So in this chapter, Ludi has not yet unblocked the power of the sword nor seen Alduin.
It’s just getting started.

That was a pretty awesome chapter... Well Done. 

2 hours ago, hana120 said:

So in this chapter, Ludi has not yet unblocked the power of the sword nor seen Alduin.
It’s just getting started.

Yep still all just at the start... But finally something of significance starting to happen in this tale. 

54 minutes ago, Jay-Omms said:

That was a pretty awesome chapter... Well Done. 

TY

> In your post note you said that sex was boring in this chapter and yet you posted rape. I am confused now.

8 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> In your post note you said that sex was boring in this chapter and yet you posted rape. I am confused now.

Okay I guess I could have worded that different. The sex content in this chapter (which is just the rape scene at beginning) was mid. 

I made this chapter with the focus being on the two fights and it was tossed in to just meet the "still has a sex scene in chapter" criteria. 

On that subject... I am possibly rethinking the "must have sexual content every chapter" idea anyway. 

I actually think that theres no need for sex unless it fits, the story hangs on its own anyway and to be honest (I know this is fiction but...) I felt quite angry with that scene, with the tavern girl, dont remember her name, and I guess that was the plan right? but taking how situation is on many places specially on Europe with all thoose islamic criminals around, theres even been decapitations with machetes... violations everywhere, beatings, police signing with them against their country foke... sounds like a perfect time for a European revolution. Anyway, I liked the chapter, again Ludi´s story, specially her childhood is my favorite one, wonder thou when will Cybelle come back I really miss her now.

45 minutes ago, Philirena said:

I actually think that theres no need for sex unless it fits, the story hangs on its own anyway and to be honest (I know this is fiction but...) I felt quite angry with that scene, with the tavern girl, dont remember her name, and I guess that was the plan right? but taking how situation is on many places specially on Europe with all thoose islamic criminals around, theres even been decapitations with machetes... violations everywhere, beatings, police signing with them against their country foke... sounds like a perfect time for a European revolution. Anyway, I liked the chapter, again Ludi´s story, specially her childhood is my favorite one, wonder thou when will Cybelle come back I really miss her now.

Thank you. So there may in the future be chapters with no sex. I am sure they get very little views but sometimes it's just better to move things along. 

That said this will still be an adult comic so any reason for it to happen... It will happen. So sexless chapters will still be rare. 

And funny you mention Cybele as I'm literally thinking of how the next chapter Snow Blessed chapter 3 will play out right now... And be mostly focused on her. 

5 hours ago, dryuya said:

 

Thank you. So there may in the future be chapters with no sex. I am sure they get very little views but sometimes it's just better to move things along. 

 

That said this will still be an adult comic so any reason for it to happen... It will happen. So sexless chapters will still be rare. 

 

And funny you mention Cybele as I'm literally thinking of how the next chapter Snow Blessed chapter 3 will play out right now... And be mostly focused on her. 

 

Yeah well, companyes can choose between their loyal fanbase or trying to approach new people, meaning here, that thoose interested in your work, like me will keep coming, new people might come but many wont stay cause most are into just sex and deprivacy, but if you change to get more... you might end up having nothing, once again I tell you, stay true to yourself it will always end better, you have Volition screwing it up with their new woke garbage as an example, they tried to call the atention of the pop public, but thats never a good choice, for such public come and go following the tendencies, like videogames popularity made it pop not that long ago, but many will come and leave, but I just like you and many others will stay beacuse we love this, in a few words dont fall to temptation and youll survive.

Nice to hear that, God must´ve missed her too no doubt, glad to hear Cybele will be back and that she´ll take over the show.

Oh wow, quite interesting story. I thought the fight scenes were really good compare to most people. I like how beautiful the characters are and how their not just overpowered characters. They actually struggle with the world they live in. Sure most people don't like struggles against certain people like women but I think that's the charm of this story. It's not a child's fairytale but real struggles for the heroines. Either that or my masochist side is telling me it's good. First time see this and hope you well with your next chapter.