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The adventures of Kiki: little vampire that couldn't. (Part 4)


Devianna

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Hello everyone. Following some very good advise (thank you kind reader!) I have made this story strip a bit longer. I am attempting a different image hosting site, so let's check how it works. Also while I am still figuring out the flow of speech in the comic I will use simple markers [1], [2] and so on to indicate which phrase goes first.  I know it's not ideal, but please bear with me. And now, let us go see what Kiki is doing.


 

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Forget the [1] [2]

 

If you wanna use speech bubbles make it simply so that the first one to be read is the highest one in the image.

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1 hour ago, Cema said:

Forget the [1] [2]

 

If you wanna use speech bubbles make it simply so that the first one to be read is the highest one in the image.

Thanks! I'll try it with the next part.

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Yeah

On ‎1‎/‎7‎/‎2019 at 3:25 PM, Cema said:

Forget the [1] [2]

Sorry, it's just not working for me,

I'm still reading backward.

I know it seems like such a small thing, but I just can't make my retarded brain do it!!

 

That said, I like where the story is going,

I also like how you don't reuse the same poses, or expressions.

Every pic is carefully thought out and set up well ?

 

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On 1/8/2019 at 12:26 AM, Devianna said:

Thanks! I'll try it with the next part.

Yeah, I agree with Cema. Numbers added to dialogues do break the immersion. Just place your bubbles better :

— First bubbles higher

— If at the same height, first bubbles on the left (for US & European readers)

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