Good chapter.
Ludi is really strong. We have the impression that she is unbeatable.
So, when’s she gonna give in to sex?
Because for now, we have the impression that she is incorruptible to that. That she is pure.

2 hours ago, hana120 said:

Good chapter.
Ludi is really strong. We have the impression that she is unbeatable.
So, when’s she gonna give in to sex?
Because for now, we have the impression that she is incorruptible to that. That she is pure.

Ha, sorry I know it's not really the loverslab way... Introduce a blog character and not give them any action for months after blog started. With all the stuff that's redone... I have built a way into narrative to give her a reasonable "scene" in maybe... 2 or 3 chapters (but I'm terrible at keeping a pace and sticking to a plan so take my word for very little)

But I hope other characters have at least sufficed (to varying degrees) so far or until then... 

There’s nothing to worry about.
I like the character of Ludi.
It gives him an image and impression of untouchable and pure character among all the others.

Because most of the other characters in your here have succumbed to evil or sex.
Whether it’s avatars, forworn, elven princesses or others.
Except Ludimilla. Well, you told me once, she will become perverse for a while.

@I know I need to fix my pacing

That's right, from now on you'll be working 25 hours a day, 8 days a week without a break on the next chapter, which I'm expecting yesterday at the latest!*

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1 hour ago, chooseChaos said:

@I know I need to fix my pacing

That's right, from now on you'll be working 25 hours a day, 8 days a week without a break on the next chapter, which I'm expecting yesterday at the latest!*

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= This statement may contain traces of irony. 😁

 

 

 

But seriously! You publish such great posts here, if anyone, including you, asks for more, I will sic a certain redheaded burly & sexy Valkyrie on them! 😇

 

Ha ha thanks...

I only mention my pace...realizing its like 3 months into blog and I'm still in first arc (Shandar stuff). In older (rough draft) stuff...I was out of here already and in much less pages. But I guess that stuff wasn't good in that way...because it rushed to the end.

Just hope I manage to actually finish all these tales one day lol.

Great work here, Ludi is the best both as a child and as a women, I think that Ludi should stay away from sex actually, makes her stand out in a good way, like you can take her seriously as a rather bold warrior, either way for me you´ve always made good choices with this project. Jajaja and poor sweet Amilee really liked her from the start, she is actually among the most "normal" characters in this story and one of my favorites as well. Also wanna say something, if this story were implemente into Skyrim would easily beat most (or maybe all) storyes, like... in general everything and everyone feels way more meaningfull than in Skyrim, where often the player gotta put a lot of imagination on a playtrough.

So thank you very much and take your time, rushing is no good, after all, the great Tolkien took 12 years to write the Lord of the Rings, so even for geniouses good stuff gotta be cooked with care.

Great Chapter. Love the flashbacks of Ludi with the Companions.

This blog also features among the hottest characters on this site and you manage to keep introducing characters that are equally as hot. Keep it up!

The love-making scenes are also very well made. If they are this high quality and thought-out, I don't mind having only 1 scene per chapter.

TLDR; Please keep it up, your stuff is great!

8 hours ago, Philirena said:

Great work here, Ludi is the best both as a child and as a women, I think that Ludi should stay away from sex actually, makes her stand out in a good way, like you can take her seriously as a rather bold warrior, either way for me you´ve always made good choices with this project. Jajaja and poor sweet Amilee really liked her from the start, she is actually among the most "normal" characters in this story and one of my favorites as well. Also wanna say something, if this story were implemente into Skyrim would easily beat most (or maybe all) storyes, like... in general everything and everyone feels way more meaningfull than in Skyrim, where often the player gotta put a lot of imagination on a playtrough.

 

So thank you very much and take your time, rushing is no good, after all, the great Tolkien took 12 years to write the Lord of the Rings, so even for geniouses good stuff gotta be cooked with care.

Ty again...

So as for Ludi/MCs in respective tales having sex (well Secunda already blew it there but Melia and Ludi now)...I think it will just depend a lot on HOW their eventual sex scenes (if they have them) are done. Something where they don't completely break the character type to do it I think it will be fine? I do get where you come from though as not having or delaying the characters scenes adds something to them that makes them stand out. 

As for pace I think you're right there I should stop fussing on it. If the series as a whole has to run for 2-3 years I guess not so bad...I've enjoyed modding Skyrim since it came out as well as always wanting to do my own pornwha/manga esque story (but not having true talent to actually draw my own stuff) so I'm rolling with it.

1 hour ago, noobz0r said:

Great Chapter. Love the flashbacks of Ludi with the Companions.

 

This blog also features among the hottest characters on this site and you manage to keep introducing characters that are equally as hot. Keep it up!

The love-making scenes are also very well made. If they are this high quality and thought-out, I don't mind having only 1 scene per chapter.

 

TLDR; Please keep it up, your stuff is great!

Thank you.

And as for the characters..I am glad you say so but I'd be lying to say I designed all or even most myself. Ludi is mine and as well some of the throwaway ones and as well Hrothgar in Fire Blessed (a character who's "allowed" to be ugly). But many are followers. However they are followers that were cosmetically changed in many ways in game to get a desired look (body meshes, skin textures, hair, eyes ect). But if its their pure facial structure that looks good... that part is because a mod author did it well (not me).

All that said...Ludi often seems to be the most popular anyway so that makes me happy

20 minutes ago, dryuya said:

 

 

Ty again...

 

So as for Ludi/MCs in respective tales having sex (well Secunda already blew it there but Melia and Ludi now)...I think it will just depend a lot on HOW their eventual sex scenes (if they have them) are done. Something where they don't completely break the character type to do it I think it will be fine? I do get where you come from though as not having or delaying the characters scenes adds something to them that makes them stand out. 

 

Example...and not to dunk on the LL site as a whole but too often I see posts/blogs/image where they say something like "meet girl x she's a trained warrior of Skyrim"...next few panels shes getting screwed by a dog (which she inexplicably likes?) and I scratch my head. I definitely don't plan to do any of that here (and likely...why this blog may not ever be TOO popular on this site simply due to the things it'll never touch like beastiality ect). But a character like Ludi...say she meets some guy in a bar and tells him how its going to be...or some other type of scenario thats not just random sex without proper context. I see that kind of thing "working" for her character. In fact I think I read a Red Sonja comic once where Sonja did that sort of this and Ludis look and character was all based on her.

 

As for pace I think you're right there I should stop fussing on it. If the series as a whole has to run for 2-3 years I guess not so bad...I've enjoyed modding Skyrim since it came out as well as always wanting to do my own pornwha/manga esque story (but not having true talent to actually draw my own stuff) so I'm rolling with it.

In my opinion one should be true to itself, meaning, you dont want something, then dont add it, Im really enjoying this project of yours as it is and let me tell you, that you are in the right way with that about not breaking the character, when you start breaking the rules or making it predictable is never good, like in Dragon Ball, I think that Toriyama went too far with the Dragon Balls, in the way that it doesnt matter what happens, everything can be fixed, that way if someone destroys Earth who cares? they´ll just use the dragon balls to fix it.... ruins the expectation.

People often go for "quick game" wanna make it fast by satisfy certain fetiches of em or their expected audience, and is not necesarily bad, but let me tell you that if you do it your way in the end you are gonna feel better with yourself and your work.

Well its nice that you can do it through Skyrim, cause you are good. Lastly let me tell you that Ludi looks amazing and in a "special" way, let me explain. There are tons of girls in the Nexus and here In LL and most are good but often they have a pornstar or sex-girl vibe, but Ludi is gorgeus in a natural way, she feels real, is not looking as a fuck-doll, yet she is clearly hot, would prefer her to become my wife or girlfriend, I dont want a bimbo, hell even just friend, I dont know If I mange to explain myself but she could even be Canon (If Bethesda werent afraid of curvy women) and I can see her as an enjoable follower, jajaja and I mean everyone loves White run´s robocop but a girl as cool as Ludi? well it would be an awesome treat, like Sofia, I just love that joshing and mean gal, I still remember when she first replied to Nazeem infamous quote, since then I just knew she would be my prefered follower, jajaja and marrying her is the worst and best choice in the world, always making me laugh. (If only Sofia could talk to Serana... that would be a titans clash)

2 hours ago, Philirena said:

 

In my opinion one should be true to itself, meaning, you dont want something, then dont add it, Im really enjoying this project of yours as it is and let me tell you, that you are in the right way with that about not breaking the character, when you start breaking the rules or making it predictable is never good, like in Dragon Ball, I think that Toriyama went too far with the Dragon Balls, in the way that it doesnt matter what happens, everything can be fixed, that way if someone destroys Earth who cares? they´ll just use the dragon balls to fix it.... ruins the expectation.

 

People often go for "quick game" wanna make it fast by satisfy certain fetiches of em or their expected audience, and is not necesarily bad, but let me tell you that if you do it your way in the end you are gonna feel better with yourself and your work.

 

Well its nice that you can do it through Skyrim, cause you are good. Lastly let me tell you that Ludi looks amazing and in a "special" way, let me explain. There are tons of girls in the Nexus and here In LL and most are good but often they have a pornstar or sex-girl vibe, but Ludi is gorgeus in a natural way, she feels real, is not looking as a fuck-doll, yet she is clearly hot, would prefer her to become my wife or girlfriend, I dont want a bimbo, hell even just friend, I dont know If I mange to explain myself but she could even be Canon (If Bethesda werent afraid of curvy women) and I can see her as an enjoable follower, jajaja and I mean everyone loves White run´s robocop but a girl as cool as Ludi? well it would be an awesome treat, like Sofia, I just love that joshing and mean gal, I still remember when she first replied to Nazeem infamous quote, since then I just knew she would be my prefered follower, jajaja and marrying her is the worst and best choice in the world, always making me laugh. (If only Sofia could talk to Serana... that would be a titans clash)

 

Thank you for all that. 

I do wish I knew how to make a character exactly as she is in this (with armor and bdor wig) in follower form. Someone asked for her preset in chapter 1 and I shared it but thats really iffy if it even works or looks same in another persons game. I really wish I'd learned how to actually mod the game myself...all the time messing w/ the files in mod organizer I should have learned some stuff but just never touched creation kit.

You're really rising the bar on me. I fell like I'm binge reading manga.