Welcome back!  Great to see this story get continued, was a really nice surprise when I saw the notification.  Thanks for sharing - and this was certainly a hot one.

Such a pleasant surprise to see this in the notifications inbox. Absolutely can't wait to give this a read later!

So nice to see you and your work again, Kin Tsuchi.

22 hours ago, Reesewow said:

Welcome back!  Great to see this story get continued, was a really nice surprise when I saw the notification.  Thanks for sharing - and this was certainly a hot one.

11 hours ago, Rattlesnark said:

Such a pleasant surprise to see this in the notifications inbox. Absolutely can't wait to give this a read later!

So nice to see you and your work again, Kin Tsuchi.

I'm happy that hear that! I admit, 2 years of no signs of life in my story might leave the impression of an abonded project. And well, that was the case in some way =/

I won't make any promises this time, only this: the next update won't take 2 further years =O

Hopefully you'll find the story entertaining =)

Well, that was... moist!

I love when people take the time to add effects to their stories!!

Bravo!!

Kin Tsuchi and the Shrouded Past ! Long time no see ! Glad too see the story resume after such brutal opening chapters. This one now introduces us to the Urufu sensuality and mating/pairing system I guess, with a quite hot "education" intro and a long lesbian scene. Good job with the progression of the dialogues. The facial expressions were also quite good, with well lighted characters, and immersive backgrounds to go with those. The liquid effects were alright as well. I do hope however that you won't forget to implement  story events and twists, as Close Alliance main flaw was that the story didn't renew itself frequently, ending being a mere support for the sex scenes. Good entry anyway. 

Malicia : «Those two gals just kissed their pee-pees until they're just as dirty as before they went to bath. They're very silly, uh.  »

16 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Well, that was... moist!

I love when people take the time to add effects to their stories!!

Bravo!!

Glad that you liked it! Even if I'm sure that there is much more I could do ;)

16 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Kin Tsuchi and the Shrouded Past ! Long time no see ! Glad too see the story resume after such brutal opening chapters. This one now introduces us to the Urufu sensuality and mating/pairing system I guess, with a quite hot "education" intro and a long lesbian scene. Good job with the progression of the dialogues. The facial expressions were also quite good, with well lighted characters, and immersive backgrounds to go with those. The liquid effects were alright as well. I do hope however that you won't forget to implement  story events and twists, as Close Alliance main flaw was that the story didn't renew itself frequently, ending being a mere support for the sex scenes. Good entry anyway. 

 

Malicia : «Those two gals just kissed their pee-pees until they're just as dirty as before they went to bath. They're very silly, uh.  »

Hard but fair =O

I agree with you, the plot in "Close Alliance" could have been much better. Might have been the problem that I mostly went from chapter to chapter, without planing it out completely. This time, well, it's a little bit different. But to be honest, when there is something I've learned from "Close Alliance" than it's not to give any promises =O so .. maybe there will be events like you mentioned. Maybe not! But before we'll find out, I'm sure many Rinha and Urufu becomes dirty very often again ;)

Wow! Glad you're back and with such a great chapter too!

Can't wait for more!

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I agree with you, the plot in "Close Alliance" could have been much better. Might have been the problem that I mostly went from chapter to chapter, without planing it out completely. This time, well, it's a little bit different. But to be honest, when there is something I've learned from "Close Alliance" than it's not to give any promises =O so .. maybe there will be events like you mentioned. Maybe not! But before we'll find out, I'm sure many Rinha and Urufu becomes dirty very often again

This is completely normal, I also wish I could undo large parts of my first entries. One just happens to be inexperienced and just makes a lot of mistakes. 

Keep it up, I'm just happy to see new content of you again 

2 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Wow! Glad you're back and with such a great chapter too!

Can't wait for more!

This is completely normal, I also wish I could undo large parts of my first entries. One just happens to be inexperienced and just makes a lot of mistakes. 

Keep it up, I'm just happy to see new content of you again 

Thank you ? 
Great to see that you liked it! And yeah, that is absolutely true. Knowing where a story has to go in the end is a whole different than knowing where the next chapter has to go. A problem short novelles haven't to deal with. But when you want to create, well, 2000 pages of story (I guess that is what I had with "Close Alliance") - you should put more thoughts in it than I had when I started here.

But well! In my case here, I'm using the benefit of prequels and sequels. You can stay in the same universe but you can start again and do it better ? (hopefully^^)

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