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Click the link to view video for the first part of the chapter
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1MTYRdFhjiZMCArCfMLBGO3keDznhMY2K

 

 


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Authors Note:

I do not plan on ever doing that type of video thing again, was just something i wanted to do, next chapter will be normal word bubbles all the way though. I also have zero plans on telling Fiona's backstory until around chapter 65 so the video was just supposed to be a peak at some of the stuff she went through, figured it'd be interesting to put it in video format. Lemme know if there are issues as well as word bubble issues.

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SpyVsPie

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Huh, missed this one. LL notifications have just gone full potato. 

 

Anyway nice job though I did find the music selection a bit... off (though that could just be because I have a deep burning hatred for that song ?)

Tirloque

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38 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Huh, missed this one. LL notifications have just gone full potato.

I think that entry might've been created some days in the past, but then made public only recently. 'cause I missed it too, and the first likes are from 5h ago. ?

38 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Huh, missed this one. LL notifications have just gone full potato. 

 

Anyway nice job though I did find the music selection a bit... off (though that could just be because I have a deep burning hatred for that song ?)

I found the music fitting, melodic enough to sweeten what was happening during it ; that contrast emphasizing the dreamlike aspect and its impact of it on Fiona. No really that video was well made, both in terms of shots, of traveling speed, of events' succession.

And now we do know more about Fiona's phobic fears and the strange relationship uniting her to Sophia.

 

There was also some build-up regarding Lady Hallflame's plans. Were the ash effects and Morrowind part of a same mod btw ?


Quite the poetic entry there despite the underlying violence of the initial events. And thus bringing some variety through character development. Good job R1pper ! :D

 

 

 

Guest

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And the plot thickens actually, look forward for more ?

ther1pper

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19 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Huh, missed this one. LL notifications have just gone full potato. 

 

Anyway nice job though I did find the music selection a bit... off (though that could just be because I have a deep burning hatred for that song ?)

Fair enough, even though that song is basically a meme song at this point, I still felt it could work.

18 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I think that entry might've been created some days in the past, but then made public only recently. 'cause I missed it too, and the first likes are from 5h ago. ?

I found the music fitting, melodic enough to sweeten what was happening during it ; that contrast emphasizing the dreamlike aspect and its impact of it on Fiona. No really that video was well made, both in terms of shots, of traveling speed, of events' succession.

And now we do know more about Fiona's phobic fears and the strange relationship uniting her to Sophia.

 

There was also some build-up regarding Lady Hallflame's plans. Were the ash effects and Morrowind part of a same mod btw ?


Quite the poetic entry there despite the underlying violence of the initial events. And thus bringing some variety through character development. Good job R1pper ! :D

Glad you liked it, i'm glad the video was A. working for everyone, B. worked for you. Took me a bit to get the speed of some images to work as well as the panning for some shots.

 

Also i use Wet and Cold which has an Ash option as well, so combined with the Shadow of Morrowind mod i used it worked very well.

 

Also to both you and Spy, your notifications are working. While it says Sept/22, that was the date i posted it on LL but not the date i published it. I had it set-up and blazingsai was helping me look over it for errors in 55 so i could correc then repost them, he helped me with 55 last night before i finally published it.

16 hours ago, Resdayn said:

And the plot thickens actually, look forward for more ?

Awesome, glad you liked it.

AltNameByeee

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Dang... I really enjoyed it chapter, r1p. So much emotion and story in one short entry. The bond between them is amazing. You really captured the care they feel for each other, despite being such different personalities. Truly fantastic and just on the level I'd expect from you. Keep it up.

Agent Tex

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I really enjoyed this read, keep it up looking forward to the next one

Jay-Omms

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Aww! That was a nice talk. :heart:;):thumbsup:

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