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A Symphony of Frost and Flame - Prologue


Irstina

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Hi! I made a thing and decided to post it here too, Unfortunately since I'm also posting this on Nexus, there won't actually be any sexual content - I hope someone still finds it interesting! I may, in the future, add an entry or two exclusively here with stuff like that, but it would have to make sense in the context of the narrative first. I'm still terrible at formatting these blogs so bear with me.

 

Future entries will be following specific characters and we will only really be seeing and hearing what they do and listening to their thoughts, this will also make it more personal rather than the high-level situation presented here. For an introduction however, I felt it was necessary to set the scene. 

 

Future entries might also be a bit shorter (Edit from the future:  SHE'S A LIAR, BEWARE!), since this one quickly got out of control as far as the number of images goes. We'll see. I haven't done this before, so I'm still figuring it out \o/

 

Contents:

ACT I

Prologue (You are here!)

Rianne I

Lilith I

Faielle I

Jon I

 

PART I

Spoiler

The 201st year of the Fourth Era is drawing to a close - and the Imperial Province of Skyrim remains locked in its devastating civil war.

 

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Men? Men are violent, short-lived creatures.

 

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Ephemeral. They come and go as the seasons.

 

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They think the world revolves around their squabbles – this patch of dirt here, that feud there - children, blindly fumbling through a
world they barely understand.

 

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We are as a year to their hour, a decade to their day. We, endure.

 

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The previous winter proved difficult for the Empire.

 

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Most of the farmers of Skyrim were recruited by their respective lordlings to fight their petty civil war for them. Imperial leadership
has utterly failed to stamp out this rebellion.

 

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This year will be different.

 

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We will be taking a different approach. A change that is long overdue. One that will end the war.

 

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Of course, the ensuing famine is a separate matter, of little import to us. Between the Dragon Crisis and the Civil War, the harvest of 201 has failed.  Those who were not drafted were slaughtered by raiding parties...

 

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Or worse things...

 

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As per the White-Gold Concordat, agents of the Aldmeri Dominion have been empowered to hunt down Talos Worshipers across the Empire.

 

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Our representatives here in Skyrim have been taking this task very seriously – symbols are important, and they shall not have this one.

 

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This aspect of the faith must be stamped out, lest they end up considering themselves our equals. Preposterous.

 

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Talos is not a god.

 

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He was a human. And he is long dead.

 

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We are not "killing" him.

 

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We are merely lighting his funeral pyre.

 

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There is, however, much more to our operations than hunting down would-be heretics. Humans are nothing if not adaptable. Our mere presence alongside the Imperial Legion legitimizes us. If the humans get used to seeing  the White Eagle as a symbol of authority, they will be all the easier to control following their inevitable conquest.

 

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Moreover, Alinor is interested in a number of ruins in the province, particularly those of Dwemer origin.

 

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Any potential artifacts must be secured lest they fall into the hands of the Imperials – or even worse foes.

 

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With the winter snows thawing, the Aldmeri Dominion and their Imperial ‘allies’ are renewing their efforts to crush the Stormcloak rebellion. A new Elven regiment, a hundred strong, will be marching into the province this Spring. Perhaps most noteworthy among the newly arriving officers is Justicar Rianne.

 

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She is being transferred from Alinor itself, at her personal request, apparently.

 

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The humans have forgotten what a real army looks like – it has been thirty years since they’ve seen one, after all.

 

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We will be giving them another lesson. One that they'll remember, this time.

 

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Aldmeri Soldiers are loyal. They do not retreat - and they would sooner fall on their own swords than consider something as dishonorable as rebellion.

 

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As for the Justicar - I am vaguely familiar with her –she was one of the youngest Aldmeri soldiers to fight in the Great War, in part due to her family’s misfortunes with the new regime. Her House name remains somewhat controversial in Alinor – I suppose she is here to prove her loyalty. With this Civil War dragging on interminably due to human incompetence, there would be no shortage of opportunity.

 

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There is one other matter. The Dragonborn. Our spies have lost track of the man during the Winter - a shameful failure. From what we've managed to piece together, the confrontation with the so called "World Eater" changed him somehow, we are sorely lacking in details.

 

A number of his associates have been apprehended and interrogated by our intelligence officers. None of them were familiar with his plans or his current whereabouts. The subjects failed to survive interrogation.

 

Other known supporters, including an alleged love interest, remain at large. 

 

To the best of our knowledge, he is no longer in the province. This is ideal for us, as he was a wildcard wholly outside our control. Ideally, he will never return.

 

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Following his failure to end the Civil War before winter, General Tullius has been relieved of command this spring. Rumors have it the man suffered a mental breakdown after a second foiled attempt at Ulfric’s life - his officers have allegedly been running everything ever since. They are so fragile.

 

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His replacement, a certain Varus Laecinnius, seems more interested in political manoeuvres than military ones. And yet, he will suit our purposes just fine.

 

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Varus is the son of an elder statesman from the Imperial City. Quintus Laecinnius was one of the architects of the peace treaty 30
years prior and a known sympathizer of Alinor – apparently, some men DO know their place.

 

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A swift victory in Skyrim for young Varus would not only raise him to stardom within the Imperial Legion...

 

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But doing so alongside us would grant his father’s faction even more political clout – with his cooperation, we can further pursue the Empire’s integration into the Dominion. There will be no Second Great War – their conquest will be a peaceful one.

 

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To this end, Aldmeri and Imperial Officers will be working together, something that has not happened since the Oblivion Crisis, two centuries ago.

 

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The council of weak-kneed fools steering the Empire to its demise after the Emperor's death may not realize this, but the arrangement benefits us far more than it does them. The mere fact that the Men would accept this deal denotes their desperation. Their Empire is crumbling. We are here to help it do just that.

 

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Things will return to the way they used to be – the way they SHOULD be. One Nation. Under Mer.

 

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The White City will not tolerate another Hammerfell. Our victory will be swift. We will prove the superiority of Mer by solving the Empire’s problems for them. We will end the Civil War. We will kill Jarl Stormcloak.

 

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And then? Then we will pick their country clean of any magical artifacts of note – and leave them to squabble among themselves in these grey wastes they call home.

 

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Alinor Aeternum.

- Magister Talandil, Commander of the Thalmor Expedition in Skyrim

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PART II

Spoiler

Marcus put the journal down and sighed as he slumped back into his chair, he had spent hours translating the flowery Elven tongue and
found that most of it was just more of the Magister’s inane ramblings rather than anything relevant. The whole thing made for an exhausting read.

He made a mental note to complain to his handler about the quality of recent interceptions – this was not the first time Imperial Intelligence had acquired journal entries or missives belonging to the Thalmor Commander and as the best translator the spy network had in the province, he was saddled with all of them.

 

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And yet, he was happy enough with his assignment to Whiterun. Jarl Balgruuf has been maintaining a staunchly neutral stance throughout the war. There were few safer places for his family than within the city walls. The province was burning - but they - they were safe.

 

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“I’m going out for a walk, dear.” He embraced Aurelia as they shared a short kiss.

 

 

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She frowned lightly and shook her head “A walk? Like, a normal one?”

 

Aurelia seemed unconvinced – she was well aware of his occupation, and the dangers it entailed. In the past, her overbearing nature had been frustrating, but he’d since grown to appreciate how much she cared.

 

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“Yes, really. I just need some fresh air after all that work – dreary stuff, truly.” She accepted his explanation, but seemed worried nonetheless – as usual.

 

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He turned to Antonia and lightly ruffled her hair. "Be good for your mom, little lady."

 

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The gesture always seemed to annoy her, so he always did it - he considered it his duty as a father. "Yes father..." She replied tersely.

 

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“I shan’t be long.” He gave them one more glance before walking towards the door. "Don’t tarry, I’m preparing dinner. Besides, it’s already dark.” His wife answered, ever concerned.

 

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Marcus always seemed to enjoy walks at night - perhaps this was due to the nature of his job, or perhaps his job came as a result of his preference for the dark.

 

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He sighed as he looked over the battlements. The evening air was quite cool, though with the end of Sun’s Dawn being close, he expected the weather to turn with the coming of Spring.

 

The elves the Magister mentioned would likely be coming through within the next week or two - he may be able to catch a glimpse of them. This year, the war would surely end, he had planned to return home to Cyrodiil - perhaps even retire from active duty with Imperial Intelligence entirely. It had been an exciting tour, but worry for his family weighed too heavily on his mind these days.

 

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He felt guilty for voicing his complaints – after all, many of his friends in the service risked their lives daily spying on Elves, Stormcloaks and the like. They were in constant, mortal danger. The worst he had to deal with were Talendil's interminable rants on Elven superiority. A small burden to carry, compared to the others.

 

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Suddenly, Marcus felt a hand tightly grip his mouth, the assailant pushed him against the battlement. “Don’t steal from your betters, Spy.”, the dark voice said.

 

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The voice’s accent was queer, but he had no time to place it – he felt the dagger plunge into his side, like a piece of ice. Again. And again. And again. As his knees were starting to give in, the shadowy figure, with some difficulty, hoisted and pushed him over the edge.

 

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Marcus’ mind raced as he fell. He thought of Aurelia and Antonia and how he had endangered them. How all of this was his fault.

 

The bastard likely knew where he lived, he probably knew about all the documents stashed away in his desk. The assassin did not consider that the key was on him, or perhaps he did not care. If he dared touch them...

 

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A feeling of helplessness washed over him. He would not be there to protect them. He briefly considered the irony of the situation - he had grown so accustomed to safely moving about in the dark, either for work or pleasure, that it did not even cross his mind that someone lurking out there would seek to harm him. Aurelia was right all along, more than he cared to admit. He had let his guard down. Just once. And it was enough.

 

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Would they be safe? Perhaps the assassin only needed him... Perhaps...

 

Marcus did not have long to consider these questions. The landing would break his neck.

 

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Very well-written and illustrated.  Your screenshots possess a real cinematic quality which enhances the narrative even more.  Also huge compliments on that army marching across the bridge scene. I cannot begin to fathom how long it must've taken you to capture those images. ?

 

Really interesting prologue. Hoping to read more of your work. ☺️

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Very nice pictures ! Very atmospheric !

 

The bridge picture gives me hope again for the battle scenes I have in mind.

 

 

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Man this was just a visual banquet for me!!

Everything was so well thought out, arranged, and then snapped by what has to be one of the best eyes for picture taking I've seen on this site!

Your angles, FOV, and lighting are so well done in each picture! And not one of them seems like lazy filler!!

And then there's the pictures that just blew my mind, like the marching elves, the troops standing at attention for both factions, and of course the busy battle scenes!! So well done!!

 

I'm definitely a fan, even without sexual content!! Bravo!!

 

( Course if you decided to add that content later, and you do it as well as this..... I sure wouldn't complain ?  )

 

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Nice job :thumbsup:. Some really great scenes and images.

I especially liked how you managed to use the depth of field without hiding relevant information or characters in the background, imo most people blur too much relevant stuff in their stories due to the DoF.

 

Btw. just because this site allows for adult content doesn't mean the content has to be adult ;) .

 

What's the best way to publish stories like these on the Nexus? Most commonly I see some story fragments in the description of images in the image section. Is there a better way? I have a couple of non adult entries I'm interested to show on the nexus. 

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16 hours ago, Devianna said:

Very well-written and illustrated.  Your screenshots possess a real cinematic quality which enhances the narrative even more.  Also huge compliments on that army marching across the bridge scene. I cannot begin to fathom how long it must've taken you to capture those images. ?

 

Really interesting prologue. Hoping to read more of your work. ☺️

Thanks! It did not take that long, since they were all doing the same thing, it's scenes where each person is doing their own thing that can become time consuming.

 

15 hours ago, Holzfrau said:

Awesome intro, can't wait for more!  A guy named Varus running the Legion doesn't bode well for them...

More soon(TM). I did think a little bit about that Varus, but we'll have to see if he takes a similar path or not :3

 

14 hours ago, Cema said:

Very nice pictures ! Very atmospheric !

 

The bridge picture gives me hope again for the battle scenes I have in mind.

 

 

Thank you. Battle scenes are... difficult. But I have thought of a few things!

 

9 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Man this was just a visual banquet for me!!

Everything was so well thought out, arranged, and then snapped by what has to be one of the best eyes for picture taking I've seen on this site!

Your angles, FOV, and lighting are so well done in each picture! And not one of them seems like lazy filler!!

And then there's the pictures that just blew my mind, like the marching elves, the troops standing at attention for both factions, and of course the busy battle scenes!! So well done!!

 

I'm definitely a fan, even without sexual content!! Bravo!!

 

( Course if you decided to add that content later, and you do it as well as this..... I sure wouldn't complain ?  )

 

Thanks! Believe it or not, I'm not actually 100% happy with everything, but I'm glad others like it.  I had to make custom poses for marching and standing at attention, a few others are custom too, since there just wasn't really anything like that (that I could find), all the pin-ups are cute and I have at least Halo's Poser loaded in at all times, but so much of it doesn't really suit my purposes in this context.

 

As for sexual content, I'm not exactly opposed to it, but I wanted to avoid "sexposition" (looking at you, early GoT seasons~) and include it where it would make sense or show something new about the characters, or such. I'll have to think about it. In my outline of early chapters, at least, there's too much to cover to have time for naughty stuff.

 

You can check out my Flickr for some random lewd shots though!

 

4 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Cool shots :O 

Thanks!

 

2 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Nice job :thumbsup:. Some really great scenes and images.

I especially liked how you managed to use the depth of field without hiding relevant information or characters in the background, imo most people blur too much relevant stuff in their stories due to the DoF.

 

Btw. just because this site allows for adult content doesn't mean the content has to be adult ;) .

 

What's the best way to publish stories like these on the Nexus? Most commonly I see some story fragments in the description of images in the image section. Is there a better way? I have a couple of non adult entries I'm interested to show on the nexus. 

Thank you! I try to be careful with the DoF. My primary purpose with DoF is to hide imperfections, especially stuff way off in the distance that may get replaced by LODs or such. Relevant characters or objects should never be blurred, so I always tinker with it quite a bit. Fortunately Snapdragon's DoF is quite good at giving me plenty of control over how much or little blur there is.

 

About the Nexus: Unfortunately, I don't think there's a really good way of publishing a comprehensive, multi-chapter story on the Nexus. I posted mine like this and the plan was to offer links to the Prologue/Future Chapters in every new entry so people could go back if they hadn't seen them. The problem is your post gets buried pretty quickly so it may not even be seen by too many, and there is no blog format where you can save a specific series of posts in a specific order or something.

 

If you can reasonably fit some kind of one-off story or such in a single post, maybe that's for the best. I'll be trying to leave links at the top of my posts to older entries, will see how that works out.

 

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8 hours ago, Irstina said:

About the Nexus: Unfortunately, I don't think there's a really good way of publishing a comprehensive, multi-chapter story on the Nexus. I posted mine like this and the plan was to offer links to the Prologue/Future Chapters in every new entry so people could go back if they hadn't seen them. The problem is your post gets buried pretty quickly so it may not even be seen by too many, and there is no blog format where you can save a specific series of posts in a specific order or something.

 

If you can reasonably fit some kind of one-off story or such in a single post, maybe that's for the best. I'll be trying to leave links at the top of my posts to older entries, will see how that works out.

 

I've seen people posting stories in this way on the Nexus a couple of times. But unless you already have a large follower base your entries are not really visible and depend heavily on the thumbnail of the image that you decided to showcase. 

I came up with a similar solution to combat that by posting links to all my story entries in a menu on each of my entries. Even here in the blog section posts drown pretty quickly and the menu helps to keep everything organized and visible. 

 

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17 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Wow great work

 

I loved how your hame looks

Thanks! Already messing around with the next part, where we'll be following a certain elf. \o/

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God damn, this entire set up is great, love it. Can't wait for the next part. Also holy shit how long did it take you to set up all those soldiers, let alone how did your game not crash, this special edition or regular skyrim?

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48 minutes ago, ther1pper said:

God damn, this entire set up is great, love it. Can't wait for the next part. Also holy shit how long did it take you to set up all those soldiers, let alone how did your game not crash, this special edition or regular skyrim?

Thanks! My game is relatively stable right now. I usually have problems with leaving indoor cells. Here's an actual example: I use Alternate Start, I spawn in a Solitude inn (since Solitude is where I'm shooting next), I go outside - all good. I enter another building. I shoot in there for awhile, When I try to leave - my game crashes. Oookay. I restart, try to leave again - it crashes again. And again.

 

I start a new game, spawn in the same inn, go outside in the same city.. it works. Why? I don't know. Maddening, I tell you.

 

Anyway, the way I did it is I summoned 4 soldiers at a time, posed them, froze them (with TAI) and then spawned the next 4, posed, etc. As long as actors are frozen and not doing anything, they don't really mess with your game. There are 92 marching elves in total on the bridge, by the way. If you spawn 90 active actors into your game at once, or probably even less than that, it will likely crash.

 

It probably took 30 minutes? I'm not sure. The fact that they're all doing the same pose made it much easier/shorter. If they were each doing their own thing, well... that's.. challenging.

 

This is on regular Skyrim. Special Edition just lacks a lot of stuff - including Snapdragon ENB, which is what I use for all my screenshotting.

 

 

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1 hour ago, Irstina said:

Thanks! My game is relatively stable right now. I usually have problems with leaving indoor cells. Here's an actual example: I use Alternate Start, I spawn in a Solitude inn (since Solitude is where I'm shooting next), I go outside - all good. I enter another building. I shoot in there for awhile, When I try to leave - my game crashes. Oookay. I restart, try to leave again - it crashes again. And again.

 

I start a new game, spawn in the same inn, go outside in the same city.. it works. Why? I don't know. Maddening, I tell you.

 

Anyway, the way I did it is I summoned 4 soldiers at a time, posed them, froze them (with TAI) and then spawned the next 4, posed, etc. As long as actors are frozen and not doing anything, they don't really mess with your game. There are 92 marching elves in total on the bridge, by the way. If you spawn 90 active actors into your game at once, or probably even less than that, it will likely crash.

 

It probably took 30 minutes? I'm not sure. The fact that they're all doing the same pose made it much easier/shorter. If they were each doing their own thing, well... that's.. challenging.

 

This is on regular Skyrim. Special Edition just lacks a lot of stuff - including Snapdragon ENB, which is what I use for all my screenshotting.

 

 

Oh okay, damn, well we've all got problems with crashing. I've tried war scenes myself, however my game freaks out after about....30 actors....i think? I don't know how many corpses i had in the city plus living people. So is it TAI'd actors that don't effect your game or ones you just got posed only, or does it require both. Also had a few cases of TAI'd actors disappearing on me so that's why i try not to use it for most scenes.

 

Yeah SE lacking 50% of the mods i use is the only reason i along with most people don't switch over.

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1 hour ago, ther1pper said:

Oh okay, damn, well we've all got problems with crashing. I've tried war scenes myself, however my game freaks out after about....30 actors....i think? I don't know how many corpses i had in the city plus living people. So is it TAI'd actors that don't effect your game or ones you just got posed only, or does it require both. Also had a few cases of TAI'd actors disappearing on me so that's why i try not to use it for most scenes.

 

Yeah SE lacking 50% of the mods i use is the only reason i along with most people don't switch over.

You need to TAI your actors anyway, or they'll get ideas and do stuff, like look at you or move around. Some of them don't move much, like the Thalmor Soldiers I spawned, but some NPCs, especially unique named ones might even run off! Basically a TAIed NPC is a nice, obedient prop that won't do anything - remember you can still move TAIed NPCs with Jaxonz Positioner and I think with Screenshot Pad too.

 

About disappearing NPCs: This plagued me for ages too! But Alter Native told me how to solve it: You need to be in TCL mode, otherwise even frozen NPCs will eventually "remember" they have collision and they'll move. They don't vanish, they just teleport far away, usually still within the cell. If you look around you might find them. If you stay in TCL mode, once you put an NPC somewhere and TAI them, it's guaranteed that they'll never move. I would not have been able to arrange 92 elves in formation like that without knowing this.

 

It's a little more annoying to move around in TCL mode, I know, but you'll never have an NPC vanish on you again. Sometimes if I'm only posing with one other NPC, I'll do it without TCL, but it's needed for any big scenes.

 

2 hours ago, The Gauntman said:

Well done, its great to see what can be made today with the game. Great job!

 

Thanks! I have ideas, implementation might be.. challenging, at times, though!

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Awesome! Had an idea like this before, but I'm too much of a deadbeat to do anything pass a trailer ?. Can't wait for future update!

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1 hour ago, Irstina said:

You need to TAI your actors anyway, or they'll get ideas and do stuff, like look at you or move around. Some of them don't move much, like the Thalmor Soldiers I spawned, but some NPCs, especially unique named ones might even run off! Basically a TAIed NPC is a nice, obedient prop that won't do anything - remember you can still move TAIed NPCs with Jaxonz Positioner and I think with Screenshot Pad too.

 

About disappearing NPCs: This plagued me for ages too! But Alter Native told me how to solve it: You need to be in TCL mode, otherwise even frozen NPCs will eventually "remember" they have collision and they'll move. They don't vanish, they just teleport far away, usually still within the cell. If you look around you might find them. If you stay in TCL mode, once you put an NPC somewhere and TAI them, it's guaranteed that they'll never move. I would not have been able to arrange 92 elves in formation like that without knowing this.

 

It's a little more annoying to move around in TCL mode, I know, but you'll never have an NPC vanish on you again. Sometimes if I'm only posing with one other NPC, I'll do it without TCL, but it's needed for any big scenes.

Well i normally don't tai my actors....depending on if my actors are followers, i use a different mod for that. I am aware of being able to move tai'd actors with Jaxons, when i found that out i was really happy. I don't know if screenshot pad locks actors in place, only helps with tilting them and such.

 

Thank you so much for the information about the tai'd teleporting thing, that explains so much and now i don't have to worry about people i decaptitate disappearing within shots. I recall a few times turning around and seeing someone fall 1000 ft 2 miles west of me.

 

You can individually TCL actors actually, you don't need everyone TCL'd at once, just select a specific actor and use TCL, however in the case of the Thalmor on the bridge yeah its best to just do it to everyone. I'll keep this in mind if i ever do a big scene again with a fuckton of people.

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Woohoo ! For a start, it's impressive ! :open_mouth:

Really epic feel on this geopolitical pre-war context, with amazing screens (the 92 soldiers O_o) and scenes, but also a very realistic read and atmosphere to go with it. Reminds be about Collygon's Frost of Ages in terms of dimension. And the narratives are not neglected, with a rather convincing more personal point of view to end the entry. Also liked you took the point of view of the Thalmor for the first part. Really, really good execution on the whole thing.


Now if I had to be picky, I'd say the lips of the characters are often closed (even if they're speaking), and there are some shots where the DoF hides both the first and the distant fields. But hey, overall this is excellent ; so if you develop your story, your blog is to be considered as a high potential one. :D
 

Thanks for sharing !

On 4/3/2019 at 8:45 PM, Irstina said:

Unfortunately since I'm also posting this on Nexus, there won't actually be any sexual content - I hope someone still finds it interesting! I may, in the future, add an entry or two exclusively here with stuff like that, but it would have to make sense in the context of the narrative first. 

Well, personally I wouldn't have it any other way. Story first ! I've been considering creating different versions of my own chronicles, and so I realized that even though that wasn't the main objective, there are quite a lot of occasions to feature that kind of content (would it be only nudity). All depending on how willing you are to show things as a whole. This last factor being easily modifiable, which can lead to "fan service" for the authors the more inclined to be regular on adult content ; and to more irregulars occasions for those who are not. Content that could be cut or censored when shared on other platforms. Anyway, it's up to you. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

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55 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Woohoo ! For a start, it's impressive ! :open_mouth:

Really epic feel on this geopolitical pre-war context, with amazing screens (the 92 soldiers O_o) and scenes, but also a very realistic read and atmosphere to go with it. Reminds be about Collygon's Frost of Ages in terms of dimension. And the narratives are not neglected, with a rather convincing more personal point of view to end the entry. Also liked you took the point of view of the Thalmor for the first part. Really, really good execution on the whole thing.


Now if I had to be picky, I'd say the lips of the characters are often closed (even if they're speaking), and there are some shots where the DoF hides both the first and the distant fields. But hey, overall this is excellent ; so if you develop your story, your blog is to be considered as a high potential one. :D
 

Thanks for sharing !

Well, personally I wouldn't have it any other way. Story first ! I've been considering creating different versions of my own chronicles, and so I realized that even though that wasn't the main objective, there are quite a lot of occasions to feature that kind of content (would it be only nudity). All depending on how willing you are to show things as a whole. This last factor being easily modifiable, which can lead to "fan service" for the authors the more inclined to be regular on adult content ; and to more irregulars occasions for those who are not. Content that could be cut or censored when shared on other platforms. Anyway, it's up to you. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

Thanks! I've just uploaded the second entry ?

 

About lips: I have, so far, generally left lips closed for simple talking. They always look a little weird to me sometimes and manipulating them in a realistic manner can be a bit difficult. You're right though, I should try to have their mouths open more when talking - I think I was a little better with that in Ch.1. 

 

As for the DoF.. yah.. I try to hide ugly textures and LODs and such, especially since I recently reinstalled and I don't have everything quite yet. Usually I'll just put the focus on the furtherest character that I don't want blurred and leave it at that, sometimes I'll crank it up, depends. I should be more careful with it, though.

 

As for adult content (or rather, sexual content, since the story will be plenty adult~) I have thought about it more since posting this and I will likely be adding some extra stuff to the "LL version".  So it remains more a matter of finding places where it fits the mood. There's certainly room in my outline for that kind of stuff but there's also a lot of places where I feel it would be immersion breaking. I definitely wouldn't want a completely sexless world either though, as that's not very realistic either.

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Awesome!!! How did I miss this blog?! Many compliments for excellent story. Do you mind telling me what is the name of this outfit and where to find it? Thanks in advance.

 

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8 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Awesome!!! How did I miss this blog?! Many compliments for excellent story. Do you mind telling me what is the name of this outfit and where to find it? Thanks in advance.

 

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Thanks! That's "MBO 0018" from Team TAL's MBO Pack. See here,

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Thanks you very much. I didn't know it is on Patreon. Unfortunately I won't be able to get them since I don't have credit cards and I do not buy things online.

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8 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Thanks you very much. I didn't know it is on Patreon. Unfortunately I won't be able to get them since I don't have credit cards and I do not buy things online.

They are free, you don't need a credit card. Just use the download links on that page.

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14 minutes ago, Irstina said:

They are free, you don't need a credit card. Just use the download links on that page.

Woow. Thank you very much for this info. My wife likes that outfit.

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