Oh, that's great! Pretty logical tricks with a smell and a great opportunity to develop a character! Really love that!
And additional compliments for a last spoiler with a dog sex! Shame, not much of these on ll these days. ^_^

I never fail to be impressed with how much detail goes into these stories, they must take a lot of time and effort to create.  Thanks again for sharing.

Great to see more characters with various personalities and traits.  Looking forward to the internal dynamics of the tribes going forward.

Also loving the fact the "brother" plot point isn't going to be a big secret for this storyline.  While the mystery and slow reveal/suggestiveness in the previous plot was also really enjoyable, IMO a more direct approach definitely makes sense for this more "primal" version of the Urufu.  Plus any readers of the previous story already know what's up, so it could be more interesting (and arousing) to see how the story will play out with that aspect playing a more direct part in the story. 

Tho it would be hard to avoid it with all the growling happening off-screen - hoping we may get to see more of that in future!

Oh wow, another great entry!

I always love the Asian tone/style in your stories, which make them really stand out from the rest of our stories!

Keep up the great work!

On 10/18/2020 at 6:11 PM, Crw said:

Oh, that's great! Pretty logical tricks with a smell and a great opportunity to develop a character! Really love that!
And additional compliments for a last spoiler with a dog sex! Shame, not much of these on ll these days. ^_^

Thank you very much! ? Even if the trick turned nearly into sex =O Urufu and self-effacement ... at least Junna is good in that (maybe the only one of the Urufu xD)

On 10/19/2020 at 6:20 PM, Reesewow said:

I never fail to be impressed with how much detail goes into these stories, they must take a lot of time and effort to create.  Thanks again for sharing.

 

Great to see more characters with various personalities and traits.  Looking forward to the internal dynamics of the tribes going forward.

 

Also loving the fact the "brother" plot point isn't going to be a big secret for this storyline.  While the mystery and slow reveal/suggestiveness in the previous plot was also really enjoyable, IMO a more direct approach definitely makes sense for this more "primal" version of the Urufu.  Plus any readers of the previous story already know what's up, so it could be more interesting (and arousing) to see how the story will play out with that aspect playing a more direct part in the story. 

 

Tho it would be hard to avoid it with all the growling happening off-screen - hoping we may get to see more of that in future!

I don't count the hours anymore =O and since it's fun to make the chapters, I'm gladly investing the time in it. For the brothers; well, the Urufu here have no reason not to show them to their bitches. It's their lair. Would be strange if they would really care about the opionion of their slaves with that. Plus, as you maybe know from "Close Alliance" ... the Urufu have plans including the Rinha and their brothers...

On 10/20/2020 at 12:45 AM, Alter Native said:

Oh wow, another great entry!

I always love the Asian tone/style in your stories, which make them really stand out from the rest of our stories!

Keep up the great work!

Uh thanks ? would love to include more asian tone inside the chapters, but there aren't many mods I can use for that. At least there are enough for now!

Junna seems like an atypical character for an Urufu. Liked how you played on this to induce  a sex scene different from the previous ones, with different whereabouts/dilemmas and character development embedded right into the scene. The distant voices also are cleverly represented. Technically the screens are great for most, and I see you added more liquid effects (with variable results however). Also the moment at Sogkye added in depth to the events. And it's a pleasure to see you got back to your previous publishing rate. Good entry.

On 10/18/2020 at 6:11 PM, Crw said:

And additional compliments for a last spoiler with a dog sex! Shame, not much of these on ll these days. ^_^

Malicia : « You very sound like a lonely grandma.  »

15 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Junna seems like an atypical character for an Urufu. Liked how you played on this to induce  a sex scene different from the previous ones, with different whereabouts/dilemmas and character development embedded right into the scene. The distant voices also are cleverly represented. Technically the screens are great for most, and I see you added more liquid effects (with variable results however). Also the moment at Sogkye added in depth to the events. And it's a pleasure to see you got back to your previous publishing rate. Good entry.

Malicia : « You very sound like a lonely grandma.  »

 

Don't become accustomed with the speed - even if I'm trying to work constantly
Junna is indeed different, however I'm not sure how fast it will be revealed why she is that way. Maybe it will stay a secret for a long time. Sogkye on the other hand will return in the next chapter for sure - the plot must go on =D

Muahahah,

Love Juice!!

I'm gonna be giggling about that all night ?

Thank you for the sexy read!

5 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Muahahah,

Love Juice!!

I'm gonna be giggling about that all night ?

Thank you for the sexy read!

Uhm.. since I'm not a native speaker, isn't that the right word for it? =O sorry for asking, I'm normally using urban dictionary for, well, phrases I'm not 100% familiar with. 
But I'm glad that you seem to like it anyway =)

Did you switched to a body with hdt vagina or you photoshopped them?

On 10/22/2020 at 10:39 PM, Kin Tsuchi said:

Uhm.. since I'm not a native speaker, isn't that the right word for it?

It is the right word for it,

and kudos to you for making stories in a different language! 

Still, some words or "phrases" even in the right language, make 10 year old boys... (or 40something boys) laugh out loud!

You keep doing what your doing, and pay no attention to my immaturity!

I love your content!

On 10/27/2020 at 8:57 PM, Scythion said:

Did you switched to a body with hdt vagina or you photoshopped them?

Hey =) for "Shrouded Past" I'm using hdt vagina and add some liquid effects to them when I think they fit in. Since hdt helps a lot in penetration-scenes, I'm very happy with them =)

On 10/28/2020 at 10:35 PM, WANOBI12 said:

It is the right word for it,

and kudos to you for making stories in a different language! 

Still, some words or "phrases" even in the right language, make 10 year old boys... (or 40something boys) laugh out loud!

You keep doing what your doing, and pay no attention to my immaturity!

I love your content!

Aaaah I see =) Well unfortunately that is something a translation site won't tell me. However, in the case of Junna the wording might be fitting ^_^" Thanks for the explanation!