Chapter 51: A Demon Appears (1/2) emily heavy-iron satsuki tomoko nudity darkend sex boobs comic Entry posted by ther1pper · October 28, 2018 2,153 views Followers 0 "The Monsters mostly come out at night. Mostly." Part 2 16
SpyVsPie Posted October 29, 2018 Some really great shots here, snowy Whiterun looks fantastic too. Link to comment
Guest Posted October 29, 2018 very good work. Love your ENB, the dialogues and the pictures opens much faster. I had to laugh on " .. but you have your fat tits exposed...." Compliments. Link to comment
Cema Posted October 29, 2018 Good ! You've definitely improved in storytelling and screenshoting ! =) Link to comment
Agent Tex Posted October 30, 2018 Very nice to see you are back at it. You've just gotta give it time and find the perfect style for you Aria: Funny, the bandits of Skyrim wont have a nickname for me, I should have a nickname. Link to comment
Tirloque Posted October 31, 2018 I was hyped for the comic bubbles making their way to your blog, and I must say it definitely improves the comfort and the precision of reading. Just one detail though, I don't know what software you're using to do them, but the bubble's tails look a bit too handmade, and that attracts the eye where it shouldn't. That's a bit of a pity considering the effort you already put in your stories. So if I were you, either I'd use a software that does the tails, either I'd create it using lines/forms tools (just like in the example below : it's a circle, with a triangle added to create the tail), so that the shape is smooth and regular. That put aside it's a pleasure to read you again, r1pper ! ? Link to comment
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