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I loved this, so well done. Congrats on a brilliant and "lore friendly" story friend.

 

Aria: I knew the Dwemer were pervs too 

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Can you create a DL of this? The pictures barely load (and my internet is quite strong).

Anyways, thanks for the effort :)

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16 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

I loved this, so well done. Congrats on a brilliant and "lore friendly" story friend.

 

Aria: I knew the Dwemer were pervs too 

Hey thanks ?

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12 hours ago, Swiftstep said:

Can you create a DL of this? The pictures barely load (and my internet is quite strong).

Anyways, thanks for the effort :)

I'm sorry to hear that, I even made these JPG's lower quality than my last story trying to fix that problem, I must still be doin something wrong. Anyway I'm happy to make a DL for ya I just have one question...… What's a DL?

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8 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Fun stff :D , great work.

 

However it loads pretty slow :( 

Thanks. And thanks for the load time info, ill see if I cant get that fixed.

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Wov, two stories in a row ! You're in a frenzy, man ! :classic_biggrin:

 

Liked a lot the twists and ambiance on this one : the "evil" commander character, the turning of the tables, the way you intertwined Melcar's lore/general comments during the "demonstration". All of that with excellent screen point of views and added effets quality. Also Melcar's facial expressions were just perfect. Excellent job, Wanobi ! :D

 

Malicia : « That magistrate girl was very meany. She deserved to get peed on by the robot, yes. :classic_sleep: »

 

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Good one !

 

Also, I always really wanted to know. How are you managing things like undressing your characters and stuff? Are you editing the armor mods themselves or are you using some photoshop? Same for the anus and stuff, are these texture edit or photoshop?

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11 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Wov, two stories in a row ! You're in a frenzy, man ! :classic_biggrin:

 

Liked a lot the twists and ambiance on this one : the "evil" commander character, the turning of the tables, the way you intertwined Melcar's lore/general comments during the "demonstration". All of that with excellent screen point of views and added effets quality. Also Melcar's facial expressions were just perfect. Excellent job, Wanobi ! :D

 

Malicia : « That magistrate girl was very meany. She deserved to get peed on by the robot, yes. :classic_sleep: »

 

Thanks, yeah I have a backlog of stories that I've been wanting to do, and thanks to you I can finally do em!! ?

 

And yes, she was a bitch, and she pressed the button, and she got off, (within a 12% margin for error), so yeah I think she got what she deserved ?

 

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2 hours ago, Cema said:

Good one !

 

Also, I always really wanted to know. How are you managing things like undressing your characters and stuff? Are you editing the armor mods themselves or are you using some photoshop? Same for the anus and stuff, are these texture edit or photoshop?

Thanks. So the undressing I do with photoshop, as well as the cum, anus, tongue effects. I have very little modding ability, save for changing texture in photoshop. Also I recently started messing with creation kit to make the background, but I just edit a vanilla cell to make it work better with the story.

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21 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

I'm sorry to hear that, I even made these JPG's lower quality than my last story trying to fix that problem, I must still be doin something wrong. Anyway I'm happy to make a DL for ya I just have one question...… What's a DL?

Wait never mind I got it!! There is now a "direct link" to the host site, thanks for your patience ? I'll try to fix this in the future.

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WoW! Loved this, great job! I also had massive issues getting it to load so thanks for the direct link. Really looking forward to more.

 

56 minutes ago, WANOBI12 said:

Thanks. So the undressing I do with photoshop, as well as the cum, anus, tongue effects. I have very little modding ability, save for changing texture in photoshop. Also I recently started messing with creation kit to make the background, but I just edit a vanilla cell to make it work better with the story.

We should team up, I do everything with nifs and couldn't photoshop my way out of a sack ?

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17 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

WoW! Loved this, great job! I also had massive issues getting it to load so thanks for the direct link. Really looking forward to more.

 

We should team up, I do everything with nifs and couldn't photoshop my way out of a sack ?

Thanks, hopefully I'll get that load time figured out soon

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lol! That was fucking perfect! The automatons pick up lines killed me xD Excellent ending too! The projection was perfect! It was nice to have images on LL, though it did load slowly. Simply breaking it up into a few spoiler tags should help with that :) 

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Great work, loved it, was not expecting to see that type of android in the dwemers army, they really do have everything. Also had some trouble loading on LL so thank you for posting the imagebox link.

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3 hours ago, Collygon said:

lol! That was fucking perfect! The automatons pick up lines killed me xD Excellent ending too! The projection was perfect! It was nice to have images on LL, though it did load slowly. Simply breaking it up into a few spoiler tags should help with that :) 

Thanks, ah so that's why people do the spoiler tags, good to know, thanks ?

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2 hours ago, ther1pper said:

Great work, loved it, was not expecting to see that type of android in the dwemers army, they really do have everything. Also had some trouble loading on LL so thank you for posting the imagebox link.

 Thanks!

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This was top notch. Her bitch attitude toward Melcar was palpable. The Dwemer bot's sex talk was hilarious! But the cherry on top was the likeliness of this happing within Skyrim's lore-- especially amongst the stringent and petty Thalmor. I love it and I want more!

 

Sidenote.. What type of body are you using? At first, I thought clams.. but under scrutiny, it looks like UUNP Special.

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6 hours ago, MayDayCray said:

This was top notch. Her bitch attitude toward Melcar was palpable. The Dwemer bot's sex talk was hilarious! But the cherry on top was the likeliness of this happing within Skyrim's lore-- especially amongst the stringent and petty Thalmor. I love it and I want more!

 

Sidenote.. What type of body are you using? At first, I thought clams.. but under scrutiny, it looks like UUNP Special.

Hey thanks! Yes the body is UUNP, adjusted to my liking in Racemenu.

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In the prev chapter i really want to see some engaged scene with magistrate. her nature is absolute!, represents "cold" dominion secretary, but she is also leaving unbeatable sense to/for "being humulate" her or by her ...her arrogance, ambitions, rudeness, you showed her a real despot, but proud woman. it was perfectly shown in the end of this chapter. absolutely brilliant work, read it twice and enjoyed as it was for real: people, occupation-relationship, feelings! The magistrate becomes my favorite character, would wish to see more scenes with her :D Thank you!!!

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