfort and the precision of reading. Just one detail though, I don't know what software you're using to do them, but the bubble's tails look a bit too handmade, and that attracts the eye where it shouldn't. That's a bit of a pity considering the effort you already put in your stories. So if I were you, either I'd use a software that does the tails, either I'd create it using lines/forms tools (just like in the example below : it's a circle, with a triangle added to create the tail), so that the shape is smooth and regular. That put aside it's a pleasure to read you again, r1pper ! ?
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