Why would one want to sterilize her? 

15 hours ago, ZI0MATRIX said:

Why would one want to sterilize her? 

Pure maliciousness mixed with some practicality. In lore it's mentioned that Elven women, particularly Altmer, have a more difficult time getting pregnant than the other races without, I assume anyway, alchemical or magical assistance. Mix that with the fact this is the homeland of the Nords where Altmer are generally seen in a negative light no thanks to the Thalmor and you get the situation where more vindictive and cruel individuals will take measures to spite the Dominion...regardless of if the Altmer woman in question even supports to the Thalmor or not.

Well I guess it wasn't long before things went wrong.

Great use of body details, both the crude scrawling and the tattoos.
Your use of outfits has been nice so far, I wonder if you have anything that clothe her poorly enough to keep the tattoos visible. If I suppose slaves get clothes at all.

Sirrae's generally had pretty meaningful emotional reactions to fucked up sex stuff happening. Though her mind is probably on the whole slave thing, I hope she gets a moment to properly observe how lewd her pubic tattoo is.

The sterilization is interesting. I guess it's a convenient way to keep pregnancy out of the story, especially after she's been used so much. Though it does take a little bit of the potential punch out of unprotected sex.

I assume it might technically be something that can be changed in the future, as it was specified to be a spell? Maybe a tattoo enchantment?
Either way, interesting. I like the dehumanizing and racist aspects to it. Pretty sinister.

I also guess this is probably the most likely path to meet Chaconne again. And that seems like a pretty interesting possibility.
Beyond just being owned and used, I think there's a lot of potential nuance for emotional torture while being a slave.
Chaconne comes to mind for the familiarity and the possible distinction of how she's physically and mentally changed after being enslaved.
A good distressing indicator of what Sirrae might end up as.
Perhaps she's a fully trained slave with a respectable master who she's completely been broken into stockholm syndrome towards. Maybe a prominent Stormcloak officer who Chaconne has ended up practically worshiping, including adopting their own racist beliefs; much to Sirrae's eventual despair and suffering.

Perhaps highlighting the fact that giving into depravity and abandoning all pride in favor of full devotion towards one's master might be her best option.

Chaconne aside, I think interactions with other slaves in general should be interesting. A cut-throat competition for an owner's favor leading to slaves treating one another more poorly than their owners treat them is probably particularly distressing. The fact of slavery being a more formal style of abuse than random rape might be a great opportunity in general to demonstrate that other women can be just as horrible towards Sirrae as men can.

Last bit, before I end up spending too much energy on the world of possibilities; it might be nice to see Sirrae be trained. She's suffered a lot of pain, but it'd be interesting to see her overwhelmed with pleasure in nefarious ways as well. Edged until she's begging for orgasm and forced to admit to a overly sexualized portrayal of herself.
Perhaps a brothel mistress trains her to obediently tell others than Altmer are stupid and slutty at heart, and to show off how she's constantly wet to prove the point and present as an enthusiastically willing whore to command a higher price.

Okay, I'll stop. For now.
Looking forward to more, as usual.

7 hours ago, demonryupriest said:

Pure maliciousness mixed with some practicality. In lore it's mentioned that Elven women, particularly Altmer, have a more difficult time getting pregnant than the other races without, I assume anyway, alchemical or magical assistance. Mix that with the fact this is the homeland of the Nords where Altmer are generally seen in a negative light no thanks to the Thalmor and you get the situation where more vindictive and cruel individuals will take measures to spite the Dominion...regardless of if the Altmer woman in question even supports to the Thalmor or not.

I can see the "practical" point.

Problem is if you want to sell her and but damage your product before... it lacks logic.

"I have this wonderful rare sexy sports car here and had lots of fun with it.

But I threw away the original V12 engine and put in a 1998 Honda Civic engine while ruining the frame, for tax reasons. Also I keyed it a bit so that it is less likely to be stolen.

You wanna buy it?"

It probably comes down to "Pure maliciousness" as you said.

10 hours ago, ZI0MATRIX said:

I can see the "practical" point.

Problem is if you want to sell her and but damage your product before... it lacks logic.

 

"I have this wonderful rare sexy sports car here and had lots of fun with it.

But I threw away the original V12 engine and put in a 1998 Honda Civic engine while ruining the frame, for tax reasons. Also I keyed it a bit so that it is less likely to be stolen.

You wanna buy it?"

 

It probably comes down to "Pure maliciousness" as you said.

For sale, it depends on who she's sold to. There's a number of applications where it could be considered an additional service by the sellers to have her sterilized.
Your metaphor implies that a slave exists to be impregnated before any other application, and that's pretty absurd.

Racial purity law brought about by the Stormcloaks seems to be the argument. If Skyrim is for the Nords then even if Elves are enslaved it's a bad precedent if a ton of half-elves start popping up. Kinda undermines a binary stance on race.
 

4 hours ago, malvic said:

For sale, it depends on who she's sold to. There's a number of applications where it could be considered an additional service by the sellers to have her sterilized.
Your metaphor implies that a slave exists to be impregnated before any other application, and that's pretty absurd.

Racial purity law brought about by the Stormcloaks seems to be the argument. If Skyrim is for the Nords then even if Elves are enslaved it's a bad precedent if a ton of half-elves start popping up. Kinda undermines a binary stance on race.
 

My metaphor implies that a product in original condition is more worth than altered and limited in its potential, which is not absurd(common in our world).

Knocking her up or painting a symbol to sterilize her, would be more of a modification on the customers end.

Or a modification that would be optional after the auction.

One of the auctioneers stated his disappointed (and stated his intentions) of the wasted potential which implies that such use is legal. 

Captors are Orc and a Redguard which seem to be tolerated despite them being Bandits/Criminals and not Nords. So a mixed race kid might be tolerated when half of their blood is... let's say Nord.

Also "mixing" was(today in some places still is) common tactic as it helps to avoid revolts of conquered territory. 

We both lack the data what an unaltered slave of comparable quality would have made.

But my guess is that she had lost in value significantly because of this damage. 

Well this is really depressing at this point.

I wonder if you intended that sterilization to be permanent, its only a tattoo imbued with magic.

Is it me or this chapter doesn't even need "Bad Ending"?

Quite... a brutal chapter here. I guess the rape themes are going to be a frequent occurrence in Sirrae's story. Which is still compelling though, since she's placing herself in worse and worse situations, making the reader wondering about how she'll manage her way out. I renew my comment about the walls of unconnected bubbles though, they'll be confusing for the readers. The screens are still of a pretty good quality, with good poses and expressions ; and some edits cleverly emphasizing about what's happening "on the inside". I'd be careful about using unmodified illustrations of others though. Anyway, not a bad chapter ; and hoping the slavery arc won't be too brutal. ?

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On 5/15/2021 at 3:34 AM, malvic said:

The sterilization is interesting. I guess it's a convenient way to keep pregnancy out of the story, especially after she's been used so much. Though it does take a little bit of the potential punch out of unprotected sex.

I assume it might technically be something that can be changed in the future, as it was specified to be a spell? Maybe a tattoo enchantment?
Either way, interesting. I like the dehumanizing and racist aspects to it. Pretty sinister.

I also guess this is probably the most likely path to meet Chaconne again. And that seems like a pretty interesting possibility.

My thoughts exactly. Slavery is a simple way to get Sirrae closer from Chaconne, while Faendal has been taken away, and slavery leads to lots of abuse.

On 5/16/2021 at 7:55 PM, Scythion said:

Well this is really depressing at this point.

I wonder if you intended that sterilization to be permanent, its only a tattoo imbued with magic.

I think that the choice of a spell is designed both to make it removable and legitimate the use of a kinky tatoo. If it aimed to be permanent, there'd be other ways to ensure the result...

Subject #626... Sirrae is Stitch confirmed.  You can't fool me, creature!

On 5/22/2021 at 2:11 AM, PhantomTrevo said:

Subject #626... Sirrae is Stitch confirmed.  You can't fool me, creature!

Lmao I'm so glad someone got that reference