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Dark Ascension - Book 1: Chapter 7


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Great layout as always, helps magnifying the effect. As for the story, appreciable twists and good technical execution. And the fact all the previous heroines died created more thrill for the last ones to survive. Good job ! :D

 

Malicia : « That's it Jenny ! Run very fast and very quickly into your house, and then close the shutters and lock the door, yes !

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14 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Dagoth Ur didn't died for this XD

 

Great work btw :D 

When I first thought of the idea of doing a skyrim comic and thought about the Neve Player Follower character by Plooshy, my mind thought of the name Neverine. When I started doing the comic for real during the summer, like you, I realized it was the protagonist title from Morrowind. Upon checking...different spelling and possibly pronunciation. 

Neverine: Dark Mistress
Nerevarine: Protector of Morrowind

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On 12/20/2018 at 1:35 AM, Reesewow said:

Great stuff, love these stories.

 

On 12/20/2018 at 3:42 AM, Tirloque said:

Great layout as always, helps magnifying the effect. As for the story, appreciable twists and good technical execution. And the fact all the previous heroines died created more thrill for the last ones to survive. Good job ! :D

 

Malicia : « That's it Jenny ! Run very fast and very quickly into your house, and then close the shutters and lock the door, yes !

 

 

On 12/20/2018 at 5:21 AM, Crw said:

Amazing work ^_^ Your narration is fascinating. Now I can't wait to see more :)

 

Thanks for your comments and technical insights. Chapter 6/7 took longer than expected as specific parts went through rewrites, or scenes were added, taken out, then re-added. Jenny's force strip scene was never part of the the storyline. Then I found this really cool room with all of the lit candles by accident when scouting for locations to set scenes that I really wanted to use.

 

Also, my original story outline was to kill off the Order member with Jenny, but after writing dialogue and scenes with Milana, I kind did not not want to kill her off. Plus her facial design (Jahiya by sniizy) looked great under various different lighting and angles, whereas some character faces only look good under limited lighting and angles.  I have several dozen screens of her that I didnt use in the comic (didnt fit the story telling) that looked awesome.

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On 12/19/2018 at 11:58 PM, WANOBI12 said:

Man these are some great pics ?

 

Really well done!

 

18 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great job with the story and Neve and some really nice screenshots! :thumbsup: 

 

Thanks. I used to have this book when I was a kid, "How to draw comics the Marvel Way." Now when i screenshot scenes, even sex scenes, I would keep asking myself "how would Marvel shoot this?"

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On ‎12‎/‎23‎/‎2018 at 8:28 PM, devious-Drunna said:

Thanks. I used to have this book when I was a kid, "How to draw comics the Marvel Way." Now when i screenshot scenes, even sex scenes, I would keep asking myself "how would Marvel shoot this?"

OMG!! I still have that book ?

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Hey just wondering do you happen to have a racemenu preset for Jenny or would you happen to remember what hair she uses?

any help would be great thanks.

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