Commonwealth Slavers

[JB.]

13 minutes ago, Neppy said:

I tested Pet Walk after the remain captive ending and a couple of lines that needs correction:

"Sounds good. You have no idea how much I'd love pleasure you" -> "You have no idea how much I'd love to pleasure you."

"See you handsome, where do I sign up so it soon?" -> It's kind of bad English, you might want to replace that one with something else like "See you around handsome, I can't wait for the next pounding."

 

 

 

How about: 

 

Where do I sign to make it happen soon?

[416.cja]

@JB. I'm not sure if you've answered this before, but is English your second language? It'll help us understand why there could be influxes of grammar mistakes and we don't have to point out. We can simply go through the dialogue and written scripts to try and correct any English mistakes and let you know so you can implement them.

[Neppy]

4 hours ago, JB. said:

 

 

How about: 

 

Where do I sign to make it happen soon?

I think I get what you're trying to say but frankly it just sounds really weird to say it in both English and context wise. I'd just recommend using the line I suggested instead or something close to it.

 

As for the Whore Room quest, instead of Lindstrom saying "You don't have your head screwed on straight" he should say "Girl, you're really fucked in the head."

I really like the line "I crave to be used like a cheap whore." but I'd tweak it a bit to: "I just love to be used as/like a cheap whore."

The other 3 replies are kinda meh, I'd just replace them with something else in my opinion.

 

For the submissive dialogue in the WR I'm thinking she could say stuff like : 

"Hmm punish me daddy, I've been a bad whore."

"I'm your dirty little whore. Fuck me. Fuck me hard."

"Please punish this dirty slut. Use me as your cum dump."

"I might have been fucked by hundreds of guys, but I'm the cheapest whore in town."

"I've been a naughty little whore. Use me as your cum slut."

 

As for the rebellious answers it could just be some insults. I don't think it'd make much sense for her to resist since she wanted to be in the WR in the first place. I think I'd replace those lines with something insulting like :

"You think you're a tough guy? I've fucked dogs who were bigger than you."

"Wow. I've fucked hundreds of raiders but you're probably the smallest guy I've seen so far. Let's just get this over with..."

"Ugh, can't you at least take a shower before coming in here?"

"Great, another dumb/stupid asshole..."

"I know I'm a cheap whore, but why does Lindstrom always have to send in the ugliest bastards?" (you can replace "bastards" with another insult, it's just the best one I can think of for this specific line)

 

On another note, I've done some testing with the trapper ending but could not get past the farm miniquest. After eating a bunch of times I get attached to the cross but the screen gets stuck on the black screen. Also is there an armor workbench on the ship? I've seen a weapons workbench and a chemistry lab but it would be nice if there was an armor workbench so I can edit clothing textures while on the ship.

 

 

Edited July 21, 2025 by Neppy

[JB.]

13 minutes ago, 416.cja said:

@JB. I'm not sure if you've answered this before, but is English your second language? It'll help us understand why there could be influxes of grammar mistakes and we don't have to point out. We can simply go through the dialogue and written scripts to try and correct any English mistakes and let you know so you can implement them.

I have absolutely no knowledge of English. I'm sure my translator is throwing incorrect verb tenses, because I've used it backwards and I've noticed how it struggles with verb tenses.

 

Please feel free to make corrections. I have seven days and I still have a lot of credits at Elevenlabs that will go down the drain if I don't use them.

 

Today I did more voices for when Nora whores herself out to farmers. I added “FemaleEvenTonned” and merchant guards. 

 

[416.cja]

Just now, JB. said:

I have absolutely no knowledge of English. I'm sure my translator is throwing incorrect verb tenses, because I've used it backwards and I've noticed how it struggles with verb tenses.

 

Please feel free to make corrections. I have seven days and I still have a lot of credits at Elevenlabs that will go down the drain if I don't use them.

 

Today I did more voices for when Nora whores herself out to farmers. I added “FemaleEvenTonned” and merchant guards. 

 

If you want, send the translated lines to me in a message and I'll correct any grammar mistakes.  I and I'm sure plenty of others have done essays and assignments requiring perfect English. 

[4nln415]

14 hours ago, Mushikisai said:

Just want to ask how to change other slaves' outifts and which outfit is the pc dressing in this image.

You can press ` to open console. Select the slave unil it shows their code and type openactorcontainer 1

change appearance is the same just with slm xxxcode

[gegging]

19 hours ago, JB. said:

The truth is, I didn't think about it much. I can remove that condition.

I vote for removing the slave forever condition. Working in the whore room while you're still working for your freedom would add variety after you run out of new jobs to do.

[416.cja]

14 minutes ago, gegging said:

I vote for removing the slave forever condition. Working in the whore room while you're still working for your freedom would add variety after you run out of new jobs to do.

Lore wise it doesn't make sense, Nora needs to be fucked up and choose to remain a fucked up individual to the end of her days. Therefore, she would enjoy getting r*ped everyday. Because she's trying to earn her freedom and she still has hope, I don't think she would willingly condemn herself to such hell. Just my opinion and take.

[Samsara281]

my CS version is 2.6.8c，AAF1.1.1，quest can not arrive next stage after AAF animation，what's problem

[4nln415]

17 minutes ago, Samsara281 said:

my CS version is 2.6.8c，AAF1.1.1，quest can not arrive next stage after AAF animation，what's problem

You remember what animation it was? 

You said failed to next stage does that mean first animation played but can move to next stage, or did it say fail and will now skip? Usually it's due to timing. If you try again maybe it will work. 

Edited July 21, 2025 by 4nln415

[Samsara281]

3 minutes ago, 4nln415 said:

You remember what animation it was? 

You said failed to next stage does that mean first animation played but can move to next stage, or did it say fail and will now skip? Usually it's due to timing. If you try again maybe it will work. 

i mean the quest's stage

[4nln415]

1 hour ago, 416.cja said:

Lore wise it doesn't make sense, Nora needs to be fucked up and choose to remain a fucked up individual to the end of her days. Therefore, she would enjoy getting r*ped everyday. Because she's trying to earn her freedom and she still has hope, I don't think she would willingly condemn herself to such hell. Just my opinion and take.

I guess it can be a good source to get lots of slaver jets from poor raiders if you're short.  

The quest selections and options are there for people who wants it. 

 

@JB.always taking jab at players in the dialogue lol 

The raider that talks to the character have a tendency of getting bounced outside the room. I console commanded it in. (first try) 

Edited July 21, 2025 by 4nln415

[4nln415]

6 minutes ago, Samsara281 said:

i mean the quest's stage

People are gonna need more information. I guess you try again and see if that works. If not, try to reinstall the animations. 

[Samsara281]

21 minutes ago, 4nln415 said:

People are gonna need more information. I guess you try again and see if that works. If not, try to reinstall the animations. 

every animation does.

I use UAP 2.6.63-1, staged leito plus 1.0.7, realhandcuffs 0.4.16

dd rc9

attribures 2.8.0

[4nln415]

22 minutes ago, Samsara281 said:

every animation does.

I use UAP 2.6.63-1, staged leito plus 1.0.7, realhandcuffs 0.4.16

dd rc9

attribures 2.8.0

You familiar with the Manual?

Between UAP and Leito things can mess up easy I think. 

 

Such as this

Edited July 21, 2025 by 4nln415

[Samsara281]

11 minutes ago, 4nln415 said:

You familiar with the Manual?

Between UAP and Leito things can mess up easy I think. 

 

Such as this

i tried to update uap to 2.6.64-1 and remove staged leito plus, but still

[JB.]

3 minutes ago, Samsara281 said:

i tried to update uap to 2.6.64-1 and remove staged leito plus, but still

The animations work, but the mod doesn't do the setstage after the scene ends? Is that the problem?

[4nln415]

11 minutes ago, Samsara281 said:

i tried to update uap to 2.6.64-1 and remove staged leito plus, but still

It says Install UAP, and in the selection, Uncheck Leito Animation in the list during installation (not selected) You still keep Staged Leito Plus.  

Edited July 21, 2025 by 4nln415

[4nln415]

9 minutes ago, JB. said:

The animations work, but the mod doesn't do the setstage after the scene ends? Is that the problem?

I think I totally misunderstood him

Is he saying the quest isn't progressing after the animation? 

 

"quest can not arrive next stage after AAF animation，what's problem"

[Samsara281]

6 minutes ago, 4nln415 said:

它说安装 UAP，在选择时，在安装过程中取消选中列表中的 Leito Animation（未选中）您仍然保留 Staged Leito Plus。  

I did, and I already remove staged leito plus now, so it's not the problem

[4nln415]

13 minutes ago, Samsara281 said:

I did, and I already remove staged leito plus now, so it's not the problem

Is your issue with the animation or the quest? 

 

Did you get teleport outside the house after the animation? I assume you're at the beginning. Talk to Gristle. 

Edited July 21, 2025 by 4nln415

[Samsara281]

2 minutes ago, 4nln415 said:

I think I totally misunderstood him

Is he saying the quest isn't progressing after the animation? 

 

"quest can not arrive next stage after AAF animation，what's problem"

I am not a native English speaker and I not using translation, sry

12 minutes ago, JB. said:

动画可以正常播放，但是场景结束后，Mod 并没有执行 setstage 操作？这是问题所在吗？

yes

[JB.]

Just now, Samsara281 said:

I am not a native English speaker and I not using translation, sry

yes

Aha, so the problem is Sim Settlement 2. That mod is the only one I know of that affects my mod in this way. Do you have it? Uninstall it.

[Samsara281]

12 minutes ago, JB. said:

Aha, so the problem is Sim Settlement 2. That mod is the only one I know of that affects my mod in this way. Do you have it? Uninstall it.

dam, I found the problem! because I forgot to install sexattribute before start a new game then I install it on this save and run this mod. I start a new game again now and it works fine. thanks

[gegging]

2 hours ago, 416.cja said:

 I don't think she would willingly condemn herself to such hell. Just my opinion and take.

The slave life is hell already. If she hated the life, it wouldn't matter to her if she was in WR or doing any other job like searching for minutemen bombs; maybe Nora hates talking to clients or the VIP demands to the point she'd rather go to WR. If she came to enjoy the life even before she gets to decline Gristle's offer for freedom, it really doesn't matter to her.

Ultimately it is player's choice.