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PLEASE READ THE SPOILER

 

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This is some project I've been working on. Finally it will released for public.


The model it's different from the ones I'm used to, but I hope you like the change. As you can see, the text is implemented in the pictures. I started this type of chapter back on the Skeever Problem chapter. I liked the idea, but for various reasons, I kept the old model for the next chapters. From now on, I think I will keep this format.

 

WHY?

The most important reason: I didn't want to leave written some mistake. Since English is not my mother tongue, I was not so sure about if I was writing right the words or not. I've overcome that insecurity and, with the help of the translator, I think I've done a good job on this chapter.


This chapter is also different because I've implemented LOVE. Yeah, tragic things keep happening to the protagonist, but this time I've added some extra love. I think this touch gives the main character a lot more of depth.


And I think that's all for now. I've worked on this chapter for 2 or 3 weeks. And now it's finished. I really hope that you enjoy it and your feedback is always welcome!

 

AND NOW ENJOY THE CHAPTER

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46_End.png.fb6c840a4e6a980c445782f993a89abc.png

 

 

~ The End ~

 

 

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I hope you enjoyed this chapter. This is the most special chapter I've worked on.

P.S. Vivi will be released in a few days.

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Well, usually it's quite short, but there we actually had a developed story. Some things are still kinda rushed (the meeting with Erik, the capture) but that pace also helps avoiding downtimes, and we've got enough events to be actually entertained. The comic layout is quite readable as well, but you should be careful to always place the first one above the following ones, as the reading order starts up -> down to select a line, and then right -> left on one same line. So if you place one bubble at top left corner, it will still be read first despite being on the left. That put aside,  beautiful protagonist and outfits as always, and a pleasant read overall. :smiley:

 

Malicia : « Vivi's very pretty ! And now she gonna honey-honey with Erik, and live happily ever after ! Smiley_ayuluna_HFR.gif »

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