Well that certainly was an unending barrage of "action".
Don't these sailors know that bringing a woman on board yields bad fortune?

Yeah, definitely a good job! Really love the aspect of corruption and her "getting used to being used".
I'm curious how it will goes further!

Damn, why so dark tho?

Wow... quite brutal, but well done!

Well, that was quite the massive sequence here. But it seems you've got the hang at introducing sex scenes, spicing them up (particularly with onomatopoeia), and progressively escalating. And the enticing nature of the screens do make for the poverty of the background. Same for the dialogues, the bubbles are sometimes numerous but not reaching unclear points in the episode. So, so far, it works. Awaiting to see how you'll manage to vary enough to maintain the curiosity though. Anyway, good entry.

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On 5/21/2021 at 2:33 PM, PHSummoner said:

Damn, why so dark tho?

On 5/21/2021 at 4:21 PM, Alter Native said:

Wow... quite brutal, but well done!

On 5/21/2021 at 6:57 AM, malvic said:

Well that certainly was an unending barrage of "action".
Don't these sailors know that bringing a woman on board yields bad fortune?

The few chapters around this one are the reason I felt the need for a disclaimer in the blog post. It got even darker than I expected...

Damn what a time she had.  Good storytelling