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Maylin - Enter The Tower


Jay-Omms

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Hey guys I know it's been taking me too long to get this story going but you all know it's motivation that drives us to do these things and of course hard work and time. I just remembered a while back That I never started with Maylin's origin story. Just her and Stranger then Aria. I have a lot of story content with Aria lustful Bal in it that I didn't release and didn't want to release it because I haven't started Maylin's story yet. And was like wait a minute... I can't release Aria's stuff without the folk knowing Maylin first... they all know Aria Lustful Bal but not Maylin. So without further ado but not perfect Maylin's first Chapter. Something to give you guys while I figure out how to make followers... the RIGHT way on the Creation Kit. :sweat_smile: Here's her first chapter and may or will be do for improvements in the future. This is just to get info about her out there in story form. I understand that this a story far from perfect and I carry no delusions of grandeur about my work. I simply do this to share with friends. Because you guys are cool like that. ;):thumbsup: We all deserve the best either way. :mrgreen: Hulk out!

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If you have gotten this far Thank you for your time :) Like I said before. Just wanted to get her first chapter out there so you may get to know Maylin a little bit better. So now you know she has family out there somewhere and more story will come as soon as I figure out how to make followers so my characters can meet face to face. Thanks again for reading. ;):thumbsup:

 

 

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Always good to have a little more backstory!  I wonder who the Glowy Girl is and why Maylin trusts her so Implicitly!  

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9 hours ago, djregs said:

Always good to have a little more backstory!  I wonder who the Glowy Girl is and why Maylin trusts her so Implicitly!  

Maylin herself doesn't notice the trust yet but you'll see :sweat_smile:

 

5 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Nice work, loved this back story

Glad you like it! ;)

 

4 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

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It is extremely interesting. I am intrigued at what this will lead to. Interesting work Jay!
Btw, You really re-created this feeling of the connection to 'Angel' from Borderlands. Well, or that was the first thing I thought about.
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1 hour ago, Crw said:

It is extremely interesting. I am intrigued at what this will lead to. Interesting work Jay!
Btw, You really re-created this feeling of the connection to 'Angel' from Borderlands. Well, or that was the first thing I thought about.
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Thanx... My temporary solution for no follower while I figure out what I'm doing wrong when making a follower. :sweat_smile:

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It seems hearing voices is a recurrent theme in your stories. Overall, there are still minor comic port defects, but the placement of the bubbles themselves is fine and the amount of text as well, so the reader does not gets lost. What is more confusing however is the scenario, as some of the most obvious questions (such as "who are you ?") regarding the resident of Magna Ge (who looks somewhat alike with Maelyn ?) are still unanswered. Still, that creates an incentive for the reader to uncover that mystery while the technically good screens (colors, outfits, backgrounds and poses) increase the immersion. Awaiting for what's next, then ! :smiley:

 

Malicia : « Maylin is very pretty, and has very nice clothes, yes. She should be careful using honey-honey tools like that though, those things can get stuck, you see ? :classic_excl: »

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4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

It seems hearing voices is a recurrent theme in your stories. Overall, there are still minor comic port defects, but the placement of the bubbles themselves is fine and the amount of text as well, so the reader does not gets lost. What is more confusing however is the scenario, as some of the most obvious questions (such as "who are you ?") regarding the resident of Magna Ge (who looks somewhat alike with Maelyn ?) are still unanswered. Still, that creates an incentive for the reader to uncover that mystery while the technically good screens (colors, outfits, backgrounds and poses) increase the immersion. Awaiting for what's next, then ! :smiley:

 

Malicia : « Maylin is very pretty, and has very nice clothes, yes. She should be careful using honey-honey tools like that though, those things can get stuck, you see ? :classic_excl: »

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23 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

:thumbsup::heart::mrgreen::mrgreen::cool::P

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Maylin is so cute! I really enjoy her humorous yet endearingly realistic take on the strange events unfolding in front of her.

 

Found a mysterious tower that has notes possibly addressed to her? - Good, there might be some profit in it.

Met an intimidating looking guard? - Better stay polite and friendly (plus anyone could've mistaken that mannequin for a person :classic_ph34r:)

Saw a huge glowing beacon of light that was talking to her? - Let's poke it and see if it's hot (it was honest curiosity! ?)

 

I also really like the fact that she seems to have a family and she cares about them (her mom, sister, auntie). A lot of times we get to see heroes who are either orphans, have complicated relationships with their relatives or remember nothing of their origins and past.

 

There are a lot of mysteries to unfold : the magical white-haired lady, the appearance of the tower out of nowhere and the identity of a naughty being (spirit?) that sent a little surprise to Maylin's shower room. ?

 

Really good work and I'm looking forward to the continuation! ?

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11 hours ago, Devianna said:

Maylin is so cute! I really enjoy her humorous yet endearingly realistic take on the strange events unfolding in front of her.

 

Found a mysterious tower that has notes possibly addressed to her? - Good, there might be some profit in it.

Met an intimidating looking guard? - Better stay polite and friendly (plus anyone could've mistaken that mannequin for a person :classic_ph34r:)

Saw a huge glowing beacon of light that was talking to her? - Let's poke it and see if it's hot (it was honest curiosity! ?)

 

I also really like the fact that she seems to have a family and she cares about them (her mom, sister, auntie). A lot of times we get to see heroes who are either orphans, have complicated relationships with their relatives or remember nothing of their origins and past.

 

There are a lot of mysteries to unfold : the magical white-haired lady, the appearance of the tower out of nowhere and the identity of a naughty being (spirit?) that sent a little surprise to Maylin's shower room. ?

 

Really good work and I'm looking forward to the continuation! ?

Thanks :)        The magical white-haired lady? ?

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3 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Thanks :)        The magical white-haired lady? ?

I meant her, though now that I look at this screen more I'm not sure if her hair is white with a bit of blue glow or just very light blue ?

But she definitely looks magical :classic_ph34r:


 

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3 hours ago, Devianna said:

I meant her, though now that I look at this screen more I'm not sure if her hair is white with a bit of blue glow or just very light blue ?

But she definitely looks magical :classic_ph34r:


 

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Oh....:) I think I just discovered that they call that color of light blue "Cyan". ?

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Nice work! I do feel like an idiot as i thought your "thinking" bubbles was actually the words loading

 

I guess because the font sizes of your periods are different, i thought the larger sized periods were loading images :P

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On 4/18/2020 at 9:30 PM, devious-Drunna said:

Nice work! I do feel like an idiot as i thought your "thinking" bubbles was actually the words loading

 

I guess because the font sizes of your periods are different, i thought the larger sized periods were loading images :P

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It was Maylin's Brain loading. :sweat_smile: ;):thumbsup:

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A NEW HAND TOUCHES THE BEACON

 

Look who finally mastered speech bubbles! You've come a long way, baby ?

 

I like the shower scene but it highlights one of my biggest issues with the skyrim mod scene- the complete lack of quality dildo mods! The green is a bit out of place ?

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9 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

A NEW HAND TOUCHES THE BEACON

 

Look who finally mastered speech bubbles! You've come a long way, baby ?

 

I like the shower scene but it highlights one of my biggest issues with the skyrim mod scene- the complete lack of quality dildo mods! The green is a bit out of place ?

Thanks :D Yeah it's quiet a shame for lack of quality dildo mods. :( Green is a bit out of place. :sweat_smile:  HEY! :mrgreen:  oh sorry Hulk... :sweat_smile:

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