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Enemy within.


Crw

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Greetings, dear traveler?

Today I want to share with you another story that will tell a little more about our heroines and the characters that surround them.
What awaits them? Mysteries? Intrigues? Betrayals? Let's find out!
So with that, I wish you all a pleasant viewing and a wonderful day. ^_^




 

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Your feedback, comments and ideas are always welcome.
And may the force serve you well ?

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Great entry!

And I do love the cliffhanger in the end, looking forward to what these two will do together. 

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1 minute ago, Alter Native said:

Great entry!

And I do love the cliffhanger in the end, looking forward to what these two will do together. 

Thanks Alter ^_^ glad you like it ^_^
Judging by Abigail's luck and Hella's abilities, I think the result is completely obvious. :D 

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4 hours ago, donttouchmethere said:

"Wait that wasn't an order..." 💭

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Great story telling and super sexy characters.

 

Many thanks ^_^ Glad that you enjoyed that ^_^

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:love::heart::O Nooice! You are really improving so much as time passes on with these.... Ah! Hem! Um... Action scenes. Stupendous! Excellent! Flawless! Great Work! ;):thumbsup:

 

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:sweat_smile: I think Now I noticed the body Improvements and Won't Mind seeing Maylin with that body you made. :mrgreen: Maylin was trained by her father who is Yakudan warrior a very old warrior who... well I don't wanna spoil too much lets just leave it at that. ;)

 

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1 hour ago, Jayomms said:

:love::heart::O Nooice! You are really improving so much as time passes on with these.... Ah! Hem! Um... Action scenes. Stupendous! Excellent! Flawless! Great Work! ;):thumbsup:

 

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:sweat_smile: I think Now I noticed the body Improvements and Won't Mind seeing Maylin with that body you made. :mrgreen: Maylin was trained by her father who is Yakudan warrior a very old warrior who... well I don't wanna spoil too much lets just leave it at that. ;)

 

Haha, thanks ^_^ I guess I need more of that type of *Action scene* here :D ^_^ 
And yea, it's easier to notice changes in their bodies when they naked :D
Many thanks, Jay, glad that you enjoyed that ^_^

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I love reluctant mind control stuff where the girl is aware of what's going on and able to talk back an object but unable to resist! It's a niche market so glad to have more of it! I think the rest of your girls need a new collar too 🤣

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5 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

I love reluctant mind control stuff where the girl is aware of what's going on and able to talk back an object but unable to resist! It's a niche market so glad to have more of it! I think the rest of your girls need a new collar too 🤣

Thanks ^_^ glad that you like it ^_^

Also find that's stuff pretty hot)

I guess I needed to manufacturer's more of that stuff and apply it to a good use. ^_^

Who need a developed plot and a story when you can just... you know :D

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Quite the entertaining chapter here ! Liked how you intertwined an investigation plot with a more classical subduction one, that allowed your story to have both a scenario (so much for Hella's loyalty vows though =p), lewd stuff and even some action. Graphically, it seems your girls did apply Malicia's advice ^^ at least a bit, while your effects of movement, liquids and magic/lighting continue maturing. The blood on the stabbing image however could've taken more the lighting in account, but the result was quite flashy so it could've been an artistic choice to let it that way. The comic layout is getting more adapted to a fullscreen display, and so less noticeable, but is still extremely efficient. Anyway, I'm starting to think you have a soft spot for Abigail, as she's taking more and more importance in your works ; but as this provides us with impressive images and entertaining situations, what's not to like about it ! :smiley:👌

 

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Malicia : « Yep, I think Mr Crw likes looking at Abigail while she's got no clothes, 'cause she's very pretty, and very strong. But as she's done too much gym, I'll still be even prettier, yes. :classic_sleepy:

 

              Also it looks like that Vi gal's boobies surgery didn't work, no. 500_F_146736659_ZAp1o10bUUTdUnSADzZpKm9zNs11Vb1u.jpg »

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On 5/22/2020 at 2:29 PM, Tirloque said:

Quite the entertaining chapter here ! Liked how you intertwined an investigation plot with a more classical subduction one, that allowed your story to have both a scenario (so much for Hella's loyalty vows though =p), lewd stuff and even some action. Graphically, it seems your girls did apply Malicia's advice ^^ at least a bit, while your effects of movement, liquids and magic/lighting continue maturing. The blood on the stabbing image however could've taken more the lighting in account, but the result was quite flashy so it could've been an artistic choice to let it that way. The comic layout is getting more adapted to a fullscreen display, and so less noticeable, but is still extremely efficient. Anyway, I'm starting to think you have a soft spot for Abigail, as she's taking more and more importance in your works ; but as this provides us with impressive images and entertaining situations, what's not to like about it ! 

Many thanks Triloque, I'm glad if you enjoyed that ^_^

I'm thinking of Hella as about very complicated character, and I guess her motives will not be clear until I directly show them like they are. Thanks for giving me that idea.

Blood in the scene you mention was a pain in the neck from the very start. Ether it was too bright imo and feels really off, or it was to dark and almost unnoticeable. So as you can see I'm just stuck somewhere in the middle at result that just "satisfies" me.

Considering the girls bodies... still thinking that it's pretty complicated to do a blade-fancy-dancing stuff with a D size :D but at least I've come to understanding of the fact that this is not the main thing :wink:

 

To Malicia: that's why you are a leader of "gang" :D

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3 hours ago, Crw said:

Many thanks Triloque, I'm vlad if you enjoyed that ^_^

 

Oh shit, he's a vampire! Get him!

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48 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Oh shit, he's a vampire! Get him!

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Fuk this t9 thing, really... 

Thanks Spy :D

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Woah, things took a wild turn! Plus a great cliff hanger! Makes me wonder how she broke the effects of that collar 🤔Was she ever really controlled? Or did she snap out of it? I don't know and it's exciting! :O

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9 hours ago, Collygon said:

Woah, things took a wild turn! Plus a great cliff hanger! Makes me wonder how she broke the effects of that collar 🤔Was she ever really controlled? Or did she snap out of it? I don't know and it's exciting! :O

Yay, many thanks Colly ^_^ Glad if you like it ^_^
I suppose I made it not obvious enough, or somewhere an error crept in. 😖

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He gave her command to "please herself". And she brought herself a pleasure (rather of an intangible nature) by killing them. ^_^

A kind of self mind-trick. Well, I wanted to show it like this. I hope it became clearer ^_^ 

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And if, as a native speaker, it seems to you that such use of words is unacceptable or does not convey meaning, I would like to know about it. Thanks in advance.


 

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"You can please yourself" - "Killing you was a great pleasure"  🤣🤣🤣  That was an awesome exchange right there!

 

I love your Hella. She is so complicated. Technically speaking, she only swore loyalty to Gwen, not to anyone else (as far as we saw).  And we still do not know what her end goal is.  It doesn't seem that she has killed any of the girls yet either (even Vi just has a briar heart, which means she could still be alive). For now Hella seems to try and make them all harmless or to not stand in her way. Curious. 🤔

 

Poor Abi just can't catch a break. Ever since the inquisition fell apart, things have not been going too great for her. (And personally I still miss the Hmmm guy 😢)

The bandits explained that the collar starts to suppress the will of a person to the point where they just become ok with everything that's being done.  Wonder if that is what happened to Abi when she caught herself doing something that wasn't a direct command.

 

Excellent plot development and amazing job on the special effects! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.  As always, thank you for sharing your story with us! 🤗

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12 hours ago, Devianna said:

"You can please yourself" - "Killing you was a great pleasure"  🤣🤣🤣  That was an awesome exchange right there!

 

I love your Hella. She is so complicated. Technically speaking, she only swore loyalty to Gwen, not to anyone else (as far as we saw).  And we still do not know what her end goal is.  It doesn't seem that she has killed any of the girls yet either (even Vi just has a briar heart, which means she could still be alive). For now Hella seems to try and make them all harmless or to not stand in her way. Curious. 🤔

 

Poor Abi just can't catch a break. Ever since the inquisition fell apart, things have not been going too great for her. (And personally I still miss the Hmmm guy 😢)

The bandits explained that the collar starts to suppress the will of a person to the point where they just become ok with everything that's being done.  Wonder if that is what happened to Abi when she caught herself doing something that wasn't a direct command.

 

Excellent plot development and amazing job on the special effects! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.  As always, thank you for sharing your story with us! 🤗


Yay ^_^
You get it right about Hella. And you even partially guessed what she was doing with Vi. Not absolutely true, but more about that will be later.  ^_^

Yeah, Aby is going through her rough and a bit funny time full of adventures of all kind. But nothing she can't deal with ^_^
Many thanks, Devianna! Im glad you like it ^_^

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On 5/27/2020 at 1:06 AM, Crw said:

Yay, many thanks Colly ^_^ Glad if you like it ^_^
I suppose I made it not obvious enough, or somewhere an error crept in. 😖

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He gave her command to "please herself". And she brought herself a pleasure (rather of an intangible nature) by killing them. ^_^

A kind of self mind-trick. Well, I wanted to show it like this. I hope it became clearer ^_^ 

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And if, as a native speaker, it seems to you that such use of words is unacceptable or does not convey meaning, I would like to know about it. Thanks in advance.


 

I didn't catch that! :O That's actually brilliant and I wish I noticed it myself. Really great detail! 

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On 5/23/2020 at 9:55 AM, Crw said:

Fuk this t9 thing, really... 

Thanks Spy :D

Aww, no more Vlad 😩🤣

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1 hour ago, SpyVsPie said:

Aww, no more Vlad 😩🤣

There were no Vlad ;) 
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Ohhh my this was a neat chapter 😏

 

The whole mind breaking thing, while she was conscious and aware is truly a niche market

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we need more of such kink hehe

 

and the fatal error with the "pleasure yourself", that was clever way of using the system 😊, also very badass as well.

 

Hella is hella suscipious of her doings, Im not sure her agenda, it seems she not really care a lot about the Silver-Hands at all.

 

Allied with Gwen, but we probably eventually see why 😁

 

Doing Briar hearts, yikes.

 

Great work looking forward for more.

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4 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Ohhh my this was a neat chapter 😏

 

The whole mind breaking thing, while she was conscious and aware is truly a niche market

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we need more of such kink hehe

 

and the fatal error with the "pleasure yourself", that was clever way of using the system 😊, also very badass as well.

 

Hella is hella suscipious of her doings, Im not sure her agenda, it seems she not really care a lot about the Silver-Hands at all.

 

Allied with Gwen, but we probably eventually see why 😁

 

Doing Briar hearts, yikes.

 

Great work looking forward for more.

Yay, thanks Res ^_^ Glad that you like it ^_^

Yea, the mind break is pretty rare here, for some reason I cant understand. Imo one of the most popular stuff outside the ll. 

 

Glad that you like the twist ^_^

It's more complicate that just a Briar heart ritual ^_^ as always, in my stories, more demonic and daedra-related.

 

Thanks ^_^

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