All in all again beautifully told and illustrated.

The use of black and white scenes or as a picture in picture element is also excellent. + an enviably nicely modded Skyrim you've got there.

1 hour ago, chooseChaos said:

All in all again beautifully told and illustrated.

The use of black and white scenes or as a picture in picture element is also excellent. + an enviably nicely modded Skyrim you've got there.

 

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The goal scene from the flashback 11 years earlier really made me laugh. I mean what's a broken arm when you've almost completed the jump from the city wall with a successful landing = Damn, once again the ground didn't help and instead got up to mischief ...

& who listens to admonishing or other words from gate guards. 😁😇

 

Ty, was going to stick to "black and white" = something briefly seen or remembered in the past but kind of didn't follow that rule here. Thought the ice scene looked better that way idk... Also 11 years prior is its whole mini arc (to end next chapter) so wasn't going to cover that whole thing in black and white. 

I misunderstood or is Ludi thinking of proposing Toccata to her pervert brother?
Or has Toccata already had sex? And Ludi tells him it’s not a good idea?

25 minutes ago, hana120 said:

I misunderstood or is Ludi thinking of proposing Toccata to her pervert brother?
Or has Toccata already had sex? And Ludi tells him it’s not a good idea?

Telling her not to get involved with him, cause he's a man whore and she thinks she's too good for that. The little B&W image was just imagined.

1 hour ago, dryuya said:

 

 

Telling her not to get involved with him, cause he's a man whore and she thinks she's too good for that. The little B&W image was just imagined.

 

Okay.
So she’s warning him.
Good because yes Toccato is too good to be with Ludi’s obsessed brother.

49 minutes ago, hana120 said:

Okay.
So she’s warning him.
Good because yes Toccato is too good to be with Ludi’s obsessed brother.

Yeah he gets and will get enough pie doesn't need it all. 

I like how you balance the flashbacks and the present content. Great chapter

1 hour ago, ObeyMrWalrus said:

I like how you balance the flashbacks and the present content. Great chapter

TY

Jajaja I must thank you, cause I was laughing my ass when Sigurn broke her teeth after that epic faill, amazing, and hey that Viken is really hatefull, meaning, great work over there too. In general this kid Ludi story is my favorite part.

10 hours ago, Philirena said:

Jajaja I must thank you, cause I was laughing my ass when Sigurn broke her teeth after that epic faill, amazing, and hey that Viken is really hatefull, meaning, great work over there too. In general this kid Ludi story is my favorite part.

Oh wow so I find out now that LL doesn't notify me on comments on blogs...and since this one has technically become "older" I wouldn't have even seen it except I was referencing some things for the next chapter release (which I'm trying tohave by this weekend).

And thank you for all!

Viken I actually had referenced in chapter 2 during Cybeles song "Ludimilla the Red"...one of many things I add in that make all stuff tie together (but most probably don't get noticed which is fine)

Great Work yet again. I'ma laugh so hard if Edan gets all those girls pregnant. Ludi is gonna have a field day kicking his arse.