Damn. Thats an amazing story once again ^_^ the plot is going interesting direction.

Love the whole girl-paladin-order thing. And the dialogues between girls just cool. 

Always waiting to see more of your creations:)  

Amazing job! Neve being badass as always!

I was actually trying her as the queen back in Chapter 4 in my story, but her skin turned out really dark in my ENB, glad she finally gets the attention in the blog section she deserves.

Which mod are you using for the order fortress? Or rather what's the retexturing of the windows you are using, I really like the texture of them in the last scene.

This paladin order must be the worst one XD.

20 hours ago, Crw said:

Damn. Thats an amazing story once again ^_^ the plot is going interesting direction.

Love the whole girl-paladin-order thing. And the dialogues between girls just cool. 

Always waiting to see more of your creations:)  

Thanks!

-At first I thought it would be hard writing dialogue with multiple people while  developing some distinct personality among them and at the same time, very exposition heavy......

Then I noticed afterwards, I was using the TMNT trope of personality writing. I noticed it was focused around the core 4 while Justine had two lines -then completely forgotten (should’ve renamed Justine to April)

i think the same happened when the talked again at the main floor of the Cathedral where Kait became the 5th wheel.

3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

This paladin order must be the worst one XD.

 

 

Or the best one it's about point of view ^_^

3 minutes ago, devious-Drunna said:

Thanks!

-At first I thought it would be hard writing dialogue with multiple people while  developing some distinct personality among them. Then I realized afterwards, I was using the TMNT trope of personality writing as  it seemed focused around the core 4 while Justine had two lines -then completely forgotten.

Anyway it feels fine.

I only can advise to write dialogues before creating pics and re-read them ^_^ 

But it just thoughts, you doing it great. Especially when they teasing each other 

16 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Amazing job! Neve being badass as always!

I was actually trying her as the queen back in Chapter 4 in my story, but her skin turned out really dark in my ENB, glad she finally gets the attention in the blog section she deserves.

 

Which mod are you using for the order fortress? Or rather what's the retexturing of the windows you are using, I really like the texture of them in the last scene.

The last scene takes place in the main hall of the Cathedral which I built in CreationKit (Siikas Cathedral was too confined to shoot). It uses the large window wall from the Bards College kit.  

The Scene in the middle, right after Neve leaves takes place in the “Dragonfall02” cell in the castle mod of the same name.

Nice,

love the tone of the pics, the outfits, and the whole Hot Paladin Sorority scheme!

Also great job with the comic setup and chat bubbles,

It flows nicely.

Also thanks for the upskirt shot of the bookworm! It was awesome ?

Great ready once again. Not only have you gotten the hang about comics' layout, but you're also styling the narrative bubbles quite well. The story is threatening and mysterious at the same time, the characters hot looking (even though it feels strange seeing Crw's Gwen and Alter Native's queen in another context ^^) ; and the graphical side still amazing. Good job !

Malicia : « A girls only order, that's so cool ! I wouldn't mind trying their uniform, but I won't, 'cause don't want to end up like a dried mummy, no.  »

On 1/5/2019 at 5:39 AM, Tirloque said:

Great ready once again. Not only have you gotten the hang about comics' layout, but you're also styling the narrative bubbles quite well. The story is threatening and mysterious at the same time, the characters hot looking (even though it feels strange seeing Crw's Gwen and Alter Native's queen in another context ^^) ; and the graphical side still amazing. Good job !

 

Malicia : « A girls only order, that's so cool ! I wouldn't mind trying their uniform, but I won't, 'cause don't want to end up like a dried mummy, no.  »

Thanks!

i was hoping there was a flow to the dramatic buildup/tension as I feared the conversations among the Order sisters would have dragged the story 

These are some beautiful faces. How did you make them?

On 2/19/2020 at 9:57 PM, pinkscott said:

These are some beautiful faces. How did you make them?

Many of the sisters were from the Ordinary Women of Skyrim mod