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Tabrielle's Chronicles - Mourning White (chapter 1)

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Below is the first part of the story of Benor and Tabrielle, a.k.a. the « White-ash » ; told by the latter.
You can expect an adult story with a good dose of humor, aimed for those of us who like storytelling and adventure with adult whereabouts.
However, each chronicle has a theme depending on its heroin personality. So their contents will vary accordingly : do not expect as much sex as there was in Malicia's or Cecilde's ones, Tabrielle is much more shy in that regard. Also her chronicle will be much more violent, so be prepared for a different tone than previously.

Chronologically, this is a sequel to Malicia's chronicles (as it will be revealed at some point), which may be found here. You'll also find summaries & character sheets in the main menu, if you wish a memory refresh :

 

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Likes and comments are welcome and keep me motivated, so if you want to see more chronicles you know what to do ! =D

 

 


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Very god story. My favorite picture that made me laugh a lot is this one:

 

 

 

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OMG this is so well done, so well created and written. Great job

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Side note, if u can get an ENB I'd say this is a 10/10. Even if u do what I do and turn it off and only on for the screenies

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OMG this is so well done, so well created and written. Great job

Love the sound effects and I liked that picture too Prince.

That story was awsome.

I'm looking forward for the next one! :)

Thank you guys ! It took a lot of time, but when I see such reactions, I feel like it was well worth it ! :D

 

Side note, if u can get an ENB I'd say this is a 10/10. Even if u do what I do and turn it off and only on for the screenies

But what would an ENB give me that Photoshop can't ? Is it because some images are too dark that you'd want an ENB ? :)

 

Very god story. My favorite picture that made me laugh a lot is this one:

Thank you Prince ! Yeah, once finished that image made me smile too. The idea was firstly to show that two people might not be thinking to the same thing when they're talking about something ; specially when it's about rewards and if they're of opposite sex. :D

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Great as always and good job with the comic effects.

I agree with Tex, you should try an ENB. I'd personally feel most pictures are to bright given that the story takes place in a cave, but Skyrim's lightning was never realistic in dungeons.

The ENB could improve on the typical skyrim monotone brownish-grayish color mix.

 

Looking forward for the next entry.

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Great as always and good job with the comic effects.

I agree with Tex, you should try an ENB. I'd personally feel most pictures are to bright given that the story takes place in a cave, but Skyrim's lightning was never realistic in dungeons.

The ENB could improve on the typical skyrim monotone brownish-grayish color mix.

There are lightning mods that work without ENB though. Well, you're two suggesting it (and notorious story tellers what's more), so I'll study the question, not for the next chapters (a lot of shots are already stored) but maybe for the next chronicle. The difficult part is that I don't want an overly saturated almost cartoonish like look, so research may take time.

 

Thanks for your appreciation anyway, Alter Native. :)

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Awesome to see another Tirloque story! I'm really liking this already, I love in media res; they always make for a thrilling archetype.

I couldn't help but read the comments addressing an ENB and I have to disagree with Native and Tex. An ENB certainly would make it look better graphically and give you more freedom to adjust the atmosphere, but it isn't entirely necessary. To share my insight, the reason I put so much effort into choosing the right ENB early on was because I felt it was necessary to people viewing my work. Your blog is already quite popular because it isn't like any other on here. The choice is ultimately yours of course, and I know your stories will continue to be phenomenal either way! :)

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I have to compliment your work. I'm sure it takes a lot of efforts to write the comic style story. It's not only funny but very entertaining. Thanks.

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I have to compliment your work. I'm sure it takes a lot of efforts to write the comic style story. It's not only funny but very entertaining. Thanks.

I does, but as I said, seeing those kind of reactions makes it to feel worth it.

 

I'd might add that the Marsoric sisters lighten my imagination since years now. So giving them life in a sharable, public way means something as well. :)

Awesome to see another Tirloque story! I'm really liking this already, I love in media res; they always make for a thrilling archetype.

Nothing escapes your eye, Collygon. I thought I would try some new things with that Chronicle, and that intro was part of those tries.

 

Anyway, I think I just learned a new word. :D

I couldn't help but read the comments addressing an ENB and I have to disagree with Native and Tex. An ENB certainly would make it look better graphically and give you more freedom to adjust the atmosphere, but it isn't entirely necessary. To share my insight, the reason I put so much effort into choosing the right ENB early on was because I felt it was necessary to people viewing my work. Your blog is already quite popular because it isn't like any other on here. The choice is ultimately yours of course, and I know your stories will continue to be phenomenal either way! :)

Thanks for your helpful opinions and appreciations. ENBs do not make the man indeed ( :D). However they had a point about vanilla's interior lightning weaknesses, and I just updated my computer... so I'll make some tests to evaluate if there is room for improvement.

 

Anyway, chapter 2 is already shot, and a good part of future chapters as well.. so if there are changes, they won't be implemented very soon. And I'll take my time minding them. :)

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