Great chapter as always.  Not gonna lie, I'm feeling the need for a new character chart already, and that is *impressive* for the second episode of a Skyrim story.   Perhaps once you've had a chance to develop some of the Urufu introduced in this chapter.

Thanks for continuing the story.

I love your pics! They are well thought out, the lighting is superb, the angles are unique, and you use your FOV very well, also love the framing.

everything looks so polished!

15 hours ago, Reesewow said:

Great chapter as always.  Not gonna lie, I'm feeling the need for a new character chart already, and that is *impressive* for the second episode of a Skyrim story.   Perhaps once you've had a chance to develop some of the Urufu introduced in this chapter.

 

Thanks for continuing the story.

Your wish is granted ?

I have no idea what is going but I know I like it. 

I shall go back and read your story so I know what is going how

How did I miss this?

Am I the only one getting utterly brutal load times here? I can't seem to get more than ~15-20% of each image to load before the whole thing times out. 

Excellent work as always. I have a little humble suggestion: you have a lot of pictures and opening the spoiler takes a hell of the time. I can go to New York and back and the page will still be opening My thought is if you can divided your story in several spoilers for faster loading and opening, but you don't have to pay attention to me. I'm already known as

Well my internet connection is powered by a horse-drawn carriage with 4 broken legs and half of a wheel. Honestly  thought this was just my problem and not a problem in general o.o I tried putting the chapter into 4 parts. Could you check if it's better now? 

16 minutes ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Well my internet connection is powered by a horse-drawn carriage with 4 broken legs and half of a wheel. Honestly  thought this was just my problem and not a problem in general o.o I tried putting the chapter into 4 parts. Could you check if it's better now? 

Thank you. I don't know what is happening and if there is a problem from your side, my side or LL. When I open the spoiler, pictures started to load (slow again) and this is the final product for every single picture in every spoiler.

I tried to load your pictures from my laptop. (My Prince used his PC) and I got the same problem as him.

It works now. I can see all pics and must compliment your excellent work again. :)

Very thrilled.

Phew! It was all my fault.

I used way to high image properties (for print products). Now it's only 20% of the file-size it had before without any (noticeable) lack of quality. Sorry again and thanks for your patience! ?

Long time no see.

Great job with the story and some really amazing screenshots!

Yeah ^^" I kinda lost my speed doing these chapters. But thank you for your kind words! =) 

So awesome now that the pictures are loading

Another great chapter. Such atmosphere ! It's midway from some kind of werewolf story and some medieval japanese manga tale. Techically, the screens are all great, the dialogues are on point, and since this is a prequel we get to have a better introduction to your lore. Good job !

On a side note it feels kinda strange to see followers we knew from other stories (Ivy from Prince's Kinky Sisters, possibly Amelie from Of Blood & Pleasure) re-tailored Urufu way. ^^

On 11/9/2018 at 5:27 PM, Kin Tsuchi said:

Phew! It was all my fault.

I used way to high image properties (for print products). Now it's only 20% of the file-size it had before without any (noticeable) lack of quality. Sorry again and thanks for your patience! ?

Yeah, images were 750 ko instead of current 150. Good reaction.