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Part 11. Jack-in-the-box.


Crw0

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I ask you to finish reading before voting ^ _ ^ Please =)  

18 members have voted

  1. 1. Сourt of justice

    • Kill her.
      5
    • Spare.
      13

This poll is closed to new votes

Well, that's the last part of the adventure in the monastery. And I decided to try something.
Voting will now influence both Rosa, and the whole group, and the plot (to a certain extent) and their appearance.
For your (and a bit of my) fun, of course. ^_^
Have a nice weekends, and a good day to you ^_^

P.S.
If anyone knows how to put the vote at the END of the post, and share with me these forbidden knowledge (or tell me where to find them) I'll be grateful ^_^

 

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The First Lady of Hats

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Izzy would have you do it because they are unclean and an affront to the Divines.

Velconia would have you do it because they're probably nords.

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Guest

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Don't you dare to kill my blond angel :classic_angry: If you must kill someone, kill redhead :classic_dry:

Guest

Posted

3 minutes ago, The First Lady of Hats said:

Izzy would have you do it because they are unclean and an affront to the Divines.

Velconia would have you do it because they're probably nords.

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I hate you. ;)

Crw0

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1 hour ago, The First Lady of Hats said:

Izzy would have you do it because they are unclean and an affront to the Divines.

Velconia would have you do it because they're probably nords.

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Well, lol :D 

 

1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

Don't you dare to kill my blond angel :classic_angry: If you must kill someone, kill redhead :classic_dry:

It's not just so easy, just "kill" :D I wont spoilery :D 

Guest

Posted

She is infused by demon cum, only way to clean her is the holy divine..I mean blessed flamethrower.  ☺️

 

Purge her before she took out a biggass horsecock and fuck asses ;) 

Crw0

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1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

She is infused by demon cum, only way to clean her is the holy divine..I mean blessed flamethrower.  ☺️

 

Purge her before she took out a biggass horsecock and fuck asses ;) 

It remains only to find the mesh of the flamethrower :D 

But what about forgiveness and stuff? :classic_angel:

Guest

Posted

2 minutes ago, Crw said:

But what about forgiveness and stuff? :classic_angel:

Ask Lorkhan ohh wait he is dead

donttouchmethere

Posted

Turn Sinetica into a Succubi Hero that fights other Demons.

But not after a long and totaly devine cleaning process.

And her sidekick shall be Rosa (even if we will hear the line "i am a bad fighter a lot"^^)

 

More Detail for Inspiration:

The devine cleaning process takes months in the dungeon of the inquisition.

Although it seems at first like a great succes, Gwen had her doubts about letting Sinetica back into the world, where now a Daedra is roaming at free will.

Rosa convinced that Sineticas is free now of demonical influences, frees her from the harsh grasp of the inquisition.

 

Meanwhile:

Gwen got ordered to hunt the Daedra. After confronting him a few times, it soon shows that her powers are to weak to defeat the deamon. Many Inquisitors fall during this hunt and the inquisitor ranks start to thin out.

But after Gwen heard that the cause of all this is missing from the inqusitor dungeons, she volunteers to hunt Sinetica down.

 

After roaming the world - hunted by Gwen - and a lot of sidequests ("pls free my goat from those giants! She is all i have *sob*"), Sinetica cant hide her new Succubi form from Rosa.

Although it seems Sinetica has full control of her human mind in her transformed stage, Rosa has a hard time to confince herself not to turn her in.

Even worse, the succubi charm hits her hard enough so she cant think strait anymore.

 

Sinetica wants Revange on that Demon she helped to come into the world, but is missing a clue how to do it.

To get the information she will have to read the good old Book of "experimental demonology" hidden deep in the archives below the... Inquisitors HQ ;D

 

uh oh, okey that will be an endless story ^^

Maybe Sinetica just has a joker up her sleeve and can make a deal with Gwen?

 

Crw0

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16 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Ask Lorkhan ohh wait he is dead

This is also the fault of the elves. Coincidence? :D 

 

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18 minutes ago, donttouchmethere said:

Turn Sinetica into a Succubi Hero that fights other Demons.

But not after a long and totaly devine cleaning process.

And her sidekick shall be Rosa (even if we will hear the line "i am a bad fighter a lot"^^)

 

More Detail for Inspiration:

The devine cleaning process takes months in the dungeon of the inquisition.

Although it seems at first like a great succes, Gwen had her doubts about letting Sinetica back into the world, where now a Daedra is roaming at free will.

Rosa convinced that Sineticas is free now of demonical influences, frees her from the harsh grasp of the inquisition.

 

Meanwhile:

Gwen got ordered to hunt the Daedra. After confronting him a few times, it soon shows that her powers are to weak to defeat the deamon. Many Inquisitors fall during this hunt and the inquisitor ranks start to thin out.

But after Gwen heard that the cause of all this is missing from the inqusitor dungeons, she volunteers to hunt Sinetica down.

 

After roaming the world - hunted by Gwen - and a lot of sidequests ("pls free my goat from those giants! She is all i have *sob*"), Sinetica cant hide her new Succubi form from Rosa.

Although it seems Sinetica has full control of her human mind in her transformed stage, Rosa has a hard time to confince herself not to turn her in.

Even worse, the succubi charm hits her hard enough so she cant think strait anymore.

 

Sinetica wants Revange on that Demon she helped to come into the world, but is missing a clue how to do it.

To get the information she will have to read the good old Book of "experimental demonology" hidden deep in the archives below the... Inquisitors HQ ;D

 


Wow, thats nice) Thank you ^_^ 
I certainly have a long-term plan, and I must admit, you are close in a couple of moments ? But I definitely like the course of your thoughts  ^_^
 

 

20 minutes ago, donttouchmethere said:

Maybe Sinetica just has a joker up her sleeve and can make a deal with Gwen?

No, its just a horsecock friendship something ;)

 

Guest

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11 minutes ago, Crw said:

This is also the fault of the elves. Coincidence? :D 

Early elven kings was Aedra as well, namely Auriel.

 

Back there only divines and lesser divines walked Nirm :) 

Guest

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13 minutes ago, Crw said:


No, its just a horsecock friendship something ;)

 

My kind of friendship :) , she only need a big ass cum that feed her weeks from that cock ;)

Guest

Posted

Good one. I don't like to be "pressed against the wall" to make decision that are hard to make. But, because I love that blond girl and my Prince is crazy about her, I voted: live! :)

Jay-Omms

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No one has to die, they are just victims of the Daedric influence ?................:classic_biggrin::mrgreen::thumbsup:? 

Crw0

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34 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

My kind of friendship :)

Why i cant stop stop laughing :D :D
 

15 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

Good one. I don't like to be "pressed against the wall" to make decision that are hard to make. But, because I love that blond girl and my Prince is crazy about her, I voted: live! :)

To be honest, I myself voted for live :D 
 

9 minutes ago, Jayomms said:

No one has to die, they are just victims of the Daedric influence ?................:classic_biggrin::mrgreen::thumbsup:? 

Maybe) Maybe yes, maybe no) Anyway, I think that with this vote - not threat to her ^_^

Guest

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1 minute ago, Crw said:

Why i cant stop stop laughing :D :D
 

To be honest, I myself voted for live :D 

 

 

In that case, you have a big kiss from me and big thanks from my Prince. :)

Guest

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1 minute ago, Crw said:

Why i cant stop stop laughing :D :D

 Hot chick and sometime she has horse cock, no problem XDD.

Crw0

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3 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

In that case, you have a big kiss from me and big thanks from my Prince. :)

UwU :classic_wub:
 

4 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

 Hot chick and sometime she has horse cock, no problem XDD.


Well, yes, a normal life situation :D 
 

Guest

Posted

Just now, Crw said:

 

Well, yes, a normal life situation :D 
 

Indeed, sometime she just need a blowjob to not take that thing in your ass, that is deadly for any non-Malicia persons :) 

Guest

Posted

i hope this story has a happy ending but i wouldnt be surprised if everyone got their souls sucked out

Crw0

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23 minutes ago, daedal said:

i hope this story has a happy ending but i wouldnt be surprised if everyone got their souls sucked out

eventually everything has a happy ending ? especially if something sucking out ;) oh... there was "soul"... no fun =(

Tirloque

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Interesting turns of events, the daedric artefact being a trap was a nice twist. Also we're still wondering what that daemon did to some of the sisters, so that's good. However, I noticed some "he" instead of "she", and the syntax is a bit off sometimes, so keep an eye on your grammar/proofreading, it takes only a few more minutes to make sure the comic you spend so much time to bring us is really conform to what you want it to be.  :classic_wink:

 

PS : My assistant, in her great magnanimity, voted to allow Sinetica to live. :classic_tongue:

11 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Don't you dare to kill my blond angel :classic_angry: If you must kill someone, kill redhead :classic_dry:

Malicia : « You're being very silly again, yes : the redhead isn't the one who's gonna die ! She's the one who's gonna decide. Because she's more intelligent, you see ? :classic_sleepy: »

11 hours ago, The First Lady of Hats said:

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Something says me Resdayn would approve. :classic_angel:

3 hours ago, Crw said:

eventually everything has a happy ending ?

Malicia : « Except if there's too many people wanting to go honey-honey with the same person, yes. :classic_lightbulb: »

 

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Crw0

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8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Interesting turns of events, the daedric artefact being a trap was a nice twist. Also we're still wondering what that daemon did to some of the sisters, so that's good. However, I noticed some "he" instead of "she", and the syntax is a bit off sometimes, so keep an eye on your grammar/proofreading, it takes only a few more minutes to make sure the comic you spend so much time to bring us is really conform to what you want it to be.  :classic_wink:

 

Oh, thank you ^_^
Apparently I need to take a break before the final reading, because the speed and volume played a cruel joke with me. My typical mistake. -_-
Thank you again :) I ll work on it.

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 

PS : My assistant, in her great magnanimity, voted to allow Sinetica to live. :classic_tongue:

Something tells me that Resdayn won't approve of this part. :D 

8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Except if there's too many people wanting to go honey-honey with the same person, yes. :classic_lightbulb: »

Well, or nobody wants "honey-honey" with someone. ?

UPD: I'm all trying to find this ill-fated "he". But it seems to me that you are talking about the very beginning. And there are "he" because Gwen talks about the creature, not about the Sisters. But if there were such doubts, then I incorrectly filed the scene) So, that's also not cool =(
 

Tirloque

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3 hours ago, Crw said:

Oh, thank you ^_^
Apparently I need to take a break before the final reading, because the speed and volume played a cruel joke with me. My typical mistake. -_-
Thank you again :) I ll work on it.

(...)

UPD: I'm all trying to find this ill-fated "he". But it seems to me that you are talking about the very beginning. And there are "he" because Gwen talks about the creature, not about the Sisters. But if there were such doubts, then I incorrectly filed the scene) So, that's also not cool =(

Hmm, my bad then ; I didn't understand they were referring to the zombie. I wrongly assumed it was another grammar mistake when it wasn't then. :classic_angel:

 

Here are the other ones I saw :

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He just want away => he just wants to go/move away
Barrier, you know => there is a barrier, you know
hell, that coud work => could
and she with ...? => incorrect. Even if you skip the subject you need a verb here.
hah, did you really think I xwas helping you escape => was
but you'v done your part => you've
I'v got the world to toy with => I've

 

You tend to skip verbs in fact. Doing so is okay when something happens very quickly (ex. « The door ! » if a door is closing), but in english (even in slang) there will be verbs most of the time. Also careful not to skip "the" (definite article), because that's even more infrequent in english (=> "Door !" instead of "The door !" would be correct in some languages (such as Japanese), but not really in english).

 

But hey, your comic is mostly understandable ; on the first example it's my fault that I missed something. And those are still minor issues though, your comic was a pleasant read. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

3 hours ago, Crw said:

Well, or nobody wants "honey-honey" with someone. ?

Malicia : «  Yes but that's not a bad ending ! 'cause they can still be friends then you see ?  :classic_lightbulb: »

Guest

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10 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Except if there's too many people wanting to go honey-honey with the same person, yes. :classic_lightbulb: »

 

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Pretty sure Egypt was sexier than her, damn that Romans only want one thing and it is your country xD.

 

Anyway she got nice feets. ?

2 hours ago, Crw said:

Something tells me that Resdayn won't approve of this part. :D 

What kind of Inquisition this to allow this heresy, where are Paladin Exterminatus to judge and save the day.

 

By the flamethrowers.

Tirloque

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4 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Pretty sure Egypt was sexier than her, damn that Romans only want one thing and it is your country xD.

 

Anyway she got nice feets. ?

Ancient Egyptians wore clothes that would be more suited for an African documentary or an erotic movie than a peplum : network dresses, sheath dresses starting from under the breasts to the ankles (with very light almost transparent fabrics for the wealthiest women). They were way more at ease with body and sensuality than our current occidental culture is.

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So yeah, definitely more sexier than Elizabeth Taylor's clothes. Malicia would like to wear this kind of attire though, I wonder if she could find comparable ones in Alik'r lands. million_dollar_baby.gif

4 hours ago, Resdayn said:

What kind of Inquisition this to allow this heresy, where are Paladin Exterminatus to judge and save the day.

Malicia : « A kind of inquisition that wants an ending with happy people everywhere, yes.

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